四級寫作之漫畫作文輔導第1頁/共92頁寫作概述實際樣例參考運用（模考分析+下發(fā)資料）寫作語法黃金結構高分策略之詞匯替換高分策略之句型多樣化評分標準及建議第2頁/共92頁概述

第3頁/共92頁寫聽讀譯30mins15%30mins35%40mins35%30mins15%大學英語四級試卷的結構第4頁/共92頁你知道四級的答題順序嗎?作文段落翻譯聽力長篇閱讀仔細閱讀在答題紙1上作答,完成后交答題紙1.剩下題目在答卡2上作答.選詞填空第5頁/共92頁全國大學英語四級考試答題卡1第6頁/共92頁全國大學英語四級考試答題卡2第7頁/共92頁1.審題（1-2mins)2.構思提綱(3-5mins，確定主題)3.寫文章(20mins)4.修改檢查(5mins)寫作概述

第8頁/共92頁Stepspre-writing:仔細閱讀題干，確定寫作主題Para.1:describethepicture簡要描述漫畫（who,what,when,where…）開門見山TIPS:1.寫作的directions部分雖然給出了大致的主題，但是也要求考生對漫畫進行描述，切忌拋開漫畫內(nèi)容直接議論！！！（模考作文問題一）第9頁/共92頁

TIPS:2.漫畫的內(nèi)容一定要符合圖片，切忌無中生有！！！（模考作文問題二）

TheboythoughtdeeplyTheboyfeelashemedandsaysnothing.Theboystopsplayingandlearningalot.Theboyismakingaplanandthegrandpaisencourainghim

第10頁/共92頁para2：全文的核心段giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepictureandinterpretitsmeaning/message

揭示主題（觀點）并加以解釋和說明論證;揭示現(xiàn)象(問題)并闡述現(xiàn)象（問題）產(chǎn)生的原因。TIPS：可以從2-3個方面進行闡述，也可以將這部分分為兩段。第11頁/共92頁Para3.：giveyourconclusion.(a)提出建議，重申觀點主題句(b)對如何解決漫畫中所反映的問題提出合理建議或總結觀點。TIPS：主題句的復述不是簡單地重復，通常需符合如果在段末，用強調(diào)詞轉(zhuǎn)換方式連接。與主題句保持意思一致，更進一層。轉(zhuǎn)換方式：詞對應，同根，逆向第12頁/共92頁EXAMPLES主題句：youshouldconfirmeveryappointmentwhenyoudobusinessinUS.主題句復述：InbusinesscircleinUS,businessmanusuallymakessureeveryappointment.2.主題句：To

perceiveismoreimportantthantojudge.主題句復述句：Itis

ofgreatimportancetoperceivetojudge.ORToperceiveisnolessimportantthantojudge.第13頁/共92頁實例運用+模考分析第14頁/共92頁模考一第15頁/共92頁一、語法問題1.時態(tài)，人稱，單復數(shù)的混用，不統(tǒng)一。eg:1.Theboyplaycomputergamesandhisgrandpawatchhim.2.Playcomputerisausualactivityforuniversitystudents.3.Lifeplanmusthasadestination4.Ifsomeonedon'thavealifeplan...2.詞性的使用錯誤

eg:1.ifyouhaveaplan,youshouldworkhardly.2.sosheissucceedatlast/ayoungpeoplecan'tbesuccess3.weshouldfacedifficultbravely4.wehavemanychooses第16頁/共92頁3.Therebe句型使用錯誤eg:1.Therearemanyyoungpeoplewastetimetodosomeboringthings.2.Therehaveaprobleminthefutureifwedon'thavelifeplan.4.被動語態(tài)的使用錯誤eg:1.asshowsinthepicture,theboyis...2.everyonehasalifeplan,maybenotwrite...3.ThefirstConfuciusInstitutebuildin20044.confuciusinstitutessettospreadchineseculture.

第17頁/共92頁4.run-onsentences串句無法理解的句子EG:1.Therearemanythisphenomenons2.ifeverythingisalie,wearen'tneedalifeplan.3.Otherpeoplemakingalifeplanfromsth.4.Asayoungpeople,weshouldhave....

第18頁/共92頁二、佳句欣賞1.Therefore,wearesupposedtomakealifeplanfromnowontomakeourlifemoremeangingfulandcolorful(章笑盈)2.AsfarasIamconcerned,makingalifeplanisveryimportantforyoungpeople.(李程鵬)3.Itisobviousthatthedrawerofthepicturewantstodrawourattentiontowardsthatweshouldmakealifeplanfromanearlyage.Makingalifeplanshouldbeattachedgreatsignificancetobyourselves.(趙建宏)4.Onlyyoumakealifeplananddevoteyourselfintoit,canyouhavenoregretwhenyouareold.(卞涵)5.Weareeasytobocomeconfusedwithourlife.Makethelifeplanrightnowandfocusonthethingsyouwanttodobecausetimedoesn'twaitforanyone.(錢林豪)第19頁/共92頁三、看圖作文的解題思路應用1.審題（認真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“focusonthetopicaboutmakingalifeplanandexplainwhyitisimportantforyoungpeopletodo”確定寫作主題：年輕人應該做好人生規(guī)劃以及人生規(guī)劃的重要性的原因第20頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結構）第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…）:爺爺教導孫子：如果年老的時候?qū)懽詡鳎銜吹阶约喝ミ^哪里，（whereyouhavebeen）如果年輕時候?qū)懀憔蜁滥銓⑷ツ睦?willseewhereyouaregoing)。第21頁/共92頁Thepicturedepictsayoungmansittinginfrontofacomputerandtypingsomethingwithhisgrandfatherstandingbehind.Thecaptionbelowsays,“Whenyouwriteyourautobiographyinoldage,you’llseewhereyouhavebeen,butwhenyouwriteyourautobiographyatayoungage,you’llseewhereyou’regoing.”Itrevealsprofoundlythatyoungpeopleshouldshapetheirownfutureandmaketheirownlifeplans,whichiscosistentwithwhatIadvocate第22頁/共92頁第二段：解釋圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）并加以解釋和說明論證。Firstly,planningyourlifehelpsyousetupspecificlifegoalsandfollowthroughonyourgoals.Whenyouhavespecificgoals,you’remorelikelytobeself-motivated.Secondly,lifeplanninghelpsyouhaveafullunderstandingofyourlifedeficienciesandmakepromptadjustments.Ifyoufailsomeofyourlifegoals,youcanre-examineyourlifeplananddecidewhethertomakemoreeffortstofulfillthosegoalsorchangesomeofyourgoals.Lastbutnotleast,youcanmeetmanynewopportunitiesaftersomeofyourlifeplanscometrue,becausesuccessbreedsmoresuccessandopportunitiesbringinmoreopportunities.第23頁/共92頁第三段：給出自己的看法（總結全文，強調(diào)正確的做法）。

Tosumup,itisquiteessentialforyoungpeopleespeciallytheuniversitystudentstomakelifeplanearly

soastofacethechallegingsconfidentlyaftergraduations.Whatweshoulddoistotakeactionsimmediately,includingchoosingcorecouresandinterest-basedminorcoursesandfiguringoutexactschedulesforstudyorfuturecareer.Onlyinthisway,

canouruniversitytimeisrewardinginthelongrun.

第24頁/共92頁實際樣例參考運用（見資料）第25頁/共92頁Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.四級寫作新題型--看圖作文

2013.06真題第26頁/共92頁第27頁/共92頁看圖作文的解題思路應用1.審題（認真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofdoingsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig”確定寫作主題：做任何大事前都應該從小事做起（一屋不掃，何以掃天下。）第28頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結構）第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…）:父子之間的對話，兒子關注核廢料處理（disposalofnuclearwastes）,父親認為要從小事做起（emptythedustbinfirst）；第29頁/共92頁DoingBigThingsStartsfromDoingSmallOnesSAMPLE1

Asisvividlyrevealedinthepictureabove,theboyexpresseshisworriesaboutthedisposalofnuclearwastes,whilethefathertellshimtoemptythedustbinintheroomfirst.Thepictureremindsusof

anoldChinesesaying—Ifyoudon’tliketodotrivialthingslikecleaningyourroom,it’simpossibleforyoutoundertakeanyimportanttask.第30頁/共92頁SAMPLE2Wecanseefromthecartoonthatthereisafathertalkingwithhisson.Havingheardhisson’swordsthat“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearweapon.”Thefatherrepliesthat“Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything”andpointsthegarbagecanbesidehim.

Funnyandcommonastheconversationsounds,itreflectsthatthefatherintendstoadvisehissontodosmallthingsbeforeundertakingbig.

第31頁/共92頁作文提綱（結構）第二段：解釋圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）并加以解釋和說明論證。努力做好小事可以培養(yǎng)做大事所需要的優(yōu)良品質(zhì)（developgoodqualitiesneededundertakingimportanttasks）;第32頁/共92頁

Undoubtedly,thesymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedinthepictureshouldbethatitisvitalandnecessarytodealwithtrivialthings.Doingsmallthingswellmayhelpusdevelopthegoodqualitiesneededinundertakingimportanttasks,whichlaysasolidfoundationforourfuturedevelopment.Smallthingswouldoftenmakethedifferencebetweensuccessandfailure.Wesurelyknowthatthewantofahorseshoenailmaycauseakingdomtobelost.Therefore,whenitcomestothekeytosuccess,themostimportantthingliesindoingeverytrivialthingwell.第33頁/共92頁

Definitely,doingsmallthingsisthefirststepofsuccessandwilllayrootfordoingsomethingbig.Bydoingsomethingsmall,weareabletoaccumulateexperience,masterskillsandtrainourselvestobemorepatient.Inotherwords,wecanbewellpreparedforfurtherchallengesinthecourseoffulfillingsmallthings.Bycontrast,thosewhodesiretodosomethingbigatoncewillconstantlybehauntedbydisappointment,frustrationsorevenfailures,aswithopportunities-“somethingbig”-showingup,theycanhardlyseizethembecauseofthelackofexperienceandconfidencewhichstemsfromdoingsmallthings.第34頁/共92頁作文提綱（結構）第三段：給出自己的看法（總結全文，強調(diào)正確的做法）。

實現(xiàn)做大事的目標，不僅需要有雄心壯志（thegreatambition）,還需要有從小事踏踏實實做起的實踐精神（thepracticalspirit）.

Sample1：Inoneword,toachievegoalsneedsnotmerelythegreatambition,

but

thepracticalspiritofdealingwithtrivialthings.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakethehighesteminence.第35頁/共92頁

Sample2：

Inconclusion,undernocircumstancesshouldweundervaluethepowerofdoingsmallthings.Instead,weshouldregardsmallthingsasthesourceofexperience,skillsandtheprerequisiteofsuccess.“Greatachievementonlybelongstothosewhocandosmallthingsperfectly.”Aristotlealsousedtosay.第36頁/共92頁Let'shaveatry第37頁/共92頁Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.PRACTICE1第38頁/共92頁第39頁/共92頁看圖作文的解題思路應用1.審題（認真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫“expressyourviewsontheimportanceoftakingprecautions”確定寫作主題：Totakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.(未雨綢繆)第40頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結構）第41頁/共92頁

Thepicturefocusesonapersonwhoisstandinginfrontofthesea,watchingthetiderising.Abovethepicture,thereisathought-provokingsentencewhichtellsusthatweshouldtakesomemeasuresbeforesomethinghadhappened.第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）。第42頁/共92頁第二段：針對圖畫所表達的觀點（主題）進行舉例論證

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateshouldhebelaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第43頁/共92頁WritingTechniques:

AGeneralPointSupportedbyExamples

Lifeisnotalwaysfullofhappinessandfortune.Therefore,wearesupposedtobeawareofthepotentialriskanddanger.Forexample,whentheeconomicdownturnisaroundthecorner,anemployeewithversionshouldanalyzethecurrentsituationandeitherlearnmoretostabilizehispositioninhiscompanyorgetreadytofindanewjob.Itwouldbelateshouldhebelaidoffwithnootherjobopportunitiesavailable.第44頁/共92頁第三段：總結全文。

Allinall,itisadvisableforanyonetomakeprecautionarypreparationsfortheunexpecteddifficultiesordisastersinlifeinadvance.第45頁/共92頁Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofanglewhenpeopleobservingsomething.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.PRACTICE2第46頁/共92頁第47頁/共92頁看圖作文的解題思路應用1.審題（認真閱讀寫作提示）：

漫畫信息“expressyourviewsontheimportanceofanglewhenpeopleobservingsomething”確定寫作主題：應該從不同角度來觀察事物。第48頁/共92頁2.作文提綱（結構）第49頁/共92頁

Thepictureshowsusthatintheeyesofthemanneartheapple,theappleisofgoodquality,whiletothemanwhoisfarfromtheapple,theappleisofbadqualitywithawormintheflesh.Itistheanglesratherthanthedistancethatdifferentiatethewitnessoftheapple’squality.Thepictureremindsusof

aphilosophicalview—Observingthesamefromdifferentanglesisamust.第一段：簡要描寫圖畫內(nèi)容（who,what,when,where…），并揭示圖畫深刻含義（揭示主題）。第50頁/共92頁第二段：進行解釋和說明論證。

Itisimportantandverynecessarytoobserveorevaluateathingfromdifferentangles.Forexample,sometimeswhenyouthinkyouareunhappy,toothersitmaybethatyouaresurroundedbyhappiness.Therefore,differentconclusionswouldbearrivedatwhenweviewathingfromdifferentangles.第51頁/共92頁第三段：給出自己的看法（總結全文）。

Itisknowntoallthatacoinhastwosides.Ascollegestudent,weshouldtrytolearnfromsomeoneelse’spositions.Onlyinthiswaycanwebecomeamoreconsiderateandperfectperson.第52頁/共92頁ObservingtheSameThingfromDifferentAngles第53頁/共92頁

Thepictureshowsusthatintheeyesofthemanneartheapple,theappleisofgoodquality,whiletothemanwhoisfarfromtheapple,theappleisofbadqualitywithawormintheflesh.Itistheanglesratherthanthedistancethatdifferentiatethewitnessoftheapple’squality.Thepictureremindsusof

aphilosophicalview—Observingthesamefromdifferentanglesisamust.Itisimportantandverynecessarytoobserveorevaluateathingfromdifferentangles.Forexample,sometimeswhenyouthinkyouareunhappy,toothersitmaybethatyouaresurroundedbyhappiness.Therefore,differentconclusionswouldbearrivedatwhenweviewathingfromdifferentangles.

Itisknowntoallthatacoinhastwosides.Ascollegestudent,weshouldtrytolearnfromsomeoneelse’spositions.Onlyinthiswaycanwebecomeamoreconsiderateandperfectperson.第54頁/共92頁寫作語法黃金結構1.notonly,butalso2.Itis+adjforsbtodosth3.Therebe句型4.強調(diào)句和倒裝句的靈活使用5.被動語態(tài)（模考寫作翻譯出現(xiàn)大問題）6.狀語從句7.定語從句8.插入語的靈活運用第55頁/共92頁

插入語可以是時間，地點，銜接詞，同位語，強調(diào)語，修飾語，同義復指或從句。使句子更有跳躍感和地道。

Hefinallycame,inthelastminute,tofulfillhistask.Drought,inSouthwestChina,scorchedearth—ourmotherland.Tourism,however,givesrisetoanumberofproblems.Tsunami,adestructivenaturaldisaster,hitChilewithoutanywarning.Weare,ifnotgoingbackward,makingprogress.第56頁/共92頁詞匯替換第57頁/共92頁1.常用詞替換2.邏輯詞替換第58頁/共92頁Firstgroup常用詞第59頁/共92頁people,personsmakesensethingbuildindividuals,folks,mankind,humanbeing,citizenhaveapointaffair,business,matter,stuffshape,establish,construct,erect,fabricate第60頁/共92頁原詞aspectcausewantrememberhavepopular替換為facet,feature,sidegiveriseto,resultin,leadto,incitedesire,setone’shearton,yearnforkeep...inmindenjoy,possess,ownprevalent,prevailing第61頁/共92頁原詞替代詞knowstrengthenexperiencemoreandmorerealize,beawareofenhance,intensify,deepensee,witness,livethrough,endure,undergoAnincreasingnumberof、Increasingly、Growing第62頁/共92頁原詞tryone’sbestveryattractsamebuy

替換詞doone’sutmost,exertoneselftodosth,devotetoextremely,greatly,vastly,severely,terribly,exceedinglycapture,enchant,entice,appealtoidenticalpurchase,acquire,afford第63頁/共92頁表明importantThinkofcomeupwith

sthoccurto/strikesbCometoremind/flashbackto/recollect/recallmomentous,considerable,distinctive,major,vital,capital,substantial,material,conspicuous,striking,prominent,eminent,noticeable,consequentialreveal,indicate,convey,reflect,confirm,demonstrate,imply第64頁/共92頁Ithink??Asweknow?inmyoponion?formypart?frommyperspective?第65頁/共92頁1.harbortheideathat2.taketheattitudethat3.itiswidelysharedthat4.Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat5.AsfarasIamconcerned6.I'mconvincedofsth/that

第66頁/共92頁beinterestedin

???1.sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb2.s.b.befascinatedwithsth3.s.b.befondofsth第67頁/共92頁

邏輯指示詞第68頁/共92頁1.原因–由于，多虧第69頁/共92頁1.thanksto2.attributeto3.dueto4.bepartiallyresponsiblefor5.owingto6.rusultfrom第70頁/共92頁2.因果--結果，導致，產(chǎn)生第71頁/共92頁leadto導致resultin導致giveriseto產(chǎn)生stemfrom起源于asaresult/consequenceconsequently第72頁/共92頁2.遞進第73頁/共92頁What’smoreInaddition/besidesFurthermoreMoreoverObviously/definitely/undoubtedlyThatistosayIndeedInparticular/especially第74頁/共92頁

3.假設SupposeAssumingImagineOnceIf第75頁/共92頁4.比較第76頁/共92頁同義比較1.Similarly/besimilarto2.Likewise3.Inthesameway4.As…as第77頁/共92頁反義比較1.Conversely2.Onthecontrary3.In/bycontrast5.Incomparison第78頁/共92頁句型多樣化

第79頁/共92頁1.描述漫畫句:

*Fromthecartoonwecanseethat_____.*Wecanseefromthecartoonthat_____.*Asisindicatedinthecartoon,_____.第80頁/共92頁2.引出暗含主題句*Wecandeducefromthesetwovividdrawingsthat_____.*Whathasbeendescribedinthecartooncarriesgreatmeanings/implicationsforourlife,esp.howto_____.*Whatitillustratesisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,anditexpresses/conveysthesymbolicmeaningof_____.第81頁/共92頁3.引出原因句

*Therearequiteafewpossiblereasonssuggestedhere.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.*Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthistendency.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.