第一部分寫(xiě)作的要求、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及評(píng)卷實(shí)例（-）短文寫(xiě)作的要求《碩士研究生英語(yǔ)入學(xué)考試大綱》規(guī)定：英語(yǔ)短文寫(xiě)作，要求考生根據(jù)提示信息寫(xiě)出一篇約200個(gè)單詞的短文（不包括試題中所給的短文開(kāi)頭的第一句話）。出題方式有：命題作文、看圖作文、情景作文或段首句作文。短文必須根據(jù)考題中所給的題目和提綱所規(guī)定的范圍來(lái)寫(xiě)。主要測(cè)試考生綜合運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)（包括詞匯、語(yǔ)法、邏輯等）的能力。（-）評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)本題采用總體評(píng)分法，通篇分檔計(jì)分，即從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤，要視其是否影響清楚地表達(dá)思想，或成為理解上的障礙，來(lái)判來(lái)定其嚴(yán)重程度。“樣卷”是評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的具體化。每一分?jǐn)?shù)段的中間分，各有樣卷兩份。閱卷員要根據(jù)第五項(xiàng)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照“樣卷”進(jìn)行評(píng)分（不得給0.5分）。評(píng)分要實(shí)事求是，嚴(yán)肅認(rèn)真，標(biāo)準(zhǔn)始終統(tǒng)一，要避免前緊后松，還應(yīng)避免趨中現(xiàn)象。作文的字?jǐn)?shù)明顯不足者，結(jié)合其內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言適當(dāng)扣分。1999年評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)15——13分:內(nèi)容切題，包括圖中說(shuō)明"effect"的有關(guān)信息；清楚表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確，文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。12——10分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖中說(shuō)明"effect"的有關(guān)信息，比較清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵；文字基本連貫；句式有一定變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞無(wú)重大錯(cuò)誤，文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。9分——7分：內(nèi)容切題，基本包括圖中說(shuō)明"effect"的有關(guān)信息；基本清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵；句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有少量錯(cuò)誤，文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。6分——4分：內(nèi)容基本切題，基本表達(dá)圖中信息，語(yǔ)句可以理解，但有較多的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯(cuò)誤，文章長(zhǎng)度基本符合要求。3分——1分：基本按圖寫(xiě)作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解。0分：文不切題，語(yǔ)句混亂，無(wú)法理解。1998年評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)本題以通篇文檔計(jì)分，計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：15—13分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖畫(huà)的全部信息；清楚表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。文章長(zhǎng)度符合要—U-求。12——10分：內(nèi)容切題，包括圖畫(huà)的全部信息；比較清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字基本連貫，句式有一定變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞無(wú)重大錯(cuò)誤，文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。9——7分：內(nèi)容切題，基本包括圖畫(huà)的信息；基本清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有少量錯(cuò)誤。文章長(zhǎng)度符合要求。6——4分：基本表達(dá)圖畫(huà)信息，語(yǔ)句可以理解，但有較多的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯(cuò)誤。文章長(zhǎng)度基本符合要求。3—1分：基本按圖畫(huà)寫(xiě)作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解。0分：文不切題，語(yǔ)句混亂，無(wú)法理解。長(zhǎng)度計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)120——150詞：扣2分90——120詞：扣5分90詞以下：最高分不超過(guò)6分1997年評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)各檔評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：15分——13分：內(nèi)容符合要求，包括對(duì)各圖的說(shuō)明，對(duì)趨勢(shì)的預(yù)測(cè)理由，數(shù)字表達(dá)正確，語(yǔ)言流暢，句式變化多樣，用詞面寬，雖有個(gè)別不妥之處，仍表明作者語(yǔ)言基本功較好，表達(dá)能力較強(qiáng)，長(zhǎng)度符合要求。12分——10分：內(nèi)容符合要求，包括對(duì)各圖的說(shuō)明，對(duì)趨勢(shì)的預(yù)測(cè)及理由，數(shù)字表達(dá)正確，思想表達(dá)清楚，文字連貫，句式變化較多，結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞有少量一般性錯(cuò)誤，長(zhǎng)度符合要求。9分——7分：內(nèi)容符合要求，包括對(duì)各圖的說(shuō)明，對(duì)趨勢(shì)的預(yù)測(cè)及理由，表達(dá)基本清楚，但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤較多，數(shù)字表達(dá)有誤，長(zhǎng)度符合要求。6分——4分：內(nèi)容基本符合要求，語(yǔ)句尚可理解，但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤多，有些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤數(shù)字表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤，長(zhǎng)度符合要求。3分——1分：內(nèi)容與本題要求部分有關(guān)，除事先備好但與要求不符的語(yǔ)句外，結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤多且嚴(yán)重，詞不達(dá)意，條理不清，不成篇章，數(shù)字表達(dá)混亂。0分：語(yǔ)句幾乎無(wú)一正確，數(shù)字表達(dá)混亂，長(zhǎng)度不合要求。套用事先備好的文章，但文不對(duì)聯(lián)題，不能給分。1991——1996年評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)本題以通篇分檔計(jì)分，計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)如下：總分15分15——13分：內(nèi)容切題，包括提綱的全部要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。12——10分：內(nèi)容切題，包括提綱的全部要點(diǎn)；表達(dá)清楚，文字基本連貫；句式有一些變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞無(wú)重大錯(cuò)誤。9——7分：內(nèi)容切題，基本包括文章的要點(diǎn)；表達(dá)基本清楚，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有少量錯(cuò)誤。6——4分：內(nèi)容基本切題，語(yǔ)句可以理解，但有較多的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯(cuò)誤。3——1分：基本按題意寫(xiě)作，但只有少數(shù)句子可以理解。0分：文不切題，語(yǔ)句混亂，無(wú)法理解。長(zhǎng)度計(jì)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：91——100詞：扣1分81——91詞：扣2.5分71——80詞：扣4分61——70詞：扣6分60詞以下：扣8分（三）評(píng)卷實(shí)例（1999年）Directions:Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150words.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEETII.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:effectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlifepossiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotectionVIA*樣卷1.得分143.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotectionVIA*樣卷1.得分14分Fromthesegraphs,wecandrawaconclusionthat,withthegrowthofhumanpopulation,thenumberofspecieshasdecreasedrapidlyinAmerica,andsomespecieshaveevenvanishedfromourplanet.Whydoesthisphenomenonappear?Ithinkthereareseveralpossiblereasonsforthis.First,witharapidgrowthofpopulation,moreandmorepeoplecametolivewheresomewildspecieshavebeenliving.Thenthesespecieshavetomovetootherplaces.Someofthemprobablycannotadapttothenewevironmentanddie.Second,althoughmanypeoplelookonthewildlifeastheirfriends,somepeoplemaynotthinkso.Theycatchalotofwildanimalsandselltheminordertogetmoremoney.Third,withthedevelopmentoftheindustry,thenaturalbalanceandtheecologicenvironmentaredestroyed.Thedeforestrationhasbecomemoreandmoreserious.Sosomeofthewildlivesbecomehomelessandextinct.Inordertoprotectthewildlife,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,thegovernmentsshouldmakelawstopreventthemfrombeingcaughtandkilled.Second,thegovernmentsshouldeducatepeopletolovenatureandprotectit.Third,asforourselves,weshouldtakepracticalactionstoprotectourlivingenvironment.樣卷2.得分11分TherearetwographsaboutthechangesofpopulationandwildlifeintheU.S.Asisseeninthegraphs,withtherisingofpopulation,thenumberofextinctedspeciesincreased.Obviously,thereisastrongeffectofpopulationoverthewildlifeinthiscountry.Whydoesishappen?Icansaytherearemanyreasons.First,mancontinuedtohuntanimalsforfoodandmoneyandmanyvaluablespecieswerekilled.Second,wildlifelosttheirsurvivingspace,bacausemanexpandedtheirindustryatarapidspeed.MorelandwasneededforthisdevelopmentAsaresult,wildlifehasnoplacetolive.Thelastreasonisthattheenvironmentforwildlifehasbeenpolluted,andmanyspeciesdied.Inmyopinion,weshouldeducatepeopletolovethewildanimals,nottokillandeatthem.Wealsoneedtoprovidewildlifewithagoodlivingconditions.Wemustalsolaydownalawtoprotectthewildanimals.得卷3.得分8分Asisshowninthetable,thenumberofpeopleincreasedfromlessthanonemillionin1800to250millonin1990inU.S.Accordingtothefiguresintable,wealsocanseethattherehasbeenasharpdiclineinthewildlifespecies.It'sclearthatthecountry'sgrowingpopulationhaveaharmfuleffectonwildlife.ThepossiblereasonIthinkareasfollows:Forthefirstplace,thepopulationgrowthmakestheroomofthewildlife.Secondly,thepollutioncausingofpeoplegetsridoflargenumberofwildlife.Maybetherearesomeotherreasontoshowthewildlifedowns,butpeoplegenerallybelievethattheabovereasonarecommonacceptable.Fromtheabove,wecanseethatitisurgenttoprotectthewildlife.Inmyopinion,weaskthegovenmentstotakemeasurestokeepthepopulationgrowthundercontrolling,theotherpolicythatistoworkonnewregulationsforwildlife,themanwhogetridofthewildlifeshouldbepunished.I'msuremyopinionisbothsoundedandgrounded.樣卷4.得分5分Accordingtothegraphsgivenbythetable.Theareshowntheeffectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife.Thenumberofpeoplehavebeenontherisefrom1800to1980.Butthenumberofspecieshadbeenontherisefrom1600to1900,andthespecieshaddiedoutsince1900.ThereareIthinksomereasonsfortheupsanddownsofpopulationgrowth.Onthefirstplace,asapeoplewiththedevelopmentofsociety,thestandardoflivingconditionscontinuestoimprovement.Thebirthratesisincrecasedandthedeathratesisatthedeclined.Secondlythespecies,ontheotherhand,arelivedontheruralareas.Theirconditionsofliveswereslowandtheywereabletoprotectthemselves.Sospeciesisdecrease.AsfarasIconcern,Isuggestthatwedidourbesttoprotectwildlife.Thegovernmentshouldmakeeffectivemeasurestoprotectwildlife.Everyoneshouldeducatedtopropectwildlife.樣卷5.得分2分Fromtables,wecanseethatthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife.Itrise250from1800to1900.Ithink,thereatleasttworeasons.Foronething,somepeoplewanttoreturnthenation.Theyfreethemselffromhardworks.Foranother,somepeopleloverthewildlife.People'slifeleverhasrisenfastly.Onthesecondtable,itisclearthattherisenratefasterfrom1800to1900thanfrom1600to1800.But,therearedegened.Firstly,therearenotsecured.Theremanyharmfulthingsinthewild.Secondly,theleadtotrafficintheweekend.Beacausemostlypeoplearefreedinthesametime.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkthatpeopleshouldpaidmuchattentiontothewildlifeprotection.樣卷6.得分0分Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthebarcharts,ittookfromthebeginningofhumanlifetotheyear1830forthepopulationoftheearthtoreachonebillion.Thatrepresentsatimespanofatleasttwomillionyears.Thentheworldpopulationincreasedrapidly,addinguptotwobillionin1930.Thenextbillionwasaddedby1960,onlythirtyyears.Fromthenontheglobalpopulationwasontherise,amountingto4billionin1975,whichisanotherbillionpeopleinonly15years.Thereareatleasttworeasons,Ithink,forthesharpincreaseinworldpopulation.Inthefirstplace,thebirthrateiscontinuouslyclimbinginmanycountries,especiallyindevelopingcountries.Generallyspeaking,peoplethereholdtheopinionthatchildrendon'tcostmuchandwhentheygetoldenoughtoworktheywillbringinmoneyandthatwhenparentsareold,theywilltakecareofthem.Secondly,thedeathrateimostdevelopedcountriesdeclinessteadilybecausepeople'sstandardsoflivingareraisedandhealthcareimproves.Inmayopinion,thechiefreasonforthepopulationgrowthisnotsomuchariseinbirthratesasafallindeathratesasresultofimprovementsinmedicalcare.第二部分2002年寫(xiě)作真題studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwriteanessayentitled"Cultures--NationalandInternational".Intheessayyoushoulddescriblethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning,and2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEEF2.(20points)

第三部分2001年寫(xiě)作考題評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及樣卷76.Directions:Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herownunderstandingofit.Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspapertoshowyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow,giveaspecificexample,andgiveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowlove.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)2001年作文范文Whenweusetheworld"love"wedonotsimplymeananattractiontoapersonoftheoppositesex,whichisaverynarrowdefinitionoftheword.Thepicturebelowillustratestherealmaningoflove,bystressingthefactthatloveisemotionalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdarktheworldaroundusbecomes.Infact,throughouthistorypeopleofmanydifferentcultureshaveregardedloveasthenoblestofhumanemotions.Asanexampieofthepoweroflove,weshouldrememberhowtheChinesepeopleofallnationalitiesrespondtothecalltohelpthevictimsofnaturaldisasterseveryyear.Althoughtheirincomesarestilllowbyinternationalstandards,peoplealloverthecountrydonothesitatetodonatewhatevertheycan--beitmoneyorgoods--tohelptheirneedyfellowcitizens.Moreover,theydothiswithnothoughtofgainforthemselves.Inmyopinion,thebestwaytoshowloveistohelppeoplewhoaremoreunfortunatethanweare.Weshouldalwaysbereadytogiveahelpinghandtothosewhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefarmilymembersorcompletestrangers.Inthisway,wecanhelptomaketheworldabetterplace,for,asthepictureshows,thedarkertheshadowsofsorrowbecome,themorebrightlythelampofloveshines.樣卷的評(píng)分和評(píng)語(yǔ)Sampie1,Sampie2給分：（17—20分）評(píng)語(yǔ)：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列三方面的全部?jī)?nèi)容；文章通順，語(yǔ)言流暢，句式變化多樣；用詞面較寬；雖有個(gè)別不妥之處，但該生基本功較好；表達(dá)能力較強(qiáng)；長(zhǎng)度符合要求。Sampie3,Sampie4給分：（13—16分）評(píng)語(yǔ)：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列三方面的全部?jī)?nèi)容；表達(dá)基本清楚，文字連貫；句式變化較多；結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞有少量一般性錯(cuò)誤；長(zhǎng)度符合要求。Sampie5,Sampie6給分：（9—12分）評(píng)語(yǔ)：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列三方面的全部?jī)?nèi)容；表達(dá)基本清楚；但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤較多，有少數(shù)是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤；長(zhǎng)度符合要求。Sampie7,Sampie8給分：（5-8分）評(píng)語(yǔ)：內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)句尚可理解，但結(jié)構(gòu)與用詞錯(cuò)誤多；有些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤；長(zhǎng)度基本符合要求。Sampie9,Sampie10給分：（1—4分）評(píng)語(yǔ)：與題意勉強(qiáng)有關(guān)，但條理不清，不成篇章；語(yǔ)句錯(cuò)誤多且嚴(yán)重;詞不達(dá)意。（注:文章長(zhǎng)度低于180詞扣1分，低于170分扣2分,依次類推。）Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.Itisoftheutmostimportancetothehumanbeings,Everybodynotonlyneedslove,butalsoshouldgivelove.Asisdescribedinthepicture,"loveisalampwhichisbrighterindarkerplaces."Thisisindeedtrue.Peopleindarkerplacesneedmorelightthanordinarypeople.Mayeevenadimlightcangivethemmuchhopeforabetterlifeandprogress.Maybejustathreadoflightwillcallforththeirstrengthandcouragetostepoutoftheirdifficulties.Forinstancewhensomeoneisstarvingtodeath,justalittlefoodandwaterfromyoumaysavehislife.Orwhenalittlegirlinapoorruralareadropsoutofschoolbecauseofpoverty,justasmallsurnofmoneyfromyoumaysupporthertofinishherschoolingandchangeherlife,youhavegivenlovewhichislikealampinadarkplacewherelightismostneeded.Sotosumup,weshouldofferourhelptoallwhoareinneed.Weexpecttogetlovefromothersandwealsogivelovetootherssowhenyouseesomeoneindifficultyorindistressandinneedofhelp,don'thesitatetogiveyourlovetohim.Ibelievethentheralationshipbetweenpeoplewillbeharmoniousandoursocietywillbeabetterplaceforustolivein.(20分)Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichismosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinothercountries.Weliveindifferentcountries,speakdifferentlanguages,butloveissomethingcommontousall.Buthowtoshowlovemaybedifferentwithdifferentpeopleindifferentcountries.Thisissomethingweshouldgivemorethoughtto.Asshowninthepicture,loveislikealampwhichshinesbrightestindarkplaces.Thistellsusasimpletruth:Loveislikaalamp.Itismostvaluablewhenitismostneeded.Forexample,onceIsawaforeignladygetlostinthestreet.ShecouldnotspeakChineseandnobodyseemedtobeabletohelpher.ThoughmyEnglishisnotverygoodandIamashyperson,Ithougthsheneededhelpverymuch.Iaskedherwhatshewanted.Shetoldmeshelostherway,soIshowedherthewaytoherhotel.Itwasasmallthingbutshethankedmeverymuchbecausemyhelpwasneededverymuch.Myhelpwaslikealampinadarkplace.Ithinkweallshouldbelikealampinadarkplace,showingourlove,givingourhelptoothers,eventostrangers.Inthiswaywecanmakethisworldaharmoniousandpeacefulworld.(18分)Isawapicturerecentlyinyournewspaper.Thereisasmalllampinthepictureandaflameonthelamp,whichissmiling.Thelampsays,"Loveisalamp,itwillbebrightestinthedarkestplace."Ithinkitshowsusavividpicture:Whereandwhoneedlive,loveisthenoblestfeeling.SoIbelievethatweshouldgiveourlovetothosewhoareinneed.Ifeveryonecangivehislovetowhominneed,thentheworldwillbefilledwithlove.Forexample,inthecountryside.Therearemillionsofpupils,whocan'taffordtoattendschool.Someofthemneverattendschool.Theyareunfortunate,butnowtherearemanywarm-heartedpeoplewhogivehelptothepupils.Ofcourse,wecanalsoshowourloveinmanyotherways.Forinstance.Asafriend,weshouldhelpourfriendswhentheyareintrouble.Thereisasaying:Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Asayoungman,weshouldrespecttheolder.Whenwewalkonthestreet,wecanhelptheblindoroldpeopleandchildrentocrosstheroad.Inaword,Therearemanywaystoshowourlove.Thepeopleallovertheworldshouldloveandrespecteachother.Thebestwaytoshowourloveistohelpotherswhentheyareindifficulities.(16分)Everyonemayagreethatamongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.Butpeoplehavedifferentunderstandingofit.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,thereisonepointofview.Itsaysthatloveislikealamp,whichisbrighterwhenthedarkisheavier.Thismeansthatloveshouldbegiventowhereitismostneeded.Iagreewiththispointofview.Takemyexperienceforaexample.Beingpoor,Ihavetodosomepart-timejobstosupportmystudyinBeijing.Ialwaysfeellovefromotherfriendsandfamilieswhentheyhelpmeeitherinmaterialorinspiritualaspects.Ilovethemandwanttogivemyhelptootherpeopleatthesametime.Butsomeofmyclassmatestaketheirparents'helpforgranted.Theynevertrytosupportthembyworkingontheside.Theyhavenoideaofdifficultiesinone'slife.Therefore,theydon'trealizethevalueoflove.Asforthebestwaytoshowlove,Ithink,firstofall,everyoneshouldbecouragedandrequiredtotrytobeself-reliant.Secondly,whenoneisintrouble,othersshouldhelphim.Finallyweshouldeducatepeopletoappreciatehelpfromotherpeople.Onlyinthiswaycanoursocietybecomeabighappyfamily.(14分)Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearlythatloveislikealampandthedarkertheenvironmentis,thebrighterloveis.Anditisnodenyingthatamongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisthenoblest.Actually,becauseoflove,manypeopleintroublegethelpandencourage,sotheywilltrytheirbesttoovertakethedifficultyandlookforwardtoabetterfuture.What'smore,whenothersareintrouble,theytakehelpingthemforgranted.Therefore,lovewillbefoundallovertheworld.Severalyearsago,someareassufferdisasterbecauseofheavyrain.ThePLAhelpthemrebuildtheirfamilies.Thisyear,Taiwanalsosufferdisasterbecauseoftheearthquake.Manypeopleinourcountrydoourbesttohelpthem.Itisnecessarytotakesomemeasuretospreadthelove.Foronething,weshouldencouragepeoplewhohaveloveandarehappytohelpothers.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethatloveisbenefitforallofthissociety.AlsoImakesurethatbythisway,wehaveabrighterfuture.(12分)Inthepicturebelow,inthefulldarksituation,alittleofsparkenlightensthedark.Thenaivesparksmilessosweet.Itseemstobesaying,asthecaptioninthepicturereads,Iamalightoflove,themoredarkwhereIam,themoreenlighten.Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest.Asamatteroffact,allofussurviveinaloveworld.Weofferlove,moreimportant,weneedlove.IamahardworkingstudentthatisspecializedinComputerScienceandApplication.Onceatime,IlostmymindaccidentallyasaresultIdroppeddownfromthedownstairs,badlyinjured.Butformyroomates'helpIcouldn'tliveupnotonlyinphysicsbutalsoinspirits.Ithankthemgenuinly.WhatIaccomplishedtodaypartyattributetoallofthemgivingmeahandtomyschoolwork.IhopeIcanliveuptomyselfaswellasmyroommates.AsfarasIamconcerned,loveshouldbeshowedbytwomeansasfollow.Atthefirstplace,weshouldkeepacriticaleyeonothers'loveshowedtous.Ofcourse,mostoftheloveisgoodforus,nevertheless,somedoesharmtous,suchashelpingtocheatinginexams.Thelastbutnotheleast,weshouldshowloveheartstothoseneedingthem.Asweknow,HopeProjectisthelargestloveprojectinourcountry,weshouldpayhighlyattentiononitratherthanneglect.Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenesstohelpothersinourdailylife.Let'sholdourhandstobuildourcountryfilledinlovehearts.（10分）⑺Thispicturetellsusarealitythatlovecanbringuplightingandlightwillmakeeverywherebright.Althoughthelightisweak,itplaysagreateffectwhichwillmakepeoplemorefirmlythanbefore.WhenIwasatmiddle-school,myparentwerebothoutofemployee.MyparentfeltdisappointedandIwasgreatlyworriedmyfuture.Ourlifebecameveryterrible,Ievendicidedtosuicide.Ourneighbourlearntaboutmyfamily'sconidition,andtheybegantohelpus.Theylentafewmoneytomyparentandmyparentusethesemoneytoopenashop.Theyhelpmetostudy.Myparentfinallygotthroughhardlife.SoIsaythatloveisgreat.Ithinkthattherearesomewaystoshowlove.Youmaygivemoneytothepoorandhelptheolddosomeworkingandgiveyourlovetothedisable.Thebestwayshowloveisfromheartratherthanfromappearance.Bythiswaythosepeoplewhoacceptedhelpswillfeelwarmly.Ourworldwillbrightifeveryoneshowlove.(8分)(8)Thepictureimplythatloveisveryimportanttotheneedy.Lovelikealampwhichisbrighterinthedarkerplace.Let'shavenaexample.Whenaperson,whoisaroundus,hasaseriousillandneedasummoneytopayforthemedicalfeebutheorhisfamilycan'taffortit,wellwillmakeoureffortstohelphim.Itisclearthatloveisimportanttoeveryone,inparticular,totheneedy.Itiswellknowntoall,loveisprobablythenoblestamongalltheworthyfeelingofmankind,buteveryonehashis/herownunderstandingofit.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ithinkthebestwaytoshowloveisoursuitablehelpwhenothersarefacingwithdifficultyandneedourhelps.Ifwehelpotherswithoutthinkingwhetherothersneed,itperhapsdecreaseother'sconfidentandatthesametimetakeusintroubles.Asisknowtoall,everythinghastwosides.Showloveproperlywilltakeeffectivefunction,otherwiseitwilltakenegativefunction.Asaconsequence,weshouldnotonlyhavelovebutalsoshowitproperly.（6分）Thepictureshowthatloveisalampwhichleadabrightlightandhopewhenoneinvolvedindark.InChina,wecanseemanystoriesaboutlove,forexample,Fromnewspaperwecanoftenreadabout"TheProjecthope."Therearemanypeopledelvatehimselftohelpothers.Inremotecountry,somechildrencan'tgotoschoolbecausenomoney.However,inotherdistrict,therearemanypeopletoprovidemoneytohelpthesechildren.Fromthispicture,asmalllightbrightsomearea.Wecanreadmuchfromit.Asauniversitystudents,wecandomuch,dobest.Wecanstudyhardscienceknowledge.Weshouldimproveourfromallkindofaspect.Aslongaswedevoteoneselftohelpthosetroublesomeman.（4分）Thesymbolicisalight,itwillbemorepowerfulwhenthecircumstancesismoredark.Everyonehassymbolicandsymbolicisaverygoodmattertous.Itcomefromusanditcanhelpus.Thesymbolicisnotonlyafeeling,butalsoisacharacter.MrsBingxinisagoodwriterwithsymbolic.Shegaveallshecandotothesociety,includemoney,bookandherheart.Shetriedherbesttohelpthosepeoplewhoneedshelp.Weshouldshowourlovetothepeople,furthermore,weshouldshowourlovebythebestway.Ibelievewehavetodoisnotonlytheword,butalsoistheaction,notonlythemoney,butalsotheheart.Ifallofushavegiveoursymbolic,theworldcanchangemorebeautiful.(2分)第四部分優(yōu)秀作文范文精選范文一最新大綱樣題：Directions:Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograveconsequences,yetthetobaccocompaniesstillclaimthattheymakeavalbuablecontributiontotheworldeconomy.Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwoviewpoints.Writeanessaytothenewspapercriticizingtheirviewandjustifyyourstand.Inyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformationprovidedinthepidcturesprintedbelow.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET2.世界煙草室產(chǎn)量 世界吸煙人口比例Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethatcigarettesmokinghascausedseriousproblems.Butthetobaccocompaniesinsistthattheycontributegreatlytotheworldeconomybypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsofworkers.Personally,Ibelievethatcigaretteproductionandconsumptionthreatenstodomoreharmthangood.Firstly,smokingisresponsibleformanyfataldiseasessuchaslungcancer,heartdiseasesandsoon.Accordingtothesurvey,tobaccoconsumersaccountforabout20%oftheworldpopulation,andamongthem,threemillionpeoplediefromsmoking-relateddiseaseseveryyear.Thefactthattheoutputoftobaccoproductionisreducedfrom143.64billionpoundsin1994to142billionpoundsin1995alsosuggeststhatpeoplehavecometorealizethenegativeeffectsofsmoking.Secondly,tobaccoconsumptionisextremelywastefulofmoney.Asisindicate!inthepictures,200billionUSdollarsislostduetosmokingeachyear.Obviously,thetotallossofmoneyaroundtheglobesubstantiallyexceedsthegainintheindustry.Inconclusion,astheeconomicdevelopmentaimsatmakingourlifebetter,wecannotsacrificeourhealthforshort-termfinancialbenefits.Ifwehavetospendmoreandmoremoneyprovidingmedicalservicesforthosewhosufferfromsmoking-relatedillnesses,thenotionofpromotingeconomyviatobaccoproductionisnotjustifable.Itishightimethatwefoughtforthetotaltobaccoban.范文二Directions:Writeanessaythatconveystheinformationinthefollowingchart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoonaccompaniedbyourcomments.Timelimit:40minutesWordlimit:nolessthan150wordsYouressayshouldbewrittenclearlyonANSWERSHEET□othrng32.7%(HK$69447nillH)(FK$8691rnllkn)ThispiechartgivesusanoverallpictureoftheexportsofmanufacturingindustriesinHongKongin1996.Thefirstthingwenoticeisthatthesearealllightindustries.Theyarealsowhatiscalled"labor-intensive",meaningthattheyemploylargenumbersofpeople.Theclothingindustryaccountsforthemostexports一—32.7percent,worthHK$69,447million.Theelectronicsindustryisinsecondplacewith26percentoftheexports,worthHK$55.067million.Textiles,timepieces,chemicalsandjewelrytogetheronlyaccountforabout18percentoftheexports,buttheyproduceitemsworthatotalofoverHK$50million.ItseemstomethatHongKong,whichhasasmalllterritoryandfewnaturalresources,hasmadetherightchoiceindevelopingtheseindustries.Theyproducemainlyexportgoods,whichbringinmuch-neededforeigncurrency.Atthesametime,theyprovideemploymentforthemaximumnumberofpeople.范文三Directions:Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteandessayinatleast150words.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEETII.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:effectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlifepossiblereasonfortheeffectyoursuggestionforwildlifeprotectionTHEUPSANDDOWNSOFPOPULATIONGROWTH

USPOPULATJONGROWTHOVERTIME2tt>20ZS3■70,。=sS95ZUSPOPULATJONGROWTHOVERTIME2tt>20ZS3■70,。=sS95ZThetwochartsshowthattheincreaseintheU.S.populationhasbeenaccompaniedbyacorrespondingdeclineinthenumberofwildlifespecies.Fartoomanyspecieshavebeenlostalready.Thisposesadangertoecologicalbalance.Asthehumanpopulationexpands,moreandmorewildanimalsarehuntedforfood,orbecausetheyarethoughttopresentathreattoman.Butstudiesshowthatoneoftheprimarycausesofthedisappearanceofwildlifeispollution,whichisoneoftheconsequencesofpopulationgrowthandeconomicdevelopment.Thismakesuswonderifmanisabletosharethisplanetinharmonywithotherlifeforms.Inmyopinion,itisimperativetotakestepstoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthecharts.Onemeasurewouldbetoforbidthebuildingofcitiesinareaswherewildlifeisthreatenedwithextinction.But,moreimporantly,manmustlearntostoppollutingtheenvironment,orhehimselfwillbecomeextinct.范文四Directions:Writeanessaythatconveystheinformationinthefollowingchart/graph/picture/drawing/cartoonaccompaniedbyyourcommerits.Timelimit:40minutesWordlimit:nolessthan150wordsYouressayshouldbewrittenclearlyonANSWERSHEETLabourForceandtheEmployedPopulationofHongKong

(year-on-yeargrowthrate)pVOCDt5.01_2?0pVOCDt5.01_2?0 Iii-[j[]「]i"[[]IT]廠「['|]「.Q1Q2Q3Q4Q1Q2QBQ?Q1Q2Q3Q4Q1Q2Q3QtQ1Q2Q3Q4Q1Q2Q3Q41X1 1992 19M 1994 1995 1996Q：QjancrOnthisgraphwecanseethattherateofemploymentinHongKongkeptpacewiththechangesinthesizeofthelaborforceintheperiod1996-1996.Thismeansthatasthenumberofjobsincreawd,sodidthenumberofworkers,andviceversa.Usuallyemploymentdependsonthegrowthorshrinkageoftheconomy.Aftergrowingbyover2percentinthet