備戰2023年中考英語高分作文熱點04未來與夢想一、話題作文1．中國的高速發展離不開每個人的努力，科技的飛躍，社會的進步和文化的傳播都離不開一個個優秀的個體。假如你是李華，請用“Mydreamjob”為題，寫一篇英語文章向校報投稿。內容包括：1.闡述你將來想做什么樣的工作。2.能為我們祖國做哪些貢獻。注意事項：1.90字左右。2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。Mydreamjob_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MydreamjobAsthesayinggoes,“Greatdreamsmakeabrightfuture.”Mydreamistobeadoctorinthefuture.Ithinkit’sgreattobeadoctor.WhenIseesickpeopleinthehospitaloronTV,Ican’thelpworryingaboutthemandwanttogivethemahand.IfIbecomeadoctor,Icanhelpmanypatientsgetwell.What’smore,beingadoctorisn’tonlyabouttreatingpatients.Doctorsalsodoresearchandexperimentssothattheycanmakeacontributiontomedicalserviceofourcountry.I’llmakeanefforttobecomeadoctor.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一篇寫夢想中的工作的記敘文。②時態：本文應用一般現在時和一般將來時兩種時態。③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當增加細節，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出文章的主題：我夢想中的工作是什么。第二步，介紹喜歡這份工作的理由，以及這份工作能為祖國做出什么貢獻。第三步，總結全文，表達原望。[亮點詞匯]①asthesayinggoes俗話說②can’thelpdoingsth.忍不住做某事③makeacontributionto…為……做出貢獻[高分句型]①WhenIseesickpeopleinthehospitaloronTV,Ican’thelpworryingaboutthemandwanttogivethemahand.(when引導的時間狀語從句)②IfIbecomeadoctor,Icanhelpmanypatientsgetwell.(if引導的條件狀語從句)2．三年的初中生活就要結束了，嶄新的高中學習即將到來，回顧過去，你一定有許多成功的喜悅與失利的遺憾，展望未來，你肯定有美好的憧憬和實實在在的打算。請你以“UnforgettableMemories”為題，給英文報紙《21stCentury》“青春校園”欄目寫一篇80詞左右的征文。1.內容要包含對過去的回憶和對未來的憧憬；2.文中不要出現你的真實姓名，班級和學校名稱；3.文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。UnforgettableMemoriesHowtimeflies!I’mgoingtofinishmyjuniormiddleschoolsoon._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】UnforgettableMemoriesHowtimeflies!I’mgoingtofinishmyjuniormiddleschoolsoon.Lotsofmemoriesleftinmymind.Teachers,classmates,hardworkandaboveallfriendshipstayinmymind.Lookingback,Ihavegonethrougheitherthejoyofsuccessorthepainsoffailure.Teachersarefriendlytousinlifeandalwaysstrictwithusinstudy.Classmatesandfriendshelpmesomuch.WiththeirhelpI’vemadegreatprogress.ButI’macarelessboy.AndIalwaysmakemistakeswhichcanbeavoided.Seniorhighschoolisanewbeginninganditgivesmeachancetoovercomemyshortcomings.Asitissaid,“Itisnotourabilitiesthatshowwhatwetrulyare,butourchoice.”Thetwo-monthholidaywillalsoprovidemethefreedomtothinkoverandmakeupmymindtodoitbetterinthefuture.AndIbelieveIcandoit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態：時態為“一般過去時和一般現在時”；③提示：注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。內容是以“UnforgettableMemories”為題，給英文報紙21stCentury“青春校園”欄目寫一篇征文，介紹一下你對過去的回憶和對未來的憧憬。第二步：具體闡述寫作內容。首先承接短文開頭，從學業有成、師生情誼以及最大的遺憾和對未來的憧憬幾個方面詳細地敘述。第三步：書寫結語。表示“我相信我能做到。”[亮點詞匯]①lotsof許多②stayinmymind留在我的腦海里③gothrough通過④be

friendlyto對……友好⑤bestrictwith對某人要求嚴格⑥thinkover仔細考慮

[高分句型]①Howtimeflies!（how引起的感嘆句）

②

Teachersarefriendlytousinlifeandalwaysstrictwithusinstudy.

（and連接的并列句）③AndIalwaysmakemistakeswhichcanbeavoided.（which引導的定語從句）④Asitissaid,“Itisnotourabilitiesthatshowwhatwetrulyare,butourchoice.”（諺語的應用）

⑤Thetwo-monthholidaywillalsoprovidemethefreedomtothinkoverandmakeupmymindtodoitbetterinthefuture.（and連接的并列句）二、材料作文3．夢想是一個人的信念與支撐，你有什么樣的夢想。請你寫一篇短文來闡述你未來的夢想工作，以及如何去實現它。要求：1.詞數不少于80詞，2.文中不能出現真實的人名、地名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：IwanttobeanEnglishteacherwhenIgrowup.I’mgoingtostudyreallyhardespeciallytheEnglishsubject.NowIamveryinterestedinEnglish.AndmyEnglishteacherisveryfunny.Shealwayshasgreatwaystomakeherclasseslively.Iwanttolearnfromherandbecomeahumorousteacherjustlikeher.Iknowitrequiresmuchtobeanexcellentteacher.ButIwilltrymybest.Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”及“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并注意適當添加細節，突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己夢想的工作；第二步，具體說明自己如何實現它。[亮點詞匯]①especially尤其②excellent優秀的[高分句型]①Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.（省略“that”的賓語從句）4．學校英語報舉行“未來之城”征文活動。請你用英文寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你心目中的未來城市，并分享你在未來之城生活的想法。短文需包括下圖所以提示內容。注意：1.詞數不少于80詞；2.文中不得出現考生真實的姓名、地點和所在的學校名詞。OurCityoftheFutureWhatwillourcitybelikein2050?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

OurCityoftheFuture

Whatwillourcitybelikein2050?Ithinkitwillbequitedifferentfromnow.Thelivingenvironmentwillbegreatlyimprovedinthefollowingways.

Thehouseswillbebothgreenandsmart.Everythingwillbemadebyenvironmental-friendlymaterials.What’smore,thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.Mostofthetimepeoplewillworkathomeandtheywillhavefewerworkinghoursbecauseofnewtechnologies.Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.Youcantakedifferentkindsoftransportations,suchastheflyingbuses:andthedriverlesscars.ThemostexcitingthingforstudentswillbethewidelyuseofE-booksandVRtechnologyatschool.Asaresult,therewillbepaperlessexamsandmorefuninlearning.

Ourcityin2050willbefullofhopeandweshouldworkhardtorealizeit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：根據所給提示介紹你心目中的未來城市，并分享你在未來之城生活的想法。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹未來城市的房子；第二步，介紹未來城市的工作和交通情況；第三步，最后介紹未來的學校。[亮點詞匯]①What’smore而且②suchas比如③Asaresult結果④befullof充滿[高分句型]①thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.（sothat引導的目的狀語從句）②Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.（if引導的條件狀語從句）5．假如你是李華，馬上面臨初中畢業，迎接你的將是充滿挑戰卻又讓你滿懷期待的高中生活。請根據以下圖表信息規劃一下你的高中學習和生活。要求：(1)參考提示語，可適當發揮；(2)語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；(3)文章不得出現任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；(4)詞數：不少于90詞。(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。)MyLifeinSeniorHighSchoolMynameisLiHua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyLifeinSeniorHighSchoolMynameisLiHua.Inthreemonths,I’llfinishmyjuniorschoolyearsandgotoseniorschoolforanothernewstartinlife.Firstofall,Imuststudyhard.BecauseonlybygoingtoagooduniversitycanIhavebetterjobopportunitiesinthefuture.Atthesametime,Ialsowanttoexercisehard.Ilikeplayingbasketballverymuch.AslongasIhavetime,Iwillspendtimereadingeverydaytoenrichmyknowledge.Iwillalsousetheweekendtodovolunteeractivitiesoutsidetohelpthoseinneed.AsfarasIamconcerned,mylifeinseniorhighschoolwillbemuchmorecolorfulthanbefore.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，主要從學習計劃、運動以及愛好等方面來介紹高中的生活。具體內容要包含所給提示，可適當發揮。2.寫作指導：本文主要以第一人稱為主，主體時態為一般將來時，描述現在的情況可以使用一般現在時。文章采用三段式，第一段介紹即將要開始高中生活；第二段從學習、運動以及愛好等方面逐一介紹自己的計劃；最后一段總結，展望自己的高中生活。6．每個人都憧憬美好未來，請以“MyFutureLife”為題寫一篇80詞（不含已給的部分）左右的短文，要求短文科學合理，符合邏輯。MyFutureLifeMylifewillbehappyandsuccessfulinthefuture.Twentyyearslater,Iwillbeabout35yearsold._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyFutureLifeMylifewillbehappyandsuccessfulinthefuture.Twentyyearslater,Iwillbeabout35yearsold.Iwillhaveareallyhappyfamily.Therewillbesixpeopleinmyfamily,myparents,myhandsomehusbandandtwolovelykids.Mydreamwillalsocometrue.What’smydream?IwillbeanastronautasWangYaping.FlyingintheskywithaspaceshiphasbeenmydreamsinceIwasyoung.Mrs.Wangismyidealmodel.AtthattimeIwillcommunicatewithherinthesky.Myparentswillbelivingahealthylifewiththeirgrandchildren.MytwokidswillstudyhardandreadbothChineseandEnglishalot.Myfamilywillleadabetterlifewithourhardwork.Lifewillbereallyhappyforme!【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“MyFutureLife”“我的未來生活”為題進行寫作，描述未來的生活情況，可以大膽想象，但要科學合理，并且符合邏輯。2.寫作指導：本文主要采用一般將來時，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。本文采取一段式寫作，開頭已經給出，接著介紹未來的家庭情況，自己實現了什么夢想以及家人的生活情況。寫作時做到無語法和標點錯誤。7．隨著我國航天技術的發展和進步，實行太空移民不再是夢。請根據以下提示，寫一篇文章介紹未來太空生活。1.衣服可以檢測身體健康2.住在智能房子，有機器人做家務3.駕駛飛船，用太陽能行駛4.自由發揮兩點內容5.你的感受注意：1詞數：80字左右（文章開頭己給出，不計入詞數）2短文必須包含所有要點，并適當發揮；3文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。SpacelifeinthefutureSpacemigrationiscomingsoon.Iwouldliketointroducethespacelifeinthefuture._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】SpacelifeinthefutureSpacemigrationiscomingsoon.Iwouldliketointroducethespacelifeinthefuture.Inthefuture,theclotheswewearcandetectourphysicalhealthsothatwecanknowourhealthatanytime.Andwewillliveinasmarthousewithrobotsdoinghousework.Wewillhavemoretimetodowhatweareinterestedin.What’smore,wewillflyaspaceshiprunningonsolarpower.Atlast,therewillbenopollutioninthespaceandtherewillbemuchbetterlivingenvironment.Ithinkthiskindoflifeisverywonderful.I’mlookingforwardtoit.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要是以“Spacelifeinthefuture”為題，并結合所提示內容，介紹未來的太空生活，可適當增加細節。2.寫作指導：本文以一般將來時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段重點介紹未來的太空生活；第三段介紹自己的感受。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。8．今年三月份，中國國家宇航員王亞平及她的伙伴們又一次給全國的孩子們帶來了別開生面的天宮課堂，一個個有趣的物理實驗激發了大家探索太空的興趣。假設你是李雷，請你以“MySpaceDream”為題寫一篇英文短文談談你的觀后感，并使用以下提示問題，詞數80左右。1.Doyouwanttoexplorespace?2.Whatwillyoudoifyouareinspace?3.Howwillyouachieveyourspacedream?注意事項：1.必須包含所提示的信息，可適當發揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名及地名。MySpaceDreamIt’sreportedthatmillionsofstudentsandteacherswatchedthespacelecturehostedbyWangYapingandherpartnersinthespacestationlately.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：MySpaceDreamIt’sreportedthatmillionsofstudentsandteacherswatchedthespacelecturehostedbyWangYapingandherpartnersinthespacestationlately.Ihaveadream.IwanttobecomeanastronautwhenIgrowup.Iameagertoexplorespaceinthefuture.Oneday,IwilltakeaspacewalklikeWangYaping.Iwillobservemanyunknownplanetscarefully.IwillhaveaviewofChinafromourmysteriousspace.Asfornow,Iplantostudyscienceknowledgewell,strengthenmybodyandmakepreparationsforrealizingmyspacedream.【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求以“MySpaceDream”為題，根據提示問題寫短文談談自己的太空夢。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一人稱為主，時態以一般現在時和一般將來時為主。可分為三段式寫作：第一段用已給出開頭；第二段介紹自己的太空夢及將會在太空中做什么；第三段介紹將如何實現自己的太空夢。要做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。9．“Iftheyoutharewise,thecountrywillbewise.Iftheyoutharestrong,thecountrywillbestrong.”“少年智則國智，少年強則國強。”出自梁啟超的《少年中國說》。作為當代青少年，應該努力學習，不斷進取，做一個堅強、自信、獨立的少年，以期不久的將來報效祖國。那么，在成長過程中青少年應該做什么？怎么做？請你根據下表提示以“TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountry”為題，寫一篇英語短文談談你的看法。除了提示中的內容，請你至少再補充一條。buildupourbodiesby...keepstrongandhealthydevelopsomeinterests,forexamples...;makeourselvesfullydevelopeddohousework,suchas...learntobeindependent(獨立的)（自擬1個觀點）參考詞匯：confident自信的，successful成功的,failure失敗，makeprogress進步注意：①主題突出，要點齊全，條理清晰，語言規范；②可適當發揮，80詞左右，首句已給出，不計入總詞數；③文中不得出現真實的學校、姓名等信息。TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountryAsteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshoulddevelopourselvesfully.Buthow?Hereismyopinion._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountryAsteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshoulddevelopourselvesfully.Buthow?Hereismyopinion.Basically,weshouldbuildupourbodiesbytakingsomeexercise,suchasrunning,swimmingandsoon.Inthisway,wecankeepourselvesstrongandhealthy.What’smore,developingsomeinterestsisalsoagoodway.Wecanlearntoplaythepiano,singsongsandsoon.Inaddition,Ithinkit’sourdutytodosomehouseworkathome.Thenourparentscanliveaneasierlife.Also,bydoingthis,wecanlearntobeindependent.Lastly,wemuststudyhardbecauseknowledgeispower.Themorebooksweread,themorepowerfulwe’llbe.Thus,wecanhelpbuildourcountryandenjoyabetterlife.Ifwedothesethingswell,wewillbeabletogrowupafullydevelopedperson.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求以以“TheStrongYouthMakeaStrongCountry”為題，根據要點提示寫一篇短文介紹青少年如何做才可以成為一個堅強、自信、獨立的少年。2.寫作指導：本文時態為一般現在時；人稱主要以第一人稱為主；在寫作時要根據要點，從鍛煉、培養興趣、做家務以及學習四個方面進行敘述，注意要內容完整，語言的表述要符合語法的結構，無標點和語法錯誤。10．你校英文報正開展以“未來的生活”為主題的征文活動。請根據以下圖文提示寫一篇英語短文投稿，談談你對未來生活的設想。要求：1.所寫內容包括以上要點；2.內容連貫，并進行合理拓展；3.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；4.100詞左右；標題和開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。LifeintheFutureWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LifeintheFutureWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,lifeinthefuturewillbequitedifferent.Theenvironmentwillbenicer.Thetreeswillbegreenerandriverswillbeclearer.Thereisnoheavytrafficanymoreontheearth.Buildingslikehouses,hospitalswillbebuiltinotherplanetsorunderthesea.Sothereisenoughspaceforpeopleontheearth.Robotswilldodangerousandhardworkinsteadofhumanbeings.Theymakepeoplehavemoretimetorelaxandenjoytheirlives.Theclothesthatwewearwillchangetheircolorsandstylesaccordingtotheweatherandourmoods.We’llhaveeasierandmoreconvenientlivesinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知要求以“未來的生活”為主題，分別從環境、交通、植物、建筑、機器人以及危險工作等幾個方面展開討論，并且自己可以適當地添加一些合理內容，使文章內容更加豐富。2.寫作指導：這是一篇圍繞未來生活的作文，時態以一般將來時，人稱以第一人稱為主。題干開頭已經給出，寫作根據提示內容依次介紹即可，中還另外介紹未來人們的衣著變化，充實文章內容。11．一家英語雜志社向中學生征文，主題是“二十年后的我”。請根據以下要點和你的暢想完成短文。（1）工作；（2）家庭；（3）業余生活。注意：（1）詞數80～100；（2）可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不能出現真實姓名及學校名稱；（4）短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikein20years._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikein20years.Withnodoubt,mylifewillbeverydifferent.I’llbethirty-fiveyearsoldbythen.IhopeI’llworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner,enjoyingmyworkandgettingalongwellwithmyfellowworkers.Atthattime,probablyw