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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。OneSaturdaymorning,Allenwokeuptofindthehouseunusuallyquiet.Typically,hismomwouldbeupmakingbreakfastandtidyingup,butnotthistime.Hearinghercough,Allenknockedonherdoorandaskedanxiously,“Mom,areyoualright?”“Sweetheart,”sherepliedweakly.“I’vegotabadcold.YoucanhavecerealforbreakfastandwatchcartoonswhileIrestinbed.”Allenpouredsomecerealintoabowlandatethepiecesdry.Mommustfeelverybadifshewasstayinginbedallday.HowcouldAllenhelp?First,hewipedupthecrumbsofcerealheleftonthekitchencounter.Healsoputawaythecerealboxneatly,sothekitchenlookedjustasitdidwhenhewokeup.Butwhatelsecouldhedo?Allenthought.Saturdaywasthedaywhenmomdidlaundry.Allenlovedtowatchtheclothesspinninginthemachine.Thatshouldbefun!Herantohisroomtogetthelaundrybasket,insidewhichtherewashismother’sfavoritewhitedress,amongotherclothesandapairofredsocks.Allenopenedthedoortothewasherandputtheclothinginside.HehadwatchedMomdolaundrylotsoftimes,soheknewwheretofindthewashingpowderandhowtopouritintothemachine.Finally,heclosedthedoorandpressedthebigbuttonthatsaid“START.”Allenlookedthroughtheroundglasswindow.Waterwaspouringin,andthemachinewasstartingtospin,makinghisclothingtumble(滾動)around.Thatwaseasy!Allenwaswatchingcartoonswhenheheardthewashingmachinebeep,indicatingthatthelaundrywasfinished.Heopenedthedoor,tookoutthedampclothes,movedthemintothedryer.Everythinglookedclean,andhefeltasenseofpride.Thenhepulledoutapinkdressamongtheclothes.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式作答。Paragraph1Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Paragraph2Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.文章大意周六早上,Allen醒來發現媽媽因感冒臥床,他吃了點干麥片后,想為媽媽做點事。他收拾了廚房,然后決定洗衣服。他把洗衣籃里的衣服(包括媽媽最喜歡的白色連衣裙和一雙紅襪子等)放進洗衣機,加了洗衣粉啟動洗衣機。洗完后他把衣服放進烘干機,之后卻發現多了一件粉色連衣裙。五要素分析人物:Allen和生病的媽媽。時間:周六上午。地點:家里,包括廚房、洗衣房和媽媽臥室。起因:媽媽生病,Allen想幫忙做家務。經過:Allen收拾廚房、洗衣服。結果:洗衣完成后出現了意料之外的粉色連衣裙。幾處伏筆及續寫回應伏筆:洗衣籃里沒有粉色裙子。回應:可能是混進了其他衣服,需要找出原因和解決辦法。伏筆:媽媽在生病休息。回應:Allen處理粉色裙子問題可能會打擾媽媽休息,但也可能會給媽媽帶來溫暖。續寫要點第一段情感線:驚訝、疑惑和緊張,對多出來的粉色裙子感到不知所措。故事線:描述Allen努力回憶粉色裙子的來源,猜測可能是和鄰居家的衣服混在一起了,或者是之前不小心放進去的。第二段情感線:緊張又期待,希望媽媽不要太生氣,同時也希望自己的行為能讓媽媽感到欣慰。故事線:Allen向媽媽解釋事情經過,把粉色裙子遞給媽媽,詢問該如何處理,表現出他的誠實和希望為媽媽分憂的心情。主旨升華句Everylittleactofkindness,evenwithabitofmistake,canbeawarmrayofsunshineinafamily.Helpingoutathome,despitetheoccasionalmishap,showsthetrueloveandcarewithinachild'sheart.Intheprocessofdoingsomethinggood,mistakesarejustlikespicesthataddmoreflavortoourlifestories.Achild'sattempttoassist,regardlessoftheoutcome,isabeautifulexpressionoffamilyloveandresponsibility.Mistakesmadewhiletryingtohelparesteppingstonestogrowingupandunderstandingthevalueoffamilychores.寫作示范第一篇Paragraph1

Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Hewasconfusedandabitworried.Wherediditcomefrom?Hecheckedthewasheragaintoseeiftherewassomethinghemissed.Thenherealizedthatitmighthavebeenmixedinwithhisclothesaccidentally.Hefeltbad,thinkingthathemighthavecausedtrouble.

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Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.Whenmomopenedthedoor,Allentoldherwhathadhappened.Heapologizedforthemix-up.Momsmiledweaklyandsaiditwasokay.ShepraisedAllenforbeingsohelpfulandtoldhimtheywouldfigureoutwhosedressitwaslater.Allenfeltrelievedandproudofhimselffortryingtohelp.第二篇Paragraph1

Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Hisheartsank.Hadhemadeabigmistake?Herackedhisbrain,tryingtorecallifhehadpickedupsomethingelsebymistake.Hecarefullyexaminedthedress,hopingtofindaclue.Maybeitwasfromtheneighbor'slaundrythatgotmixedupsomehow.

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Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.Momaskedwhatwasgoingon.Allenexplainedthesituationwithatremblingvoice.Momhuggedhimandsaid,"It'sokay,dear.Youmeanttohelp,andthat'swhatmatters."Allensmiled,feelingthewarmthofhismom'sloveandunderstanding,andhelearnedthathelpingsometimeshaslittlebumps.【答案】Paragraph1Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.“Wherediditcomefrom?”Allenwondered,reachingintothewashertotakeoutmoreclothes.Thenmuchtohisastonishment,hepulledouttwoT-shirts,bothinlightpink.Realizingtherewassomethingwrong,Allenstoodfrozen,hisheartsinking.Suddenly,hecaughtsightoftheredsocks.Heknewthereasonfortheaccident.Withnomeansofhandlingthesituation,Allenwasinsuchapanicthatheeventhoughtofhidingthedressfromhismom.“Thatisnotapositiveapproachtotheproblem,”heremindedhimself.Finally,hedecidedtodryandfoldthelaundrybeforetellinghismomeverything.Paragraph2Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.Hecametothebedsidewithhisheaddrooping.Sensingherson’sunease,themotherinquiredwithconcernwhatwaswrong.Realizingwhat’sgoingon,momsmiledunder

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