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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的文章。TheFeelGoodShoeboxCatherinesatonherbedwithherchininherhands.“Whyaren'tyougettingreadyforGrandma'sbirthdayparty?”askedMother.“Ican'tbakelikeSylviaorknitlikeAnne,”Catherinegrumbled.“Theymadegoodpresents.AllImadeforherisanuglycard.”“It'salovelycard.Andnoonecanbegoodateverything,”saidMother.ShesatonthebednexttoCatherine.“WhenIwasyourage,IfeltsadwhenIcouldn'tdocertainthings.ButonedayGrandmashowedmetheshoeboxgame,anditmademefeelalotbetter.”Catherinefrowned(皺眉).“Howcanashoeboxmakemefeelbetter?”“You'llsee,”saidMother.Shedisappeareddownthehall,thencamebackcarryingashoebox,apencil,paper,andscissors.CatherinewatchedasMothercutseveralpiecesofpaperintosquares.“N?w,Iwantyoutowritedownallthethingsyoucando,”saidMother.“Likewhat?”askedCatherine.“Whynotstartwiththingsyou'velearnedinschool?GiveitsomethoughtwhileIiceGrandma'sbirthdaycake.”Catherinesatforawhilewrinkling(起皺紋)andunwrinklinghereyebrows.SlowlyCatherinebegantowriteandwrite.Beforelongshehadwrittenoneverysquareofpaper.Shewassobusythatshedidn'thearMothereintotheroom.“Mygoodness!"saidMother.“Doyouthinkthey'llallfitintheshoebox?”“Ihopeso,”saidCatherine.“ItwasfunthinkingofallthestuffIcando.”“Andthenexttimeyoufeelsadbecauseyoucan'tdosomething,yourfeelgoodshoeboxwillremindyouofhowmuchyoucandojustasminedidwhenIwasalittlegirl,”saidMother,“Nowlet'sfinishgettingdressedforGrandma'sparty.”注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。“Happybirthday!”yelled(歡呼)thechildrenwhentheyarrivedatGrandma’shouse.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“感覺良好鞋盒”故事續寫續寫分析(兩段)?第一段:開篇孩子們到達奶奶家時歡呼“生日快樂”,瞬間營造出熱鬧歡快的生日氛圍。接著描述客廳里五彩氣球和生日蛋糕的香甜氣味,進一步渲染喜慶場景。隨后講述Sylvia和Anne展示各自精心準備的禮物——烘焙餅干和編織圍巾,眾人紛紛夸贊,與Catherine緊張的狀態形成鮮明對比。“Catherinefeltabitnervous,holdingtheshoeboxtightly.Shetookadeepbreath,gatheringhercourage.”細致刻畫了Catherine的緊張情緒,她緊緊握住鞋盒,通過深呼吸來鼓起勇氣,為下文她送出特別禮物埋下伏筆,也展現出她內心對自己禮物是否被認可的擔憂。?第二段:“ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.”承接上文,自然引出Catherine送禮物的情節。她先遞上卡片,接著拿出鞋盒,奶奶好奇詢問,Catherine詳細解釋鞋盒的由來以及里面寫滿自己所能做之事的紙張。“AsGrandmareadeachone,hereyessparkledwithpride.”通過奶奶閱讀紙張時眼中閃爍的自豪光芒,生動展現出奶奶對Catherine成長的欣慰與認可。“Oh,Catherine,thisisthemostspecialgiftofall.Itshowsmehowmuchyou'vegrown.”奶奶的話語直接點明這份禮物的獨特價值,讓Catherine收獲自信,也讓她深刻領悟到自身獨特性和認識自我能力的重要意義,升華了故事主題。?故事線?Catherine因覺得自己為奶奶準備的生日賀卡不夠好,而Sylvia能烘焙、Anne會編織,感到沮喪。母親見狀,向她介紹了“感覺良好鞋盒”游戲,讓她寫下自己能做的事情。?Catherine認真思考并在紙上寫下諸多自己能做的事,填滿了鞋盒。之后她和家人一起前往奶奶家參加生日派對。?到達奶奶家,客廳充滿節日氛圍,Sylvia和Anne展示禮物并收獲夸贊,Catherine則緊張地拿著鞋盒。?Catherine先給奶奶卡片,接著送出鞋盒并解釋其含義,奶奶閱讀后十分自豪,稱贊這是最特別的禮物,Catherine因此收獲自信,意識到自身獨特及認識自我能力的美好。?短語?arriveat到達?befilledwith充滿?presentsth.展示某物?showoff炫耀?feelnervous感到緊張?holdsth.tightly緊緊握住某物?takeadeepbreath深呼吸?explainabout解釋關于……?sparklewithpride閃爍著自豪的光芒?feelanewsenseofconfidence感到一種新的自信?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingstoryofCatherineandthefeelgoodshoeboxnotonlyrevealsthepowerofselfdiscoveryandselfacceptancebutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatouruniqueabilitiesandqualitiesarepreciousgifts,oftenmorevaluablethantraditionalpresents.?這個關于Catherine和“感覺良好鞋盒”的溫馨故事,不僅揭示了自我發現和自我接納的力量,還深刻地提醒我們,我們獨特的能力和品質是珍貴的禮物,往往比傳統禮物更有價值。?ThroughCatherine'sjourneyfromselfdoubttoconfidence,weareshownthetransformativenatureofrecognizingone'sownworth.Herstoryteachesusthatinaworldfilledwithparisons,embracingourindividualityandcelebratingourcapabilitiescanleadtotruehappinessandfulfillment.?通過Catherine從自我懷疑到自信的歷程,我們看到了認識自我價值的變革性。她的故事告訴我們,在一個充滿比較的世界里,擁抱我們的個性,贊美我們的能力,能夠帶來真正的幸福和滿足。?Thestoryofthefeelgoodshoeboxisnotmerelyataleofabirthdaygift;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumanspirit'scapacitytofindstrengthandjoyinselfawareness.Itencouragesustolookwithinourselves,discoverourhiddentalents,andsharethemwiththeworld.?“感覺良好鞋盒”的故事不僅僅是一個關于生日禮物的故事,它是對人類精神在自我認知中尋找力量和快樂的能力的深刻探索。它鼓勵我們審視自己,發現我們隱藏的才能,并與世界分享。?Inasocietythatoftenvaluesmaterialachievementsandspecificskills,Catherine'sexperiencewiththefeelgoodshoeboxstandsasabeaconofhope,inspiringustoappreciatethebeautyofouruniqueselvesandthecountlessthingswearecapableof,regardlessofhowunconventionaltheymayseem.?在一個常常重視物質成就和特定技能的社會中,Catherine與“感覺良好鞋盒”的經歷如同一盞希望之燈,激勵我們欣賞獨特自我的美好,以及我們所能做的無數事情,無論它們看起來多么不尋常。?FromCatherine'sinitialdisappointmenttoherfinalrealizationofselfworth,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofpersonalgrowth,thepoweroffamilysupport,andtheunwaveringbeliefthateachofushassomethingspecialtooffer,waitingtobediscoveredandcelebrated.?從Catherine最初的失望到她最終實現自我價值,這個故事體現了個人成長的本質、家庭支持的力量,以及堅定的信念,即我們每個人都有特別之處,等待被發現和贊美。?寫作示范?示范一?“Happybirthday!”yelledthechildrenastheyrushedintoGrandma’shouse.Theroomwasablazewithcolorfuldecorations,andthedeliciousaromaofthecakewaftedthroughtheair.Sylvia'scookieswerearrangedneatlyonaplate,lookinglikelittleworksofart.Anne'sscarfwasadmiredbyeveryoneforitsintricateknitting.Catherine,clutchingtheshoebox,feltaknotinherstomach.Shewatchedasothersshowedtheirgifts,herheartpounding.?ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.“Andthisisaspecialgift,”shesaid,handingovertheshoebox.Grandmaopeneditwithcuriosity.Catherineexplainedthegameandthelistofherabilities.AsGrandmaread,shesmiledwidely.“Catherine,thisisamazing.Itshowsyourgrowthanduniqueness.I'msoproud.”Catherine'sfacelitup.Sherealizedthatherselfawarenesswasawonderfulpresent,notjustforGrandmabutforherselftoo.Thisexperiencetaughthertovalueherindividuality.?示范二?“Happybirthday!”thechildrenshoutedinunisonwhentheyarrivedatGrandma’s.Thelivingroomwasawonderlandofballoonsandstreamers.Sylviaproudlypresentedherperfectlybakedcookies,andAnneflauntedhersoftknittedscarf.Catherinestoodabitaside,herhandsfirmlyontheshoebox.Thepraisefortheothergiftsmadeherevenmorenervous.?ThenCatherinegavehercardtoGrandma.“Grandma,Ihavesomethingdifferent,”shesaid,offeringtheshoebox.Grandmalookedintrigued.Catherinetoldheraboutthefeelgoodshoeboxandthethingsshecoulddo.Grandma'seyeswelledupwithprideassheread.“Thisisthebestgift,Catherine.Itshowshowfaryou'vee.”Catherinebeamed,filledwithanewsenseofselfconfidence.Sheunderstoodthatbeingtruetoherselfandknowingherabilitieswasthemostpreciousgiftofall,alessonshewouldcherishforever.【答案】“Happybirthday!”yelled(歡呼)thechildrenwhentheyarrivedatGrandma’shouse.“webroughtyoucookies.Wemadethembymyself.”saidSylvia.“wonderful”saidGrandm.Meanwhile,Annequietlytookoutthescarfsheknittedforgrandma.Whengrandmasawit,herfaceshowedappreciationandsaidproudly,"mybab
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