1、,話題寫作（五） 假日、旅行,第一篇教材考點梳理,【話題點睛】針對的話題主要涉及節日習俗、節假日活動、旅游日記、旅游路線等。,“讀萬卷書、行萬里路”,旅行是學習的最好方式之一。請以“Travelling”為題,根據以下思維導圖的提示,寫一篇短文,發表你的看法。,注意 (1)要點齊全,適當發揮; (2)從思維導圖Sayings部分選擇恰當的格言合理利用在短文中; (3)句子及篇章結構準確、連貫,書寫規范; (4)詞數:80100; (5)文中不得出現考生的真實姓名、學校及其他任何個人相關信息。,【思路點撥】 1.要點提煉:主題是對旅行是學習的最好方式之一這一觀點的論述。文章主要有三個要點: (1

2、)概述; (2)旅行的益處; (3)個人列舉益處或經驗。 2.確定時態:一般現在時。 3.確定人稱:第二人稱、第一人稱。,【寫作架構】,【基礎寫作】 .寫主干句(根據所給提示補全下列各句。) 1.旅行是最好的學習方式之一。(one of+形容詞最高級+復數名詞) Travelling is for learning. 2.直到你親眼看到它,你才會得到準確的印象。 (notuntil) You can never get an exact picture of it. 3.在旅途中,我們可以一起處理可能遇到的問題和困難。(deal with) We can and difficulties in

3、 the journey.,one of the best ways,until you see it yourself,deal with the possible problems,together,.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。) 1.More and more people like travelling around the world.Because people can benefit a lot from travelling.(用The reason why合并為一個句子) 2.You may have read or heard about something.You

4、 can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself.(用連詞連接兩個句子),The reason why more and more people like travelling around the world is that people can benefit a lot from travelling.,You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it

5、 yourself.,3.I like travelling with friends. I dont like travelling alone.(用 prefer torather than改寫句子),I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone.,【連句成文】 Travelling The reason why more and more people like travelling around the world is that people can benefit a lot from travelling. As

6、 the saying goes, read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.Travelling is one of the best ways for learning.You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you are a careful observer,

7、 you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of,the places you visit.While travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. You can also create great memories for your lifetime.No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn t

8、hrough travelling. As for me, I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone.Because we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties together in the journey.,【參考諺語】 1.Travel broadens the mind.旅游開闊思維。 2.He who travels far knows much.遠行者見識廣。 3.Read ten thousand books and travel ten t

9、housand miles.讀萬卷書,行萬里路。,【相關短語】 enjoy the sunshine 享受陽光; one of the biggest mountains 最大的山之一; have a picnic 野餐; as everyone knows 眾所周知; be famous for 因聞名; have a good trip 旅途愉快; have fun doing sth. 做某事很有趣; have a good time 玩得愉快,【亮點句型】 導入主題句 1.The summer holiday is coming.We are going to spend severa

10、l days travelling. 2.Last April, I travelled to Beijing with my family. It was the best season to visit Beijing. 3.Last summer we took a trip to Beijing. 4.Travelling is a great source of knowledge.,文章發展、過渡句 1.Nanjing is a city with a long history. It was also the capital of six dynasties. 2.We visi

11、ted some famous places of interest. 3.And we learned more about the history of our country. 4.During the trip, we found that our country is more and more beautiful.,文章結尾句 1.We not only enjoyed the sights, but also made some good friends.And I think thats the fantastic part of travelling. 2.Travellin

12、g made me relaxed and excited.And I also learned a lot from travelling. 3.I will never forget the journey to Xian. It was really exciting.,A 假如你是北京的李麗, 下周你在哈爾濱讀中學的表妹李蘭要來北京旅游。請根據以下提示, 給她寫一封信,并告訴她在北京旅游期間做一名文明的(well-mannered)中學生。 寫作要點 (1)歡迎她來北京。 (2)介紹北京的情況: 下周天氣:白天最高溫度超過33;交通方式:最好乘坐地鐵; 必去的名勝:長城。 (3)對她在

13、北京旅游期間如何做一名文明的中學生提出具體建議。,寫作要求 (1)不得使用真實的姓名和校名; (2)可適當加入細節,使內容充實,行文連貫; (3)字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰; (4)至少80詞,開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。 Dear Li Lan, How are you doing? Best wishes! Yours, Li Li,One possible version: Dear Li Lan, How are you doing? Im glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing next week. Welcome to

14、 Beijing. Ill give you some suggestions on this travelling. Next week Beijing is going to be very hot. Sometimes the highest temperature is over 33. Youd better take an umbrella when you go out. As everyone knows, Beijing is a crowded city. And the subway is one of the most convenient ways to travel

15、 in this city. So I advise you to take the subway to take around. Beijing is famous for the Great Wall.,So you cant miss visiting it. During your travel, dont throw litter everywhere and keep quiet in public. Only in this way can you be treated as a well-mannered middle school student. I believe you

16、r trip will be full of fun and I hope you will have a good time in Beijing! Best wishes! Yours, Li Li,B 為了進一步提升揚州國際文化旅游名城新形象,我市正在舉辦中學生英語導游大賽。請根據以下流程圖提示完成一篇參賽導游詞。,參考詞匯 Slender West Lake瘦西湖 Five-pavilion Bridge五亭橋 He Garden何園 double-path corridor復道回廊 要求 (1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫; (2)必須包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求適當發揮; (3

17、)詞數:100左右(開頭與結尾已給出,不計入總詞數); (4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Yangzhou! Im your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River. I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.,One possible version: Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to Yangzhou! Im

18、 your tour guide. Yangzhou, my hometown, lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River. Yangzhou has a history of over 2,500 years. There are many interesting places to visit, such as the Slender West Lake, the Five-pavilion Bridge, He Garden, the double-path corridor, and China Paper-Cutting Museum. The Slender West Lake is a national park in Yangzhou City. The Five-pavilion Bridge is the symbol of the Slender West Lake. He Garden is the,best-known private garden of the late Qing Dyn