1、Good is good, but better carries it.精益求精，善益求善。SAT寫作例子1：林肯直接背誦版本-對(duì)應(yīng)話題：苦難與成功；努力運(yùn)氣；動(dòng)力價(jià)值觀Firstofall,itisonesinitialfailures,farmorethanthesmoothwaytowardabrightfuture,thatmotivateustochange.SuchanideacanbeexemplifiedbythelegendarylifeexperienceofAbrahamLincoln,theformerPresidentoftheUnitedStates.Stagger

2、ingonhiswaytowardhisdream,AbrahamLincolnsufferedalotfromfailuresandrejectionfromothers.Suchanegativecircumstanceevenisolatedhimfromhisfriendsandfamily,pushinghimtotheveryvergeofdespairanddesperation.Atthattime,theonlywaythatLincolncouldapplytoproceedhislife,itseems,istosurrendertohisfatebygivinguphi

3、sdreams.However,evenunderthissituation,Abrahamstillcherishedhisbelieftowardhisdreamandhappiness,makingallhiseffortstoameliorate/enhancehisoratoryskills.Despitethecountlessdefeatsduringhiselections,he,insteadofcompromising,persistedandfilledthehopeintothemindofhimselfbyprovidinghisaudienceswithextrao

4、rdinarilyrousingandremarkablyconvincingarguments.Sometimes,evenwhen(hewas)desperatelycornered,heneverrejectedthepersistenceuntilhewassuccessfullyelectedasthePresidentoftheUnitedStates.HisexceptionalexperiencehasimpressedhisfellowAmericansandpeoplefromallaroundtheworld,stimulatingthemtomarchforwardon

5、theirwaytosuccess.Becauseofthis,hewasalsocoinedasthesymboloftriumphandpersistence.（230字）短例子：AnothercaseinpointconcernsAbrahamLincoln,theformerPresidentoftheUnitedStates,whofoundmotivationtochangeafterhisinitiallossinalocalelectioninIllinois.Afterlosing,heworkedhardtoimprovehisoratoryskills.Atalaterstageinhispoliticalcareer,hebecameknowntoallAmericansasarolemodelofhisextraordinarilyrousingspeechesandremarkablyconvincingarguments.Itwouldnotbewrongtoimplythathadnothesufferedagreatdealfromhisformerlypainfulexperienceandfailures,Lincolnwouldnothavehadtheimpe