1、高中英語模塊整體教學 讀寫教學范式廣東番禺中學 陳蓓科以讀助寫課例（Period 2）To write a good composition, what do we need to pay attention to?Correct spelling and grammarMultiple sentence patternsBeautiful handwritingCoherence (連貫性)緊扣主題，以舊帶新In this period, we will have a game. You are divided into 4 groups.Try your best!Which is mor

2、e coherent?Go through the following couples of statements. Judge which ones are more coherent and tell why. A. A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Amy Chua, the writer of this book, is a Chinese American and also a professor of the Yale University.B. A book entitle

3、d Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale. A. My father just bought a new house. There are four bed-rooms and two bathrooms. I can see the garden behind the house from my bedroom window. My father has planted fruit trees

4、 in the gardenB. My family bought a new house. In the house, there are four bedrooms and two bathrooms. From my bedroom window I can see the garden behind the house. In the garden my father has planted fruit treesA. Im sitting here by the window writing to you. Outside the window is a big lawn surro

5、unded by trees, and in the middle of the lawn is a flower bed. It is full of roses. I like them especially the red ones very much.B. Im sitting here by the window writing to you. I can see a big lawn surrounded by trees outside my window and a flower bed in the middle of the lawn. I can also see a l

6、ot of roses in the lawn. I like them especially the red roses very much.Blank-fillingFill in the blanks to make a coherent passage according to the Chinese information. The Gym of our school has a history of 40 years and 1._(建于2006年). Facing the school gate, it is located on the left of the school c

7、lassroom building, and 2._ (運動場在東側(cè)). It is a three-storied building with very modern equipment and excellent surroundings, which covers an area of 750 square meters. 3._.(一樓有泳池) 4. _ _ (二樓有排球、籃球、羽毛球、乒乓球場) and 5. _ (三樓有報告廳). The opening time is from 6:30 a.m. to 10:30 p.m. on weekdays, and it works a

8、s usual on weekends.was rebuilt in 2006 on its east lies the playgroundOn the first floor is the swimming pool. On the second are the volleyball, basketball, badminton and table tennis courtson the third, the lecture hallRewritingRewrite the compositionfrom one of the Ss assignment. 假如你叫李華，參加學校開展的“有

9、困難向誰求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的調(diào)查活動，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表。請用英語給校報編輯寫一封信反映相關(guān)內(nèi)容。【寫作內(nèi)容】根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù)，寫一篇短文，包括以下內(nèi)容：1. 求助對象2. 理由Tips：本文有兩部分內(nèi)容：_ 和_以_為主線，以_為副線求助對象理由求助對象理由sentence 2：主干：從句：sentence 3：主干：從句：We have made a survey about “Who do you turn to when in trouble?” and here are the results. About half of th

10、e students will turn to their friends or classmates when in trouble because theyre almost the same age and have a lot in common and understand each other easily. Teachers and parents are trustworthy, have rich experience and always love them, so a quarter of them will tell their teachers and parents

11、. A version from a student：sentence 1：主題：求助對象理由理由求助對象survey, resultWhats more, the reason why one fifth of them seek help from the society is that the society is very resourceful in handling their problems. In the meantime, only ten percent who solve their problems by themselves are reluctant to com

12、municate with others and cant get on well with others. A version from a student：sentence 4：主干：the reason whyis that.sentence 5：主干：only ten percentare reluctant to Please rewrite sentence 3,4 and 5WritingWrite a composition of 5 sentences. Remember to make the composition coherent.學校植物園功能美化校園研究植物場所休閑

13、之地概況校園西南角面積1,000平方米其他觀賞至少需要1小時歷史20年歷史2008年重建特色各種花卉、樹木、藥用植物【寫作內(nèi)容】請根據(jù)以下構(gòu)思圖，寫一份關(guān)于你校植物園的英語簡介：參考詞匯：植物園 botanical garden 藥用植物 herbsShare your composition with your group members.Correct the mistakes in your compositions with each other.Make some necessary adaptation to make a more coherent composition.Sel

14、ect the most coherent one to present in front of the class.Group workLocated at the south-west corner of our school, the botanical garden covers an area of approximately 1000 m2. With a history of 20 years, it was rebuilt in 2008. As you walk through the garden, you can see various kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. If youre planning to explore the garden, set aside at least one hour. The garden makes our school more beautiful and its a fantastic place for studen