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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。OnSeptember15,1752,twelve-year-oldLewisHallamJr.stoodshakingonthestage,hisheartbeatingfastinhischest.Borninafamilythatworkedinthetheater,withhismotheranactressandhisfatherthemanageroftheirtheatercompany,Lewishadneverbeforefacedanaudience.Thetheater,onceawell-knownplaceduringtheday,nowseemedstrangeandscary,withthewallsmovinginthelightfromthehanginglamps,andtheairfullofthesmellsofsmoke,andthepressofthecrowd,alleyesfocusedonhim.TheHallamfamily’stheatercompanyhadmadethejourneyfromEnglandtoAmericaearlierthatyear,andtonight’sperformanceofShakespeare’sTheMerchantofVenicemarkedtheirfirstshowinthisnewworld.Lewiswasclearlyawareoftheimportanceofthisplay;theirjobsinthefuturedependedonhowwellthisshowdid.Hisfather,aclevermanager,thoughtthatbothLewisandhisbigsistershouldbegivenrolesintheplaybecausepeopleoftenclapped(鼓掌)forkids,eveniftheyweren’tgreatatacting.Thiswascalledthe“claptrick”.Hissisterhadalreadydoneherpartandpeoplelikeditalot,andnowitwasLewis’sturn.HewastoplayahelpertoPortia,themaingirlintheplay,withasinglelinetosay.HismomwasplayingPortia,sohesimplyhadtowalkuptoherasshehandedhimaletterandsay,“Madam,Igowithallconvenientspeed.”AsLewisstoodinthebrightlight,scared,hismomsmiledathim.Sheheldouttheletterandsaid,“Butgetyougone.Ishallbetherebeforeyou.”Itwashistimetotalk.Hemustspeaknow.Helookedattheaudience,histonguefeelingheavyinhismouth.Then,withoutsayinganything,hestartedcryingandranoffthestage.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Backstage,Lewiswashuggedbyhisworriedyetsupportivefather._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsLewisreturnedtothestage,hismotherofferedanencouragingnodtohim._________________________________________________________________________________________Lewis的舞臺經歷續寫續寫要點第一段:詳細描寫父親在后臺安慰Lewis的場景,父親的語言、動作要細膩,突出對Lewis的支持與信任。同時,深入刻畫Lewis在父親安慰下的心理變化,從極度緊張害怕到逐漸平復情緒,下定決心重新登臺。第二段:著重描繪Lewis再次登臺時的表現,他的神態、步伐、聲音等細節。描述觀眾的反應,以及Lewis在獲得掌聲后的內心感受,強調這次經歷對他成長的重要意義,如增強了自信,為未來面對挑戰奠定基礎。情感線Lewis在舞臺上忘詞哭泣跑下臺后,內心充滿了恐懼、羞愧和自我懷疑,覺得自己搞砸了一切。父親在后臺給予溫暖的擁抱和鼓勵,他的緊張情緒開始緩解,內心燃起一絲希望,逐漸有了再次嘗試的勇氣。再次登臺成功說出臺詞并收獲掌聲后,Lewis感到無比的自豪與成就感,自信心大增,對未來的表演充滿期待,克服了曾經的恐懼心理。故事線Lewis首次登臺表演,因極度緊張在舞臺上忘詞哭泣,逃離了舞臺。父親在后臺及時出現,用溫暖的擁抱和鼓勵的話語安慰Lewis,幫助他緩解緊張情緒。Lewis在父親的鼓勵下,決定克服恐懼,重新回到舞臺。Lewis再次登臺,鼓起勇氣,穩步走向母親,清晰有力地說出了臺詞。觀眾被Lewis的表現打動,爆發出熱烈的掌聲。Lewis通過這次經歷,不僅克服了內心的恐懼,還增強了自信,為未來的演藝之路積累了寶貴經驗。主旨升華句Fearisbutastepping-stonetogrowth,andwiththesupportoflovedones,wecanovercomeitandachievegreatthings.Inthefaceofstagefright,perseveranceandthebeliefoffamilycanturnamomentoffailureintoaremarkabletriumph.Thejourneyofconqueringfearonstageisnotonlyaboutdeliveringalinebutalsoaboutdiscoveringone'sinnerstrengthandpotential.Asinglesetbackonstagecanbetransformedintoapowerfullessonofcourageandself-belief,shapingone'sfutureendeavors.Withtheencouragementoffamily,thestagebecomesaplacenotjustforperformancebutforpersonalgrowthandtherealizationthatnofearisinsurmountable.寫作示范一Backstage,Lewiswashuggedbyhisworriedyetsupportivefather.Hisfatherwrappedhisarmsaroundhimtightly,saying,“Son,yourfirsttimeonstageisalwaystough.Everyonestumblesatthestart.You'repartofourtheaterfamily,andwe'veallbeenthere.Thisisjustablip.Yourtalentislikeahiddengem,andthisisyourchancetoshine.Theaudienceiswaitingtobeamazedbyyou.”Ashisfatherspoke,Lewisfeltaglimmerofhope.Hetookadeepbreath,histremblingsubsiding.Lookingintohisfather'seyes,henoddedfirmly,hisdeterminationtoredeemhimselfgrowingstronger.AsLewisreturnedtothestage,hismotherofferedanencouragingnodtohim.Hislegswereabitwobblyatfirst,butheforcedhimselftowalksteadily.Whenhismotherhandedhimtheletter,helockedhisgazeforward.Hisvoice,thoughabitshakyatthebeginning,grewstrongerashedeclared,“Madam,Igowithallconvenientspeed.”Theaudience,sensinghiseffortandcourage,burstintothunderousapplause.Lewisstoodthere,awidesmilespreadingacrosshisface.Thismomentwasnotjustaboutsayingaline;itwasaboutfacinghisfearshead-on.Fromthisdayforward,heknewthatnostagefrightcouldholdhimback,andhewasreadytoembraceeverynewrolewithopenarms.寫作示范二Backstage,Lewiswashuggedbyhisworriedyetsupportivefather.Hisfathergentlystrokedhishairandsaid,“Don'tworry,myboy.Everyonehastheirfirst-timejitters.Thisisjustasmallbumpintheroad.Youhavethebloodofactorsinyou,andyourtalentisundeniable.We'reallheretosupportyou.Theaudienceisrootingforyoutosucceed.Justtakeamoment,calmdown,andshowthemwhatyou'remadeof.”Lewislistenedintently,histearsslowingdown.Hetookafewdeepbreaths,feelinganewsenseofdeterminationwellingupinsidehim.Hewasreadytofacethestageagain.AsLewisreturnedtothestage,hismotherofferedanencouragingnodtohim.Witharesolutelookonhisface,hewalkedtowardsherwithpurpose.Whenshehandedhimtheletter,hetookitfirmly.Hisvoicerangoutclearandconfidentashesaid,“Madam,Igowithallconvenientspeed.”Theaudienceeruptedintocheers.Inthatinstant,Lewisfeltarushofpride.Hehadovercomehisfearandproventohimselfthathewascapable.Thisexperiencebecameaturningpointinhislife,teachinghimthevalueofperseveranceandthepoweroffacingone'sfears.Fromthenon,hewelcomedeverynewactingchallenge,knowingthathehadthestrengthtoovercomeanyobstacle.參考答案Backstage,Lewiswashuggedbyhisworriedyetsupportivefather.HewipedawayLewis’stearsandsaid,“Youcandothis,son,thestageisjustaplaceforstorytelling.It’salrighttofeelfearful,butremember,wearealwaysheresupportingyou.”Lewissawnotjustthemanagerofatheatercompany,butafatherbelievinginhisson.HiswordsgaveLe
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