1、使用規范的句子完滿意義的完滿BikesaresopopularinChina.(BikesaresopopularinChinathatalmosteveryfamilyhasatleastone.)構造的完滿指代不明Itisincredibletomanypeople.Cigarettesmokersspendmoneyforillness.(Itisincredibletomanypeoplethatcigarettesmokersspendmoneyforillness.)省略錯誤IsaidIhavemorerespectforhimthanhiswife.(IsaidIhavemore

2、respectforhimthanforhiswife.)斷句不嚴Wecouldntdecideuponanewcar,thereweremanyattractivemodels.(Wecouldntdecideuponanewcar,forthereweremanyattractivemodels.)or(Wecouldntdecideuponanewcar.Thereweremanyattractivemodels.)連結代詞指向不明確Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butitwasnotserious.(Hewasknockeddownbyabicycle,butw

3、asnotseriouslyhurt.)不定式、分詞、動名詞的邏輯主語與句子主語不一致Tosucceedinascientificresearchproject,persistenceisneeded.(Tosucceedinascientificresearchproject,oneneedstobepersistent.)構造不平行Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod,whilenowthelaboratorymethodisemployed.(Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod;no

4、witistaughtbythelaboratorymethod.)Itwasbothalongceremonyandverytedious.(Theceremonywasbothlongandtedious.)4)Thecompetitionforcollegeenrollmentisextremelykeenthisyearandthecandidatesspenddaysandnightspreparingfortheentranceexaminationandtheyneglecttheirhealthandsothenewspaperscarryarticlesurgingteach

5、ersandparentstotakeupthisproblemseriously.(Asthecompetitionforcollegeenrollmentisextremelykeenthisyear,thecandidatesspenddaysandnightspreparingfortheentranceexamination,neglectingtheirhealth.Inviewofthis,thenewspaperscarryarticlesurgingteachersandparentstotakeupthisproblemseriously.)精練1)Thedistantex

6、plosionwasaudibletotheear.(Thedistantexplosionwasaudible.)TherearefourcompaniesinShanghai,andanyofthemcansupplyuswithspareparts.(AnyofthefourcompaniesinShanghaicansupplyuswithspareparts.)2)Thebottlesthatareplacedontheshelfcontainsomechemicalsthathavebeennewlydiscovered.(Thebottlesontheshelfcontainne

7、wchemicals.)(Mr.Li,myfavouriteprofessor,hasreceivedaDistinguishedTeacherAward.)多樣化簡單句與復雜句雙重否認變化主語常用句型相像性1)AistoBwhat/asCistoDMoralcorruptionistotheStateasphysicaldiseaseistoanindividualbody.2)Justas,soJustaswoodsareindispensabletobirds,soistheearthtohumanbeings.3)AandBhavesth.incommonAsfaraspersonal

8、ityisconcerned,theyhavealmosteverythingincommon.4)AissimilartoBMyhobbyissimilartohisinthatwebothlikecollectingrecords,foreignanddomestic.5)Thesameistrueof,ThesamecanbesaidofAstheeconomiesofallcountriesarecloselyinterrelatednocountrycandevelopinself-seclusion.ThesameistrueofChina.2.相異性1)Aisjusttheopp

9、osite(toB)Beijingispopulousandcrowded,whileCanberraisjusttheopposite.2)AdiffersfromBinthatChinasconditiondiffersfromoursinthatChinahasthelargestpopulationintheworld.3)isnotthesameWhileitmaybetruethatbasketballandvolleyballsharecertainfeatures,theexcitementeacharousesinthespectatorsisnotthesame.1)The

10、advantagesoutweighthedisadvantagesItseemssafetosaythattheadvantagesofmarriageoutweighthedisadvantagesofdivorce.2)NothingcanrivalPerhapsnothingcanrivalthepleasurefromreading.3)hasdrawbacksaswellasmerits.Therecouldbenodoubtthatjob-hoppinghasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.4)AissuperiortoBMenmaybesuperiorto

11、womeninphysicalaffairs.Yet,thereisnodifferenceinintelligence.5)variesfrompersontopersonPeoplesattitudetowardsdrugsvariesfrompersontoperson.1)Itistruethatmostjobsareaseriesofmoreorlessunpleasantchores,butitdoesntfollowthatthatsalltheyare.Thisistrue,nodoubt,butitisnotthewholestorybyanymeans.Itisfairly

12、wellknownthatVitaminCisindispensabletohealth.Butitisprobablylesswellknownthattakingitexcessivelymaydoharmtothehumanbody.Thisstoryalsoillustratestheimportanceofseizinganopportunitywhenitpresentsitself.Itisonethingtobeofferedanopportunity;itisanotherthingtotakeitanduseitwell.Asiaranksfirstbothinareaan

13、dinpopulationamongthesevencontinents.EuropeissecondtoAsiainpopulation,butinareaitisthelastbutone.2)Weallhopethatacountryspopulationshouldbeinproportiontoitsarea.Unfortunately,therealityoftengoesagainstourwill.3)Aisbyfarthelargeruniversity,beingoverthreetimesasbigasB.4)AndinAugustasmanyas39caracciden

14、tswerereported,indicatinganincreaseofabout79percentascomparedwiththenumberofJanuary.Thistableprovidesseveralimportantpointsofcomparisonbetweenthetwouniversities.Ascanbeindicatedinthetable,thehousingspaceforthestaffofAin1995was34500squaremeters,whichnearlydoubledtheBscorrespondingfigure.Aswecouldfind

15、outlaterinthisunit,hisplanwasnotquiteashehadexpected.3)Asisrevealedinthegraph4)Asthesurveyresultsshow描繪曲線走勢Thepopulationroserapidlyuntilitreached600000in1990.Since1990thegrowthhascontinuedbutthepopulationhasrisenrelativelyslowly.Before1970thebirthrateremainedlevel.Thenin1970itfelluntilitreached30per

16、thousandin1980.Thebirthrateinthisregionrocketedtothehighestpeakin1963.4)Afterasteadydeclineforawholedecadethecountrysfertilityrateshowssignsoflevelingoff.8.圖表作文中的開頭與結尾Thistableprovidesseveralimportantpointsofcomparisonbetweenthetwokeyuniversities.Thetwographsdepictthesamethingseenintwodifferentways.

17、ThefirstdiagramsimplyrecordsThesecondgraphthrowsanowlighton3)Thekeyfindingstakenfromthesurveysareasfollows:Ifdriverscontinuetodrivemorecarefullyandfurtherstrengthentheirsenseofsafety,therateofaccidentscanbeexpectedtodeclineevenmoredramaticallyintheyear1991.句子之間的連結過渡詞語1)and,also,moreover,furthermore,

18、inaddition,besides3)but,yet,while,whereas,although,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,incontrast3)for,since,as,because,dueto,onthegroundsthat,owingto4)so,asaresult,thus,consequently,therefore5)obviously,certainly,ofcourse,undoubtedly,infact,indeed6)if,aslongas,providedthat,unless7)firstly,tobeginwith,then,afterthis,lastbutnotleast8)forinst