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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Manyyearsago,myfather,whowas80atthattime,arrivedforhisregulartwoweekvisitatmyhomeinKarachiHelivedwithmyelderbrotherinLahoremostofthetimeandfortenyearshadstucktohishabitofgoingforanhourlongmorningwalktokeepfit,InNaturally,hewaskeentocontinuehismorningwalkwhilewithusinKarachi.Ourpreferredparkisa2kmwalkfrommyhouseandithasa1kmwalkingtrack.IcouldnotdrivehimthereeverydayasIhadtoleavefortheofficewhileatthesametimehewantedtosetout.SincetherewerehardlyanyfootpathsinKarachi,myfathersaidhewasdelightedtowalkontheroadashewascertaintherewouldn’tbemuchtrafficinthemorning.ThoughIkepthiminformedthatourhousewasneartheparkandwasmadeofredbricksincasehegotlost,IwasstilllessconfidentsoIsuggesteditwouldbesaferifchangedhiswalktimetotheevening.ThatwayIcouldtakehimtotheparkafterwork.However,myfather—adeterminedperson—saidthathecouldnotchangehisroutineforjustafewdaysandinsistedthathewouldbeleavingthehouseeverydayat7amandreturningby8am.Soonedaywhenhehadnotreturnedby8:30am,mywife,QaisaphonedmeinapanicWorried,Iimmediatelydrovehome,takingthesameroutethatmyfatherwouldhavetakenforhiswalk.Notspottinghimanywhere,Idrovebacktothepark,inthehoneofdiscoveringsometrace,butinvain.Totallyatalossforwhattodonext,Ireturnedhomeandwaitedimpatiently,walkingbackandforthinthehouse.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。At10:35amthedoorbellrangandmyfatherstoodoutsidethedoorsmilingacpaniedbyayoungman.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterknowingwhathadhappened,Ishowedmyappreciationoftheyoungman’skindness.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意80歲的父親到作者位于卡拉奇的家中居住,他習(xí)慣每天早上散步一小時以保持健康。作者家離公園有2公里,且附近幾乎沒有人行道,父親決定早上在路上走。作者雖擔(dān)心但父親堅持按自己的習(xí)慣,7點(diǎn)出門8點(diǎn)回來。然而有一天父親8點(diǎn)30分還未歸,作者焦急尋找無果。文章中父親的堅持散步習(xí)慣、作者對父親安全的擔(dān)憂以及提到房子特征等為后續(xù)情節(jié)發(fā)展埋下伏筆。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆1:父親的堅持散步習(xí)慣續(xù)寫回應(yīng):這導(dǎo)致他在不熟悉的環(huán)境中獨(dú)自外出散步,從而有了迷路的可能性。在續(xù)寫中,父親正是在散步過程中遇到狀況,被年輕人發(fā)現(xiàn)并送回,體現(xiàn)了他堅持習(xí)慣所帶來的后續(xù)事件。伏筆2:作者對父親安全的擔(dān)憂及房子特征的告知續(xù)寫回應(yīng):作者的擔(dān)憂為父親未按時歸來時的焦急情緒做鋪墊,而告知房子特征在后續(xù)父親向年輕人求助并被送回時起到了關(guān)鍵作用,使得年輕人能夠準(zhǔn)確將父親送回家,回應(yīng)了前面的細(xì)節(jié)設(shè)定。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)(一)第一段描述父親被年輕人送回來時的場景,包括父親的狀態(tài)和年輕人的解釋。寫出作者看到父親時的情緒反應(yīng),如松了一口氣、感激等。可以適當(dāng)提及家人(如作者妻子)的表現(xiàn),增加情節(jié)的豐富性。(二)第二段詳細(xì)敘述作者對年輕人的感謝方式和交流內(nèi)容,體現(xiàn)作者的感激之情。講述作者從這件事情中得到的啟示,如對父親照顧方式的反思、對社會善意的感受等。可以提及父親后續(xù)的態(tài)度和行動變化,使故事有一個相對完整的結(jié)局。情感線文章開始作者對父親獨(dú)自外出散步有擔(dān)憂,父親未按時歸來時轉(zhuǎn)為焦急和恐慌,門鈴響起看到父親安全回來時變?yōu)樾牢亢透屑ぃ瑢δ贻p人則充滿了贊賞和謝意。情感的變化圍繞父親的行蹤展開,推動故事發(fā)展。故事線以父親在卡拉奇的散步經(jīng)歷為主線,從他堅持早上散步,到未按時歸來引發(fā)作者的尋找和擔(dān)憂,再到被年輕人送回,最后作者表達(dá)感激和反思,情節(jié)有起有伏,展現(xiàn)了一個關(guān)于親情、擔(dān)憂與善意的故事。主旨升華句Kindnessisthelightthatbrightensthedarkestmomentsandwarmstheheartsofthoseinneed.(善良是照亮最黑暗時刻的光,溫暖著那些需要幫助的人的心。)Inaworldfullofuncertainties,thekindnessofstrangerscanbeaguidingstar,leadingusbacktosafetyandhope.(在一個充滿不確定性的世界里,陌生人的善良可以是一顆指路星,引領(lǐng)我們回到安全和希望之中。)Everyactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepowertocreatearippleeffectofloveandcareinoursociety.(每一個善良的行為,無論多么微小,都有能力在我們的社會中產(chǎn)生愛和關(guān)懷的漣漪效應(yīng)。)Thebondoffamilyisstrengthenedwhenwefacechallengestogetherandareremindedoftheimportanceoflookingoutforeachother.(當(dāng)我們一起面對挑戰(zhàn)并被提醒相互照顧的重要性時,家庭的紐帶會更加牢固。)Asimpleactofkindnesscanturnaworryingsituationintoaheartwarmingmemory,teachingusthebeautyofhumanconnection.(一個簡單的善良行為可以將一個令人擔(dān)憂的情況轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)橐粋€溫暖人心的記憶,教會我們?nèi)祟惵?lián)系的美好。)寫作示范一第一段At10:35amthedoorbellrangandmyfatherstoodoutsidethedoorsmilingacpaniedbyayoungman.Irushedtothedoor,myheartpoundingwithrelief.Mywifealsocamerunning,herfacelightingupwithjoy.Theyoungmanexplainedthathehadfoundmyfatherstandingonacorner,lookingabitlostandconfused.Myfatherhadapproachedhimandaskedfordirectionstoourhouse.Theyoungman,beingkindhearted,decidedtoescorthimback.Icouldn'tthankhimenoughforhiskindnessandthoughtfulness.Myfatherseemedquiteatease,asifhehadjusthadaninterestingadventure.第二段Afterknowingwhathadhappened,Ishowedmyappreciationoftheyoungman’skindness.Iofferedtogivehimasmallrewardasatokenofmygratitude,butherefusedpolitely.Hesaiditwasjustasimpleactthatanyonewoulddoinsuchasituation.Iinvitedhimtohavelunchwithus,buthedeclinedagain,sayinghehadotherthingstoattendto.Thisincidentmademerealizehowimportantitistohaveamunitywherepeoplelookoutforeachother.Italsomadememorecautiousaboutmyfather'ssafety.Idecidedtoprovidehimwithamobilephoneforemergenciesandtohavemoredetailedconversationswithhimabouthiswalks.Myfather,too,promisedtobemorecareful.Fromthatdayon,weweremoreawareofthekindnessthatexistsintheworldandtheneedtopayitforward.寫作示范二第一段At10:35amthedoorbellrangandmyfatherstoodoutsidethedoorsmilingacpaniedbyayoungman.Iwasfloodedwithreliefandgratitude.AsIopenedthedoor,myfatherintroducedtheyoungmantous.Hesaidthathehadlosthiswayandwasgettingabitworriedwhenthiskindyoungmancametohisrescue.Theyoungmantoldusthathehadnoticedmyfatherlookingarounduncertainlyandwhenheasked,myfatherexplainedhissituation.Withouthesitation,theyoungmanofferedtohelphimfindhiswaybackhome.Ithankedtheyoungmanfromthebottomofmyheart,amazedathiskindness.第二段Afterknowingwhathadhappened,Ishowedmyappreciationoftheyoungman’skindness.IaskedforhiscontactinformationsothatIcouldproperlythankhiminthefuture.Hegaveittomewithasmileandsaiditwasreallynobigdeal.Itoldmyfatherthatweneededtobemorecarefulinthefutureandperhapseupwithabetterplanforhiswalks.Myfatheragreed,stillimpressedbytheyoungman'sactofkindness.Thisincidenttaughtusbothaboutthegoodnessthatexistsinpeople.Itmadeusmoretrustingoftheworldaroundusandmoredeterminedtospreadkindnesswheneverwecould.Wewillalwaysrememberthisdayandthekindstrangerwhobroughtmyfatherbacksafely,remindingusthatalittlekindnesscangoalongwayinmakingsomeone'sdayandevenchangingtheirlivesinasmallbutsignificantway.參考答案At10:35amthedoorbellrangandmyfatherstoodoutsidethedoorsmiling,acpaniedbyayoungman.Myfatherexplainedthathehadgottenlostduringhiswalkandendedupquitefarfromhome.Theyoungman,whohadfoundmyfatherwanderingandlookingconfused,kindlyofferedtohe

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