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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。ThereweremanyembarrassingtimesandsituationswhenIwasinprimaryschool.IvividlyrememberamomentthatIstillregrettothisday.Duringmychildhood,animportantpartofmytimewasspentonmycollectionofNationalGeographicmagazines.Eachyearonmybirthday,mymotherwouldgiftmeanewmagazinetoaddtomygrowingcollection,whichItreasuredverymuch.Oneday,whenIwasseven,Iranacrossapictureofabolognatree.However,Ididn’tactuallyreadthearticleaboutthetree.IjustthoughtIdiscoveredthesourceofbolognasandwiches!LittledidIknowthatthisnewfoundknowledgewouldcomebacktotroublemeinthefuture.Notlongafter,IfoundanopportunitytoshowmyrichknowledgeandprovetomyclassmatesthatIwasindeedasmartkid.Duringaclassroomdiscussionaboutunusualthings,Itookthemomenttoconfidentlystandupinfrontofthewholeclass.Withanairofauthority,Ideclared,"Itisawell-knownfactthatbolognasandwichescomefromthebolognatree."IdeeplybelievethatthedelicioussandwichesIhadtastedduringafamilyvacationtoItalygrowontrees.Thisextremelysillyopinionwasasourceofbothembarrassmentandfrustrationforme.However,myteacherMsMurphyatthismomentwaskindenoughtosmileandtellmethatmymisconception(錯誤想法)was“quiteimaginative”.Unfortunately,myclassmatesdidn’thavethesameopinion,astheylaughedloudlyanddeclaredthatmybeliefwas“thestupidestthingtheyhadeverheard”.Itwasamomentthatmademefeelfoolishandashamed.Forawhileafterthatincident,Iwasfilledwithfeelingsofself-doubtandinsecurity.Iwasashamedofmyinabilitytodistinguish(辨別)factfromimagination.Ifeltlikeaclown(小丑),thinkingthatmyclassmateswouldneverletmeforgetmyfoolishmistake.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Forthenextcoupleofweeks,Iwasdeterminedtoavoidanyfurtherembarrassment.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ibegantoshareinformationwithmyclassmatesagainandbecamemorecarefulabouttheinformation._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本主旨?文章講述作者小學時因將博洛尼亞三明治誤認為來自“博洛尼亞樹”而在課堂上出丑,之后陷入自我懷疑和不安的經歷。主旨圍繞作者因知識誤解產生的尷尬以及后續的心理變化展開。?詞匯積累?embarrassingadj.令人尷尬的?treasurev.珍視?misconceptionn.錯誤想法?insecurityn.不安?authorityn.權威,自信?distinguishv.辨別?frustrationn.沮喪?續寫分析?銜接句:第一段開頭“Forthenextcoupleofweeks,Iwasdeterminedtoavoidanyfurtherembarrassment.”承接上文作者出丑后的心理,開啟下文作者為避免尷尬所采取的行動。第二段開頭“Ibegantoshareinformationwithmyclassmatesagainandbecamemorecarefulabouttheinformation.”表明作者心態的轉變,從逃避到重新參與,可續寫轉變的原因及后續積極影響。?情節合理性:第一段可合理續寫作者在課堂上如何小心翼翼,比如不再主動發言,對不確定的知識閉口不談等。第二段可寫作者通過什么方式重新獲得自信,如認真查閱資料、請教老師,在合適的時機正確分享知識,得到同學認可。?情感鋪墊:前文作者充滿自我懷疑和羞恥感,第一段續寫應體現其小心翼翼、害怕犯錯的心理。第二段要展現作者逐漸克服心理障礙,重拾自信的過程。?情感走向?第一段情感基調是壓抑、小心翼翼,作者極力避免再次出丑。第二段情感逐漸轉向積極,作者克服心理陰影,重新找回自信和勇氣,變得更加成熟。?主題深化?通過作者從出丑后的逃避到重新積極面對,深化了成長過程中會犯錯,但應從錯誤中學習、克服困難,提升自我認知和能力的主題。?下水文一?Forthenextcoupleofweeks,Iwasdeterminedtoavoidanyfurtherembarrassment.Inclass,Iwouldlowermyhead,notdaringtomakeeyecontactwiththeteacher,letaloneraisemyhandtoanswerquestions.EvenwhenIwasquitesureabouttheanswer,thefearofmakinganotherfoolofmyselfheldmeback.Duringgroupdiscussions,Iwouldkeepsilent,onlylisteningtoothers'ideas.Iwasconstantlyonedge,worriedthatanywordoutofmymouthmightleadtoanotherhumiliatingsituation.?Ibegantoshareinformationwithmyclassmatesagainandbecamemorecarefulabouttheinformation.Oneday,ourteacheraskedaboutthelifecycleofabutterfly.RememberingthatIhadreadaboutitcarefullyinabook,Iraisedmyhandwithabitofhesitation.WhenIstartedtoexplain,myvoicewasalittleshakyatfirst.ButasIwenton,Igrewmoreconfident.Myclassmateslistenedattentivelyandnoddedinagreement.Afterclass,someofthemcametome,sayingthatmyexplanationwasveryclear.Fromthenon,IrealizedthataslongasIpreparedwell,Icouldshareknowledgewithoutfear.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatmistakesarestepping-stonestogrowth.?下水文二?Forthenextcoupleofweeks,Iwasdeterminedtoavoidanyfurtherembarrassment.Ibecameashadowintheclassroom,tryingmybesttoblendinandnotdrawanyattention.Irefusedtoparticipateinanyextracurricularactivitiesrelatedtoknowledgesharing,fearingthatIwouldexposemyignoranceoncemore.Whenevertherewasagroupproject,Iwouldtakeonthemostmenialtasks,justtostayawayfromsituationswhereImighthavetovoicemyopinions.?Ibegantoshareinformationwithmyclassmatesagainandbecamemorecarefulabouttheinformation.Oneevening,whiledoingmyhomework,Icameacrossaninterestingtopicaboutspaceexploration.Ispenthoursresearchingit,readingbooksandarticles.Thenextdayinclass,whentheteacherbroughtupthetopic,Isummonedupmycourageandstartedtotalk.Icouldseethesurpriseinmyclassmates'eyesatfirst,butasIcontinued,theirexpressionsturnedtoadmiration.Afterthat,Inolongersawmyselfasthefoolishkidwhomadeabigmistake.Instead,Isawmyselfassomeonewholearnedfromfailureandbecamewiser.Thisexperiencemademeunderstandthatembarrassmentisnottheend,butachancetostartanew.【答案】Forthenextcoupleofweeks,Iwasdeterminedtoavoidanyfurtherembarrassment.Irefusedtoopenthemagazinesandkeptmymouthshutduringclasses.IfeltlikeIwaswalkingoneggshells,constantlyworriedthatImightsaysomethingfoolish.Iwasafraidtosharemyopinionsoraskquestions.Asaresult,Ibecameincreasinglyisolated.Ididn’tparticipateinanyactivitiesthatmig
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