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[Onceuponatime],therewasafarmer(calledRipVanWinkle).Helivedinavillageinthemountainswithhiswifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.Theylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftentoldthemstorieswhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge”,thevillageinn.Hespentalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaverylazyman.[Insteadof]workingonhisfarm,hewould

gofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedto

getangrywithhim.“Whatkindoffarmerareyou?”Shewouldask.“Whydon’tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”

Afterargumentswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargument,Ripwentfurtherthanusualintothewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,(dressedin

old-fashionedclothes),wastryingtocarryabarrel(桶)andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoacave,(wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.)Afterthat,theoldmangave/Rip/adrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.What/HowWhen/WhereWhoWhy文本解讀SettingCharacterPlotTheme

Whenwhowhereonceuponatime

afarmer(calledRipVanWinkle).Narrator敘事者“thirdperson”perspective第三人稱視角Tense:________________SimplepasttenseMom文本解讀SettingCharacteravalley&amountainvillageCharacteranalysisDetails.文本解讀.....

Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.Theylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftentoldthemstorieswhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge”,thevillageinn.....

....[Insteadof]workingonhisfarm,hewould

gofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedto

getangrywithhim........Ripwentfurtherthanusualintothewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,(dressedin

old-fashionedclothes),

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WorkouttheconflictortheclimaxBeginningDevelopmentConflictClimax/Ending[Insteadof]workingonhisfarm,hewouldgofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangrywithhim.Remembertosolvetheconflict.

[Onceuponatime],therewasafarmer(calledRipVanWinkle).whospentalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaverylazyman.文本解讀+創設情境Hecameacrossanoldman,(dressedinold-fashionedclothes),inthedeepwoodswhowastryingtocarryabarrel(桶)andaskedRiptohelphim.Theytookthebarreltoacave,(wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.)Afterthat,theoldmangave/Rip/adrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.PlotA.

alazyfarmer.B.ahappy-go-luckyfarmer.C.Lazinessruinsamananddiligengcemakesameaningfulandhappylife.....“Whydon’tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”.

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線索文本解讀+主題探究Theme

【Paragraph1】Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.

根據第1自然段給出的首句，尤其是根據第2自然段首句Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.

大致可以判定：第一自然段應該描寫主人公在山谷中酒醒之后所見所聞所感，而且，應該是比較令人驚異的發現。因為第2自然段首句提供的信息。

創設情節突出主題Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAddsomedetailsbyraisingquestions

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Analyzethe2givensentencesandtheoriginalpassageAddsomedetailsbyraisingquestions

Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.

根據第2自然段首句

大致可以判定：主人公在山谷中應該邂逅了仙人，洞中忽一日，世上已逾年。可以朝著這個方向發散思維，構思情節，方能達到完美收尾效果。

所見所聞所感所思外貌描寫環境描寫語言描寫動作描寫心理描寫情感描寫所見所做所感Appearance/SurroundingsConversations/LanguagesBehavior/Actions/VerbsEmotions/Feelings通過細節描寫呈現出情節的________跌宕起伏UP---DOWN--UPUsethedescriptivetechniquestoenrichthedetails創設情節突出主題

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Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.Hewasalone,[worriedabouthisdog]andheknewhewasgoingtogetintomoretroublewithhiswife.Thenhenoticedacuriousthing-----hishairwasoverhisshouldersandhisbeardwasoverafootlong![Sostrange]washe

thathedecidedimmediatelytogetbacktothevillage.Assoonashegotthere,herealizedthateverythingwasdifferentandtherewerelotsofnewhouses.[Surprisingly],hedidn’trecognizethepeopleinthevillage.語言描寫范文賞析心理描寫

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Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.