試卷第=page1010頁，共=sectionpages1111頁天津市2021-2023年中考英語試卷分類匯編書面表達2023年天津市中考英語試題九、書面表達(本大題共15分)86.假如你是李華,請根據以下提示,給你的筆友Peter用英文寫一封郵件,向他講述你班同學王亮的一個感人故事。(1)一個下雨天,王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。(2)他走過去,看到一位老婦人躺在地上。(3)了解情況后,他蹲下為老人撐傘。(4)救護車到達后,他悄悄地離開了。(5)你認為……參考詞匯：蹲下crouchdown救護車ambulance要求：(1)詞數：80~100個。(2)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。(3)要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當發揮。DearPeterHowiseverythinggoing?I'dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua2022年天津市中考英語試題九、書面表達（本大題共15分）86．假如你是李華，請你給美國筆友David寫一封信，講述你班同學王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談談感受。（1）上周五，一棵樹被大風吹倒，擋住了道路。（2）王紅看到后，撿起地上的樹枝，又去移動樹干。（3）樹干太沉，她搬不動。（4）人們過來幫忙。（5）你認為……參考詞匯：被吹倒beblowndown

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樹干trunk要求：（1）詞數：80~100個。（2）開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。（3）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua2021年天津市中考英語試題九、書面表達（本大題共15分）66．假如你是某中學學生李華,最近你班發生了一件令人感動的事情。請根據以下提示,給你的英國好友Tom寫一封信,與他分享你的感動。（1）兩周前同學王紅傷了左腿。（2）王紅上下樓很困難,但想來。（3）校長知道后,決定將你班從四樓搬到一樓。（4）你們幫助王紅（如買午飯等）。（5）你認為……要求：（1）詞數：80~100個。（2）開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。（3）要點齊全,行文連貫,可適當發揮。DearPeterHowiseverythinggoing?I'dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua答案：2023年天津市中考英語試題66．例文：DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketotellyouastoryaboutmyclassmate,WangLiang.Onarainyday,WangLiangsawagroupofpeoplegatheringontheroad.Hewentoverandsawanoldwomanlyingontheground.Knowingthesituation,hecroucheddowntoholdanumbrellafortheoldman.Whentheambulancearrived,heleftquietly.IthinkWangLiangisagoodstudentwhohelpsothers.Weshouldlearnfromhim.Doyouhaveastorytoshare?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏給出的五個要點提示，寫郵件向筆友Peter講述同學王亮的感人故事。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，介紹同學王亮的故事；第二步，具體講述這個感人故事；第三步，發表自己的感想；第四步，期望收到對方回復。[亮點詞匯]①tellsb.sth.告訴某人某事②goover走過去③seesbdoingsth.看到某人正在做某事④learnfromsb.向某人學習[高分句型]①Whentheambulancearrived,heleftquietly.（when引導時間狀語從句）②IthinkWangLiangisagoodstudentwhohelpsothers.（省略that的賓語從句；who引導定語從句）2022年天津市中考英語試題86．例文DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawabigtreewasblowndownbywindanditblockedtheway.AfterWangHongsawit,shepickedupthebranchesonthegroundandthenmovedthetrunkagain.Butthetrunkwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveitbyherself.Whenotherpeoplesawwhatshewasdoing,theyweremovedbyherandcametohelpher.Finally,theysucceededinmovingthetrunkaway.Ithinksheisaverykindperson.Andfromthisstory,Ilearnthatweshouldoffertohelpwhensomeoneneedshelp.Itnotonlyhelpsothers,butalsomakesourselveshappy.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求根據題干中的提示內容講述你班同學王紅回家路上做的一件好事，并談談感受，可適當增加細節。2.寫作指導：本文以一般過去時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。第一段和最后一段已給出，第二段具體描述她做好事的過程；第三段描述自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。2021年天津市中考英語試題66．范文：DearTom,Howareyou?Ihaveamovingstorytotellyou.WangHongismyclassmate.Shehurtherleftleginanaccidenttwoweeksago.ItwasdifficultforWangHongtogoupanddownthestairs,butshewantedtocometoschool.Theheadmasterdecidedtomovemyclassroomfromthefourthfloortothefirstfloorafterheknewit.WangHongisverygratefultotheheadmaster.Asherclassmates,weshouldalsohelpher.Somehelpedherbuylunch,othershelpedhertocleanup.Sheishappy.Ithinkstudentsshouldhelpeachotherandmakeprog