咨詢信【試題探究】假定你是李華,打算今年暑假去美國旅游。請你給TravelAmerica國際旅行社寫一封電子郵件進行咨詢,內容如下:1.請其推薦合適的旅游路線;2.請其告知相關的旅游費用。注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。Step1:精準審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時態一般現在時要點1.寫信目的2.咨詢的內容:旅游路線,旅游費用Step2:字斟句酌巧飾亮點要點1:我打算在美國住10天左右,希望能看一看那些獨特的自然風景,品味一下當地的風俗。一般表達:IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.句式升級(定語從句)IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.要點2:除此之外,我想了解路線的價格,包括所有旅游費用。一般表達:Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingexpenses.句式升級(分詞短語作定語)Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Step3:銜接過渡斐然成篇DearSir/Madam,I’mplanningtotraveltotheUSAinthecomingJuly.Therefore,I’mwritingtoinquireabouttravelroutesofyouragency.IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,duringwhichIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveatasteoflocalcustoms.So,couldyoupleaserecommendsomesuitabletravelroutes?Inaddition,I’dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,coveringallthetravelingexpenses.Areplyatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yours,LiHua【句式儲備】1.篇頭——開篇表明寫信目的IamLiHua,aChinesestudent,studyinginNewZealand.Iamwritingtoinquireaboutsomeinformationregarding/concerningtravel.我是李華,一名在新西蘭學習的中國學生。我寫信是想詢問一些關于旅行的信息。2.篇中——陳述要咨詢的內容①Firstofall,I’mtemptedtoknowthedeparturetimeandtravelingroute.首先,我很想知道出發時間和旅行路線。②Secondly,howmuchdoIhavetopayforthetravel?其次,我需要支付多少旅費?③Thirdly,isthereanythingIshouldpayspecialattentionto?第三,有什么我應該特別注意的嗎?3.結尾——表感謝,盼回復①Iwouldbemuchappreciatedifyoucouldfurnishmewiththeaboveinformationandyoucancontactmevia1234456@df.erf.如果您能提供我上述信息,我將不勝感激,您可以通過1234456@df.erf與我聯系。②Thankyouandyourpromptreplywillbehighlyappreciated.謝謝你,如能及時回復我將不勝感激。【拓展儲備】假定你是李華,高考過后計劃暑假期間到美國去參加中美學生交流活動。請寫一封咨詢信,詢問相關事宜。內容包括:1.對申請者的相關要求;2.課程的相關事宜;3.住宿和吃飯的條件;4.需要做的相關準備。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,Iamveryinterestedintheexchangeprogramyouoffered.Iamwritingtoobtainsomemoredetailedinformationaboutit.Firstly,IjustgraduatedfromanordinaryhighschoolandIwonderwhatqualificationsarerequiredforapplicants.Secondly,ifadmitted,whatcoursesamIgoingtotake,anddoIneedtobuyanybooksaheadoftime?Inaddition,wouldyoubesokindtointroducetometheconditionsofboardandaccommodations?Bytheway,ifIneedtomakeanyotherpreparations,letmeknow,willyou?ThanksagainforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【要點精練】1．假如你是李華，一名高三學生，準備在畢業后參加英國牛津大學的暑期夏令營（OxfordSummerCamp2018）。請用英語寫一封電子郵件給相關負責人Mr.William，說明自己的情況并咨詢相關事宜。注意：1.詞數100詞左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.郵件的開頭和結尾已經給出。DearMr.William,I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假設你是蘇華，上周創建了學校志愿者服務俱樂部，但成員不多。你決定寫個email給外教，咨詢如何進行一項系列廣告活動來招募俱樂部成員。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.信中不要出現自己真實的姓名和學校名稱；3.開頭語和結束語已寫好，不計入詞數。Dearsir，___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假如你是大學生李華，想利用假期時間打工掙錢。你對報紙上的廣告很感興趣。請你根據下面的廣告內容寫一封信應聘工作并詢問有關情況。字數100詞左右。TemporaryJobOfferMajorcateringCompanyhastemporaryjobsaschefs,waiters,kitchenstaffandEnglishsecretary.FormoreinformationwritetoMs.KateRees,17ParkEndSt._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假定你是李華，你校英語俱樂部將舉辦英語作文大賽。你有意參加，請你用英語給負責人Mr.White寫一封郵件，詢問相關信息。要點如下：1.報名時間及方式；2.需要提供的信息；3.費用及其他。注意：1.詞數100左右。2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：報名：signup_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David是中國功夫的愛好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市將舉辦一次國際功夫比賽。請你用英語給他寫封郵件，詢問他是否有興趣參加，要點包括:1.比賽的時間和地點2.比賽的目的3.參加比賽的益處注意:1.

詞數100左右；2.

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開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwillaccompanyyouduringthecompetition.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua6．假如你是學生李華。圣誕節即將到來，你們班決定本周五晚上慶祝一番，由你負責為此選定一個場所。MiracleInn的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但有一些具體信息不明確（如箭頭所指內容）。請根據你所做的Notes，給MiracleInn發一封電子郵件詢問有關情況。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearSir/Madam，Iamwritingformoreinformationabouttheserviceatyourinn._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua參考答案1．DearMr.William，I’mLiHua,aChinesestudent．HavinglongedforOxfordforalongtime,IreallywanttobepartoftheOxfordSummerCamp2018.Therefore,I’mwritingtointroducemyselfandaskseveralquestionsconcerned.I’malwaysanEnglish-loverandhavetakensomeoptionalcoursesrelatedtoEnglishliteratureandculture.SoI’mwonderingwhetherthereareanycoursesinthiscamp?Ifthereare,howmanycourseswillyouofferandwhatsubjectswilltheycover?Besides,canyougivemethescheduleofthesecoursestoseewhetherI’llhavetimetovisitotherplaces?Finally,doyouprovideaccommodationsduringtheSummerCamp?Areallthestudentslivingoncampusorwillyouarrangehome-stay?Thankyouinadvance!Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作分析】本文是一封電子郵件。假如你是李華，一名高三學生，準備在畢業后參加英國牛津大學的暑期夏令營（OxfordSummerCamp2018）。請用英語寫一封電子郵件給相關負責人Mr.William，說明自己的情況并咨詢相關事宜。寫作時要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態。根據提示充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態、語態的合理運用，主次分明，詳略得當，語言力求準確、簡潔。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。【亮點說明】本文是一封電子郵件。格式正確，內容符合要求，重點突出，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。現在分詞完成式做原因狀語；I’mwritingtointroducemyselfandaskseveralquestionsconcerned.過去分詞做后置定語；SoI’mwonderingwhetherthereareanycoursesinthiscamp?句中whether引導賓語從句；Ifthereare,howmanycourseswillyouofferandwhatsubjectswilltheycover?條件句和問句完美結合；句中一般疑問句使用巧妙，恰到好處；另外，Therefore,Besides,Finally,等的運用為文章增色添彩。2．Dearsir，I’mdelightedtotellyouanexcitingnewsthattheVoluntaryServiceClubofourschoolwassetuplastweek.Itsmainpurposeistoprovideanopportunityforstudentstoservethesocietybetterandknowmoreaboutthesociety．Itcanalsohelptodevelopourcooperativeability．Inordertohavemoremembers,Iplantoorganizesomeadvertisingactivitiestoattractmorestudents.Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.Theywillberequiredtodovoluntaryworkatweekendsorduringholidays.However,Ihavelittleexperienceinsuchadvertisingactivities,couldyouhelpmeandgivemesomeadviceaboutit?Iwillbeappreciativeitifyoucouldgivemeahand.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，咨詢外教如何進行一項系列廣告活動來招募學校志愿者服務俱樂部成員。【要點分析】第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態：根據提示，時態主要為一般現在時，也有部分一般過去時和一般將來時。結構：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。要求：1.上周學校創建了志愿者服務俱樂部2.

咨詢外教如何進行一項系列廣告活動來招募俱樂部成員。第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）bedelightedto;setup;

mainpurpose;cooperativeability;open-minded;bewillingto;voluntarywork;havelittleexperiencein;givesb.ahand;lookforwardto第三步：連詞成句1.I’mpleasedtotellyouanexcitingnewsthattheVoluntaryServiceClubofourschoolwassetuplastweek.2.Itsmainpurposeistoprovideanopportunityforstudentstoservethesocietybetterandknowmoreaboutthesociety．3.Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.4.Theywillberequiredtodovoluntaryworkatweekendsorduringholidays.5.Ihavelittleexperienceinsuchadvertisingactivities.6.Iwillbeappreciativeitifyoucouldgivemeahand.7.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結構順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補充關系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉折對比關系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，第五步：潤色修改范文內容完整，要點全面，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復合句，如：Studentswhoarehealthy,open-mindedandwillingtohelpothersarewelcometojoinourVoluntaryServiceClub.這句話運用了關系代詞who引導的定語從句；使用了一些固定詞組，如bedelightedto;setup;bewillingto等。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增色添彩。3．DearMs.Kate,I’mwritinginresponsetoyouradvertisementforatemporarypositionasawaiter.I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent.IwouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.IdonothaveanyexperiencebutIenjoyworkingwithpeopleandaminterestedinacareerinthecateringindustrywhenIleaveuniversity.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封信應聘工作并詢問有關情況。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累喜歡：like→enjoy感激的：thankful→grateful期待：expect→lookforwardto收到某人的來信：receivealetterfromsb.→hearfromsb.2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent.IwouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.拓展句：I’ma20-year-oldcollegestudent,who

wouldbeabletoworkduringJuneandJuly.[高分句型1]IdonothaveanyexperiencebutIenjoyworkingwithpeopleandaminterestedinacareerinthecateringindustrywhenIleaveuniversity.(我沒有任何經驗，但我喜歡與人打交道，并且對大學畢業后在餐飲行業發展很感興趣。)該句中“but”作為并列連詞連接前后分句；“when”引導時間狀語從句。[高分句型2]Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldsendmemoreinformationaboutthepostavailable.(如果您能寄給我更多關于這個職位的信息，我將非常感激。)該句中“if”引導條件狀語從句。4．DearMr.White，MynameisLiHua.I'velearnedthatacompetitionfortheEnglishWritingwillbeheldbytheEnglishClub.I'mwritingtoapplyfortheinformationaboutit.Wouldyoubekindenoughtotellmewhenandhowtosignup?Whatkindsofpersonalinformationshouldbeprovidedtoenterthecontest?What’smore,tobefrank，howmuchshouldIpayforit?Iamexpectingyourreply.Thanksalot!SincerelyLiHua【分析】本文是一篇應用文中的書信，同時也是一篇開放性書面表達，要求考生把自己當成李華，給朋友Mr.White寫信，咨詢英語俱樂部舉辦的作文大賽的具體信息。要求考生自行組織要點，總體難度較大。【寫作分析】第1步：審題。根據文字提示可知本文是一篇應用文，要求考生寫信咨詢英語作文大賽的具體信息。全文以一般現在時和第一人稱為主。第2步：組織要點。1.報名時間及方式；2.需要提供的信息；3.費用及其他。第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞組進行遣詞造句，關鍵詞為signup、applyfor等。同時注意書信的慣用語和習慣表達。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。本篇范文結構完美，條理清晰。范文時態和人稱運用準確，涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點，且有適當的個人發揮。考生運用了多樣式的句型結構，整篇文章富有變化并不死板。使用了較多的高級詞匯，如signup、applyfor等；同時文章還運用了一些串聯成分，如what’smore，這些串聯詞讓各個要點更為緊密地結合在一起。以上寫作技巧的運用提升了文章的層次，顯示了考生具有很強的駕馭語言的能力。5．DearDavid，Howiseverythinggoing?

I'mwritingtotellyouthatthe12thInternationalKungFuCompetitionwillbeheldinDaqingfromJuly20thto24thatDaqingGymnasium.Asweknow,kungfuisanimportantpartofChinesecultureandhasbecomeincreasinglypopularathomeandabroad.Thiseventaimstofurtherexpandtheinfluenceofkungfuworldwide.Theorganizershopepeoplewillfeelthecharmofkungfuinthiscompetition.Iknowyouarekungfuamateur.Areyouinterestedintakingpartintheevent?Youwillbeabletoappreciatehigh-levelkungfuperformancesandcommunicatewithpeoplesharingthesameinterestfromallovertheworld.Youcanalsoimproveyourtechniques.Iwillaccompanyyouduringthecompetition.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【分析】這是一篇應用文寫作。【寫作分析】第1步：根據提示可知，要求寫一封郵件；假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞朋友David是中國功夫的愛好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市將舉辦一次國際功夫比賽。請你用英語給他寫封郵件，詢問他是否有興趣參加，要點包括:1.比賽的時間和地點；2.比賽的目的；3.參加比賽的益處第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：InternationalKungFuCompetition（國際功夫比賽），Gymnasium（體育館），athomeandabroad（國內外），furtherexpand（進一步擴大）；amateur（業余愛好者）等。第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態問題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。范文內容