高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習面對朋友犯錯：在友情與真相間抉擇1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文MynameisAndy.Iwasthenewboyintheclass.IwastwelvewhenImovedtoLondon.Havinglostallmyoldfriends,Ifeltshyandlonelyatmynewschool.Mostpeopleweren'tveryinterestedinashynewboy.Colinwasoneofthefewpeoplewhowerekindtome.Heofteninvitedmetojoinhisparticulargroup,andasaresult,Istartedgettingtoknowpeople.ColinandIbecamegoodfriends.Wetrustedeachotherandwecouldtalkaboutpersonalmatters,thingsthatwereimportanttous.4續寫原文Fiveyearslater,Colin'sfatherwasknockedoverbyacaranddiedafewdayslater.Thefamilyhadtomovetoamuchsmallerhouseinordertomanagefinancially.Colinchangedcompletely,becomingsilentandmoody.Hehadalwaysbeenaclever,hard-workingstudentbutnowheseemedtoloseallinterestinhiswork.Hestartedlosingfriends.Aboutthreemonthsago,agroupofuswereplayingfootballtogetherafterschool.Havingleftsomethinginthecloakroom,Iwentinsidetogetit,findingColingoingthroughthepocketsofpeople'scoats.Inhishandhehadawallet,butitwasn'this!Ijustlookedathim.Colinwentbrightred."I'llputitbackrightnow,"hesaid,andhedidso.Iturnedroundandwalkedoutwithoutsayingaword.5續寫原文Lastweekourschoolhadabigfairinordertoraisemoneyforacharity.Itwasverysuccessfulandbytheendoftheday,wehadmadeabout￡500.Holdingthebox,ourheadteachersaidwithasmile"Wehaveraised￡500here."Buttooursurprise,thenextmorning,weweretoldthatthemoneyhadbeenstolen.IdecidedtoaskColinaboutthetheft,andthismorningIwenttoseehim.IapproachedColinwithaheavyheart,knowingthatthisconversationcouldbehard."Colin,Ineedtoaskyousomething,"Ibegancautiously.Helookedupatme,hiseyesfilledwithamixtureofcuriosityandworry."Didyoutakethemoneyfromthecharityfair?"Iaskeddirectly,hopingtogetastraightanswer.6段首句Paragraph1：Colin'sfaceturnedpale,unabletomeetmyeyes.Paragraph2：Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathy（同情）formyfriend.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9安迪搬到倫敦后，在新學校結識了對他友善的科林，兩人成為好友。然而，科林父親因車禍離世，家庭經濟困難，科林性情大變。一次安迪發現科林偷拿他人錢包，科林承諾歸還。學校為慈善舉辦集市籌得500英鎊，錢卻被盜。安迪決定向科林詢問此事，面對詢問，科林反應復雜。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：Colin'sfaceturnedpale,unabletomeetmyeyes.科林的臉色變得蒼白，不敢直視我的眼睛。他雙手不安地絞在一起，身子微微顫抖，試圖找個借口搪塞過去。但在我堅定的目光下，他最終還是選擇了坦白。他聲音沙啞地說，自從父親去世后，家里的經濟狀況每況愈下，母親為了支撐家庭日夜操勞，他實在不忍心看著母親如此辛苦。看到集市籌集的這筆錢，他一時鬼迷心竅，想著或許能幫家里緩解一下困境。說完，他低下頭，淚水順著臉頰滑落。11續寫思路分析Para2：Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathy（同情）formyfriend.我能從他的眼中看到痛苦，盡管我很失望，但還是忍不住對朋友心生同情。我知道他并非本性惡劣，只是被生活的壓力逼到了絕境。我深吸一口氣，對他說，犯錯不可怕，重要的是勇于面對并改正。我鼓勵他和我一起向老師坦白，爭取寬大處理?？屏知q豫了一會兒，最終點了點頭。我們找到老師，誠懇地說明了情況。老師聽后，雖嚴厲批評了科林，但也對他的家庭表示理解。在老師的幫助下，科林通過在學校做義工等方式彌補了自己的過錯，也慢慢走出了這段黑暗的日子。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Colin'sfaceturnedpale,unabletomeetmyeyes.Hefidgetednervously,hishandstwitchingrestlessly.Afteralongmomentofsilence,hefinallydecidedtocomeclean.Hisvoicehoarsewithemotion,heexplainedthatsincehisfather'sdeath,hisfamily'sfinancialsituationhaddeterioratedrapidly.Hismotherwasstrugglingtomakeendsmeet,workingdayandnight.Whenhesawthemoneyfromthecharityfair,hewasovercomebydesperationandthoughtitcouldeasehisfamily'sburden.Ashefinishedspeaking,hehunghisheadinshame,tearsstreamingdownhisface.14范文呈現Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathyformyfriend.Iknewhewasn'tabadpersonatheart;hewasjustpushedtotheedgebylife'shardships.Takingadeepbreath,Itoldhimthatmakingmistakeswasnottheend,buttheimportantthingwastofacethembravelyandcorrectthem.Iencouragedhimtoconfesstotheteacherwithmeandseekleniency.Afteramomentofhesitation,Colinnodded.Wewenttotheteacherandexplainedthesituationsincerely.Theteacher,afterasternreprimand,alsoshowedunderstandingforColin'sfamily.Withtheteacher'shelp,Colinmadeamendsforhismistakebydoingvolunteerworkatschoolandgraduallymanagedtomoveonfromthisdarkperiod.15升級版范文呈現Colin'svisageblanched,hiseyesdartingnervously,unabletolockontomine.Hishands,betrayinghisinnerturmoil,twistedandturnedrestlessly.Afteranagonizinglylongpause,hefinallysummonedthecouragetobarehissoul.Hisvoice,amerecroak,lacedwithrawemotion,herecountedhow,sincehisfather'suntimelydemise,hisfamilyhadbeenplungedintoafinancialabyss.Hismother,bearingthebruntofthehardship,toileddayinanddayouttokeepthefamilyafloat.Thesightofthemoneyamassedatthecharityfairhad,inamomentofweakness,temptedhim,cloudinghisjudgment.Hebelieveditcouldofferaglimmerofhope,atemporaryrespitefromthesuffocatingfinancialstrain.Asheconcludedhisconfession,hisheaddroopedinabjectshame,hottearscascadingdownhischeeks.16升級版范文呈現Gazingintohiseyes,Isawthedepthofhispain.Despitemyinitialdisappointment,empathywelledupwithinmeformyfriend.Iwasacutelyawarethathisactionswerenotareflectionofhistruecharacter,butratheradesperateactbornoutofthecrushingweightoflife'schallenges.Drawingadeepbreath,Iarticulatedthaterrorsarebutstepping-stonesonthepathtogrowth.Thecrucialstep,Iemphasized,wastoconfrontthemhead-onandrectify