中間段SEEC論證模式DevelopLogicSEEC模式S－StatementE–

ExplanationE–ExampleC—Conclusion主題句要簡潔不要復(fù)雜要自然不要裝XThefirstandforemostreasonlyinginvirtually

spendingmoneyonpetsisthatitcanmakepeoplehappy.不適合做主題句的兩類句子1.現(xiàn)象和體現(xiàn)2.題目的轉(zhuǎn)述題目：Yourjobhasmoreeffectonyourhappinessthanyoursociallifedoes.People’sleisuretimeissqueezedandsparetimeesmuchmorepreciousthanbefore.Sociallifeplaysamoresignificantroleinachievinghappiness.Explanation因果對比拆分因果的展開思路向前一步論點向后一步competitionstressPhysical

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因果表達方式總結(jié)1.because=duetothefactthat=giventhat接句子2.dueto/owingto/becauseof/thanksto+名詞（原因），句子（結(jié)果）3.原因（名詞）＋result

in/contribute

to+結(jié)果（名詞）4.結(jié)果（名詞）＋result

from/attribute

to+原因（名詞）5.ing結(jié)構(gòu)，句子（結(jié)果）6.句子（原因），which+makes/resultsin(結(jié)果）Secondly,Studyingabroaddoesfacilitatetheiraccumulationoflifeexperience,livingabroad,studentsnotonlyhavetogetusedtolivingindependentlybutalsohavetocateranotherkindofsocialculture,thustheyequiteindependent.Gainingsuchspecialexperience,theyestrongerandmoreactivethantheirclassmateswhohavenevergoabroad,whichwillmakegreatcontributiontotheirsuccessinfuture.結(jié)果：CauseLeadtoResultinContributetoGiverisetoBringaboutArouseConsequently,Therefore,Thus,Asaresult,原因：BecauseofThankstoDuetoOwingtoResultfromAttributetoGiventhatIn

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Thefirstandforemostreasonforthedeclineofteacheristhateducationistransformingtoserviceindustry.Giventhatcustomer-orientedtrendhasbeenthemainstreaminmanyindustries,educationisinevitablyinfluenced.Asaresult,teachers’statusandrolehasbeenshiftedfromrespectedauthoritiestofacilitators.Anotherequallyimportantfactorthatcontributestothedeclineofteachersinvolvesthefloodingofanexpandingnumberofteacherswithwide-ranginglevels.Duetothefactthatteacherisrelativelystablejobwithdecentsalary,numerousnewgraduatesstepintothisindustry.Thesenewteacherslackteachingqualificationandexperience,whichwillresultinthefallofeducationquality.Consequently,teachersasawholearedevaluedbythesociety.

2.例證OGReasoningExemplification

…usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.例證的方式1.特例2.泛例3.調(diào)查研究特例名人事例

AbrahamLincoln，Einstein，MichaelJordan,

ThomasEdison，Beethoven…自己或者身邊事例myself,cousin,uncle,aunt,classmate,friends…例題Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Nowadays,youngpeoplearemoreindependentthanbefore.Theeasierandwidereducation

accessmakesyoungpeoplemoreindependent.Forexample,mycousinwhois18yearsoldisstudyinginUSA.Beforehestudiedabroad,hereliedheavilyonhisparentsandheevendidn’tknowhowtodothelaundry.Nowhecanhandleallhisdailychoresthankstotheoverseastudyexperience.Hobbiescanactasacontributingfactorforustoobtaintheexternalinformationofaperson,butservelittleinunearthingtheinternalnature.Thefollowingevidencecanjustifythispoint.IntheWorldWarII,followingtheirleaderHitler,mostoftheofficersofNaziGermanypossessedhighlevelofmusictaste.However,theyslaughteredinnocentJewswhilelisteningtothesymphonyofBeethoven.Therefore,hobbiesmaymisleadusinjudgingaperson.普遍現(xiàn)象群體Theeasierandwidereducationaccessmakesyoungpeoplemoreindependent.Forexample,numerousteenagersgoabroadandstudyoverseas.Inthenewstrangecircumstance,theyhavetosolvealltheproblemstheyconfrontmainlybythemselves.Suchexperiencewillcertainlystrengthentheirindependence.調(diào)查統(tǒng)計Theeasierandwider

educationaccessmakesyoungpeoplemoreindependent.Arecentsurveyconductedbysomesociologistsandpsychologistssuggeststhatthenumberofteenagerswhostudyabroadisonasharpriseintheseyears,whichisamaincontributortotheindependenceintheircharacter.First,thecompetitionpushesemployerstorequireemployeestoworklongerintheoffice.Asaresult,people’sleisuretimeissqueezedandsparetimeesmuchmorepreciousthanbefore.Forexample,anAustraliansociologistconductedasurveyaimingtofindoutthetimeandsatisfactionofleisureactivitiesofpeopleinfiftymajorcitiesinAustralia.Thesociologistgaveeachpersonaninterviewandquestionnaire.Thedatafrominterviewsandquestionnairessuggeststhat60%thetimeofleisureactivitieswereatafter11:00p.m.oronweekendsandmostofpeopleclaimedthattheirleisuretimeisreducedduringthese10years.However,manypeoplebelievedthatashortersparetimewithfriendsinlatenightcouldalsogiveagoodrelief

andhappinesstothem.Aswecansee,asthehighworkingpressureincreases,jobnegativelyinfluencesonpeople’shappiness,andpeopledependsonsociallifetorelievetheirtirednessandacquiresenseofhappiness.

真實和專業(yè)1.主體（sociologist,

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professor/報紙，雜志/大學(xué)，機構(gòu)）2.目的3.對象/范圍4.結(jié)論（數(shù)據(jù)＋評論）However,comparedwitholdbuildings,modernnewbuildingsexcelinmultifunctionandsuperfacilities.Generally,modernskyscrapersaredesignedwithmanyfloorsandsophisticatedsystem,whichenablesthemtomodatemoreresidents.Additionally,manyofthemaredesignedforcommercialusage.AsurveyconductedbyEconomistlastyearaimingtofindoutthedifferentfunctionofthemodernbuildingsin500bigcitiesaroundtheworldsuggeststhatmorethan70%highbuildingsareconstructedforbothcommercialandresidentialusage.Theycontainbasement,garage,officesandapartments.Thus,thereisanexplosioninthedemandforthemodernhighbuildingsinbigcities.ItcanbegivenaconcreteexamplethatWashingtonPostconductedasurveyaimingtofindoutthechangeofstud