書面表達高分標準1.

寫作內容：

要點全，能根據要點適當發揮。2.

語言表達：

句式豐富且靈活，錯誤極少；能運用恰當的銜接詞表示順序和邏輯關系。3.

邏輯結構：

三段式，首尾點題，事例典型。語言流暢，意思清楚、連貫。4.

卷面要求：書寫工整，卷面整潔。勾畫不超過三處，字體工整，大小合適。2023年安徽英語第一部分

高分寫作秘笈常考文體分類指導考情概述

分析安徽中考的書面表達可知寫作主要考查記敘文和說明文。考生在寫作時，要依據不同的文體特點，搭建寫作框架。技巧點撥三六三寫作方法（總—分—總）1.

開頭三句：一句翻譯提示（題目中已給出）；一句點題（對應題目）；一句解釋觀點。2.

主體六句：記敘文：事情的起因兩句、經過兩句、結果兩句；說明文：描述事物或解釋原因的三個方面，用上順序詞First/Next/Finally等；議論文：論點1

First

of

all,

兩句；

論點2

What’s

more,

兩句；

論點3

In

the

end,

兩句。3.

結尾三句：一句諺語；一句再點題；一句喊口號。記敘文

記敘文要求考生描述個人經歷及感受。常見的寫作模式為三段式。具體如下：第一段：點明主題（引出要介紹的人或事）①I’ll

never

forget…②The

person

I

love

most

is…③I

still

remember

the

day

when…④…

is

one

of

my

best

friends,

and

we

share

happiness

and

sadness

together.⑤Looking

back

to

the

past

three

years,

I

have

made

great

progress

in

my

study.⑥There

were

lots

of

unforgettable

experiences

in

my

memory

when

I

was

in

junior

high

school.第二段：描述事件（起因、經過和結果）起因：

I

found

it

hard/difficult

for

me

to

do

sth.It

was

hard/difficult

for

me

to

do

sth.I

had

some

trouble/difficulty

（in）

doing

sth.I

felt

hopeless

at

sth.I

felt

disappointed

at

sth.經過：

find

it/sth.+adj.+to

do

sth.take

part

in…take

one’s

advicespend

time/money

（in）

doing

sth.have

a

good

talk

with

sb.sb.

advised/asked/helped/encouraged/taught

me

to

do

sth.結果：

With

one’s

help,

I

have

made

great

progress

in…Thanks

to

sb.,

I

worked

out

the

problem

successfully.Finally/At

last/In

the

end,

I

came

up

with

good

ideas/ways

to

solve

the

problem

of…第三段：表達感受（感情升華）

I’m

thankful

to…

and

I’ll

learn

from…

I’m

proud

of

myself

because…I’ve

learned

a

lesson

from……

sets

a

good

example

for

me.It

was

such

an

interesting

trip

that

I’ll

never

forget

it.說明文

說明文通常考查做法建議、計劃安排和事物介紹。類別1

做法建議第一段：點明主題（具體的事情）

①It’s

important

for

us

to…,

but

how…

Here

are

some

suggestions.

②It’s

necessary

to…

in

our

life/study.

Here

are

some

ways

to

do

sth.

③There

are

some

things

we

need/should/must

do

in

order

to

do

sth.

④How

can

we

protect

the

environment/keep

healthy/…?

Here

are

my

suggestions.第二段：分點陳述

①Firstly/To

begin

with,

we

can/should/had

better

do

sth.

②Secondly/What’s

more/Besides,

it’s

our

duty

to

do

sth.

③Finally/Last

but

not

least,

it’s

a

good

idea

to

do

sth.第三段：再次點題（表達期待）

①If

you

follow

my

advice

above,

you’ll

do

sth.

②I

hope

the

advice

above

will

be

helpful/useful

to

you.

③Only

in

these

ways

can

we

live

a

better

and

healthier

life.

④In

a

word,

as

long

as

we…,

we

will

do

sth.

⑤If

we

keep

doing

these

small

things,

I

believe

the

environment

will

be

better

and

better.

Let’s

take

action

from

now

on.類別2

計劃安排第一段：點明具體活動

①As

the

summer

vacation

is

coming,

I’ve

made

a

plan

for

it.

②Why

not

come

to

sp.?

I

have

a

good

plan.

③We’re

going

on

a

trip

to…

this

Sunday.

Here

is

my

trip

plan.第二段：具體活動安排

①It/The

activity

will/is

going

to

be

held

in/on+時間/地點

②Our

school

will

have/hold…

on/at+時間/地點

③We

will/are

going

to

have

a

lot

of

activities,

such

as+活動

④On

the

first/second/…

day,

we

are

going

to

do

sth.第三段：表達希望

①I’m

sure

I’ll

have

a

meaningful

summer

holiday.

②In

a

word,

I

hope

all

of

us

could

enjoy

a

happy

and

meaningful

holiday/weekend.

③I’m

looking

forward

to

the

trip/summer

vacation/…類別3

事物介紹第一段：說明要介紹的事物（地點）是什么

①I’d

like

to

tell

you

something

about…

②As

we

all

know,

…

is

necessary

in

our

daily

life.

③Among

these…,

I

think

the…

is

the

most

important…

④I’d

like

to

share

my

favorite…

with

you.

⑤With

a

history

of

thousands

of

years,

…

is

a

beautiful

city.

⑥My

favorite

place

is…

and

it

is…第二段：介紹該事物（地點）的特點和背后的意義

①It

always

reminds

me

of

my

happy

childhood

and

my

grandparents’

love

for

me.

②I

am

so

amazed

at…

because

it

makes

my

life

more

enjoyable

and

convenient.

③It’s

a

birthday

present

from

my

mother,

and

I

love

it

very

much.

④This

city

is

popular

with

tourists

not

only

for

its

pleasant

weather

but

also

for

its

places

of

interest.第三段：重申主題

①It

will

be

exciting/necessary/helpful

to

have

a…!

②What

a

useful…!

③In

a

word,

…

is

really

of

great

importance

to

me.

It

makes

my

life

more

meaningful

and

colorful.議論文

議論文通常要求考生表達自己的觀點，并能運用簡單的論據支撐觀點，最后強化個人觀點。常見的寫作框架如下：第一段：提出觀點（通常由某個現象引出）

①In

my

opinion,

it’s

important/necessary/helpful

to

do

sth.

②As

far

as

I’m

concerned,

students

should

be

allowed

to

have

pocket

money.

It’s

good

for

their

growth.

③…

plays

an

important

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