1、Writing：An exchange visit南山外國語學校集團（高新）中學 胡 芳01 Analyze the five elements of a writing topic02 Draft the composition with a clear structure03 Revise the composition from three criteria.Learning objectives01 Lead in02 Topic analysis03 Drafting04 RevisingCONTENTSLead inpart01WhoWhereWhy On an education

2、al exchangeWhat1. Learn to use _ and a little _ with the host family.2. Study with Chinese students.3. _ Beijing.4. Visit _ with host families.5. Learn a bit of _.6. Learn a lot about _.7.Learn _. What nextBritish students from Woodpark SchoolXinhua Junior High School in BeijingchopsticksChineseTour

3、 aroundplaces of interesttai chiChinese culture and historyChinese paintingStudents in Xinhua Junior High School will come to the UK for the second part of the exchangeAn exchange visitinoutininoutoutoutTopic analysispart02The students from Xinhua Junior High School have almost finished their exchan

4、ge visit to Woodpark School. They need to write a report on the exchange visit before they return to Beijing.Suppose you are one of the students. Complete the report below. Text typeBackgroundCharacter(s)TenseMain pointsTopic analysisBackgroundCharactersTenseMain pointsThey have finished their excha

5、nge visit The present perfect tense Activities in schoolText type A report One of the students from Xinhua Junior High School have classes with British studentslearn a lot about British culture and historytake part in school club activitieswatch films with British studentsintroduce tai chi and Chine

6、se painting to British students. have a picnic with the host familyvisit places of interest such as the British Museum,BIg Ben, the London Eye and Buckingham Palace.play football with British friendsgo hiking / swimming / shopping. Activities outside schoolDrafting part03A report on my exchange visi

7、t to Woodpark School My exchange visit to Woodpark School has gone well. I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have_. I have also _. My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food. _ _. I will keep in touch with them.opening paragraphbodyendingtitle I have enjoyed my st

8、udies at the school. I have_. I have also _. My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food. _ _.topic sentencesspporting sentencesI have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have had classes with British students.I have learned a lot about British culture and history.I have

9、taken part in school club activities.I have watched films with British students.I have introduced tai chi and Chinese painting to British students. My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food.I have had a picnic with the host family.we have visited places of interest such

10、 as the British Museum,BIg Ben, the London Eye and Buckingham Palace.I have played football with British friends.we have gone hiking / swimming / shopping.Revisingpart04variety（多樣性）Coherence（連貫性）Accuracy（準確性）ABC3 criteria03040102Spelling mistakesSubject-verb agreement主謂一致Grammatical mistakes060507Ac

11、curacy（準確性）TensePronounSingular or plural form of nouns單復數一致 Fixed collocations固定搭配0102a variey of words and phrasesa variey of sentencesvariety（多樣性）visit: go to see, go sightseeinghave lessons: take classes,attend lessonswant to do : be eager to do; cant wait to doI have had classes with British st

12、udents. I have also learnt a lot about British culture and history.I have not only had classes with British students, but also learnt a lot about British culture and history.I have had classes with British students and learnt a lot about British culture and history as well.Cause & EffectExampleSeque

13、nceContrastfirst of all，next,then,afterthat,finally,in a word, on the whole, in conclusion,to sum upbut, however, on the contrary, on the other hand.SupplementConclusionCoherence（連貫性）because, because of, thanks to，therefore, so,as a result of.for example, such as, take for examplebesides ,whats more

14、 , inaddition Final draft timeA report on my exchange visit to Woodpark School My exchange visit to Woodpark School has gone well. I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have had classes with British students.I have learned a lot about British culture and history. I have also taken part in schoo

15、l club activities. My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food. We have had a picnic together. They have taken me to visit the British Museum. My new British friends are very nice. I have played football with them. I will keep in touch with them.A report on my exchange vi

16、sit to Woodpark School My exchange visit to Woodpark School has gone well. I have experienced a lot and made many friends here. I have enjoyed my studies at the school. I have not only had classes with British students, but also learnt a lot about British culture and history. They are very interesti

17、ng. Taking part in school club activities has impressed me most because there were too many intersting clubs to choose and I really wanted to join each one of them! What a pity! My host family are friendly. They have cooked me delicious British food,such as sandwiches and fish chips. Whats more, we have had a picnic in a small town together. They