1、高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導123BeginFinish123BeginFinish1BeginWhat to read?1BeginWhat to read? Were you Marks math teacher? One day, an old man came to my office and asked. I nodded. Mark talked about you a lot. I want to show you something, he said, taking a wallet out of his pocket. They found t

2、his on him when he was killed in the battle. We thought you might know it. Opening the wallet, he carefully took out two worn pieces of notebook paper that had obviously been taped, folded and refolded many times. I knew without looking that the papers were the ones on which I had listed all the goo

3、d things that each of Marks classmates had said about him. And that happened 20 years ago. Mark was in the third grade class I taught. All 34 of my students were dear to me, but Mark was one in a million. Very neat in appearance, he had that happy-to-be-alive attitude that made even his occasional m

4、isbehavior pleasant. Mark also talked without stopping. I tried to remind him again and again that talking without permission was not allowed. What impressed me so much, though, was the sincere response every time I had to correct him for misbehaving. Thank you for correcting me, Sister! I didnt kno

5、w what to do with it at first but soon I became used to hearing it many times a day.One morning my patience was running out when Mark talked once too often. I made a new-teachers mistake. I looked at Mark and said, If you say one more word, I am going to tape your mouth shut!It wasnt ten seconds lat

6、er when Chuck shouted, Mark is talking again. I hadnt asked any of the students to help me watch Mark, but since I had stated the punishment in front of the class, I had to act on it. Paragraph 1:I walked to my desk and took out a roll of tape. _Paragraph 2:One day I decided to do something differen

7、t when Mark talked again in class. _ Were you Marks math teacherWhat/ HowWhen/ WhereWhoWhy What/ HowWhen/ WhereWhoWhy Setting: （1）故事發生的時間、地點？ （2）時間線/地點變化?Character: （1）故事是何視角？ （2）故事中涉及人物有哪些？主要人物是誰？其他人物起何作用，下文是否會參與？ （3）人物是何性格？故事中人物情感有何變化？Setting: Character: “I” One day 20 years agoWhenwhowhereOfficeC

8、lassroom An old manMarkChuckNarrator敘事者“First person” perspective 第一人稱視角_ timelines(時間線)Tense : _Simple past tense Two “I” One day 20 years agoWhenwhPersonalitiesCharacter analysisMarkDetailsVery neat in appearance, he had that happy-to-be-alive attitude that made even his occasional misbehavior ple

9、asant.Mark also talked without stopping. I tried to remind him again and again“Thank you for correcting me, Sister!” I became used to hearing it many times a day.cheerfuloptimisticnaughtypolitePersonalitiesCharacter analysiCharacter analysisMarkcheerfuloptimisticnaughtypolitePersonalitiesBehaviorsIf

10、 “I” really taped him, will he be very angry or cry? will he just stop talking because of my taping him?will he hate me for doing it?高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件Character analysisMarkcheerfuPlot: （1）故事是何結構？沖突和高潮是否出現？是什么？ （2）有哪些細節值得留意？ （3）影響故事發展

11、的線索是什么？高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件Plot: 高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)1. Work out the conflictBeginningDevelopmentConflictClimaxEndingMark talked again although I warned him many times.Remember to solve the conflict.Tie the threads together20 years

12、ago高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件1. Work out the conflictBeginn he carefully took out two worn pieces of notebook paper that had obviously been taped, folded and refolded many times.Mark thought the paper very important to him.All 34 of my studen

13、ts were dear to me, but Mark was one in a million. I liked Mark best.2. Focus on some details高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件 he carefully took out two woTheme: （1）根據已有文字能否判斷故事的主題？ （2）若上文沒有體現既定主題，你希望你故事的主題是什么？高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開

14、課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件Theme: 高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPTA. An honorable soldierB. Friendship C. Patience matters for teachersD. The power of praise The story of Mark begins with _, on which “I” had listed _ said by Marks classmates.two pieces of notebook paper all the good things

15、thread 線索高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件A. An honorable soldierThe sto123BeginFinish高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件123BeginFinish高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(12BeginHow to Plot？高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完

16、美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件12BeginHow to Plot？高考二輪復習之讀后續寫高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共3

17、8張PPT)ppt課件完?已給片段結尾：高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件?高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件Paragraph 1. I walked to my desk and took out a roll of tape. To tape or not?I decided not to tape his mouth. Why?I taped his mouth.Other students response? My soluti

18、on?Marks response? My solution?Before: _Paragraph 2.One day I decided to do something different when Mark talked again in class. To list the good things said by Marks classmates.Aimed to use punishment.Now: _“two worn pieces of notebook paper”高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導

19、(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件Paragraph 1. To tape or not?I 三、把握主題，價值引領 事件的走向及最終結局有無偏離作者的寫作意圖或主題意蘊、思想情感？ 事件的發展有無凸顯主題，體現正確的價值導向，展現對真、善、美的思考與追求？ 本文主題：The power of praise高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件三、把握主題，價值引領高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PP

20、T)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完四、意料之外，情理之中ATTENTION：Creative并不意味著天馬行空的想象，讀后續寫和一般故事創作不一樣在于它是有一定框架和指引的，是帶著鐐銬在跳舞。讀后續寫必須是有邏輯的，在此之上的創意才是令人欣賞的。高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件四、意料之外，情理之中ATTENTI

21、ON：高考二輪復習之讀后123BeginFinishHow to write？高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件123BeginFinishHow to write？高考二高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完常見句型：定語從句名詞性從句狀語從句獨立主格非謂語動詞With復合

22、結構強調句倒裝句虛擬語氣感嘆句常見修辭：1. Simile 明喻like/ seem / as /resemble/ comparable toMy love is like a red, red rose. (Robert Burns)2. Metaphor 暗喻Life is an unexplored river, full of twists, great beauty, and dangerous surprises. 3. Personification 擬人The forest held its breath, and the trees seemed to listen int

23、ently. 4. Hyperbole 夸張They almost died laughing. Linda smiled, and all the world was gay. 高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件常見句型：常見修辭：高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張(1) The sky was clear. The sky was so clear that we seemed to be able to see for miles.(2) Wang

24、Wei was so tired. Wang Wei put her head down on her pillow and went to sleep. (3) It was quiet in the evening. It was so quiet. There was almost no windonly the flames of our fire for company.Journey Down The Mekong高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件J

25、ourney Down The Mekong高考二輪復習之 Traveling with friends is funnier than traveling alone because friends can make a lot of fun things instead of doing it alone Friends can make the trip funnier than traveling alone because they all are about to relieve from work. They want to spend fun time together. 高考

26、二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件 Traveling with friends is fun所見所聞所感所思外貌描寫環境描寫語言描寫動作描寫心理描寫情感描寫所見所做所感高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件所見所聞所感所思外貌描寫語言描寫動作描寫心理描寫所見所做所感所見外貌描寫所見The woman who has her hair i

27、n curl wears a pair of glasses and a beautiful necklace. she smiles confidently, stands straight with her hands crossed in the front. she may be a manager.高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件所見外貌描寫所見The woman who has her 所見環境描寫所見高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件所見環境描寫所見高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PP所聞語言描寫高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件所聞語言描寫高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)所思動作描寫所做高考二輪復習之讀后續寫解題指導(共38張PPT)ppt課件完美課件優秀課件公開課課件高考二輪