中文論文中的英文寫作問題中國醫學科學院北京協和醫學院腫瘤研究所周傳農2014.10.29題目題目—太繁二甲雙胍體外誘導人肝癌Huh-7細胞凋亡的實驗及其機制研究二甲雙胍體外誘導人肝癌Huh-7細胞凋亡及其作用機制題目—不全兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作兒童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作不好的中文題目去垂體幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的觀察去垂體幼年大鼠的生物學特性與激素水平不好的中文題目中藥松友飲對體內化療后殘余肝癌作用的實驗研究中藥松友飲對裸鼠體內化療后殘余肝癌的作用不好的中文題目IRP對無初乳仔鼠十二指腸IgG+和SIgA+細胞表達的影響板藍根多糖對無初乳仔鼠十二指腸IgG+和SIgA+細胞表達的影響題目—錯誤基因工程大鼠研究進展ProcessinRatGeneticsProgressinresearchonratgeneticengineering題目—太大

不同測壓方法測試大鼠結腸破裂壓AcomparisonofdifferentpressuretestingsystemsforholloworganoflaboratoryanimalsComparisonofdifferentmethodsfortestingthecolonrupturepressureinrats不好的英文題目兒童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作Establishmentofchildhoodsimpleobesityanimalmodel

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題目—濫用縮寫哺乳動物ES細胞與EG細胞研究進展

哺乳動物胚胎干細胞與胚胎生殖

細胞研究進展ESembryonicstemcellsEGembryonicgermcells不好的中文題目—濫用縮寫反復冷凍與冠狀動脈結扎法制作大鼠AMI模型方法對比研究反復冷凍與冠狀動脈結扎法制作大鼠急性心肌梗死模型方法的比較題目—濫用縮寫乳酸調控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內皮細胞NF-κB信號通路的研究LacticacidinhibitsNF-κBsignalingpathwaysinRIMMVECs

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拼寫錯誤、大小寫ComparisionofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapigComparisonofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapig不好的中、英文題目LPS和石墨粉誘導小鼠急性肺損傷病理形態學比較PathologicalcomparisonofLPSandGraphitepower-inducedacutelunginjury中文：應寫明脂多糖英文：LPS

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Reviewoffocalcerebralischemiamodelinnon-humanprimateReviewoffocalcerebralischemiamodelsinnon-humanprimates英文題目—濫用縮寫小型豬體外循環下心臟手術的麻醉AnesthesiaofCardiacSurgeryUnderCPBonSwineAnesthesiainCardiacSurgeryUnderCardiopulmonaryBypassonPigs英文題目—拼寫錯誤ComparisionofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapigComparisonofHematologicalParametersinGerm-freeandConventionalguineapig很錯誤的英文題目基因工程大鼠研究進展ProcessinRatGeneticsProgressinresearchonratgeneticengineering英文題目—錯誤用詞TheComparativeStudyonTumorGrowthandMetastasisofThereKindsofMiceBreastTumorCellswithLuc-labeled…TheComparativeStudyonTumorGrowthandMetastasisofThreeKindsofMiceBreastTumorCellswithLuc-labeled…英文題目—很大錯誤常壓缺氧致大鼠小腦浦肯野細胞急性病理改變的研究AcutepathologychangesofPurkinjecellsinmousecerebellumundernormobarichypoxia署名與單位署名—大小寫Hebao-ming,wangzhizhong，liuxiaofei，yaohao,ouyangxiaohui,sujiaguiHeBao-ming,WangZhizhong，LiuXiaofei，YaoHao,OuyangXiaohui,SuJiagui

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大小寫、拼寫錯誤、標點符號WEIBing-yan,LIUTian-fu,GUOYong-chang,ZHANGYin-hong(thecenterofLaboratoryanimalofShanXiMendicalUniversity,taiyuan030001,China)英文摘要中

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ATRAall-trans-retinoicacid

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錯誤注釋濫用注釋糖尿病(diabeticmellitus)糖尿病(diabetesmellitus)一篇關于小型豬糖尿病模型的論文錯誤注釋腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（adenovirus）錯誤注釋單純皰疹病毒（herpessimplevirus）單純皰疹病毒（herpessimplexvirus）錯誤注釋無特定病原體

(specialpathogenfree，SPF)無特定病原體

(specificpathogenfree，SPF)

錯誤注釋獨立通風籠具(Individuallywentilatecagesdul，IVC)(Individuallyventilatedcages，IVC)

錯誤注釋熱休克蛋白(Hotshockprotein,HSP)(

Heatshockpreotein,HSP)錯誤注釋C反應蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP）C反應蛋白（C-reactiveprotein，CRP）

錯誤注釋集落形成抑制法(humantumorcellcloningassay,HTCA)(colonyformationinhibitionassay)錯誤注釋自然殺傷細胞(naturalkillcell，NK)自然殺傷細胞(naturalkillercell，NK)錯誤注釋神經生長因子（nevergrowthfactor，NGF）

神經生長因子（nervegrowthfactor，NGF）

全文多處，一律錯錯誤注釋表皮生長因子受體2（humanepidermalgrowthfactor-2，HER-2）（humanepidermalgrowthfactorreceptor-2，HER-2）

濫用縮寫圖1Ca.C中survivn陽性

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