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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ShriekingToadandDancingAntKidsgotnicknamesatasummercamp,andmineisShriekingToad(尖叫的蛤蟆).IguessitwasmyfaultthatIcouldn'tgetacoolone.Abunchofuscamperswereonourfirstnaturewalk.Whenwebrokeforlunch,wesatdownonlogs.Iwasonmynutswhenatreefrogdroppedontomyshirtfromthebranchesabove.Ishrieked.ItwastotallyunconsciousandIdidn'tevenknowIcouldmakeasoundlikethat.MostkidsforgotaboutitexceptStan.WheneverIwalkedby,he'dshout,“ShriekingToad,showushowyoucanhop!”Icorrectedhimthatithadbeenaneasterngraytreefrog,notatoad,butthatjustmadethingsworse.Threedayslater,CounselorMattannouncedwewouldbepairedforatreasurehunt.Excitedwhispersspreadthroughthecamp.Butwhenheread“JayandStan”asateam,mynervesgotcompletelyfried.Stanshouted,“Great!ShriekingToad!”Thenhecalledtothegroup,andIwentredatwhatcameoutofhismouth.“Guys,ifmosquitoesarebuggingyou,askShriekingToadtoeatthem.Toadslovebugs!”Kidsroaredwithlaughter.Afteralltheteamswanderedoff,StanandIwerealone.ThenIhadagreatidea,surprisingmyselfthatIhadn'tthoughtofitearlier.Isuggestedwesplitupsoastohaveabetterchanceoffindingtreasures.“Yeah,I'dbetterdowhatI'mtoad(told).”Stanlaughedandsetoff.Tenminuteslater,Iheardsomethingthatremindedmeofmyselfafewdaysago.Irantowardthesound.IneverwouldhavebelieveditifIhadn'tseenitwithmyowneyes.Stanwasjumpingaroundnearamudpoollikeamonkey,shriekingandyellingsomethingthatsoundedjumpingaroundnearamudpoollikeamonkey,shriekingandyellingsomethingthatsoundedlike“Dance!Dance!”Seeinghimscratchingathisbodyandhittingathisclothesmademerealizewhathewasreallysaying:“Ants!Ants!”注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。IrushedtowardsStanandtriedtohelphim.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatnight,weallroutinelysataroundthecampfireandIsawStan'sworryasclearasdaylight.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在夏令營(yíng)中,孩子們都會(huì)有昵稱(chēng),“我”因?yàn)楸粯?shù)蛙掉到襯衫上時(shí)無(wú)意識(shí)地尖叫,被斯坦取名為“尖叫的蛤蟆”,并常借此取笑“我”。三天后,輔導(dǎo)員馬特宣布進(jìn)行尋寶活動(dòng),“我”和斯坦被分在一組,斯坦再次借此調(diào)侃“我”。分組后,“我”提議兩人分開(kāi)行動(dòng)以增加找到寶藏的幾率。十分鐘后,“我”聽(tīng)到類(lèi)似自己之前尖叫的聲音,跑過(guò)去發(fā)現(xiàn)斯坦在泥塘邊像猴子一樣亂跳,大喊著“螞蟻!螞蟻!”,原來(lái)他被螞蟻圍攻了。故事山分析開(kāi)端:夏令營(yíng)中“我”因被樹(shù)蛙?chē)樀郊饨蝎@得“尖叫的蛤蟆”這個(gè)不太好的昵稱(chēng),斯坦常借此取笑“我”,為故事埋下沖突伏筆。發(fā)展:尋寶分組,“我”和斯坦一組,斯坦繼續(xù)用昵稱(chēng)調(diào)侃“我”,沖突進(jìn)一步發(fā)展,“我”提議分開(kāi)行動(dòng),推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。高潮:“我”聽(tīng)到斯坦的尖叫,發(fā)現(xiàn)他被螞蟻圍攻,故事沖突達(dá)到頂點(diǎn),也是情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)鍵節(jié)點(diǎn)。結(jié)局(續(xù)寫(xiě)部分):“我”幫助斯坦擺脫螞蟻,兩人關(guān)系在后續(xù)相處中得到緩和,實(shí)現(xiàn)故事的和解與情感升華。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)昵稱(chēng)的由來(lái)伏筆:“我”因樹(shù)蛙受驚尖叫獲得“尖叫的蛤蟆”昵稱(chēng),斯坦借此嘲笑,為后續(xù)“我”對(duì)斯坦的態(tài)度以及兩人沖突做鋪墊。續(xù)寫(xiě)中“我”在斯坦尖叫時(shí),不計(jì)前嫌去幫助他,是對(duì)這一沖突的化解。斯坦的嘲笑伏筆:斯坦多次用“尖叫的蛤蟆”調(diào)侃“我”,使“我”感到尷尬和不滿(mǎn)。續(xù)寫(xiě)中斯坦被螞蟻圍攻尖叫,與“我”之前的遭遇相似,“我”的幫助回應(yīng)了之前的嘲笑,改變了兩人的關(guān)系。尋寶分組伏筆:“我”和斯坦被分在一組,讓兩人有更多相處機(jī)會(huì),為沖突升級(jí)和后續(xù)轉(zhuǎn)變創(chuàng)造條件。續(xù)寫(xiě)中兩人在尋寶過(guò)程中的互動(dòng),圍繞分組展開(kāi),推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展。“我”的提議伏筆:“我”提議分開(kāi)行動(dòng),使兩人分開(kāi),為斯坦遭遇螞蟻圍攻,“我”去救助提供情節(jié)發(fā)展空間。續(xù)寫(xiě)中“我”聽(tīng)到斯坦尖叫后跑去幫忙,是對(duì)這一伏筆的回應(yīng)。斯坦的尖叫伏筆:“我”聽(tīng)到斯坦類(lèi)似自己之前的尖叫,引出斯坦被螞蟻圍攻的情節(jié),是故事轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)鍵。續(xù)寫(xiě)中圍繞“我”如何幫助斯坦擺脫困境展開(kāi),回應(yīng)了這一尖叫引發(fā)的危機(jī)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段:詳細(xì)描述“我”幫助斯坦擺脫螞蟻的過(guò)程,如用樹(shù)枝幫他趕走螞蟻、帶他到安全地方清理身上螞蟻等,展現(xiàn)“我”的行動(dòng)和兩人互動(dòng),突出“我”不計(jì)前嫌的善良。第二段:描寫(xiě)晚上圍坐在篝火旁時(shí),斯坦因之前對(duì)“我”的嘲笑而感到擔(dān)憂(yōu),“我”通過(guò)言語(yǔ)或行動(dòng)化解他的擔(dān)憂(yōu),兩人關(guān)系得到緩和,體現(xiàn)寬容和友誼的力量,升華故事主題。情感線(xiàn)起初,“我”因斯坦的嘲笑而感到尷尬、不滿(mǎn),對(duì)他態(tài)度不佳。當(dāng)聽(tīng)到斯坦尖叫,發(fā)現(xiàn)他被螞蟻圍攻時(shí),“我”出于本能去幫助他,此時(shí)情感從厭惡轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)殛P(guān)心。晚上篝火旁,看到斯坦的擔(dān)憂(yōu),“我”心生憐憫,決定化解矛盾,情感進(jìn)一步升華,從對(duì)立走向和解,兩人建立起新的友好關(guān)系。故事線(xiàn)“我”在夏令營(yíng)因樹(shù)蛙尖叫獲得“尖叫的蛤蟆”昵稱(chēng),被斯坦嘲笑。尋寶活動(dòng)中“我”和斯坦被分在一組,斯坦繼續(xù)調(diào)侃“我”。“我”提議分開(kāi)行動(dòng),之后聽(tīng)到斯坦尖叫。“我”發(fā)現(xiàn)斯坦被螞蟻圍攻,前去幫助他。晚上圍坐在篝火旁,斯坦因之前行為而擔(dān)憂(yōu)。“我”化解斯坦的擔(dān)憂(yōu),兩人關(guān)系緩和。主旨升華句Inthefaceofothers'mockery,ourchoicetoshowkindnesscanturnhostilityintofriendship.面對(duì)他人的嘲笑,我們展現(xiàn)善意的選擇能夠?qū)骋廪D(zhuǎn)化為友誼。Truefriendshipisbornnotinperfectharmonybutinthemomentswhenwereachouttohelpthosewhooncehurtus.真正的友誼并非誕生于完美的和諧之中,而是在我們向曾經(jīng)傷害過(guò)我們的人伸出援手的時(shí)刻。Asmallactofforgivenessandassistancecanbridgethegapbetweenpeopleandcreateamoreharmoniousworld.一個(gè)小小的寬恕和幫助的舉動(dòng)能夠彌合人與人之間的差距,創(chuàng)造一個(gè)更加和諧的世界。Whenweputasideourgrudgesandofferahandintimesofneed,wenotonlysaveothersbutalsofindourownhumanity.當(dāng)我們放下怨恨,在他人需要時(shí)伸出援手,我們不僅拯救了別人,也發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己的人性。Thepowerofkindnessandunderstandingisfargreaterthanthestingofmockery,capableoftransformingrelationshipsandhearts.善良和理解的力量遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于嘲笑的刺痛,能夠改變關(guān)系和人心。寫(xiě)作示范一IrushedtowardsStanandtriedtohelphim.Igrabbedanearbybranchandstartedswattingtheantsoffhisclothes.“Staystill,Stan!Letmegettheseants.”Ishouted.Hewastoopanickedtolistenatfirst,butgraduallyhecalmeddownasIworkedtoremovetheants.Afterafewminutes,mostoftheantsweregone.Iledhimtoacleanareaandhelpedhimcheckforanyremainingants.Stanlookedatmewithgratitudeinhiseyes.“Thanks,Jay.I...I'msorryforallthethingsIsaid.”
Thatnight,weallroutinelysataroundthecampfireandIsawStan'sworryasclearasdaylight.Hekeptfidgeting,notmeetingmyeyes.Iwalkedoverandsatbesidehim.“Hey,Stan,forgetaboutit.We'recool.”Isaidwithasmile.Hisfacelitup.“Really?”heasked.Inodded.Fromthatdayon,thename“ShriekingToad”becameathingofthepast,replacedbyanewfoundfriendship.寫(xiě)作示范二IrushedtowardsStanandtriedtohelphim.Iquicklytookoffmyjacketandusedittobrushtheantsoffhisbody.“It'sokay,Stan.Juststaycalm.”Isoothedhim.Hewasbreathingheavily,hiseyeswidewithfear.AsIworked,Italkedtohimgently,tryingtoeasehispanic.Oncetheantsweremostlygone,Itookhimtoastreamandwewashedtheremainingantsanddirtoff.Stanwasquiet,butIcouldtellhewasgrateful.
Thatnight,weallroutinelysataroundthecampfireandIsawStan'sworryasclearasdaylight.Heseemedtobestrugglingwithsomething.Idecidedtobreaktheice.“Stan,todaycouldhavebeenadisaster,butwegotthroughittogether.Let'sjustforgetaboutthepast.”Isaidsincerely.Helookedatme,abitsurprisedatfirst,thenabigsmilespreadacrosshisface.“Yeah,thanks,Jay.You'rearealfriend.”Fromthenon,ourrelationshipchangedforthebetter,andthesummercampbecameamoreenjoyableexperienceforbothofus.【答案】Para1:IrushedtowardsStanandtriedtohelphim.Hewashittinghisclothesviolently.Ididwhatmustbedone.Ipulledhimintoamudpool.Hewasshockedatfirst,andthenhemusthaverealizedwhyIdidit.Theantsw
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