1、邏輯上環環相扣語言上精準多樣環環相扣：邏輯相關點題扣題精準：1. 沒有語法錯誤- 23,242. 搭配準確（并符合語境）- 25,26多樣:1. 用詞多樣2. 句式多樣- 27,28環環相扣：1. 邏輯相關A-B （一直在重復意思，但不重復語言）2. 點題扣題TS, 分論點（不跑題 + 重復意思）分論點 1 （解釋 1）扣分論點 1例子的引入 +TS+分論點 2 （解釋 2）扣分論點 2破題 5h +信手 3 Do you agree or disagree with the following sement?Teachersshould assignto students every day

2、.disagree1. 學生累1）作業已經很多2）還要參加課外活動2. 有其他方法幫學生學習1）ernship2）travel2min3 + 8+ 8+ 3 = 22教育被重視，甚至了關于是否要每天留作業的熱烈的。讓學生每天做作業，根據很多監護人的觀點，可以讓學生強化知識獲取成功。跟他們不同的是觀點，學生們太忙了不能每天做作業，并且其他方法可以促進他們成功，包括實習和旅行。(3min)話題詞題目選一個詞同位語 N1， N2Education， the foundation of a quality life, has been valued /emphasized / highlighted

3、/ attached great importance to and eventriggers / stimulates / sparks odebate over + n / whether . thenesity of assigningeach day. / whether teachersshould assign. Everyday assignments, in some parents /guardians view, can consolidate students knowledge. （給對方加一點理由）Contrary to these peoples opinion i

4、s mytit is ineffective to deal with / cope with / handle / tackle / completetasks / projects each day, due to their overwhelming life and othert句子（3min）available methods. / due to the fact+ 分論點 1 + 解釋 1 + 分論點 2 + 解釋 2+ 例子的引入 +TS扣分 1 +扣分 2首先要考慮的是平時學生的壓力已經非常大了，沒有辦法每天做作業。首先，不能忽略的問題是現在的作業已經讓學生變成了受害者，不能做

5、的作業了。具體來說，學生們沉浸在一直要完成的各類項目上，包括小組、做展示，每天的作業會讓學疲力盡。進一步講，課外活動也會占用青少年大量時間，讓他們沒時間每天都做作業。詳細來說，當老師們每天要留很多作業的時候應該想到， 學生參加多種活動和，比如：計算機，藝術和文學。拿附中舉例子，這個學?？粗袑W生的課內外表現。年輕人白天既要在學校獲得各種知識，還要在晚上接觸到各種課外活動。如果每天都留作業，他們不可能有足夠時間做這些事情。Do you agree or disagree with the following sement? Teachersshould assignto students ever

6、y day.TS(把題目的所有都出現一遍)分論點（把題目的最關鍵的都出現一遍）overwhelmed / overloaded / occupiedeveryday (a)What must be prioritized ist （長）dealing witheachis isible for stu en overwhelmed by their school life. Initially,（短）it is their overloading work in classt distracts studentsfrom completing tasks every day. To be mo

7、re specific, (解釋class 累 - x) (1. why -解釋中間環節 2. 切 abc)students are occupied by prs, presenions and group projects,making them unavailable forng extraon a daily basis.Moreover, they are unlikely to cope with dailyowing totheir extracurricular life. （短）In detail, (解釋after class 累 x) teachers considert

8、 / consider the factt variousclubs and extracurricular activities occupy most of their leisure time,in which case assignments cannot be finished each day. Take TheAffiliated High School of Peking University as an example, whichdoes not require daily tasks for students. 扣分 1 （選擇一個點 +數字）Sintudents the

9、re generally complete their assignments tillmidnight, hardly can they deal with extra school work. In addition,debate clubs in after-school activities generally consume 2 hours of. （數字them, preventing them from being immersed in+相關）名詞1. 教育- Beijing No. 4 High SchoolThe Affiliated High School of Peki

10、ng UniversityPeking University工作生活：/ Citib: a resident in Beijing/ Tom / Alice同樣要的是還有其他方法而不是每天留作業可以確保成功。首先，實習而不是作業讓學生受益。具體說，實習能鍛煉的很多技能，比如：處理人際關系，組織活動和做項目的能力，這些都會促使學生成功，做作業的時候是孤立的，沒有辦法鍛煉這樣的技能 。其次，旅行也能讓年輕人有機會鍛煉，每天做作業卻不行。詳細來說，在旅行中面對著很多，比如使用外語，迷路和生病，青少年要尋找方法解決問題并因此強化能力，這些在旅行中是缺失的。比如李，一個在紐約公司實習以及旅行的高中生。他

11、不但要學會和工作中不同部門的人交流，還要自己安排好路線，可以磨練性格；每天做作業怎么能獲得這樣的鍛煉呢？What should be equally worthng / worthy of discussing istmore effective methods / approaches / means / strategies, whichare bettern dealing witheach day, are available /sible for students. (長) To begin with, neverapproachable / acshould we ignorete

12、rnship /ngernship /ernshipprograms / apprentihip carries more weight / weighs over daily. （短-簡單句 - 表達好）In detail, (ernship -good)unlike cowith, merely / solely / exclusively involvingtheoreticalknowledge,ngernship/beinganernencouragesstudents to apply theoriesopractice and reinforcetheir expertise.

13、Additionally, sth benefit sb/ sb reap and harvestbenefits from / sth plab as benefiriestraveling, rathern/ instead of / compared with / in comparison withplishing, plastudents as benefiries. To explain further,(traveling-good) trips and journeys are abundant / saturated withobstacles, absent in ng a

14、ssignments, and during the pros theycan cultivate theiralities. Take Harvard as an example, whichstimulates its students tonternship and travel.erns in can employ C+ acquired in class o their work. Moreover, visitingCalifornia frequently, students can encounter variousernationalfriends. (topic vocabulary) Seldom will they bene