MAXAWEI5段結(jié)構(gòu)（shmilyqiqi的模板，我加入了大量開頭，中間和結(jié)尾的句子首段Inthisargumenttheauthorconcludesthat…Severalreasonsareofferedinsupportofthisargument.Firstofall,theauthorcitesthat…Inaddition,theauthorpointsoutthat…asweskimthroughtheargumentwemightfindtheconclusionsomewhatappealing.Afteraquickbutcareful ysis,wecaneasilyidentifyseverallogicalflawsthatrendertheauthor’slineofreasoningquestionable.中間段Beginningofa…thereis,however,noguaranteethatthisisthecase.Justaslikely,…itisentirelypossibleItisequallypossibleTheauthorreadilyassumesthat…inaddition,theauthorclaimsthat…Whilethisisareasonableassumption,itisbynomeansacertainty…forexample…However,thereasoningisfallaciousunlessotherpossiblefactorsrelevantto…h(huán)avebeenconsideredandruledout.TheassumptiondoesnotseemreasonableonitsTheargumentclaimsthat…Althoughweagreethat…,itwouldbefollytotakein…Severalstudiesof…showTheassumptionfailstotakeintoaccountthat…inadditionto…anydiscussionof…shouldtakeintoaccountthat…Theauthor’sconclusiongoestheevidenceEvenifwegranttheprecedingassumption.Endingofaparagraph:Forthisreason,itisunlikelythat…willbesuccessfulinitsattempttoTheargumentcouldhavebeenmuchclearerifitisexplicitlystatedIftheauthorhadprovidedevidencethat…,theargumentwouldhavebeenalotItispresumptuousonthepartoftheauthortoconclude/suggestItisprematuretoconcludeTheauthorcommitsthefallacyofAccordingly,withoutfurtherevidence,thatauthorcannotvalidateTherefore/asaresult,withoutfurtherevidence,theclaimthat…isgroundless/unfounded/ill-Therefore/asaresult,unlessallthefactorsrelevantto…areconsideredandruledout,theauthorcannotjustifythe Theauthorhasfailedtodemonstrateaconnectionbetween…and….Withoutthisconnection,theconclusionreachedbytheauthorthat…isunacceptable.TheauthorhasfailedtoestablishacausallinkBecausetheauthorfailstoeliminatethesepossibilities,theassumptioninquestionneedsnotbeaccepted.Problemslikethismaypresentinsurmountablechallengesthatprevent…inthefuture.Resultfrom…/asaresultof…Consequently/Therefore…/turnsoutthat…/accordingly/Becauseof/Thanksto…/Inaddition/moreover/what’sIncrease=rise=grow,uptick,upwards,headingnorth,Decrease=decline=diminish=downwards,headingsouth,Withoutsupportingevidenceandexamplesfromotherbusinesseswhere…,oneisleftwiththeimpressionthattheclaimismoreofawishfulthinkingratherthansubstantiveevidence.Asaresult,thisconclusionhasnolegstostandon.ThereisconsiderabledebateIndeed,thereisagrowingperceptionInourstudy…,wefoundrelativelylittleassociationbetween…and…Thereisagrowingsensethat…SetthestageThereareindications/hasbeenindicationFirst,theargumentreadilyassumesthat…Thisstatementisastretch…forexample..Clearly…argumentcouldhavebeenclearerifitexplicitlystatedSecond,theargumentclaimsthat…Thisisagainaveryweakandunsupportedclaimastheargumentdoesnotdemonstrateanycorrelationbetween…and…Toillustrate,…While,…However,…indeed…Infact,itisnotatallclear,rather…Iftheargumenthadprovidedevidencethat…thentheargumentwouldhavebeenalotmoreconvincing.Finally,…(posesomequestionsfortheargument)..Withoutconvincinganswerstothesequestions,isleftwiththeimpressionthattheclaimismoreofawishfulthinkingratherthansubstantive比較兩個(gè)動(dòng)作的時(shí)候，advertisementwasthecauseofthepurchaseofthesaleitems.E.g.Acorrelationbetweenreadingtheadandpurchasingsaleitems.E.gBetweenreadingtheadandbuyingnon-saleitems.Establishacausalrelationshipbetweentheseevents.…wasimmediayfollowedThemerefactthat…precededthe…isinsufficienttoconcludethatitwasthecauseoftheseevents.Manyotherfactorscouldbringaboutthesameresults.Forexample…bettermeettheneedsof…betterprepare…Finally,littlecanbeforetoldregardingtheemployabilityof…Itisdifficulttoassesstheirprospectsof…What’shardertoproveisthehypothesisthatslownessisnotjustasymptomoftroublebutacauseofit.ButsimplyreplicatingTexas'economicpolicieselsewhere,intact,isnoguaranteeofjob-creatingsuccess,結(jié)尾Insummary,theauthorconclusionisnotpersuasiveasitstands.Itcouldbeconsiderablystrengthenediftheauthorclearlymentionedallfactsrelevantto….Inordertoassessthemeritsofthesituation,itisessentialtohavefullknowledgeofallcontributingfactors.Tofurthercorroborateandconsolidatetheargument,theauthorshouldprovideconcreteevidencetodemonstratethat…Examples/evidencedrawnfromwouldfurthersubstantiatetheauthor’sview（這是最終版，下面的是可換用的Theauthor’sconclusionisnotcompelling/convincing/persuasiveasitstands.Itisnotprudentfortheauthortoclaimthat…Tostrengthentheconclusion/tomaketheargumentlogicallyacceptable,theauthorwouldhavetoshow/provideevidencethat…Inaddition,tosolidifytheconclusion,theauthorshouldprovideconcreteevidencetodemonstratethat/supportingexamplesdrawnfrom…wouldfurthersubstantiatetheauthor’sview.Inconclusion,theauthorhasnotsucceededinprovidingcompellingreasonsInconclusion,theargumentisflawedfortheabove-mentionedreasonsandisthereforeunconvincing.Itcouldbeconsiderablystrengthenediftheauthorclearlymentionedalltherelevantfacts…Inordertoassessthemeritsofacertainsituation/decision,itisessentialtohavefullknowledgeofallcontributingfactors.Inthisparticularcase…Withoutthisinformation,theargumentremainsunsubstantiatedandopentodebate.TheauthormustprovidesupportfortheassumptionLendcredence,corroboratethe時(shí)序Firstly,theauthorisengagedin“afterthis,therefore,becauseofthis”reasoning.ThelineofreasoningisthatbecauseAhappenedbeforeB,theformercausedthelatter.However,thereasoningisfallaciousunlessotherpossiblecausalfactorsrelevantto…h(huán)avebeenconsideredandruledout.Forexample,perhapsC.Asaresult,anydecisionaimedataddressingtheproblemofBmustbebasedonamorethoroughinvestigationtogatherdatainordertonarrowdownandlocatetherootcauseofB./Unlesstheauthorcanruleoutotherfactorsrelevantto…,thisargumentcommitsthefallacyofassumingthatjustbecauseoneevent(A)followsanother(B),thesecondeventhasbeencausedbythefirst.IsAtheonlydifferencerelevanttoB?Itisentirelypossiblethat…ThemerefactthatAprecedesBisinsufficienttoconcludethatAcausedtheseevents.Perhaps..Moreover,…maynotnecessarilyindicatethat…itisalsohighlypossiblethat…Noadditionalevidencelinking…and…isofferedintheargument,makingforthepossibilitythateventsarenotcausallyrelatedbutmerelycoincident.同時(shí)因Secondly,theauthor’sargumentrestsontheassumptionthatAisthecauseofBjustbecausethatAcoincidedwithB.However,amerepositionalcorrelationdoesnotnecessarilyproveacausalrelationship.Inaddition,allothercausesofB,suchasCandD,mustberuledout.WithoutdetailedysisoftherealsourceofB,itwouldbegroundlesstoattributeBtoA.錯(cuò)誤類比Additionally,itishighlydoubtfulthatstrategiesdrawnfromAareapplicabletoB.However,differencesbetweenthesetwoclearlyoutweighthesimilarities,thereforemakingtheogymuchlessvalid.Forexample,CandDallaffectAbutvirtuallyabsentinB.Accordingly,wecanseethatAandBaresodissimilarthatBisunlikelytoexperiencethesameconsequenceifitadoptsA’sstrategies.非此即彼Lastbutnotleast,theauthorunfairlyassumesthatareadermustmakeaeither-orchoice.However,theargumentfailstoruleoutpossibilitythatadjustingAandBmightproducebetterresults.Moreover,iftheauthoriswrongintheassumptionthatAandBaretheonlycausesoftheproblem,thusthemosteffectivesolutionmightincludeacomplexofotherfactors—suchasCandD.Inanyevent,theauthorprovidesnojustificationforthemutuallyexclusivechoiceimposedonthereader.必要Inthefirstplace,theauthorunfairlyassumesthatBwasdeterminedsolelybyA.WhileAisaseeminglyimportantelementindeterminingB,itishardlytheonlyorevennecessarilyrequiredelement.ThisassumptionoverlooksothercrucialcriteriaindeterminingB—suchasC,D.Withoutaccountingforthesepotentialfactors,theauthorconcludestoohastilythat…isthebestwaytoachievegoals.充分Inthesecondplace,theauthor’ssolutionrestsontheassumptionthatAissufficienttogivebirthtothedesiredgoals.However,ifitturnsoutthatBisduetoacombinationoffactors,someofwhichwillremainunchangedinthefuture,suchasCandD,onlyAmighthavenoimpactonB.選擇Athresholdproblemisthattheauthorprovidesnoevidencetoclaimthatthegeneralgroupasawholeisofthesamecharacteristic.Theexamplecited,whilesuggestiveofthistrend,isinsufficienttowarrantthatthesampleisrepresentativeofthewholegroup.Forexample,Iquestionthat…Therefore,suchevidencewouldbeobviouslyunrepresentative.Infact,infaceofsuchlimitedevidence,itisfallaciousfortheauthortodrawanyconclusionatall.(與“選擇性樣本”較類似)樣本代表性Moreover,apossiblemethodologyproblemintheargumentisthatitisofbias.Theterm‘somany’istoovaguetobestatisticallymeaningful.Itisverypossiblethatworkerswhoweremoreinterestedinthesurveymightbelikelytorespondtothequestionnaire.Lackingintheinformationaboutthenumberofworkerssurveyedandthenumberofrespondents,itisimpossibletoassessthevalidityofthesurvey.Forinstance,if1000workersweresurveyedbutonly10responded,theresultshouldbehighly.Becausetheauthorfailstoaccountforotherinterpretations,thesurveywouldbeuselessinconcluding忽略他因Thirdly,theauthorhasfocusedonlyonA.Amoredetailedysiswouldrevealthatotherfactorsfaroutweighthefactoronwhichtheauthorfocuses.Forexample,C.Lackingamorecomprehensiveysisofthecauses,itispresumptuousfortheauthortoclaimthatAsolelydeterminedB.因果倒置Atlast,itispossiblethattheauthorhasconfusedcausewitheffect.PerhapsAwasaresponsetoB.Sincetheauthorfailstoaccountforthispossibility,theclaimthat…iscompleyunwarranted.樣本數(shù)量Anotherproblemthatseriouslyweakensthelogicofthisargumentisthatthesurveycitedisbasedontoosmallasampletobereliable.Offeredinsupportoftheargument,theonlyevidenceisthat….Unlessitcanbeshownthatthesampleistypicalofallgeneralgroup,thefactthat…isgroundlesstoclaimthat…Loadedquestion和誠實(shí)What’smore,themethodologyofthesurveyisproblematicfortworeasons.Foronething,wearenotinformedwhetherthesurveyprovidedonly3alternatives.Ifitdid,therespondents,whomightverywellpreferanotherchoicenotprovidedinthesurvey,mightbeforcedtogiveuptheirpreferences.Foranotherthing,wearenotinformedwhetherthesurveyresponseswereanonymousor .Therespondentsmightsupplyresponsesfavoredbytheirsuperiorswhomightconductthesurvey.Botheventswouldleadthissurveyunreliable,letalonedrawtheconclusionthat…樣本Lastbutnotleast,anotherflawthatsignificantlyunderminesthisargumentisthattheauthorneglectstoindicatehowrecentlythesurveywasactuallyconducted.Whenusedtogenerallyclaimaparticulargroup,thesamplesshouldbecloseenoughtosupportthegeneralization,inordertopreventhistoricalchangesfrominvalidatingthegeneralization.Allweknowisthatthesurveyisrecentlypublished.Thelessrecentthesurveyitself,thelessreliabletheresultstodemonstratethat…差異概念Tobeginwith,wemustestablishthemeaningofthevagueconceptA.IfthetermweresynonymouswithB,theevidencecitedwouldstronglysupporttheargument.However,AmaybedefinedinothertermssuchasCandD.Accordingly,theauthorhasdrawntheconclusiontoohastilyduetotheignoranceofotherdefinitionsofA.范圍內(nèi)推What’smore,themostegregiousreasoningerrorinthisargumentisthattheauthorusesevidencepertainingtoageneralgrouponthebasisofaparticularB.Evenifthereasoningmaybesoundingeneralsense,theparticularsituationinwhichBisinvolvedmaynotberepresentativeoftheentiregeneralgroup.Itispossiblethat...Ifthisisthecase,theclaimthat…isillfounded.不隨時(shí)變Moreover,theauthorunfairlyassumesthatAwillremainunchangedoverthenextdecades.However,amererecentone-yearAisinsufficienttoclaimthat.Statisticsfromsuchlimitedanecdotalevidenceisnotagoodindicatorforthistrend.Inaddition,itispossiblethatinthefuture,thistrendwouldgreatlyfluctuateorevenreverse,thentheadoptionoftheauthor’sproposalmightgivebirthtoB,however,itmightalsohaveanegativeimpactonC1and,inturns,C2.Admittedly,thisargumentwouldbeevenweakerandweakereachdayastimegoesby.好句Nowthecompanyfindsitselfonthebrinkofdefault,alsothankstosourrelationswithfranchiseowners,costlyrentsandstepped-upcompetitionfromrivalslikeSubway.FacebusinessHavingagreatdealofdebthampersyourabilitytogrowbecauseyouarepayingbackinterest,ratherthaninvestinginthebrand.Beonagrowthtearformuchofthepastdecade,rapidlyattractingfranchiseesasitshotsandwichescarvedoutanicheinthefastfoodmarket.StruggletoturnaBequicktocomeupwitha“value”offeringQuiznosoutlets,withtheirpremium-pricedfare,tendedtobeinhigher-rent…we’rethrilledatthesuccessthey’veachievedsoWebelievethattheirmobilebusinessisonanupwardtrajectoryandpoisedforexplosive…accelerateinnovationinthis…willnotonlysuperchargeAndroid,butwillalsoenhancecompetitionandofferconsumersacceleratinginnovation,greaterchoice,andwonderfuluserexperiences.IamconfidentthatthesegreatexperienceswillcreatehugevalueforThankstoathrivingeconomyathome,anincreasingnumberofChinesestudentsareattendingU.S.graduateschools,accordingtoastudybolstertheira"global"educationthatexposesstudentstopeopleandideasfromaroundtheForbusinessschoolsthereisastrongneedtomeetthedemandsofcorporaterecruiters,whoareincreasinglyseekingcandidatescapableofworkinginamultinationalconglomerateEuropewillstillhavetoaddressthemoreprofoundchallengesofeconomicgrowth,demographyandentitlementreform.theytypicallywindupngnomorethantinkeringaroundtheedgesofregulatoryortaxHowever,Chinesehavealsomanagedtoputbrakesontheirexplosivepopulationgrowth,thankstotheone-childpolicy.Intheforeseeablefuture…Thisfashionablechattercouldnotbemorewrong.Sure,…,butwhatisuniqueabout…isnotWhenitcomesSo…isfavorab