1、2020-2021年中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)單元測(cè)試題（含答案）（word）一、中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1.如今，很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式共享單車（bike-sharing）,它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時(shí)也引發(fā)了一些問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示以“Bike-sharing"為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。要點(diǎn)提示：AdvantagesBe convenient, less pollution, reduce the traffic pressure（減緩交通壓力）Take exercise ProblemsThrow away, damage （毀損）,be stolen

2、 AdviceCivilized （文明的） ,follow the rules, take good care of汪思：1 .短文應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名及地名；3 .詞數(shù)：80-100 （文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.【答案】 Today,as a greener means of transport

3、ation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere. 【高分句型一】 Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollut

4、ion because of bike-sharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（優(yōu)勢(shì)）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（難題）In

5、 my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建議）【解析】【詳解】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，表達(dá)了所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少， .如:

6、 It's known that it has many advantages.， First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere. ， Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion, 等。【點(diǎn)睛】本文要求以“ Bik-esharing ”為題，根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己對(duì)共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時(shí)，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：首先，闡述共享單

7、車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；其次，列舉共享單車帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題；最后，根據(jù)問(wèn)題給出個(gè)人建議。2 隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，通訊的方式從遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代的書信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么？3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名； 2. 語(yǔ)意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As f

8、or me, 【答案】 As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound

9、 by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile p

10、hones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍?duì)現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： thereare ;I prefer to Mobile phones bring , we can we should ,So let ' 籌句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來(lái)介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具

11、要注意什么；最后呼吁號(hào)召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代s opinion,通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in onetry one ' s嘴sfc些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。3 誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming 最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末，他本來(lái)和Lingling 相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來(lái)。因此， Lingling 很生 氣，并且不愿接受 Daming 的道歉。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以

12、 “The Importance of Promise 為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： ”1 、簡(jiǎn)述事件； 2、談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ⒔oDaming 一些建議。注意：1 、詞數(shù)80 100 ；2、行文連貫，邏輯合理；3、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；4、文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize （強(qiáng)調(diào)）the importance of the promise, and they hate people whobreak their promise.Promise is very imp

13、ortant. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【答案】 The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize （強(qiáng)調(diào)） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, myfriend Daming had

14、 a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it thatday because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, itwas really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling s anger, but also made her losetrust in him. Keeping p

15、romises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過(guò)大明和玲玲之間，大明沒有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，

16、先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。【詳解】首先，第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。接下來(lái)說(shuō)出自己對(duì)此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如 but ， so， because of 等，使文章更加通順。4 .( B)根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù):80-100體育運(yùn)動(dòng)是中學(xué)生的共同愛好.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇題為What We Get

17、from Sports 的短文 ,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn) : 1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同 ,理由各異 .5 .多數(shù)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)疲倦時(shí),通過(guò)運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)放松自己 .6 .男孩參加各項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng),希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己更強(qiáng)壯.7 .女孩也喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條 .8 .你對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn).9 .注意 :文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字10 短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù).11 參考詞語(yǔ) :keep slim (保持苗條)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.

18、【答案】 Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in al

19、l kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get

20、a lot from sports. 【解析】 【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括： 1.提出目前學(xué)生對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的不同看法及原因。 2.具體分析（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。 3.提出自己對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮 點(diǎn)詞句，如have fun, in order to , as for, in my opinion等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意 思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。5.書面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)

21、臨，對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期，家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示 寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述他們的不同看法，同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀 點(diǎn)。Parents' opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkKid's opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opinion注思(1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考，允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息；(4)詞數(shù)：不少于80。How will you spen

22、d the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.【答案】 How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it's important to take summer courses. They also think ki

23、ds can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselve

24、s after working so hard at school. It's good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān) 系 【點(diǎn)睛】 這篇短文用到了一些好的句型： They also think kids can help do housework t

25、o learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it's time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing. 這些給文章增色不少。6 題目 “持之以恒，方得始。 ”堅(jiān)持是一種可貴的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以 “堅(jiān)持 ”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿。談淡你在初中生活中堅(jiān)持的一件事（愛好，習(xí)慣），你是怎樣做的，以及你的感受。提

26、示詞語(yǔ)： keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示問(wèn)題： 1. What did you do?2. How do you feel?It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.【答案】 It's important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7 ， I was

27、not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates ， I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes ， I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter wha

28、t kind of difficulties I faced ， I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I'm very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中堅(jiān)持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎 么做的并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋！驹斀狻? . 本篇要求根據(jù)所給材料，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅(jiān)持做的一

29、件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do湘一般過(guò)去時(shí)，描寫 How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。書寫時(shí)要緊扣主 題，文句通順。2 .本例文開篇立即點(diǎn)明自己的堅(jiān)持做的事是 “跑步 ” ，正文部分詳細(xì)地描寫了自己起初跑步總是不及格，通過(guò)克服困難、不懈地努力，堅(jiān)持跑步，到現(xiàn)在比以前會(huì)跑；結(jié)尾談了這件 事對(duì)自己的影響；文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，前后呼應(yīng)。3 .本例文出彩之處在于用了很多的短語(yǔ)和重點(diǎn)句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型It's +adj+ for us +to do sth 、 love doing sth 、 keep doing 、 be good at、 catch u

30、p with 、 be proud of ；不定式 in order to ； try my best to ； 狀語(yǔ)從句 sothat ；比較級(jí) do much better in 、 feel more confident 等；短語(yǔ)多彩、文句表達(dá)多樣。7 書面表達(dá)(本題 15 分)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會(huì)需要正能量( positive energy )。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do? 本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說(shuō)說(shuō)你幫助別人或別人幫助

31、你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會(huì)充滿正能量。作文要求：1 不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2 語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù) 80 個(gè)左右。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop.In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cakeshop. I really

32、 admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to makeher stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed withher until he arrived. I found it pleasan

33、t to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others help. I stronglybelieve helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes,“ The rose sher hand, the flavor in mine. （ 113w ）”【解析】【詳解】 本文屬于話題作文，描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事

34、件以及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正能量。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 be for, adj enough to do, theother day, try one s best, make sb do, make a call, give sb a hand, in one s opinion, be supto, be filled with, the rose in her hand, the flavor

35、in mine 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起： 認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符 合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給 出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確 性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取

36、高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還 要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。8.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對(duì)下表中關(guān)于（ City A和City B） 的全部信息進(jìn)行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個(gè)城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 hoursTemperature30 c18CHotel Things to do Food In my opinion,is he better place to spend my summer holiday

37、.【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as that in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in

38、City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to flythere, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個(gè)城市的飛行時(shí)常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對(duì)每個(gè)信息進(jìn)行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語(yǔ)寫作的基

39、本功，需要考生對(duì)常用的英語(yǔ)句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式。避免漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)。句型不要都用簡(jiǎn)單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個(gè)信息都進(jìn)行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A 作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對(duì)于城市 A的缺點(diǎn)，作者用了“Although層管一詞輕輕帶過(guò)。對(duì)于優(yōu)點(diǎn)則重點(diǎn)突出，因?yàn)樵诔鞘蠥可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組 “a lot of 。在比較的時(shí)候，作者用了多種方式，使句 ”子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時(shí)，直接用比較級(jí)“higher在說(shuō)旅館時(shí)用了 "less comfortable ,比較食物時(shí)，用了 “asas'。在說(shuō)選擇城市 A的原

40、因時(shí)，用了 that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。本文 大部分都是復(fù)雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語(yǔ)寫作水平。9.李華的英國(guó)筆友 Jessica來(lái)信說(shuō)，她想了解中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你給Jessica寫一封信，介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯 , 賞月 , 吃月餅等；3. 我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求：1.80-100 詞開頭和結(jié)尾已給出 ,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 2.語(yǔ)句通順 , 意思連貫 , 書寫工整。Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce t

41、he Mid-Autumn Festival toyou.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15 th of the 8th lunar month. It s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest.With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to ea