課時把關練PartVWriting妙筆生花(讀后續寫)閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。ASpecialAppointmentYearsagoImovedtoWoodlandHillstotakeajobinasmallhospital’semergencydepartment.NoonewantedtoworkonNewYear’sEve，sotheshift（輪班）wenttome.Ikissedmyfamilygoodbyeandwentofftospendthenightinthehospital.Itwasathanklessjob.At9pm，theambulancebroughtinamaninhis60swhowashavingaheartattack.Hisfacewaspale，andhewasfrightened.ThewholenightIdidmybesttosavehislife.BeforeIleftinthemorningtospendNewYearwithmyfamily，Istoppedbytoseehowhewasdoing.Itwasstilltough，buthehadsurvivedthenightandwassleeping.ThefollowingyearIgotNewYear’sEvedutyagain.At9pmsharp，thewardclerktoldmetherewasacouplewhowantedtospeakwithme.WhenIapproachedthem，themanintroducedhimselfasMr.Leeandsaid，“Youprobablydon’trememberme，butlastNewYear’sEveyousavedmylife.Thankyoufortheyearyougaveme.”Heandhiswifehuggedme，handedmeasmallgift，andleft.Thefollowingyearanewdoctorhadjoinedthegroup，butIwantedtoseeifMr.andMrs.Leewouldreturn.Thistime，Ivolunteeredfortheshift.Ikeptaneyeonthedoor.Onceagain，atexactly9pm，theLeesappeared，carryingawarmlywrappedbundle.Itwastheirnewgrandchild.Mr.Lee，hisfamilyandIspent13NewYear’sEvestogether.Inthelateryearsthestaffallknewaboutthestoryandwouldworktogivemetimewithhiminthebreakroom，wherewespentahalf-houreachNewYear’sEve.注意：續寫詞數應為150左右。LastyearIsawMrs.Leealoneinthehospitalwithagiftforme. Icarefullyopenedthepackageandfoundacrystal（水晶）bellinsidewiththeword“Friendship”engraved（雕刻）onit. 步驟一：品讀語篇——抓住要點很關鍵前文概要審體裁：記敘文審時態：一般過去時審前文大意以及要點：第一段：介紹作者新到一家小醫院急診室上班，新年前夜值班；第二段：介紹作者在新年前夜搶救了一位患心臟病的病人，早上病人轉危為安；第三段：病人夫婦感恩作者，到醫院送禮物；第四段：作者主動值夜班，期望見到病人夫婦；第五段：連續13年病人夫婦都在新年前夜和作者團聚。步驟二：戴著鐐銬跳舞——研讀首句，高度融合原文，合理想象情節1.第一段所給首句：LastyearIsawMrs.Leealoneinthehospitalwithagiftforme.上文提到Mr.Lee夫婦連續13年和作者一起過新年前夜，結合首句中的alone可知，Mr.Lee可能因病去世，而Mrs.Lee拿著的禮物，可能是Mr.Lee臨終前留給作者的。2.第二段所給首句：Icarefullyopenedthepackageandfoundacrystalbellinsidewiththeword“Friendship”engravedonit.作者打開包裹看到的是一個上面刻著單詞“友誼”的水晶鈴。由此作者所想到的應該是他們一起度過的新年前夜以及他們之間的友誼。結尾句：應該圍繞thecrystalbell收尾。步驟三：斟酌打磨——豐富續寫詞匯，生動描述情節話題激活詞匯疾病：heartattack，headache，stomachache，toothache動作：kiss，spend，give，hug，survive，sleep，die禮物：gift，present，package，bell心理狀態：frightened，thankful，thankless，grateful句式翻譯1.李先生兩天前心臟病復發去世了。（diefrom）_____________________________________________________________________________________2.他沒有忘記我們的約定，幾天前準備了這個最后的禮物。（and連接的并列句）_____________________________________________________________________________________3.他懷著一顆感恩的心過了長達13年有意義的生活。（and連接并列謂語）_____________________________________________________________________________________4.當我看著鈴的時候，我想起了和Lee一家人度過的新年前夜以及我們之間的友誼。（when引導的時間狀語從句；which引導的定語從句）_____________________________________________________________________________________5.現在我和我的家人、朋友每個新年的前夜都會在晚上9點搖響鈴，來表達我們對所銘記的人最美好的祝愿。（and連接并列謂語）_____________________________________________________________________________________步驟四：創造性表達——潤色注重細節，句式再造升級1.用shetoldme升級第1句______________________________________________________________________________________2.用so連接的并列句升級第2句______________________________________________________________________________________3.用aslongas（表示“長達……”）升級第3句______________________________________________________________________________________4.用動詞-ing形式作狀語；動詞-ed形式作定語升級第4句______________________________________________________________________________________5.用動詞-ing形式作伴隨狀語升級第5句______________________________________________________________________________________步驟五：高分在即——連句成篇________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________課時把關練PartVWriting參考答案步驟三1.Mr.Leediedfromanotherheartattacktwodaysago.2.Hehadneverforgottenourappointmentandhepreparedthelastgiftdaysago.3.Helivedwithagratefulheartandhadameaningfullifefor13years.4.WhenIsawthebell，IlookedbackontheNewYear’sEveswhichIspentwiththeLeesandthefriendshipbetweenus.5.Now，myfamily，myfriendsandIringthatbelloneveryNewYear’sEveatexactly9pmandofferourbestwishestothemenwhowewon’tforget.步驟四1.ShetoldmeMr.Leediedfromanotherheartattacktwodaysago.2.Hehadneverforgottenourappointment，sohepreparedthelastgiftdaysago.3.Helivedwithagratefulheartandhadameaningfullifeforaslongas13years.4.Seeingthebell，IlookedbackontheNewYear’sEvesspentwiththeLeesandthefriendshipbetweenus.5.Now，myfamily，myfriendsandIringthatbelloneveryNewYear’sEveatexactly9pm，offeringourbestwishestothemenwhowewon’tforget.步驟五Onepossibleversion：LastyearIsawMrs.Leealoneinthehospitalwithagiftforme.Mrs.Leelookedpale.Shetoldm