ReadingforwritingUnit4ADVERSITYANDCOURAGELearnaboutoptimismandperseveranceplannedtomaketheirfirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.Unfortunately,theirvoyagedidnotgosmoothly.gotstuckintheiceleftElephantIslandforhelpabandonedtheshipandcampedontheicestayedontheislandRevision：Retellthestoryaccordingtothepictures.Watchthedocumentary(紀(jì)錄片)tolearnwhatthe22crewmemberssufferedonElephantIsland.WhatproblemswouldthepeopleremainingonElephantIslandfaceInaword,theymightsufferalotphysicallyandmentally.Thecrewmembersmightstruggle

withkeepingwarmintheterrible

conditions.Theyalsowouldhavefound

ithardtofindfoodandmakefire.Theice

wouldhavebeenmovingandbreaking

too,whichwouldbeverydangerous.whathadtheysufferedWhatdoyouthinkwasthebiggestchallengeforthemProbably,thementalstruggleswouldbethebiggestchallenge.HowlongdoyouthinktheyhadstayedontheislandMaybetheywouldremainontheislandforalongtimeforitwasabigundertakingtolookforrescue.extremeweather；coldnessloneliness；helplessnesshunger；thirst；illness......HowcouldthecrewcheerthemselvesupinsuchamiserableplaceonElephantIslandplayBanjoholdsomeactivitiesWeretheyfinallyrescuedShackletonwouldbe

successfulinrescuinghismen.Nowlet'sreadthememoirtoseewhatwouldhappentothem.TheRewardForPerseveranceAmonument(紀(jì)念碑)wasbuiltinhonorofShackletonandhiscrew.rewardAmemoirisanarrativewritten（記敘文）aboutanimportanteventinthe

author'slifethataffectedtheminsomeway.CharacteristicsofMemoirs:Amemory;adescriptionofatrue

pasteventWritteninthefirst

personRevealsthefeelingsofthewriterShowswhattheauthorlearnedfrom

theexperience回憶錄(memoir)一般指基于個(gè)人經(jīng)歷或觀察對(duì)人物、事件等的回顧和記錄。一般具有以下特點(diǎn):聚焦某個(gè)特定的人物、關(guān)系或事件；文風(fēng)具有親切感；一般有完整的故事主線；并非完整的生平記錄，而是一些特定的記憶片段描述；是作者的個(gè)人敘事，故事性大于細(xì)節(jié)的準(zhǔn)確性。Skimthetextandmatcheachparagraphwithitsmainidea.

Para1Para6Para2Para3Para4Para5Foodwasaproblembecauseofnofruitorvegetablesontheisland.Theytriedtheirbesttostayalive.Theintroductiontowhatmightmakethemill.WhattheauthorthoughtofafterShackletonleft.Whenrescued,theyfeltjoyfulandrelieved.Itwastheirdisciplineandteamspiritthatmadethemgothroughthefourmonths.Part1________Part2________

Part3________

Part4________A.ProblemstheyfacedB.BackgroundofthestoryC.Theresult:theywerefinallyrescuedD.Thingsthathelpedthemtacklethe

difficultiesPara.1Para.2~4Para.6Para.5Dividethepassageinto4partsandthenmatchthesubheadingswiththeparts.BADCWhat'sthemainideaofthememoirwherewhowhathowwhenOnthe_______Island,optimismandfaithinShackletonhelpedthe_____________whowereleftbehindtopersevereinovercoming_________andtillShackleton's_______came.ElephantcrewmembersadversityrescueTHEREWARDFORPERSEVERANCEWewatchedasShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfromElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedangeraheadofthem.WouldtheyeverreturntofindusWhatmighthappentothemWhatiftheyweredelayedWefeltsoaloneanddesperate.Butitwasnotforlong.Therewasnothinglikeagooddinnerandsomemusictocheerusup.堅(jiān)持不懈給我們的回報(bào)我們看著沙克爾頓和小船駛離了象島，不難想象他們前面會(huì)遇到什么危險(xiǎn)。他們還會(huì)回來(lái)找我們嗎？他們可能會(huì)發(fā)生什么事情？如果他們被耽擱了怎么辦？我們感到如此孤獨(dú)和絕望。但這擔(dān)心并沒(méi)持續(xù)太長(zhǎng)時(shí)間，沒(méi)有什么比得上一頓好飯和一點(diǎn)音樂(lè)能使我們振奮起來(lái)了。Para1THEREWARDFORPERSEVERANCEWewatchedasShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfromElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedangeraheadofthem.WouldtheyeverreturntofindusWhatmighthappentothemWhatiftheyweredelayedWefeltsoaloneanddesperate.Butitwasnotforlong.Therewasnothinglikeagooddinnerandsomemusictocheerusup.Para1HowdidtheyfeelwhenShackletonandhisboatlefttheislandsoalone

anddesperate.使某人振作起來(lái)worried

Lifefellintoaregularpattern.Stayingalivetookallourtimeandenergy.Forexampleweneededwater,andElephantIslandhadnone.Wefoundthatwecouldmelticefromtheoceananddrinkthewaterfromit.ButhowcouldwemakefireTherewerenotreesgrowingonAntarcticaandnooil,sotheonlyfuelwecouldusewasanimalfat.Thisgaveoffoily,blacksmoke,butitstayedburningeveninstrongwinds.生活陷入了某種規(guī)律。活下去耗費(fèi)了我們所有的時(shí)間和精力。例如，我們需要喝水，而象島卻沒(méi)有水。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)我們可以融化海洋里的冰來(lái)喝水，但我們?cè)趺瓷鹉兀磕蠘O洲沒(méi)有樹(shù)木生長(zhǎng)，也沒(méi)有石油，所以我們唯一能使用的燃料就是動(dòng)物脂肪。它釋放出油乎乎的黑煙，但即使在大風(fēng)中它也會(huì)燃燒。Theytriedtheirbesttostayalive.Para2Foodwasalsoaproblem,aswedidnotfindanyvegetablesorfruitontheisland.Oneofourgroupmembers,LionelGreenstreet,notedinhisdiaryabouthowboredhewaswiththemeals:"Thefoodnowisprettywellallmeatofseacreatures."Ifitweren'tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.

Asachef,itwasmydutytocook,soItriedtovarythemealsinwhateverwayIcould.Butitwasdifficult.

食物也是個(gè)問(wèn)題，因?yàn)槲覀冊(cè)趰u上沒(méi)有找到任何蔬菜和水果，我們小組的一名成員萊昂內(nèi)爾·格林斯特里特在他的日記中記錄了他對(duì)這些食物的厭倦：“現(xiàn)在的食物幾乎全是海洋生物的肉。”如果沒(méi)有海洋動(dòng)物，我們都會(huì)餓死。作為一名廚師，做飯是我的職責(zé)，所以我盡量用任何我能想到的方法來(lái)使食物多樣化，不過(guò)這很困難。Para3Foodwasaproblembecauseofnofruitorvegetablesontheisland.

Wehadtobecarefulnottogooutsidetoooften,asthechangingtemperaturescouldmakeusill.Itwasalmostasdangeroustobecometoohotfromwearingtoomanyclothesastobecometoocoldfromwearingtoofew.Thesweatcouldfreezeveryquickly.Manyofusalsobecameillfromtheblacksmokeoftheanimalfatweburntforourfires.Itdamagedoureyesandburntourlungs.

我們必須小心，不要常外出，因?yàn)樽兓療o(wú)常的氣溫會(huì)使我們生病。因穿太多衣服而太熱和穿太少衣服而太冷幾乎是同樣危險(xiǎn)的。汗水很快就會(huì)結(jié)冰。我們?cè)S多人也因?yàn)槿紵齽?dòng)物脂肪產(chǎn)生的黑煙而病了，他損害了我們的眼睛，灼傷了我們的肺。

Para4Theintroductiontowhatmightmakethemill.ProblemstheyfacedNofireNowaterLackoffoodIllnessDrinkingwaterfrom______icenottogo________Eatingmeatof____________Using__________

asthefuelSolutionsPart2meltedanimalfatseaanimalsoutside

Thetwenty-twoofuslivedlikethisinthecoldforfourmonths.Ourdisciplineandteamspiritkeptusoptimisticandhelpedusdealwithourfearsinapositiveandsuccessfulway.Wealsocelebratedourbirthdays,festivals,andeventhetimeswhenwecaughtaseaanimal.Thiswasan

episode

inmylifethatIwouldneverforget.

我們二十二個(gè)人就這樣在寒冷中生活了四個(gè)月，我們的紀(jì)律和團(tuán)隊(duì)精神使我們保持樂(lè)觀，并幫助我們以積極和成功的方式應(yīng)對(duì)我們的恐懼。我們也慶祝我們的生日、節(jié)日，甚至當(dāng)我們抓住一個(gè)海洋動(dòng)物的時(shí)候也慶祝一下。這是我一生中永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記的一段經(jīng)歷。

Para5Itwastheirdisciplineandteamspiritthatmadethemgothroughthefourmonths.

Whenwewerefinallyrescued,wefeltsuchreliefandjoythatmanyofuscouldnothideourtears.Wewereatlastfreetogohometowarmbeds,goodfood,andthecareofourfamilyandfriends.OuroptimismandfaithinShackletonhadhelpeduspersevereinstayingalive.Andhepaidusbackbyhis

commitment

tosaveusfromaslowbutpainfuldeath.

當(dāng)我們最終獲救時(shí)，我們感到如釋重負(fù)，許多人都喜極而泣。我們終于可以解脫回家了，享受溫暖的床，好吃的食物，還有家人和朋友的關(guān)心。我們的樂(lè)觀和對(duì)沙卡爾頓的信任幫助我們堅(jiān)持活了下來(lái)。他回報(bào)了我們，實(shí)現(xiàn)了他的承諾，把我們從緩慢而痛苦的死亡中救了出來(lái)。

Para6Whenrescued,theyfeltjoyfulandrelieved.Whathelpedtheirsurvival_______________inShackletonShackleton’s____________tosavethem_____________instayingalive

,

,and

ofbirthdays,festivals,andsmallachievementsdisciplineteamspiritcelebrationoptimism&faithperseverancecommitmentResult:________________________Theywerefinallyrescued.Part3&4Whatwerethekeyreasonsforthecrewmembers’survivalItwas

and

thathadhelpedthempersevereinstayingalive.theiroptimismfaithinShackletonTheRewardForPerseverancerewardbeingrescued,survival,learn

beingoptimisticwheninadversityandhavefaithinpartners,haveanunforgettableexperience,.Backgroundofthestory_________________________leftElephantIslandto____________whiletheothers______ontheisland.Problemstheyfaced_________________________________________________________icefromtheoceantheonlyfueltheycouldusewas__________variedthemealsof_________nottogo_______Thingsthathelped________,__________and__________ofbirthday,festivals,andsmallachievements.Result:_______________________.SolutionsShackletonandfivememberslookforrescuestayedgotdrinkingwatermadefirefoodproblemillnessmeltedanimalfatseaanimalsoutsidedisciplineteamspiritcelebrationTheywerefinallyrescuedPlotlineHowwouldyoudescribeShackleton？ShackletoncalmwiseselflessresponsiblefearlessgenuinepersistentdeterminedoptimisticShackletonisacalm,wise,selfless,responsible,fearless,genuine,persistent,determined,optimisticleaderandexplorer.Thesequalitiesmadehiscrewmemberstrusthimbecausetheyknewhewouldn’tabandonhismenontheislandandwouldriskhisliferescuingthem.keepdisciplineteamspirittheresolvetolivefaithinsb./one’scommitmentperseverance/endurance……makeeffortstoovercomedifficultiesWhatcanwelearnfromthewholestorytherewardforperseverancesailawayfrom......aloneanddesperateforlongcheersbupfallintoaregularpatterntakeallourtimeandenergymelticefromtheoceanmakefiretheonlyfuelwecouldusestayburninginstrongwindsbeboredwith......prettywellkeywords,phrasesandsentencepatterns.

1.鍥而不舍的回報(bào)2.駛離3.孤獨(dú)和絕望4.很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間5.使某人振作起來(lái)6.轉(zhuǎn)入常規(guī)7.耗費(fèi)我們所有的時(shí)間和精力8.融化海洋中的冰塊9.生火10.我們唯一能能使用的燃料11.產(chǎn)生12.持續(xù)燃燒13.在強(qiáng)風(fēng)中14.對(duì)......感到厭煩15.幾乎，差不多，相當(dāng)好toooftenthechangingtemperaturefreezeveryquicklybecomeillfromdamageoureyesburnourlungsourdisciplineandteamspiritpaysbbackbyhiscommitmentdealwithourfearsinapositiveandsuccessfulwayanepisodeinmylifethatIwouldneverforgetfeelreliefandjoyhideourtearsoptimismandfaithinsbbefreetogohome

16.時(shí)常，經(jīng)常17.變幻的溫度18.很快結(jié)冰19.因?yàn)?.....而生病20.傷害我們的眼睛21.燒傷我們的肺22.紀(jì)律和團(tuán)隊(duì)合作精神23.通過(guò)承諾回報(bào)某人24.處理我們的恐懼25.以一種積極和成功的方式26.我生命中難忘的插曲27.釋然和欣喜28.隱藏我們的眼淚29.樂(lè)觀和對(duì)某人的信任30.自由地回家perseverein/withsb/sthpersevereindoingsthsaveusfromaslowbutpainfuldeathIfitweren’tforseaanimals,wewouldallstarve.There’snothinglike......Whatif......

31.對(duì)......堅(jiān)持不懈32.對(duì)做什么堅(jiān)持不懈33.把我們從一個(gè)緩慢而痛苦的死亡中拯救出來(lái)34.如果不是海洋生物，我們都會(huì)挨餓。

35.沒(méi)有比......更好的

36.要是......怎么辦Basedonthediaryentriesandthememoiryouhaveread,writeanessayaboutthestoryofShackletonandhismenontheshipEndurance.Writing本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是根據(jù)本單元的故事寫(xiě)一篇短評(píng)。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)引出故事(作品)AbriefintroductionAgeneralsummarymaincharacters/plots/endingYourpersonalviewfeeling/thought/whatyoulearnt注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1．確定文體：這是一篇短評(píng)，應(yīng)注意短評(píng)的常規(guī)格式、結(jié)構(gòu)與規(guī)范表達(dá)。2．主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。3．主體人稱：由于是寫(xiě)一篇短評(píng)，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第三人稱為主。AbriefintroductionIhavereadanicestoryandI'dliketoshareitwithyou.Letmeintroduceaninterestingstorywhichissetin...Thisisastoryconcernedwith...Thestorytakesplacein...(地點(diǎn)/時(shí)間)Thisstoryisbasedonthetrueexperienceof...Thenovelshareswithusatouchinglovestorybetween...and...引出作品我讀了一個(gè)很好的故事，想把它和你分享一下。我來(lái)介紹一部有趣的故事，這個(gè)故事以……為背景。這是一個(gè)關(guān)于...的故事。故事發(fā)生在...這個(gè)故事是根據(jù)...的真實(shí)經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)的。小說(shuō)與我們講述了...和...的感人愛(ài)情故事Abriefintroduction

Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake

thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.Ageneralsummary中段：介紹這個(gè)故事的主要內(nèi)容、情節(jié)、主要人物等介紹作品（故事內(nèi)容）

歐內(nèi)斯特·沙克爾頓和他的船員們登上了名字為“堅(jiān)忍”號(hào)的大船。不幸的是，途中“堅(jiān)忍”號(hào)被冰塊困住，沉進(jìn)了大洋中。在放棄那艘船后，他們逃到了大象島上。沙克爾頓承諾會(huì)救他們,因此他決定去尋求他人的幫助。盡管他們陷入了恐慌，遇到了許多困難，但船員們卻設(shè)法活了下來(lái)。1.歐內(nèi)斯特·沙克爾頓和他的船員們登上了名字為“堅(jiān)忍”號(hào)的大船。(aboard；Endurance)_________________________________________________________________2.不幸的是，途中“堅(jiān)忍”號(hào)被冰塊困住，沉進(jìn)了大洋中。(unfortunately；be/becomestuckin；sinkinto)_________________________________________________________________3.在放棄那艘船后，他們逃到了大象島上。(abandon；escape)_________________________________________________________________ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipwhosename

wasEndurance.Unfortunately，onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheiceandsankintotheocean.Aftertheyhadabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Rewritethesentenceswithnon-predicateverbsErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamed

Endurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.沙克爾頓承諾會(huì)救他們,因此他決定去尋求他人的幫助。(commitment；resolve;turntosbforhelp)Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp盡管他們陷入了恐慌，遇到了許多困難，但船員們卻設(shè)法活了下來(lái)。(getintopanic,therebe;managetosurvive)Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp.Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.Yourpersonalviewfeeling/thought/whatyoulearntUsefulexpressions:Whatimpressedmewasthat...Itwastheir...spiritsthat...Iwasdeeplymoved/inspiredby...Allinall,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,...Weshouldembracepositiveattitudesandbehaveconfidently.Onlythroughpersistentpursuitcanwe....

我被他們之間的關(guān)心和愛(ài)深深地感動(dòng)了，也被他們面對(duì)困難的忍耐和毅力所鼓舞。總之，我從這個(gè)鼓舞人心的故事中學(xué)到了重要的一課。那就是，無(wú)論遇到什么困難，都要積極面對(duì)，決不放棄。我被他們之間的關(guān)心和愛(ài)深深地感動(dòng)了，也被他們面對(duì)困難的忍耐和毅力所鼓舞。(move;concern;inspire;infaceof)

IwasdeeplymovedbythegenuineconcernandlovebetweenthemandI’malsoinspiredbytheirenduranceandperseveranceinfaceofdifficulties.總之，我從這個(gè)鼓舞人心的故事中學(xué)到了重要的一課(inspiring;encouraging)。Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.那就是，無(wú)論遇到什么困難，都要積極面對(duì)，決不放棄。(thatis;whatever;)Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,facethempositivelyandnevergiveup.IwasdeeplymovedbytheconcernandlovebetweenthemandI’malsoinspiredbytheirenduranceandperseveranceinfaceofdifficulties.Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,facethempositivelyandnevergiveup.

我最喜歡這個(gè)故事的地方是，雖然他們的探險(xiǎn)沒(méi)有達(dá)到目的，但也沒(méi)有造成本來(lái)可以造成的災(zāi)難。這要?dú)w功于沙克爾頓面對(duì)逆境的勇氣和船員們?cè)谶@么長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間里生存下來(lái)的耐力和毅力。總之，我從這個(gè)鼓舞人心的故事中學(xué)到了重要的一課。那就是，無(wú)論遇到什么困難，都不要絕望。我最喜歡這個(gè)故事的地方是，雖然他們的探險(xiǎn)沒(méi)有達(dá)到目的，但也沒(méi)有造成本來(lái)可以造成的災(zāi)難。(what主從；that表從failindoing;)WhatIlikemostaboutthisstoryisthatalthoughtheirexpeditionfailedinachievingitsgoal,itwasnotthedisasteritcouldhavebeen.這要?dú)w功于沙克爾頓面對(duì)逆境的勇氣和船員們?cè)谶@么長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間里生存下來(lái)的耐力和毅力。(oweto/bedueto/;adversity;endurance;perseverance;survive)Thisowedto/wasduetoShackleton’scourageinfacingadversityandthecrew’senduranceandperseveranceinsurvivingforsolong.總之，我從這個(gè)鼓舞人心的故事中學(xué)到了重要的一課。那就是，無(wú)論遇到什么困難，都不要絕望。(abandononeselftodespair.)

Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,neverabandonourselvestodespair.SampleWriting1Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake

thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp.Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.WhatIlikemostaboutthisstoryisthatalthoughtheirexpeditionfailedinachievingitsgoal,itwasnotthedisasteritcouldhavebeen.ThiswasduetoShackleton’scourageinfacingadversityandthecrew’senduranceandperseveranceinsurvivingforsolong.Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,neverabandonourselvestodespair.Thisstoryisaboutthe1914-1916expeditionbyEarnestShackletontomake

thefirstlandcrossingofAntarctica.ErnestShackletonandhiscrewwentaboardtheshipnamedEndurance.Unfortunately,onthewayEndurancebecamestuckintheice,sinkingintotheocean.Havingabandonedtheship，theyescapedtoElephantIsland.Shackletonmadeacommitmenttosavethem,soheresolvedtoturntoothersforhelp.Althoughtheygotintoapanicandthereweremanydifficulties,thecrewmanagedtosurvive.

IwasdeeplymovedbytheconcernandlovebetweenthemandI’malsoinspiredbytheirenduranceandperseveranceinfaceofdifficulties.Inaword,Ihavelearnedanimportantlessonfromtheinspiringstory.Thatis,whateverdifficultieswemeet,facethempositivelyandnevergiveup._________________________(鍥而不舍的回報(bào))Wewatched____ShackletonandtheboatsailedawayfromElephantIsland.Itwaseasytoimaginethedanger________(在…前面)them.WouldtheyeverreturntofindusWhatmighthappen______them___________(要是...怎么辦)theyweredelayedWe__________________________(感到如此孤獨(dú)和絕望)But___________________(時(shí)間沒(méi)過(guò)多久).______________________(沒(méi)有比...更好)agooddinnerandsomemusic_______________(讓我們振作起來(lái)).TheRewardofPerseverance

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