1、長郡高三的寫作教學夯實基礎，注重積累輸入寫作訓練方式多樣化輸出作文批閱方式多樣化反饋如何有效提高寫作分數1.卷面書寫的干凈整齊2.萬能句式的靈活運用3.高級詞匯的閱讀積累1.輸入詞匯，豐富寫作2.強化語法，輔助寫作3.構建詞塊，提升寫作一、夯實基礎，注重積累定語從句寫作：1.眾所周知，中國有960萬平方公里的土地，是世界第三大國。2.中國有56個民族，其中漢族人最多（the Han Ethnic Group)，占94；3.中國有許多大河流，其中長江和黃河是最重要的河流。4.曾經有一段時間中國的經濟落后于世界許多國家。5.隨著經濟的增長，中國人被歧視的日子一去不復返了，所以中國人都 為此感到自豪

2、。As is known to all, China covers more than 9.6 million square kilometers, which is the third largest country in the world. The Chinese nation consists of 56 nationalities, among which the Han Ethnic Group is the largest, making up 94% of the whole. Besides, there are many big rivers in China, the m

3、ost important of which are the Yangzi River and the Yellow River. There was a time when Chinese economy was far behind many other countries in the world. However, with the development of the economy, the days are gone forever when the Chinese people were looked down upon, of which all Chinese are pr

4、oud. Lexical chunks詞塊bus conductor, seat, ticket, driver, passenger, bus station, gas a crowded bus, catch a bus, a bus at the bus station The newly-made bus at the bus station is very beautiful.bus 英語詞塊意識與寫作能力提升的相關性研究Michael LewisThe Lexical Approach (1993)Lexical chunks對傳統外語教學中將單詞看成是語言教學的最小單位的觀點提出

5、了質疑。他認為，語言是由一系列有意義的詞匯鏈或意群（ lexical chunks ）組成，所以詞匯鏈或意群應成為語言教學的最小單位（比如：from the bottom of ones heart, be known as 等） 1短語(polyword) 由兩個或兩個以上的單詞組成構成成分固定不變 for free, as a result2搭配語(collocation) 動詞-介詞、副詞或者介副詞一起；動詞-名詞，形容詞-名詞的搭配等 devoteto; broaden ones outlook3慣用語(institutionalized utterances) 獨立話語，是規范類的、

6、不改變形式的諺語、格言和社會公式話語。It depends. /Its on me. / Whats up?4語句框架(sentence frames) 結構性短語：為表達某種意義或觀點提供了一個基本結構。The reason why is that.I am sorry to keep you waiting.I am so sorry to have kept you waiting. Mr. Zhang is sorry to keep you waiting all this time. 主+ be (tense) sorry to keep (tense) you waiting.L

7、exical Chunks in Presenting ViewpointsIm in favour of/ against I prefer to; as far as I am concerned; On a personal note, ; From my point of view; Lexical chunks used in the direct way: On the contraryThe opinions aboutvary from person to personAs to, there are some different views among people;Some

8、 people hold the view that while Others take the attitude thatLexical chunks used in the contradictory way:Lexical chunksjoin in take part inparticipate inengage injoin the rank oflike / loveshow a passion forbe fond ofhave an appetite forgo in for be into sth.be crazy about二、寫作訓練方式多樣化 單句翻譯聯句練習（高級句式

9、）段落寫作篇章寫作 人們普遍認為克隆人的弊大于利。2. 不可否認，在國外學習在某種程度上給 青少年帶來一些負面的影響。3. 我們希望，你長得強壯，熱切把握一切機會去出色表現。It is widely acknowledged that the disadvantages of human cloning outweigh its advantages. It is undeniable that studying abroad may to some extent have a negative influence on teenagers. It is our hope that you w

10、ill grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to perform outstandingly.單句翻譯原句：The climate in Kunming is very mild and sunny, and many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.The climate is so mild and sunny in Kunming that many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scen

11、ery.So mild and sunny is the climate in Kunming that many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.so that 聯句練習The Elements (構成/成分) of a paragraphparagraph sentences topic sentencesupporting sentencesconcluding sentence段落寫作PracticeEducation is very important, particularly in the variou

12、s ways it benefits young people. First of all, it teaches them and helps them better understand the world. Secondly , education teaches people about the history and culture of their country. In this way, young people learn about the past and are able to appreciate their national literature and art.

13、First of allSecondly In this way主題句+關聯詞訓練：段落寫作三、作文批閱方式多樣化 一、互相批改1. 每名學生把拿到的文章仔細地讀一遍。了解作者的寫作意圖，看自己是否真正讀懂了。 2. 看拼寫和標點符號。3. 仔細分析每一個句子。 看主謂是否一致。看句子是否完整。 看用詞是否得當（尤其是動詞）。 看時態是否合理。 三、作文批閱方式多樣化 4. 分析句子與句子之間的連接。 看句子之間是否有連接詞或相應的連接。 看連接詞的應用是否恰當。 5. 寫下自己的建議，針對你讀到的文章，寫下你對該同學的建議，可以是針對文章內容的，也可以是書寫、語法等方面的。二、師生面批 四、

14、如何有效提高寫作分數覆蓋所有主要內容；應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯；語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯所致；應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊；達到了預期的寫作目的。第五檔（很好）（2125分）：高考考綱對書面表達的評分標準：What makes a good composition?Covering all points Language fluent、coherent、high-levelBeautiful handwriting 四、如何有效提高寫作分數1. 卷面書寫的干凈整齊2. 萬能句式的靈活運用3. 高級詞匯的閱讀積累四、如何有效提高寫作分數1.

15、 卷面書寫的干凈整齊優秀作文 總體感極佳雖有個別錯誤Good handwriting High marksGood handwriting Higher marks寫好字的訣竅： 右傾斜 5 貼線 豎線拉直 圓潤、均勻 間隔四、如何有效提高寫作分數1. 卷面書寫的干凈整齊2. 萬能句式的靈活運用What makes a good composition？Covering all points Language fluent、coherent、high-level4. Beautiful handwritingWhat makes a good composition？high-levelwor

16、dssentenceframesSentence frames萬能句式 sothat only when/if從句 倒裝 not only but also2. 介詞短語 with結構、apart from3. 主語從句 what、 定從非謂語動詞 doing / done （狀語）實例示范 原句：The climate in Kunming is very mild and sunny, and many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.The climate is so mild and sunny in Kun

17、ming that many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.So mild and sunny is the climate in Kunming that many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery.so that 原句：The Americans and the British speak the same language, and they also share a large number of social customsThe

18、 Americans and the British not only speak the same language, but also they share a large number of social customs.Not only do the Americans and the British speak the same language, but also they share a large number of social customs.not onlybut also四、如何有效提高寫作分數1. 卷面書寫的干凈整齊2. 萬能句式的靈活運用3. 高級詞匯的閱讀積累江蘇高考題E篇2,It has given us a deeper kn