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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。AmidthebusyNewYorkCitystreets,acuriouspuppymakesaconnectionwithanadopterfollowingnotjustone,buttwochancemeetings.JayandherhusbandRudy,formerNewYorkerslivinginIllinois(伊利諾斯州),hadlongdreamedofadoptingadog.DuringtheirdecadeinNewYork,busyworkschedulesalwaysdelayedtheirplans.JayespeciallymissedherchildhoodGermanshepherd(牧羊犬)andlongedforthatloyalcompanionshipagain.Fastforwardtothesummerof2021.JayhadstartedanewremotejobfromIllinois,andwhenherNewYork-basedcompanyaskedhertoreturntothecorporateofficesfortraining.LittledidsheandRudyknowthatfatehadaheartwarmingsurpriseinstore.Aroundthesametime,anadorablepuppynamedPicklewastransportedtoananimalshelter---BestFriendsinNewYork.Oneevening,asthecouplewasdiningoutdoors,PicklewasoutonawalkwithaBestFriendsvolunteer.Jay'seyescaughtaglimpseofthepuppyfromadistance,andasparkofcuriosityawakenedwithinher.Pickle,afive-month-oldshepherdmix,wasavisionofcuteness,hertailwaggingwithexcitementandhereyessparklingwithcuriosityandfriendliness.Theyinstantlyfellinlovewithher.AfteralltheyearsoftalkingaboutadoptingaGermanshepherd,herecomesPickle,whenJayleastexpectedit.Jayreachedout,herfingersgentlystrokingPickle'ssoftfur.Thoughtsofadoptionflashedthroughhermind,butthedistancetotheirhomeinIllinoisseemedlikeanunconquerableobstacle.Jaysighed,“It'sfate,”Jaymurmuredtoherself,herheartheavywithlonging.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thefollowingday,thecouplespottedafamiliarsceneonacrowdedstreet._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aweeklater,thecoupledrovebacktoNewYorktopickuptheirnewfamilymember.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續寫中需要回答的問題?WhatmadethecouplefinallydecidetoadoptPickle??Answer:SeeingPickleagainandthestrongbondbetweenJayandPickle,alongwiththeshelterstaff'sassuranceoftransportation,madethemdecidetoadopt.?HowdidthecouplefeelwhentheysawPickleforthesecondtime??Answer:JaywasextremelyexcitedandRudyrealizedtheycouldn'tmissthechance,sotheywerebothdetermined.?WhatdidthecoupledoafterseeingPicklethesecondtime??Answer:Theyinquiredabouttheadoptionprocess.?HowdidPicklereactwhenthecouplecametopickherup??Answer:Sheboundedtowardsthemjoyouslywithhertailwaggingvigorously.?Whatwastheresultoftheadoption??Answer:Picklebecameanimportantpartoftheirfamily,bringingloveandlaughter,andfulfillingJay'sdream.?故事主旨?Thestoryshowsthatfateoftenbringsunexpectedjoys,andsometimes,ourlong-awaiteddreamscancometrueinthemostunexpectedways.Itemphasizesthepowerofconnectionbetweenhumansandanimalsandtheimportanceofseizingopportunitiesforhappiness.?故事山?Beginning:JayandRudyhadlongwantedadogbutweredelayedbywork.In2021,JayhadtogotoNewYorkfortraining,andPicklewasatananimalshelterthere.?RisingAction:JayandRudysawPicklewhilediningoutdoorsandfellinlovewithher,butthedistancetoIllinoisseemedlikeaproblem.?Climax:TheysawPickleagainonthestreet,decidedtoinquireaboutadoption,andtheshelterstaffwashelpful.?FallingAction:ThecoupledrovebacktoNewYorktopickupPickle.?Ending:Picklebecameanessentialpartoftheirfamily,fulfillingJay'sdream.?故事發展線索?JayandRudy'slong-standingdesireforadogleadsthemtoNewYorkwheretheyencounterPickle.Thefirstmeetingcreatesaconnectionbutthedistanceisahurdle.Thesecondmeetingstrengthenstheirdetermination,leadingtotheadoptionprocessandfinally,Picklejoiningtheirfamily.?情感線索?JayandRudystartwithalongingforadog.TheyfeelexcitedandinlovewhentheyfirstseePicklebutthendisappointedduetothedistance.Thesecondmeetingreignitestheirhope,andfinally,theyfeeljoyandfulfillmentwhenPicklebecomespartoftheirfamily.?續寫布局與框架?Thefirstparagraphcontinuesthestoryfromthesecondencounter,focusingonhowthecoupleovercomesthedistanceobstaclethroughtheshelter'shelp.Thesecondparagraphdescribestheadoptionprocessandthehappyending,withPicklebecomingafamilymember.?續寫注意事項?承接原文:Keepthecharacters'personalitiesconsistent.JayandRudy'slovefordogsandtheirinitialhesitationduetodistanceshouldbemaintained.?整體設計:Ensuretheflowofthestory.Thedecision-makingprocessforadoptionandtheactionstakenshouldseemnatural.?巧妙設計:UsedetailslikePickle'senthusiasticreactionstomakethestorymoreengaging.?高分語句?呼應原文:“Jayscoopedherup,tearsofjoyinhereyes.”ThisechoesJay'sinitiallongingforadogandheremotionalconnectionwithPickle.?高級句型:“TherewasPickleagain,thistimebeingledbyadifferentvolunteer.”(usingthepresentparticiplepassiveform)?主題表達&意義延伸?直接引語點明主旨:“Fromthatdayon,Picklebecameanessentialpartoftheirfamily,fillingtheirhomewithloveandlaughter,andfulfillingJay'slong-awaiteddreamofhavingaloyalcaninecompanion.”Thisdirectlyshowshowfatebroughthappinessandfulfillment.?促成轉變,引發感悟:Thecouple'sinitialhesitationduetodistanceandtheireventualdecisiontoadoptdespiteitcanmakereadersrealizethatsometimes,weshouldtakerisksforthethingswetrulywant.?借象征物點明主旨:Pickle,thepuppy,canbeseenasasymbolofhopeandunexpectedjoythatcameintotheirlives,highlightingthethemeoffateandhappiness.?學生寫作示范?Thefollowingday,thecouplespottedafamiliarsceneonacrowdedstreet.ItwasPickle,walkingbesideavolunteerwiththatsamelivelygait.Jay'seyeslitup,andwithouthesitation,sherantowardsthepuppy.Pickle,asifsensingJay'spresence,barkedexcitedlyandstrainedattheleash.Rudy,observingthescene,knewthatthiswasmorethanjustacoincidence.Theystartedaconversationwiththevolunteer,expressingtheirdeepinterestinadoption.Thevolunteer,understandingtheirsituation,providedthemwithcontactinformationoftheshelter'sadoptioncoordinator.?Aweeklater,thecoupledrovebacktoNewYorktopickuptheirnewfamilymember.Astheyenteredtheshelter,Pickle'searsperkedup,andsherecognizedtheminstantly.ShejumpedintoJay'sarms,coveringherfacewithlicks.Theadoptionprocesswassmooth,andsoon,theywereontheirwaybackhome.Inthecar,Picklenestledbetweenthem,lookingathernewparentswithadoringeyes.TheirhomeinIllinoiswasnowfilledwiththesoundsofahappypuppy,andJay'slong-cherisheddreamhadfinallycometrue.參考答案Thefollowingday,thecouplespottedafamiliarsceneonacrowdedstreet.TherewasPickleagain,thistimebeingledbyadifferentvolunteer.Jay'sheartskippedabeat.Sherushedover,andPicklerecognizedherimmediately,jumpingupandlicki
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