高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習粉刺之痛：成長路上的嘲笑與溫暖1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文“No!”screamedAshaasshesawahugepimple（粉刺）onhernose.Shedidn’thavetimetocoverthepimpleasshewasrunninglatetoschool.Sheateherbreakfastfast,grabbedherbagandcaughtherschoolbusjustintime.Assoonasshegotonthebus,kidsstartedlaughing.Nobodywaswillingtolethersitbesidethem.EvenAnita,herbestfriend,actedabitdifferently,whichmadehermoreupset.Ashawaslostinthought.Anewthoughtpoppedinhermindeverysecond.Onceshethought“Great!Ihavetoworryaboutmypimpleasifhomeworkandexamswerenotenough.”Thenextminuteanotherthoughtpoppedinhermind.“Iamtiredofusingthisfacewash.IstillwonderhowIagreedtousethatthing!”Thensuddenly,Mr.Shetty,thebusdriver,said,“Asha,doyouwanttomisstheclass?”Ashawassolostinherthoughtthatshedidnotevennoticethateverybodyhadgotoffthebusexcepther.4續寫原文Shedidnotwanttostepintotheschoolcampus.Shethought,“Whatwillmyteachersthink?Whatwillmyfriendsthink?”Aftersometime,shegatheredcourageandenteredherclass;expectingthatshewouldbelaughedat.Whileenteringtheclass,sheheardstudentscommentingonherpimple.Achildlaughed,“Look,someone’scherryisonhernose!Getitforme.”Sheheardsomeboysmurmuring,“Shewoulddefinitelybechosenasthejokerinthedance.”Itwasaveryharddayatschoolforher.Assoonasshegothome,shehuggedhermothertightly,withtearswellingupinhereyes.5段首句Paragraph1Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday._Paragraph2:AshaopenedthedoorandincameherfriendAnitawithabunchofflowers.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8阿莎某天早上驚恐地發現自己鼻子上長了一個大粉刺，由于上學時間緊迫，她來不及處理就匆匆趕去學校。上了校車后，同學們看到她的粉刺紛紛嘲笑，沒人愿意和她坐在一起，就連她最好的朋友安妮塔的態度也變得有些異樣，這讓阿莎十分難過。在校車上，阿莎陷入了深深的自我懷疑和煩惱之中，她覺得除了作業和考試的壓力，還要面對這顆粉刺帶來的困擾，甚至開始抱怨一直使用的洗面奶毫無效果。她沉浸在自己的思緒里，直到校車司機提醒才發現車上其他人都已下車。到了學校，她鼓起勇氣走進教室，不出所料，同學們對她的粉刺議論紛紛，各種嘲笑和諷刺的話語讓她倍感煎熬。這一天在學校對阿莎來說格外艱難，放學后一回到家，她就滿含淚水，緊緊地抱住了媽媽。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Paragraph1:Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday._阿莎把當天在學校的經歷一五一十地告訴了媽媽。媽媽輕輕地撫摸著她的頭，溫柔地說：“寶貝，長粉刺是成長過程中的正?，F象，每個人都會經歷。那些嘲笑你的同學只是不懂事，他們的話并不重要。你要相信自己，不要因為別人的看法而難過。你的內在美才是最珍貴的，它不會因為一顆粉刺而消失?！眿寢尩脑捵尠⑸睦锖檬芰艘恍?。媽媽接著說：“我有一個小妙招，能讓粉刺盡快消失。我們一起用天然的蘆薈膠來敷一敷，效果很好的。”于是，媽媽帶著阿莎來到廚房，取出新鮮的蘆薈，小心翼翼地擠出里面的凝膠，輕輕地涂抹在阿莎的粉刺上。在媽媽的悉心照料下，阿莎的心情逐漸平靜下來，她開始反思，自己好像太在意別人的眼光了，其實只要自己不在意，那些嘲笑就傷害不了她。10續寫思路分析Paragraph2:AshaopenedthedoorandincameherfriendAnitawithabunchofflowers.阿莎剛敷上蘆薈膠沒多久，就聽到了敲門聲。她打開門，看到好朋友安妮塔站在門口，手里拿著一束鮮花。安妮塔的臉上帶著愧疚的神情，她把鮮花遞給阿莎，說道：“阿莎，對不起，今天在學校我沒有站出來幫你，還和其他人一樣疏遠你，我錯了。看到你難過的樣子，我心里也不好受。其實你長粉刺的樣子一點也不丑，那些嘲笑你的人太過分了。你永遠都是我最好的朋友，希望你能原諒我?！卑⑸舆^鮮花，眼眶濕潤了，她沒想到安妮塔會來向她道歉。她緊緊地抱住安妮塔，說：“我原諒你了，安妮塔。其實我也太敏感了，不應該因為別人的話而這么難過。”從那以后，阿莎和安妮塔的友誼更加深厚了，阿莎也不再因為粉刺而自卑，她學會了勇敢地面對自己的不完美，用自信和樂觀迎接成長的每一個挑戰。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday.Hermothergentlystrokedherheadandsaidtenderly,"Honey,gettingpimplesisanormalpartofgrowingup.Everyonegoesthroughit.Thoseclassmateswholaughedatyouarejustignorant.Theirwordsdon'tmatter.Youshouldbelieveinyourselfandnotbesadbecauseofwhatothersthink.Yourinnerbeautyisthemostprecious,anditwon'tdisappearbecauseofapimple."Hermother'swordsmadeAshafeelalittlebetter.Thenhermothersaid,"Ihavealittletrickthatcanmakethepimpledisappearquickly.Let'susenaturalaloeverageltoapplyit.Itworkswell."So,hermothertookAshatothekitchen,tookoutfreshaloevera,andcarefullysqueezedoutthegelinside,gentlyapplyingittoAsha'spimple.Underhermother'scarefulcare,Asha'smoodgraduallycalmeddown.Shebegantoreflectthatsheseemedtocaretoomuchaboutotherpeople'sopinions.Infact,aslongasshedidn'tcare,thoselaughscouldn'thurther.13范文呈現ShortlyafterAshaappliedthealoeveragel,sheheardaknockonthedoor.SheopenedthedoorandsawherbestfriendAnitastandingatthedoorwithabunchofflowers.Anitahadalookofguiltonherface.ShehandedtheflowerstoAshaandsaid,"Asha,I'msosorry.Ididn'tstandupforyouatschooltodayanddistancedmyselffromyouliketheothers.Iwaswrong.Seeingyousosad,Ifeltterrible.Infact,youdon'tlookuglyatallwiththepimple.Thosewholaughedatyouweretoomean.Youarealwaysmybestfriend.Ihopeyoucanforgiveme."Ashatooktheflowers,hereyesfilledwithtears.Shedidn'texpectAnitatocomeandapologizetoher.ShehuggedAnitatightlyandsaid,"Iforgiveyou,Anita.Actually,Iwastoosensitiveandshouldn'thavebeensosadbecauseofotherpeople'swords."Fromthenon,AshaandAnita'sfriendshipbecameevendeeper.Ashanolongerfeltinferiorbecauseofthepimple.Shelearnedtobravelyfaceherimperfectionsandwelcomeeverychallengeofgrowthwithconfidenceandoptimism.14升級版范文呈現Ashatoldhermotherwhatshehadexperiencedintheday.Withagentletouch,hermotherstrokedherheadandspoketenderly,"Honey,gettingpimplesisaninevitablepartofthejourneyofgrowingup,somethingthateveryonehastogothrough.Thoseclassmateswholaughedatyouaremerelyignorant,andtheirwordsholdnorealweight.Youmustbelieveinyourselfandnotlettheopinionsofothersbringyoudown.Yourinnerbeauty,whichisfarmorepreciousthananythingelse,willneverfadeawayjustbecauseofatinypimple."Hermother'scomfortingwordsmanagedtosootheAsha'stroubledhearttosomeextent.Subsequently,hermotheradded,"I'vegotalittletrickupmysleevethatcanhelpthepimpledisappearinnotime.Let'smakeuseofsomenaturalaloeveragel;it'sreallyeffective."Then,leadingAshabythehand,hermotherwalkedintothekitchen,tookoutsomefreshaloevera,andwithgreatcare,squeezedoutthegel,gentlyapplyingittoAsha'spimple.Underhermother'smeticulouscare,Asha'smoodgraduallysettleddown.Shebegantoreflectonherownbehavior,realizingthatshehadperhapsbeenoverlyconcernedaboutwhatothersthoughtofher.Infact,aslongassheremainedindifferenttothosemockingvoices,theywouldhavenopowertoharmher.15升級版范文呈現ShortlyafterAshahadappliedthealoeveragel,aknockonthedoorinterruptedthepeacefulatmosphere.Shewalkedoverandopenedthedoor,onlytofindherbestfriendAnitastandingthere,holdingabeautifulbunchofflowers.Anita'sfacewasetchedwithalookofdeepguilt.HandingtheflowerstoAsha,shesaidinaremorsefultone,"Asha,I'mtrulysorry.Ifailedtostandupforyouatschooltodayandevendistancedmyselffromyoualongwiththeothers.Iwascompletelywrong.Seeingyousoheartbrokenmademefeelextremelyterrible.Infact,youlookjustaslovelywiththepimple.Thosewholaughedatyouwerebeingincrediblymean.You'vealways