英語書面表達EnglishCompositionWriting2021/5/91Whatmakesagoodessay?Theessay2021/5/92StructureofaGoodComposition1.Topicparagraph2.SupportingParagraphs3.Concludingparagraph2021/5/93四大內容：Topicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)

Generalstatement

開頭段：四大內容：問候；自我介紹；寫信背景；寫信目的。2021/5/94Wellbegunishalfdone.開頭段：1、問候Howareyoudoing?Howiseverythinggoing?2、自我介紹Iam

Lihua,a17-year-oldboystudyinginXXXmiddleschool.IamLiHua,who…2021/5/95Wellbegunishalfdone.3、寫信背景（寫信的緣由）Iheard/learnedthat…Yousaidinyourlastletterthat…4、寫信目的Now,Iamwritingthislettertodosth.2021/5/96hadplannedtodosth.gotothemovies/gotothecinema/watchamovieon(this)Sundayafternoon/on(at)theweekendbreak/keepone’spromise/wordapologizetosb.fordoingsth.makeanapologytosb.fordoingsth.I’msorrytodosth./that…因為失約，向對方道歉2021/5/97DearPeter,IfeelterriblysorrytohavebrokenmypromisethatIwouldseeafilmwithyouonthiscomingSundayafternoon.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology!因為失約，向對方道歉that引導同位語從句2021/5/98

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition（另外）,Furthermore（而且）,2021/5/99TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?2021/5/910正確使用有關連接詞

時間先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,最后sincethen,afterawhile轉折關系：but,however,onthecontrary（相反地）nevertheless（然而）因果關系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,dueto,becauseofforthereasonthat,thus,therefore2021/5/911正確使用有關連接詞

讓步關系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,as

遞進關系：what’smore/worse,tomakemattersworseinaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand條件關系：if,unless,aslongas（只要）,onconditionthat…(如果）表列舉：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords表總結：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated,allinall,tosumup,personally,insummary2021/5/912FirstlySecondlyThirdly......①Tobeginwith/Firstofall②Inaddition/besides/furthermore/moreover/What'smore/atthesametime③AtLast/intheend/finally/eventually/Lastbutnotleast正確使用一些承上啟下的連接詞或短語2021/5/913用于陳述觀點的詞或短語Personally,Frommypointofview,Inmyopinion,Inmyview,AsfarasI'mconcerned,Iholdtheideathat......Asforme,Asregardstome,2021/5/914解釋失約的原因（時態），安排下次活動esbeabouttodosth.when…beonthepointofdoingsth.when…receiveone’scallsbcallme,sayingthat…/tellingmethat…takepartin/joinin/attendtheassaycontestthetestwillbeheldonSundayafternoonthereason(why…)isthat…forgive/pardonsb.ifyouarefree…/ifit’sconvenientforyou…gofor/onapicnic,goshopping……Isuggestdoingsth/

Isuggestthat…該部分內容可以適當拓展2021/5/915解釋失約的原因(時態），安排下次活動es

Yesterdayafternoon,IwasabouttoleavethedormitorywhenIreceivedmyChineseteacher’scall,tellingmethatIhavetoattendtheessaycontestheldthisSundayafternoon.Ihopethechangewon’tcausetoomuchtroubleforyou.ShallwegotohaveamealtogethernextSundayafternoon?Ifitisconvenientforyou,let’smeetat5:00p.m.outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.WhenIreceivedacallfrommyChineseteacherwhoaskedmetoattendtheessaycontest……2021/5/916TheconclusionWhatmakesagoodconclusion?2021/5/917take…intoconsideration/accountIwouldappreciateitifyoucould…Iwouldbegratefultoyouifyoucould…I’mlookingforwardto…結尾段2021/5/918I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.結尾段2021/5/9191.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名詞性從句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用as倒裝句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用強調句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(強調句）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

ItwasbecauseofyourhelpthatIpassedthephysicsexam.2021/5/9205.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用過去分詞)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat狀語從句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.2021/5/9219．Hehadhardly

comebackfromBeijingwhenhewassentabroad.(使用倒裝句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Hardly

hadhecome

backfromBeijing

when

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Itturnedouttobe

thattheplanwasafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.2021/5/922句式改寫

e.g.

大家都知道，清明節是我國的傳統節日。在這一天，人們會去給親人掃墓來寄托他們的哀思。WeallknowTomb-sweepingDayisatraditionalfestiva