MyNewBrotherContinuationWritingShaoxingYangmingHighSchoolYaoJiaqiAnalyzethetextReadthetextandfindoutitsmainideaand“my”emotions.climaxendingKNOWNUNKNOWNReadformainideaandemotionsunwillingreluctantP1:IwasunwillingtobeonstagewithmyadoptedbrotherHenry.emotionsmainideaAnalyzethetextunwilling/reluctanthurt/wronged

confusedembarrassedhelplessclimaxendingKNOWNUNKNOWNReadformainideaandemotionsunwillingreluctant?embarrassedhelplesshurtwronged

P2:IwasmisunderstoodbymymomforplayingjokesonHenrydeliberately.P4:Whileonstage,Irealizedmyskirtwasabouttodropbecausethedrawstringgotloose.P1:Iwasunwilling

tobeonstagewithmyadoptedbrotherHenry.confusedP3:Icouldn’tunderstandwhyHenrywasabsorbedinropeknots.emotionsmainideaDesigntheplot

Rightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully.WhatdidHenrydo?linking1ReadforcluesWhatcanweinferfromthefollowingsentence?Henryhadtheabilitytotiethedrawstringon“my”skirt.Designtheplot

Rightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully.WhatdidHenrydo?HowdidIfeel?

linking2linking1linking3HowdidIshowgratitude?WhatwasHenry’sresponse?What’sthetheme?surprised,relieved,...helpmetiemydrawstringsuccessful,smooth,...expressthanks,hughimtightly,...hugback,smile,nobigdeal,...Howwastheperformance?ReadforthemeTip1EchothetextChange:unwilling→acceptable2｜復現關鍵詞塊(para.2)Henrywasstealingmymother'slove.Hewasruiningmylife.e.g.Henrywas______stealingmymother'slove___ruiningmylife.Instead,he__________________________________________.itwon’tbe

sobadtoacceptmynewbrotherneithernorusedhisownpowertobringnewvigorintomylifeCallback:

stealmymother’slove;ruinmylife3｜形成對比意識e.g.Itwas

atthismoment

thatIrealized

familiesare____________________________(不是由血緣關系而是由愛所聯結的).e.g.Itdawnedonmethat

thestringknot

ontheskirt

would

gountied,

__________________________andnever(但是家庭的結永遠不會解開).Readforthemenotbondedbybloodbutbylovebut

thefamilyknotwouldn’tContrast:

not...but...Example1:Henry在臺上的及時幫助Ver.1.0｜Herushedtohelpme.

Ver.2.0｜Sentencepattern:Sb.did1,did2,anddid3.(para.4)mymomtookmeasideandsaidinalowvoice.

Inoddedbutsighed.他毫不猶豫地快速靠近我，彎下腰/俯身蹲下來，為我系了一個牢固又漂亮的蝴蝶結。“搞定。”他悄聲說道。Withoutasecondthought,he______________________,_____________________________and_________________________.“Nailedit.”Hewhispered.

approachedmequicklybentdown/droppedtoacrouchAccumulatethelanguagetiedabeautifulfirmbowknotTip2SplittheactionExample2:演出成功Ver.1.0｜Theshowwasahugesuccess.Ver.2.0｜側面描寫觀眾反應(para.4)Myheartbeatwildly.IforgotmyannoyanceatHenryforawhile.→Myheartbeatingwildly,IforgotmyannoyanceatHenryforawhile.

（獨立主格結構）演出一結束，觀眾就投來贊許的目光，雷鳴般的掌聲回蕩在大廳周圍。Themomenttheshowwasover,theaudiencecastapprovingglancesat

us,__________________________________________aroundthehall.AccumulatethelanguageTip3Adddetaileddescriptionfromdifferentperspectivesashower/stormofthunderousapplauseechoingExample3:我向Henry真心道謝Ver.1.0｜“Thankyou,Henry.”Isaidsincerely.Ver.2.0｜with復合結構/虛擬語氣(para.4)WithHenryinvolved,itdidn'tseemsospecialanymore.

Ifonlysomeonecouldhelpmeout.e.g.我的聲音顫抖著，臉發燙。我不得不承認，要不是有他的幫助/要是沒有他出色的打結技術，我就不會鼓起勇氣站在舞臺上。Myvoicetrembled__________________________.Ihadtoadmitthat,

___________________________________________________________,I__________________________________tostandonthestage.butforhistimelyhelp/withouthiswonderfulknottingskillsAccumulatethelanguageTip4Fillwithadvancedstructureswouldn’thavepluckedupthecouragewithmyfaceburningWhatmakesagoodcontinuationwriting?SummarizeandappreciateSummarizeandappreciateRightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.Withoutasecondthought,heapproachedmequickly,droppedtoacrouch,andtiedabeautifulfirmbowknot.

“Nailedit.”Hewhispered.Shockedbywhathehaddone,Ifeltsomethingdeepinmymindbegantochange.Itseemedasifhiskinddeedshadmeltedmyheart.ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,Ifeltashamedofmyself.WhileIwaslostinthought,themusictookmebacktoreality.Weedgedtothestageandstartedourperformance.Themomenttheshowwasover,theaudiencecastapprovingglancesatus,astormofthunderousapplauseechoingaroundthehall.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully."Thank...you,Henry."Myvoicetrembledwithmyfaceburning.Ihadtoadmitthat,butforhistimelyhelp,Iwouldn’thavepluckedupmycouragetostandonthestage.Withouthiswonderfulknottingskills,theperformancewouldhavebeenquitedifferent.Henrypattedmegentlyontheshoulder,

anenormousgrinflashingacrosshisface,"Notaproblem.

Wearefamily,aren'twe?"

Tearsblurredmyeyes,

wor