1、短文習作地點介紹類地點介紹類的文章屬于說明文。 其特點是： 事實正確、 條理清楚、層次分明、語言簡練、用詞準確，具有科學性、 客觀性、知識性。介紹一個地點往往從以下幾方面展開：地 理位置，人口，面積，歷史，名勝，特色。此類文章寫作時 應特別注意：圍繞主題，選好主題句，用好銜接詞，使文 章清晰明了 ；描寫順序恰當，多由上到下，從里到外，由遠 到近;注意描寫詳略得當，重點突出 ；努力運用生動形象 的語言，恰當運用形容詞，副詞，合并簡單句，避免重復單 調用詞。試題呈現假如你是李華， 家住十堰市。 你的加拿大筆友 Tina 打算 暑假來十堰旅游，請你根據下面提供的信息，給她回復一封 電子郵件，介紹一下

2、你的家鄉。位置：位于湖北省西北部 特征：有悠久的歷史，人口 340 萬， 2.4 萬平方公里 概況：旅游資源豐富：武當山( Mountain Wudang) 海拔 1612 米，世界文化遺產， 道教圣地與全國武術之鄉 ; 丹 江口水庫：南水北調工程源頭。 交通便利，工業發達的汽車城。 宜居城市：環境優美，氣候適宜，生活節奏慢。 參考詞匯： 遺產 heritage 道教 Taoism 丹江口水庫 Danjiang Da汽車城 motor city 宜居城市 livable city 位于 lie in /be located （situated ） in 南水北調 South-North Wat

3、er Diversion 寫作步驟1. 整合細節，構思結構布局（主題句+支撐句）Paragraph 1：表明回信目的Paragraph 2：武當山的地理基本信息Paragraph 3：風景名勝、 旅游資源（武當山、 丹江水庫） Paragraph 4：城市特色（交通、汽車城、宜居城市） Paragraph 5：結束語（表達期盼與歡迎）2. 相關詞匯表達 坐落在： lie in /be located /situated in 有的歷史：with/has a history of 有人口： with/has a population of 面積有：cover an area of 盛產： be

4、rich /abundant in 旅游景點：scenic spots; places of interest; touristattractions 以著名 ;聞名： be famous / well-known for; have a high reputation for 發源地： the birthplace /cradle /hometown of /be home to 四季分明、氣候宜人：a livable city whose view isdelightful in all seasons; pleasant weather; proper temperature 生活節奏慢

5、：slow pace of life3. 合并簡單句，避免單一主語重復出現 地點介紹類文章的主語多單一，即為所介紹的地點。如 何將擁有共同主語的簡單句合并，使文章更加簡潔緊湊呢？ 如“武當山是著名景點之一。武當山每年吸引許多外國游客 到此觀光旅游。 ”很多同學的直覺思維是寫成 Mountain Wudang is one of the well-known places of interest. Mountain Wudang attracts many foreigners every year ，我們可從以下一 些結構入手合并簡單句以避免主語單一。 Mountain Wudang is o

6、ne of the well-known places of interest on earth ， which attracts a large number of foreigners every year.（定語從句） Mountain Wudang is one of the well-known places of interest on earth ， bursting with/attracting a large number of foreigners every year.（分詞作定語） Mountain Wudang is such a famous historical

7、 attraction that it attracts hundreds of thousands of foreign visitors eachyear.（使用“如此以致”的句型） So attractive is MountainWudang that it attracts hundreds of thousands of visitors home and abroad every year.（使用倒裝句）4. 參考范文Dear Tina，Im happy to have received your email and pleased to know that you are co

8、ming to Shiyan. You ve made the right choice to travel here. Now let me tell you something about the city.Situated in the northwest of Hubei province ，Shiyan is a city with a long history. It has a population of 3.4 million ， covering an area of 24， 000 square kilometers. The climate here varies fro

9、m season to season ， making it a good place for people to live in.There are many places of interest in our city ， of which Mount.wudang is the most famous. As the cradle of Taoism and Martial art ，it draws tourists from everywhere every year. With an altitude of 1612 meters ， it enables you to feast

10、 your eyes on all kinds of beautiful views while climbing. Besides ， Danjiang dam ， which is the water source of South-North Water Dive rsion ， is not only a place of interest ， but also playing an important part in China s water supply. Apart from all the above ， the city is also a highly developed

11、 industrial city which is referred to as the “Motor City ” . It is convenient for you to go to anywhere you like by railway or highway.What s more， the city has recently be chosen as one of the most livable cities because of the clean environment ， pleasant climate and proper pace of life. As a Shiy

12、an native ， I m taking pride in it.So welcome to our hometown and I m sure you will fall in love with it.Yours，Lihua 拓展寫作（ 1）湖北省 地理：中國中部，三面環山，長江穿境而過。九省通衢（承東啟西，連南接北，交通便利）人口： 5816 萬 面積： 18.59 萬平方公里 氣候：溫暖濕潤，四季分明，適宜居住 主要城市：武漢、襄陽、宜昌 自然資源：森林礦場資源，千湖之省（湖泊河流多） 特產：熱干面風景名勝：黃鶴樓、武當山、三峽等 教育：中國高等教育基地，著名大學如武漢大學、華中科

13、技大學參考范文：Located in central China ， with Yangtza river flowing through it ， Hubei province connects the south and the north as well as the north with the south ， which contributes to a convenient traffic. Covering an area of 185.9 thousand square kilometers ， it has a population of 5816 million. Surr

14、ounded by mountains on three sides and having thousands of lake ， it enjoys a warm and humid climate. As a result ， it is widely recognized as a livable city whose view is delightful in all seasons. There are many big cities in Hubei ， such as Wuhan， Xiangyang and Yichang. Natural resources are abun

15、dant ， particularly forest and fresh water.Hubei is also well known for having a cluster of universities ， such as Wuhan University. Wuhan university not only has a widespread reputation for cherry blossom scenery ， but also is home to many outstanding high achievers. Being one of the higher educati

16、on bases ， Hubei is home to many distinguished scientists.（ 2）武漢市九省通衢： 武漢位于長江與漢水交匯處 ;是工業，交通， 教育和金融中心江山如畫：金碧輝煌的黃鶴樓，歷史悠久的編鐘特色小吃熱干面參考釋義：黃鶴樓 -the Yellow Crane Tower編鐘 -Chime Bells參考范文：Wuhan ， a major industrial ， financial ， and educational complex in central China ， is located at the joint of the Han a

17、nd Yangtze rivers with its railway and inland and airport which makes it accessible in all directions.Standing on the top of the Yellow Crane Tower ， dating back to hundreds of years which is regarded as one of the landmarks of Wuhan ， you can never refuse a strong itch to enjoy a real feast for its

18、 natural beauty. The waters of Yangtze River flowing lazily ， accompanied by the wonderful music given out by a set of fantastic unearthed instruments ， Chime Bells with a history of more than 1000 years which is also one of the seventh wonders in the world will come to your eyes.Wandering in the Ha

19、nzheng pavement in downtown in the July sunshine， you are to stop ， not to wipe your sweat on your forehead ， but to have a taste of Hot and dry noodles ( our local specialty ) or just to do some shopping. It is really a place where amazing happens. Can you feel the urge to have avisit as soon as possible？即學即練 請根據中文， 完成短文。 Guangzhou， the third largest city in China ， which is also known as City of Flowers ， serves as the capital city of Guangdong and （ 1）（政治