讀后續寫高分長難句一個長難句萬能公式就能把續寫句子三要素環境動作情感全套進去本質就是表達在某種環境下主角的應激動作和心理感情活動這里代表動作的動詞是關鍵英語是動詞的語言動詞是英語的靈魂要多多提煉動詞如何提煉動詞核心技能一、提煉動作讓故事更有畫面感層次感提煉練習一提煉練習二提煉練習三★提煉出來的動作如何處理：把其中一個動作作為核心當作謂語句式1動作流暢SbdidA,didBanddidC句式2動作同時發生SbdidA,doingBanddoingCDoingBandC,sbdidA句式3有先有后有因有果(先/因)HavingdoneA,sbdidBandC（后/果）SbdidAandB,doingC（果）After/BeforedoingA，sbdidBtodoC(目的)★按照各個動作間的邏輯關系進行組合成句核心技能二、注入情感讓故事更靈動感人核心技能三、加入道具讓故事更豐滿核心技能四、巧用過渡詞或句讓故事更有邏輯性嚴密性過渡詞/句例子情緒類Toone'ssurprise/delight/relief,...Hopefully,/Obviously,/Ofcourse,...Tooursurprise,hebroughtbacktheprincess.時間類表“時間、用時”馬上:innotime,immediately那一刻:atthatmoment/timewhen//while/as引導之間狀語從句早/中/晚:earlyinthemorning,inthelateafternoon,thenext/followingmorning表“先后”然后:(and)then,afterthat不久:afterawhile,soonafterwards,shortlyafter,beforelong最終:atlast,intheend,finally,eventually狀語使用總結素材：beforelong時間intotheforest地點tooursurprise過渡withthehelpofanelf道具feeingproudandexcited情緒位置：狀語位置靈活，只要是狀語，在以下三個位置上，都符合語法要求①Withaswordinhishand,thesoldierenteredtheforest.②Thesoldier,withaswordinhishand,enteredtheforest.③Thesoldierenteredtheforestwithaswordinhishand.★提煉出的狀語如何處理：狀語服務于動詞根據需要組合加入動詞句中牛刀小試真題演練Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdiscouragedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadsuccessfullymadesomeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgeasthechildrenwished.Thenhesneakedbacktobed.________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup."HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!"thrilledvoiceyellingfromtheirthroat,thetwinshuggedtheirmomtightly.空格處續寫：__________________________前面早餐做好下一段雙胞胎就拿著早餐上樓叫醒媽媽顯然空格處是要續寫雙胞胎送早餐事根據長難句萬能公式：提煉動作注入情感加入狀語，道具和過渡動作：送前要解決早餐放在什么上加入什么道具開啟走的動作情感：雙胎心情是激動開心時間/地點/過渡：立馬道具：生日卡片、鮮花innotime，Overjoyedandthrilled,thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingacardtheyhadmade,andthenheadedfortheirparents'bedroom.空格處續寫：__________________________前面陷入困境后面直升機救援到了顯然空格處要續寫爬上直升機脫困根據長難句萬能公式：提煉動作注入情感加入狀語，道具和過渡動作：爬動作抓住繩索爬進直升