讀后續(xù)寫：小男孩從從無望到堅強的轉(zhuǎn)變講義讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thelittlecountryschoolhousewasheatedbyanold-fashionedcoalstove.Alittleboyhadthejobofcomingtoschoolearlyeachdaytostartthefireandwarmtheroombeforehisteacherandclassmatesarrived.Onemorningtheyarrivedtofindtheschoolhouseinflames.Theydraggedtheunconsciouslittleboyoutoftheburningbuildingmoredeadthanalive.Hehadmajorburnsoverthelowerhalfofhisbodyandwastakentothenearbycountyhospital.Fromhisbed,theterriblyburned,semi-consciouslittleboyfaintlyheardthedoctortalkingtohismother.Thedoctortoldhismotherthathersonwouldpossiblydie,fortheterriblefirehaddamagedthelowerhalfofhisbody.Butthebraveboydidn’twanttodie.Hemadeuphismindthathewouldsurvive.Somehow,totheamazementofthephysician,hedidsurvive.Whenthemortaldangerwaspast,heagainheardthedoctorandhismotherspeakingquietly.Themotherwastoldthatsincethefirehaddestroyedsomuchfleshinhislegs,hewasdoomedtobeunabletowalkproperly,withnouseatallofhislowerlimbs.Oncemorethebraveboymadeuphismind.Hewouldwalk.Butunfortunately,fromthewaistdown,hehadnomotorability.Histhinlegsjustdangledthere,allbutlifeless.Ultimately,hewasreleasedfromthehospital.Everydayhismotherwouldmassagehislittlelegs,buttherewasnofeeling,nocontrol,nothing.Yethisdeterminationthathewouldwalkwasasstrongasever.Whenhewasn’tinbed,hewasconfinedtoawheelchair.Onesunnyday,hismotherwheeledhimoutintotheyardwithafencearounditsedgetogetsomefreshair.從讀后續(xù)寫題目中，我們看到了一位小男孩在生命的邊緣頑強掙扎，從極度的身體創(chuàng)傷中尋找希望。他沒有選擇放棄，而是堅定地做出決定，決心活下去并重拾行走的能力。這篇故事展現(xiàn)了從無望到堅強的轉(zhuǎn)變，如何通過勇氣和決心克服極限。續(xù)寫部分第一段：開頭句：

Thisday,insteadofsittingstill,hethrewhimselffromthechair.

1.固定句（情感描寫）：

Asurgeofdefiancewelledupinhisheartashedecidedthatnomatterhowdifficultitwas,hewouldmakehislegsmove.

解釋：展現(xiàn)男孩內(nèi)心不屈的情感，決定挑戰(zhàn)自己，突破身體的限制。2.不固定句（細節(jié)描寫）：Hishandsgrippedtheedgeofthewheelchair,andhepushedhimselfforwardwithallhismight,feelingtheroughtextureofthegroundbeneathhim.解釋：細節(jié)描寫加強男孩的行動感與掙扎，突顯他努力的過程。3.固定句（動作鏈推進）：

Uponlandingontheground,hesteadiedhimself,usingthefenceashissupport,andbegantopushagainsthislifelesslegs.解釋：動作鏈推進，展示男孩如何一步一步走向突破，增強情節(jié)的緊張感。4.不固定句（沖突鋪墊）：

Hislegsfeltheavy,asthoughtheyweremadeofstone,buthisheartpushedhimtotryagain,neverallowinghimtogiveup.解釋：沖突鋪墊，男孩面對沉重的挑戰(zhàn)，表現(xiàn)出他的頑強和不屈。5.固定句（情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折）：Nosoonerhadheliftedhimselfupwiththefencethanhefelthisbodytremblewithexhaustion,butthefeelingofstandingonhisownfeetwasbeyondwords.解釋：情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折，通過男孩克服體力上的疲憊，展現(xiàn)他戰(zhàn)勝恐懼的成就感。第二段：開頭句：Usingthefenceashissupport,heraisedhimselfupslowly.6.固定句（情感轉(zhuǎn)變）：

Havingsteadiedhimselfforamoment,hefeltasenseofaccomplishmentandpride,realizingthathewasdefyingallodds.解釋：展示男孩從絕望到希望的轉(zhuǎn)變，內(nèi)心感受到成長與成就的喜悅。7.不固定句（背景渲染）：

Thesuncastitswarmlightoverhim,andtheairaroundhimseemedtobefilledwithpossibilities,asifthewholeworldwascheeringhimon.解釋：通過環(huán)境描寫渲染男孩此刻的堅定與平靜，增強情感的溫暖感。8.不固定句（具體行動描寫）：

Hetookadeepbreathandtriedtomoveoneofhislegsforward.Slowly,hemanagedtodragitacrosstheground,inchbyinch.解釋：通過具體的行動描寫展現(xiàn)男孩如何一步步邁向目標，體現(xiàn)他的堅持與努力。9.固定句（結(jié)局升華）：

Havingmovedonestepforward,hefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofvictory,realizingthathisdeterminationhadturnedtheimpossibleintothepossible.解釋：結(jié)局升華，展現(xiàn)男孩通過堅定不移的決心戰(zhàn)勝了極限，體驗到生命的無限可能。10.固定句（主題點睛）：

Thisexperiencehasleftanindeliblemarkonhislife,teachinghimthattruecourageisnottheabsenceoffear,buttheabilitytoovercomeit.解釋：通過總結(jié)性的句子，點明主題，強調(diào)真正的勇氣源于挑戰(zhàn)自我并克服恐懼。完整續(xù)寫第一段Thisday,insteadofsittingstill,hethrewhimselffromthechair.Asurgeofdefiancewelledupinhisheartashedecidedthatnomatterhowdifficultitwas,hewouldmakehislegsmove.Hishandsgrippedtheedgeofthewheelchair,andhepushedhimselfforwardwithallhismight,feelingtheroughtextureofthegroundbeneathhim.Uponlandingontheground,hesteadiedhimself,usingthefenceashissupport,andbegantopushagainsthislifelesslegs.Hislegsfeltheavy,asthoughtheyweremadeofstone,buthisheartpushedhimtotryagain,neverallowinghimtogiveup.Nosoonerhadheliftedhimselfupwiththefencethanhefelthisbodytremblewithexhaustion,butthefeelingofstandingonhisownfeetwasbeyondwords.

第二段Usingthefenceashissupport,heraisedhimselfupslowly.Havingsteadiedhimselfforamoment,hefeltasenseofaccomplishmentandpride,realizingthathewasdefyingallodds.Thesuncastitswarmlightoverhim,andtheairaroundhimseemedtobefilledwithpossibilities,asifthewholeworldwascheeringhimon.Hetookadeepbreathandtriedtomoveoneofhislegsforward.Slowly,hemanagedtodragitacrosstheground,inchbyinch.Havingmovedonestepforward,hefeltanoverwhelmingsenseofvictory,realizingthathisdeterminationhadturnedtheimpossibleintothepossible.Thise