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抱歉(bàoqiàn)信第一頁,共31頁。1ALetterofApology第二頁,共31頁。2抱歉信文體概述〔Letterofapology)抱歉信是指因過失或疏忽等做錯了事,給別人帶來了麻煩或損失(sǔnshī),覺察后給對方賠禮抱歉并請求對方原諒的信件。通常包括以下三局部內容:1.開門見山,說明寫信目的,表示歉意。2.說明出現過失的原因,提出彌補措施。3.再次致歉,請求原諒,希望得到理解(語言要誠摯,解釋的理由要真實)。第三頁,共31頁。3常用語塊因某事向某人抱歉____________________2.向……說對不起____________________3.接受(jiēshòu)我的抱歉____________________4.為某事原諒某人____________________5.并非成心做某事_____________________havenointentiontodosth.apologizetosb.forsth./makeanapologytosb.forsth.saysorrytoacceptmyapologyforgivesb.forsth.第四頁,共31頁。46.彌補(míbǔ);賠償_____________________7.賠償;歸還_____________________8.給你帶來不便_____________________9.給你帶來許多麻煩_____________________10.更加小心_____________________bemorecarefulmakeupforpayfor/compensateforcauseyouinconveniencecauseyoumuchtrouble第五頁,共31頁。511.犯這樣(zhèyàng)愚蠢的錯誤______________________12.應當受到責備______________________13.承擔責任_______________________14.難以接受的后果______________________15.下不為例______________________neverletithappenagainmakesuchastupidmistakebetoblameberesponsiblefor/shoulder/undertaketheresponsibilityanunacceptableresult/consequence第六頁,共31頁。6寫作(xiězuò)三步曲第七頁,共31頁。7Step1:審題養成重視(zhòngshì)審題的習慣。思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱?(person)文章的題材是什么?怎樣安排信息點的順序?

(order)動作是什么時候發生的?

(when)第一人稱(dìyīrénchēnɡ)一封(yīfēnɡ)抱歉信說理的邏輯性一般現在時第八頁,共31頁。83.提出補救(bǔjiù)方法2.說明(shuōmíng)具體原因抱歉(bàoqiàn)信寫作4步走寫信的一般要求1.內容要簡單對于題中所給的內容:全面對于自己發揮的內容:簡單寫熟悉的,會寫的!

2.結構要清晰開頭段:中間段:

結尾段:

3.語言要精彩:4.注意內容之間的連接1.表示歉意總結提升4.再次致歉望理解造句能力+高分套話第九頁,共31頁。9Basicstructureandexpressions第一段:簡明說明寫信目的,為自己的過失表示歉意,希望得到對方的諒解。抱歉(bàoqiàn)的表達:Ifeelsorryformyfailureto…IamawfullysorrythatIcannot…IamverysorryforIamwritingtoexpressmysincereapologyformy…5.IregrettoinformyouthatIamunableto…6.IfeelguiltyforwhatIhavedonetoyou.pickyouupattheairportattendyourparty.

myrudeness/thoughtlessness/badmanners.第十頁,共31頁。10第二段:詳細說明當時情況,解釋原因,語氣(yǔqì)要誠懇。1.Nowletmeexplainwhathappenedtomethatday.2.Ihadintendedto…3.IamafraidwhatIhavedonehascausedmuchinconveniencetoyou.4.Iamtoblameforthissillymistake.5.Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.6.Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.第十一頁,共31頁。11第三段:提出補救方法(fāngfǎ),具體提出自己的想法,希望能彌補過失,消除誤會。1.Inordertoremoveourmisunderstanding,Iwouldliketoinvite..2.Tomakeupformyfault,Iwill……3.Tocompensateforyourloss,Idecideto..4.Iwishyoucouldgivemeachancetomakeupformyfault.5.Ihopethesettlementofthismattercanmeetyourwishes.第十二頁,共31頁。12第四段:再次表示歉意,愿意為此負責,希望(xīwàng)以后不再出現類似不愉快事件。1.Pleaseacceptmymostsincereapologyagain.2.IpromisethatIwillnevermakesuchastupidmistakeagain.3.Iassureyouthatitwillneverhappenagain.4.Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation/thinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.5.Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused/youhavesustained.第十三頁,共31頁。13Step3:寫作(xiězuò)第十四頁,共31頁。14抱歉信模板一DearBob,Iamtrulysorrythat_________〔抱歉的原因(yuányīn)〕.Thereasonisthat_________〔介紹的原因(yuányīn)〕.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.Yourssincerely,LiHua

第十五頁,共31頁。15習作(xízuò)欣賞DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame.IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(賠償)forthemissedbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.

第十六頁,共31頁。16習作(xízuò)欣賞DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame.IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(賠償)forthemissedbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.

第一段:開門見山抱歉并解釋失誤(shīwù)的過程第二段:承諾彌補或賠償(péicháng)及措施第三段:再次表示歉意并承諾不再犯類似錯誤第十七頁,共31頁。17習作(xízuò)修改(做短文改錯)DearSir/Madam, IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireadthemeveryeveningandintendtofinishitthenextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdayuntilIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelostofthebook.borroweditwhenloss第十八頁,共31頁。18IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamblame.IwillgotoyourplaceinThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(賠償(péicháng))forthemissedbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconveniencesortroublecausedbymycareless.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.Yourssincerely,LiMing∧toonmissinginconveniencecarelessness第十九頁,共31頁。19誦讀(sòngdú)經典范文DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowedfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireaditeveryeveningandintendtofinishitnextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdaywhenIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelossofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamtoblame.IwillgotoyourplaceonThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(賠償)forthemissingbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenienceortroublecausedbymycarelessness.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.

第一段:開門見山抱歉(bàoqiàn)并解釋失誤的過程第二段:承諾彌補(míbǔ)或賠償及措施第三段:再次表示歉意并承諾不再犯類似錯誤第二十頁,共31頁。20誦讀經典范文(fànwén)DearSir/Madam,IamawfullysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthebookIborrowedfromyourlibrarylastweek.ThenameofthebookisAdventurersinDeserts.Ireaditeveryeveningandintendtofinishitnextweek,butunfortunatelyyesterdaywhenIcamebacktomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Ipromisetopayforthelossofthebook.IknowmoneycannotcoverthelossandIamtoblame.IwillgotoyourplaceonThursdayafternoontotalkoverthecompensation(賠償)forthemissingbook.Iapologizeagainforanyinconvenienceortroublecausedbymycarelessness.Ipromisethatsuchathingwillneverhappenagain.

第二十一頁,共31頁。21Let'stakeactions!Writeanaletterofapologyin15minutes.第二十二頁,共31頁。22課堂練習假定你是李華,寒假中作為交流(jiāoliú)生短期去英國培訓,回國時因為匆忙,把房東Bob的音樂光盤夾在行李中帶了回來。現在請你給Bob寫一封抱歉信,要點如下:1.對自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意。2.提出解決的方法。3.再次請求原諒。注意:1.詞數100左右。2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。第二十三頁,共31頁。23

Agoodessayshouldbe

1.complete2.coherent3.accurate4.various5.neat第二十四頁,共31頁。24DearBob,IamwritingtomakeanapologytoyouforthefactthatIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.YesterdayIcamebackfromEnglandandfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone,Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.

Iamterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.Pleaseforgivemeforanyinconveniencecaused.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua第二十五頁,共31頁。25Homework:課外作業假定你是李華,你的美國老師Mr.Evans要求你們明天下午去聽一個英國歷史的講座。你因故不能參加。請你寫一封信向Mr.Evans抱歉并說明情況。要點如下:1.表示歉意。2.理由:父親去北京出差,母親生病住院需要人照顧。3.詢問:是否有錄音(lùyīn),以便補聽講座。注意:1.詞數100左右。2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。第二十六頁,共31頁。26DearMr.Evans,

IamindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon’tbeabletoattendthelectureonEnglishhistorytomorrowafternoon.MymothersuddenlyfellillandwastakentohospitallastnightandmyfatherisonabusinesstriptoBeijingnow.IamafraidthatIwillhavetotakecareofherthesedays.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone,Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Andi

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