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基本要求：1.書寫整潔、卷面清晰2.分段！3.標點！大小寫！4.格式正確5.不遺漏要點如何算是一篇好的文章？1、覆蓋了所有的要點。2、應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。（詞匯、句型【高級】和語法多樣化【較復雜】）3、有效的使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊，行文連貫，條理清楚。1.審：審文體、審要求、審人稱、審時態文體：記敘文、說明文、議論文、應用文要求：（見試題）人稱：第一、二、三人稱時態：過去式或者一般現在式...2.3：

抓、遣：列要點（關鍵詞——動詞或動詞詞組）遣詞造句4.

連：(1)擴詞成句。在書寫時，若無把握的情況下盡量用簡單的句子、單詞或短語表達。(2)組句成文（開頭結尾、增添細節、行文連貫、高級結構），并呈現常用承接、過渡詞語。思路清晰，邏輯嚴密。

5.

查：復查全文（1）體裁格式是否正確；（2）內容要點是否全面；（3）全文的行文是否通順、連貫。（4）句子的時態、語態是否正確；（5）主謂是否一致；（6）標點符號與大小寫有無錯誤；（7）字數是否相符等。給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三部分Heading點題；一兩個句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

中心記述部分；層次分明3.Ending

小結；呼應主題Example:

Togrowuphappilyandhealthily

Weallwanttogrowuphappilyandhealthily,andforthisgoalwemustdoseveralthings.

Firstly,weshoulddevelopagoodattitudetolife.Lifeconsistsofnotonlysunshinebutalsohardtimes.Weshouldbebraveinfrontofdifficulties.Secondly,wemuststudyhardbecauseknowledgeispower.Ifwehavethepower.Wecanhelptobuildourcountryandenjoylifebetter.Inordertostudywell,weneedtodosportssothatwecankeepfit.Wecangorunning,playballgamesorsimplytakeawalkafteraday’sstudy.Ifwedothosethingswell,wewillbeabletogrowuphappilyandhealthily.分析一、審題：1、文體：

2、時態：3、人稱：

二、提煉要點：1,部分同學的飲食習慣:

1,Someofthestudents’eatinghabits①don’thavebreakfast,②likeeatingsnacks③onlysomekindsoffood,④eattoomuch應用文-討論稿一般現在時第一人稱（①不吃早餐②愛吃零食③偏食④飲食過量）

高級:Someofthestudentsgotoschoolwithoutbreakfast①一般:Someofthestudentsdon’thavebreakfastandgotoschool.分析:修改后沒有用過于直接的onlysomekindsof,而使用了areparticularabout,該詞組就屬高級詞匯。②一般:Theyonlyhavesomekindsoffood.

高級:Theyareparticularaboutfood.分析:在表達要點時，without比don’thave語氣強，也顯得生動.一般:Theyhaveallkindsoffood

.高級:Theyhavevarioushealthydiet

．一般:Theyhavethesameamountoffoodandatthesametime.高級:Theyhavemealsregularly.選好詞，寫好句成文

Asweknow,wearewhatweeat.Therefore,it’sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.However,badeatinghabitsarestillverycommonamongusstudents.Someofusoftengotoschoolwithoutbreakfast;someliketohavesnacks;someothersareparticularaboutfood;andstillsomeeatordrinktoomuch.Allthesebadeatinghabitswillsurelydoharmtoourhealth.

Tokeepfit,weshouldhavevarioushealthydiets,which

generallyincludeproperamountsoffruit,fish,meat,vegetablesaswellasmainfood.Besides,we’dbetterhavemealsregularly.

一句多譯練習例一.寫請假條。情景：我生病了，明天不能上學。1.I’mill.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.2.I’millandIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.3.I’llbeabsentfromschooltomorrowjustbecauseI’mill.4.I’msoseriouslyillthatIcan’tgotoschooltomorrow.5.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrowbecauseofmyillness.6.Beingill,Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.(用分詞作原因狀語)7.Ican’tgotoschooltomorrow.That’sbecauseI’mill.（用表語從句）8.I’mseriouslyill,whichmakesmeunabletogotoschool.（用定語從句）9.I’mseriouslyill,whichmakesitimpossibleformetogotoschool.昨天下雨，我沒來。

Itrainedyesterday,soIdidn’tcome.Itrainedyesterday,andasaresult,Ididn’tcome.Ididn’tcomeyesterdaybecauseitrained.Ididn’tcomeyesterdaybecauseoftherain.Therainpreventedus（from）comingyesterday.Therainstoppedus（from）comingyesterday.Therainkeptusfromcomingyesterday.Practice

一句多譯

這本書花了我300元。

Ispent300yuanonthebook.

Ipaid300yuanforthebook.

Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.

1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.Weallthinkheisagreatman.3.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.4.Thestudentsthereneedn’tpayfortheirbooks.

5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.一、怎樣使用較高級的詞匯Weallthinkhighlyofhim.Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.8.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.9.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.10.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.ShewenttoAustria

forthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Atthenewsofhisdeath,

shewentpalewithsorrow.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms.You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.

巧用習語---增加文采1.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.2.Youcanfindmyhouseeasily.3.Manyhousesarebeingbuilt.Ourschoolconsistsoftwenty–sixclassrooms.You’llhavenotroublefindingmyhouse.

Manyhousesareunderconstruction.1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）3.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用as倒裝句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強調句型)5.Iwonthecompetitionbecauseofherhelp.(用虛擬語氣）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.Whatsurpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.二、使用較豐富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavewonthecompetitionbutforyourhelp.

6.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)7.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)8.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用讓步狀語從句）

9.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（用并列句）10．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒裝句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.11．devote替換spendHespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.12．on替換assoonasAssoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→

Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch.13．roundthecorner替換comingsoon/nearby①Thesummervacationisroundthecorner(coming).Doyouhaveanyplans?②LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner(nearby).14．occur替換thinkofSuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→

Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.

Itoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.隨著人們的生活越來越富裕，人與人之間的關系變得越來越淡漠，人們之間的幫助也越來越少了。請你以Helpingothersishelpingyourself為題寫一篇120詞左右的短文。內容包括：1）為什么需要幫助別人？2)幫助別人給自己帶來什么益處？（可以適當發揮）Haveatry!ToHelpOthersIsToHelpYourselfWecan'tdoallthejobsandcompleteallthethingsbyourselves,soacooperationandhelpisneeded.It’simportantforustohelpothersbecauseevenasmallhelpcanalsogiveotherswarmthandsunshine.Lookingback,wecanknowthehistoryofhumanbeingsisahistoryofhelpingeachother.First,helpingothersisessential,asourabilitiesarelimitedandwecan'tfinisheverythingalone.Weneedahelpinordertodothethingwell.Second,tohelpothersmeanstohelpourselves.Wecan'tliveinasingleworld.Whenwehelpothersintrouble,someday,theywillhelpusinreturn.Onthecontrary,ifwedon'tofferahelp,wewon'tgetahelp.Third,helpingothersisnotonlyagoodquality,butalsoahappything.Wecangetmuchhappinessbyhelpingothers.Friends,don'thesitatetogiveyourloveorhelptothoseinneed,forhelpingothersisjusthelping

ourselves.目前．地球向臨水資源危饑?！?1世紀報》學生版針對此情況面向全體中學生征稿，呼吁人們重視目前的問題，并保護水資源，征稿題目是：GlobalShortageofFreshWater請根據以下提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文，向《21世紀報》投稿。稿件要點：1．人們認為淡水的取之不盡的，而實際不是；2．淡水資源危機的原因；3．人們應該采取的措施。GlobalShortageofFreshWaterManypeoplebelievethattheworld’ssupplyoffreshwaterwillneverbeusedup.Theythinkthatfreshwatercomesfromsuchavarietyofsourcesthatitisalwayssufficientforuse.Suchanopinionleadstoashockingwasteofwater.Asamatteroffact,theearthisshortoffreshwater.Furthermore,withtherapidgrowthoftheworldpopulation,therisingdemandforwaterbyindustry,andtheseriouspollutionofoursurroundings,theworldisfacingthedangerofrunningoutoffreshwater.Actually,insomebigcities,freshwatercannotmeetthedailyneeds.Therefore,tofindnewwaystosavewaterisanurgenttask.First,weshouldpassstrictlawstocontrolanywasteofwater.Second,scientistsmustworkevenhardertopurifyseawater,andtrytofindsubstitutetoreducetheuseoffreshwater.書面表達（滿分25分）近日你所在的學校開展了“為建設節約型社會獻一計”主題活動，同學們提出了許多建議。請你根據以下要點，用英語寫一篇短文向EnglishHorizons雜志編輯部投稿，要點如下：1、不浪費糧食和紙張2、盡量不使用方便筷、塑料袋3、畢業生將書贈給低年級同學循環使用？注意：1、不要逐字翻譯，可適當增加細節;2、詞數：120字左右，開頭已經為你寫好，不計入總詞數;3、參考詞匯：方便筷disposablechopsticksRecently，therehasbeenanactivityof“doingyourbitforanenergy-savingsociety”inourschool.

Recently，therehasbeenanactivityof“doingyourbitforanenergy-savingsociety”inourschool.Ourschoolmatesarehighlyconcernedabouttheincreasinglackofenergyandprovidetheirownsuggestions.Somestudentssuggestthatweshouldn’twasteanyfoodorpaper,thoughtheyappearveryeasytoget.Meanwhile,someotherstudentsthinkitadvisabletorefusetousedisposablechopsticksandplasticbags.Besides,itisalsostronglyrecommendedthatthoseusedtextbooksaswellasreferencebooksofgraduates,whicharestillingoodcondition，notbethrownbutrecycled.Actually,therearestillquitealotthatwecaneasilydo:say,trytotakebusesorridebicyclesinsteadofdrivingcars,etc.Allofthesewilldefinitelyhelptobuildanenergy-savingsociety.

據報道，為了應對網絡有害信息，北京展開了一項活動，選出60個母親為“MomJury”，讓她們參與到整頓不良網站的活動中。請你根據下表提供的有關信息，用英語寫一篇短文。要點：1.背景：網民日益年輕化；網上不良信息很多2.任務：舉報不良網站；提出建議；督促政府部門采取措施等效果一個月后，許多不良網站被關閉3.你的看法……

NowadaysChinesenetizenstendtobeyoungerthanbeforeandtheyhavemanychancestovisitwebsiteswithbadcontentswhichareharmfultothem.Inordertoprotectthemfromthisharm,sixtymotherswereselectedfromalargenumberofmotherstoforma“MomJury”inBeijing.Theirresponsibilitywastoreportbadwebsites,givethegovernmentadvice,urgethegovernmenttotakemeasures,andsoon.Theactivitywassoeffectivethatmanybadwebsiteswereclosedamonthlater.Inmyopinion,itisagoodwaytodealwiththeproblem,butDadsshouldalsotakepartintheactivity,becausethefightagainstbadwebsitescallsforajointeffortbybothparents.ItisalsoimportanttoteachteenagershowtoprotectthemselveswhilesurfingtheInternet.最近，很多中學生都紛紛開起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作為展示自己的窗口，可以釋放學習的壓力，因此已經被越來越多的中學生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家長和老師都認為管理個人博客要花相當多的時間和精力，會耽誤學習。請對這一現象進行簡要介紹，并發表自己的看法。

Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthatmoreandmorehighschoolstudentsopentheirownblogsontheInternet.Foronething,itcanprovideacolorfulplatformtoshowcasetheirtalent,anditisawaytoreleasetheirpressure,andallthismakesitmoreandmorepopularwithhighschoolstudents.Butmanyparentsandteachersholdthedifferentview,theythinkthatmanagingone’sblogwilltakealotoftimeandenergy,whilethisshouldbeusedtostudywhichistheirmainresponsibility.Inmyopinion,Idoapproveofthisactivity.NowadaystheInternetisplayinganimportantandessentialroleinourlifethatwecan’tignoreitsinfluence.Thereforeashighschoolstudentsoftheso-calledinformationage,weneedtolearnandmakethemostofthisusefultooltocommunicateanddisplayourselves.Moreimportantly,openingandorganizinganeyecatchingblogneedsvariousabilitiessuchaswriting,designing,beingskillfulatcomputerandsoon.Onlyifwemasterthoseabilitiescanwemakeasuccessfulblog.Asaconsequence,weimproveourselvesduringtheproceduresoforganizingourblogs.Blogitselfisoflittleharm.Itisyourattitudetowardsitthatmatters.Weshouldtaketheadvantagesandavoidsomebadeffects.

面對現實生活的各種壓力，保持一個良好的心態非常重要。請你以Theimportanceofkeepi