高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習感恩節的美食邀約1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文OnasnowydayStevesatdownontheusualseatintheUnionSquare.EveryThanksgivingfornineyearshehadsatdownthereatoneintheafternoon.Everytime,awonderfulthinghappenedtohim,whichmadehisheartfeelfullofjoy.OnthoseotherThanksgivingDays,Steveusuallyhadbeenhungry.ButtodayStevewasnothungry.Hehadcomefromadinnersobigthathehadalmostnopowertomove.Hisbodyhadsuddenlybecometoobigforhisclothes;itseemedreadytobreakoutofthem.Theyweretorn.Youcouldseehisskinthroughaholeinthefrontofhisshirt.Butthecoldwind,withsnowinit,feltpleasantlycooltohim.Thedinnerhadnotbeenexpected.HehadbeenpassingalargehousenearthebeginningofthatgreatbroadstreetcalledFifthAvenue,wherelivedtwoladiesofanoldfamilywhohadadeeploveoftraditionthatonThanksgivingDayfoodwillbeofferedtothefirsthungrypersontowalkby.TodayStevehappenedtobetheonetopassbyonhiswaytothepark.4續寫原文Stevesatinthepark,appearingtobewaitingforsomebody,butappearingnottoexpectsomethingtohappen.Suddenlyhiseyesgrewwiderandhisbreathstopped.FortheoldgentlemanwascomingacrossFourthAvenuetowardSteve'sseat.EveryThanksgivingDayfornineyearstheoldgentlemanhadcometheretofindSteveonhisseat.ThenhehadledStevetoarestaurantandwatchedhimeatabigdinner,whichhadbeenapartofThanksgivingDay.Theoldgentlemanwasthinandtallandsixty.Hishairwaswhiterandthinnerthanithadbeenlastyear.Hislegsshook,seemingnotasstrongastheyweretheyearbefore.5段首句Para1：Asthiskindoldgentlemancametowardhim,Stevebegantoshakeandhisbreathwasshorter.Para2：Withthesewords,theoldmanlookedintoSteve'seyes,expectingStevetoacceptthedinner.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點8續寫思路分析話題：助人篇主要內容：今年的感恩節，Steve在第五大道的一所大宅里飽餐了一頓美食。九年以來的每個感恩節，一位老先生都會請他吃大餐。今年老先生如約又來請他吃飯，可是Steve已經吃得很飽了，他會拒絕還是接受老先生的邀請以便給他施恩的機會呢？9續寫思路分析Para1Asthiskindoldgentlemancametowardhim,Stevebegantoshakeandhisbreathwasshorter.由第一段首句內容“當這位和藹可親的老先生向他走來時，史蒂夫開始顫抖，呼吸急促。”可知，第一段應該描寫史蒂夫對是否接受邀約的內心掙扎。10續寫思路分析Para2：Withthesewords,theoldmanlookedintoSteve'seyes,expectingStevetoacceptthedinner.由第二段首句內容“說完這些話，老人看著史蒂夫的眼睛，期待著史蒂夫接受晚餐?！笨芍诙螒撁鑼懯返俜蜃罱K接受了老人的邀約。11續寫素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Stevehesitatedforhalfaminute,helplessandverysorryforhimself.（形容詞作伴隨狀語）[高分句型2]Butnowhelookedupattheoldgentleman’sface,totallyatalosswhattosay.（伴隨狀語）12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Asthiskindoldgentlemancametowardhim,Stevebegantoshakeandhisbreathwasshorter.Hewishedhecouldflyaway.Buthecouldnotmovefromhisseat.“Goodafternoon,”saidtheoldgentleman.“Gladtoseeyouagain.Comewithme,myman,andIwillgiveyouadinnerthatwillsurelymakeyourbodyfeelasthankfulasyourmind.”Thosearewhattheoldgentlemansaideverytime.Thewordsthemselveswerealmostatradition.Alwaysbefore,theyhadbeenmusicinSteve’sear.Butnowhelookedupattheoldgentleman’sface,totallyatalosswhattosay.14范文呈現Withthesewords,theoldmanlookedintoSteve’seyes,expectingStevetoacceptthedinner.Stevehesitatedforhalfaminute,helplessandverysorryforhimself.AndthenStevemadeastrangenoise,andsaid:“Thankyou.I’mveryhungry.”whichtheoldgentlemanhadheardninetimesbefore,heunderstoodit.Stevewasveryfull,butheunderstoodthathewasapartofatradition.HisdesireforfoodonThanksgivingDaywasnothisown.Itbelongedtothiskindoldgentleman.Thenhestruggledtostandupandfollowedthegentlemaninthesnow.15范文譯文當這位和藹可親的老先生向他走來時，史蒂夫開始顫抖，呼吸急促。他希望他能飛走。但是他不能離開他的座位。“下午好，”老先生說?！昂芨吲d再次見到你。跟我來，我的人，我會給你一頓晚餐，一定會讓你的身體和你的思想一樣感激?！边@是老先生每次說的話。這些詞本身幾乎是一種傳統。以前，它們一直是史蒂夫耳邊的音樂。但現在他抬頭看著老先生的臉，完全不知道該說什么。16范文譯文說完這些話，老人看著史蒂夫的眼睛，期待著史蒂夫接受晚餐。史蒂夫猶豫了半分鐘，無助地為自己感到難過。然后史蒂夫發出一種奇怪的聲音