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高三新題型讀后續寫不同主題總結和練習--冒險類板塊一--例文欣賞(出海捕魚遇險)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Itwasthefirsttimethatmyfatherhadaskedmetohelphim.Bythetimewefinished,herring(鯡魚)coveredthebottomoftheboatasdeepasmyknees.Forthefirsttimeindays,myfatherseemedhappy.Thenhelookedatthewesternsky,andhissmiledisappeared.TheyarecalledNorthwesters.They’restormsthatsweepoutofCanadahardandfast.Noonecanpredicttheirarrival.Allfishermenfearthem.“We’regoingback,”myfathersaid.Hestartedthemotor.Wewereonlytwomilesout,buttheshorelookedtometobeasfarawayasthemoon.Overthedistanthills,blackcloudsrantowarduslikewildhorses.Myfathersetacoursedirectlyforthem.Wemadeitonlyhalfwayhomebeforewemetthestorm.Thewindcamefirst.Itliftedthelakeinwhitecaps.Theweightoftheherringmadeusridelowinthewater,andthewavesbrokeoverourbow(船頭).Bythetimetheraincame,we’dputmoredistancebehindus.Althoughwewerenowonlyhalfamilefromshore,therainfellsohardthatwecouldn’tseetheland.Iwasscared,butIsawmyfathersittingstraightinthestern(船尾),holdingtheboatsteadyintothewind,andIfelthopeful.Iwasstartingtothinkweweregoingtomakeit.That’swhenthemotordied.Myfathertriedmanytimestorestartit,butfailed.Isawthattheboatwascomingabout.Iknewwhatthatmeant.Wewouldsinkinnotime.“Grabanoar(漿),”heshoutedabovethewind.Wesettheoarsinthelocksandbegantopullhard.Myfatherdughisoarintothewater,broughttheboataround,andbowedintothewindagain.Withallmystrength,Ipulledonmyownoar.Thewindpushedhardagainstus.Weseemedtobefightingtheangerofthewholelake.注意:續寫詞數應為150左右。Iwastired.Mymotherrushedthroughtheraintogreetus.一、故事梗概二、情節推斷根據已經給出的續寫部分每段的開頭語并展開合理想象可推斷:1.第一段開頭是:我很累。所以接下來應該描述作者在疲憊不堪的情況下如何奮力地劃槳靠岸,成功脫險的過程。2.第二段開頭是:媽媽冒雨前來迎接兒子和丈夫。所以本段應該寫父子倆奮力脫險回到岸上以后的事情,著重描寫一家人團聚時互相安慰和激動的心情。可根據自己的想象構建故事情節。續寫兩段的四要素如下:Paragraph1Paragraph2時間:WhenIwastired地點:onlyhalfamilefromtheshore人物:fatherandtheson事件:howtheymanagedtogetontotheshoreinthehorriblestorm...時間:Afterpullingtheboatintotheshelter...地點:ontheshore人物:mum,dadandtheson事件:theyhuggedtogetherandthefatherpraisedhisson...三、要素串聯將已確定的四要素串聯,并增加細節描寫,完成讀后續寫。參考范文Iwastired.MyarmswerereallyheavyandIfeltasiftheywereonfire.Weweremadeupanddownbythewaves.Ididn’tknowhowmuchlongerIcouldpullthatoarthroughthewater.Asifheheardmythinking,myfathercalledtome,“Ineedyou,Karl.Onlyalittlelonger.”SoIkeptpulling.JustwhenIthoughtIhadnomorestrength,Iheardit—thesoundofwavesbreakingagainsttheshore.Itrefreshedusgreatlyandwekeptpulling.Atlastwemovedintotheshelterwithalltheherring.Mymotherrushedthroughtheraintogreetus.“Ihavebeensoworried,”shesaid.Shehuggedmetightlyandthenmyfather.“Nothingtoworryabout,”heassuredher.Heputhishandonmyshoulder,“Youdidwell,son.Howdoyoufeel?”TiredasIwas,Imanagedasmile.“Fine.AndDaddy,youareahero.”板塊二--能力提升訓練閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。ItwasthehottesttimeoftheyearinsouthernCalifornia.Steve,astarbasketballplayerattheUniversityofCalifornia,withhiscousinZach,hadplannedacampingtripintheGreatNationalForestfortheirsummervacation.Theboysgatheredclothesandsupplies,andbegantheirgreatadventurewithBradythedogearlyinthemorning.Uponarrival,Stevepulledovertothesideoftheroadalongthebankoftheriver.“Awonderfulplaceforfishing,”Steveexclaimedindelight.Zachnoddedinagreement.Athighnoon,thesunwasscorchinghot.Withagoodharvestoffish,theboysmarchedintotheforestwithBradyfollowingthem.Afteralongwalk,theyfoundaclearingthatwasidealforacampsite.ThecampwassetupimmediatelyasSteveknewallthetricksofanexperiencedwildernesscamper.Anafternoonnapwasabsolutelyaspecialtreatinmid-summer.However,theboyswerewakenupbythefiercebarksofBrady.Outside,heavysmokefilledtheairandwind-blownflamewasskippingfromthetopofonetreetoanother.Thelongdrysummerturnedtheforestintoatinderbox.Inalittlewhile,SteveandZachwereinsidetheirtentpackingtheirbelongings.“Let’sgo!Wecanmakeitbacktotheriver!”Theyheadeddownagainstthefire-windinthedirectionoftheriver.ButBradybarkedasharpwarning.Aheadofthemlayathickcurtainofsmokeacrossthetrack.Theywouldnevermakeitthroughthat.Stevewasuneasyforitwashardtofindasafewaytoescapeintheheavysmoke.Bradyliftedhisheadandsnuffed(嗅)thesmoke-ladenwind.Nextmoment,thedogboundedawayanddisappeareddownasharpslope(坡).Theboysshoutedforhim,buthedidn’tcomeback.Stevecouldn’tblameBradyforpanicking.Hehimselfwantedtoruneventhoughhedidn’tknowwheretorun.注意:續寫詞數應為150左右。SteveandZachhadn’tgonefarwhentherewasafamiliarbark.Bradypulledagain,inspiteoftheboy’sdisbelief,urgently.參考范文SteveandZachhadn’tgonefarwhentherewasafamiliarbark.Bradycamebounding,stoppeddirectlyinfrontofSteveandhithimwithhishead,pushinghimbacktowardtheslope.ButStevedidn’tgetit.ThenBradygrabbedt
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