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附續(xù)寫原文:閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ApollowasborninBurkinaFaso,acountryinAfrica.Itactuallymeans“TheLandofHonestPeople”.HehasalwaysvaluedthevirtueofhonestyandhebroughtitwithhimwhenheopenedarestaurantintheUnitedKingdomthreeyearsago.Hebelievesthattherearehonestpeopleeverywhere.
Onaregularweekend,customerswerepouringinbythethousands,andservicewasgoingsmoothly.Midwaythroughthatbusyweekend,threeguysenteredthroughtherestaurant’sdoors,evidentlylookingforaseatandsomefood.It’spossiblethattheyarrivedfromoutoftown.Therewasadifferenceintheiraccentsattheveryleast.
“Canwebeservedquickly?Wehavetocatchthetrain,”saidoneofthemtoawaiter.
Itdidn’ttakelongforthemtobeservedbythewaiter.Theyenjoyedeverybite.Afterthequickbutdelightfulmeal,thethreefriendswerereadytopaythebillfortheirsupper.Theentirecostofthefoodwas£35.Asthewaiterapproachedtheirtable,theygavetheircreditcardsover.Theywerecaughtbysurprise,however,whentheservertoldthemtheycouldonlypayincash.Afterthat,thewaitermovedtoanothertabletotakeorders.
Whenthewaitercamebacktocollecttheircashpaymentagain,hefoundthethreeguyshadgonemissingwithoutpayingfortheirfood.Asaresult,thewaiterhadnochoicebuttocallApollo,whowasonholidaywithhisfamily.
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請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Whenthewaiterdescribedwhathadhappened,Apollowasextremelyconfused.__________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afterheopenedthepackage,hebelievedagainthattherewerehonestpeopleeverywhere._____________________________________________________________________文本中心該文本屬于人際交往類題材,主題語境屬于人與自我之優(yōu)秀品行,正確的人生態(tài)度等。段落大意第一段描寫了出生于非洲的Apollo三年前來英國(guó)開餐館,一直堅(jiān)信誠(chéng)實(shí)是人的基本美德。第二段敘述了周末餐館生意興隆,三個(gè)外地人前來吃飯。第三段一句話說明他們時(shí)間緊張,需要趕車。第四段敘述了三人用完餐后,準(zhǔn)備用信用卡結(jié)賬,而服務(wù)員告訴他們只收現(xiàn)金。第五段講述了三人未結(jié)賬就離開了餐館,服務(wù)員只好打電話告訴在外度假的Apollo。該文本語言簡(jiǎn)潔,沒有生僻詞匯,故事情節(jié)脈絡(luò)清晰,考生容易理清思路。詞匯積累virtuepourinoutoftownenjoyeverybitecollectcashpaymenthavenochoicebuttodo...文化背景BurkinaFaso布基納法索是世界最不發(fā)達(dá)國(guó)家之一,也是周邊非洲國(guó)家主要的外來勞工輸出國(guó)。在經(jīng)濟(jì)上,以農(nóng)牧立國(guó),占了全國(guó)近八成的勞動(dòng)力。該國(guó)資源匱乏,且地處沙漠邊緣,可耕地面積較少。?關(guān)于honesty的妙語
Honestyisthebestpolicy.誠(chéng)實(shí)至上。Beinghonestmaynotgetyoualotoffriendsbutit’llalwaysgetyoutherightones.”–
JohnLennonHonestyisthefirstchapterinthebookofwisdom.”–
ThomasJeffersonHonestheartsproducehonestactions.Whenyouwalkalifeofhonesty,youlivealifeoftruth.”–ThereseBenedict續(xù)寫段落分析續(xù)寫第一段首句為:Whenthewaiterdescribedwhathadhappened,Apollowasextremelyconfused.說明Apollo想搞明白這些人為何“吃飯不付錢”。根據(jù)原文給出的線索Hebelievesthattherearehonestpeopleeverywhere.Wehavetocatchthetrain.可知,Apollo更愿意相信人心向善。另外,第二段首句提到thepackage,根據(jù)上下文銜接和邏輯的要求,所以第一段末尾必須提到package。第二段首句:Afterheopenedthepackage,hebelievedagainthattherewerehonestpeopleeverywhere.此段必須提到包裹里面的東西,另根據(jù)正向發(fā)展的原則,里面一定包含未支付的35元錢。此段發(fā)揮的余地不大,考生可填入一些神情、動(dòng)作和心理活動(dòng)等描寫,著重刻畫Apollo的反應(yīng)和寓意升華。文本中反復(fù)提到honesty或honest,這可作為續(xù)寫結(jié)尾升華的專屬落腳點(diǎn)。??下水文:When
the
waiter
described
what
had
happened,
Apollo
was
extremely
confused.
His
mind
began
to
race,
trying
to
figure
out
everything.
Why?
Were
they
bad
fellows
or
just
short
of
money?So
many
thoughts
crossed
his
mind.
Suddenly
,
it
occurred
to
him
that
they
had
intended
to
pay
the
bills
by
credit
card.
Thus,
among
those
thoughts,
he
finally
chose
to
believe
in
them,
thinking
they
must
be
honest.
Then
Appolo
comforted
the
waiter,
"OK.
Forget
it.
They're
probably
in
a
hurry
to
catch
the
train.
"
Several
days
later,
when
he
returned
from
vacation
and
almost
forgot
it,
a
package
was
addressed
to
the
restaurant.
(94
words)Afterheopenedthepackage,hebelievedagainthattherewerehonestpeopleeverywhere.Inittherewasanote,£35andsometea,whichwereincrediblydeliveredbythosethreeguys.Itturnedoutthattheyhadtoleavewithoutexplanationbecauseofrushingtothetrainstation.Thenotealsosaidthattheywereterriblysorryfortheinconveniencetheycausedandtheyreallydidn'tbringanycashthen.Moveddeeply,Appolosharedthestoryonthesocialmedia,hopingthatitcouldremindpeopletotrustthevirtueofhonesty.Nomatterwhereyouare,sometimesalittlefaithinhumanitycanreallymakeadifference.(95words)參考范文:Paragraph1:
When
the
waiter
described
what
had
happened,Apollo
was
extremely
confused.Sinceopeningtherestaurant,Ihavenevermetacustomerwhosneaksawaywithoutpaying.【高分句型一】Puzzled,heconsoledhimselfbysaying,"Maybetheypaidbycreditcardbecausetheydidn'thaveanymoneyonthem,ormaybetheywereinahurrytocatchthetrainandcouldn'twaittogetcashtopayforthemeal.【高分句型二】Ibelievetheyarehonestpeopleandtheremustbeareasonforeatingwithoutpaying."
(阿波羅的困惑及猜測(cè))
Paragraph2:
After
he
opened
the
package,he
believed
again
that
there
were
honest
people
everywhere.Apollo'sconfusionclearedupwhenhesawthecashandnoteinsidethepackage.Heknewtheyhadn'tpaidbecausetheywereinahurrytocatchthetrain,buttheytook
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