1、中考英語寫作指導學習目標：1.了解中考作文要求及命題特點。2.學習如何組織作文。3.如何有效地使用連詞。學習目標：要求：要求學生在15-20分鐘內，根據所給提示，寫一篇語言正確、內容完整，語句連貫的短文。詞數控制在80個左右。特點：1.貼近生活，貼近時代，有充分的思維空間。 2.多種題材，書信，畢業贈言，事件描述，個人觀點，且多種文體結合。1. 中考作文要求及命題特點2.如何組織作文。書面表達六步法審時態人稱體裁（記述文，應用文，議論文）健康很重要。在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調查，右圖是他們此次的調查結果。根據

2、你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調查報告,并提倡大家進行假日休閑。Cross-question(審題)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle (體裁）：_Person（人稱）：_Tense（時態）: _調查報告，記敘文第一人稱一般現在時Before writing1. Cross-question(審題) List key points1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or par

3、ents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (th

4、e key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add)How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. C

5、ome and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending)美(beautify) most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.方法一:善用意義相近的 高級詞匯，避免行文單調英語寫作技巧Which is better?1.我希望你能幫助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2.我不吃垃圾食品。A I don

6、t eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3.我們應該努力取得好成績。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.方法二 : 活用多種句型,避免重復和呆板,增加文采英語寫作技巧盡量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正確、通順為最基本要求Which is better?1 雨下得很大，所以他沒趕上校車。A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.B He m

7、issed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我們應該保護環境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，豐富文章內容，增加說服力。英語寫作技巧加諺語(Proverb)集中注意力于學習We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should c

8、oncentrate on our studies.加諺語(Proverb)加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs 三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之母。5.The early bird catches

9、the worm.一天一個蘋果， 醫生遠離我。條條大路通羅馬。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.8.All roads lead to Rome.青少年應盡我們所能保護環境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to

10、 protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子連(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） As the saying goes, “Al

11、l work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. （the ending） Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes t

12、hem relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the body)連(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at ho

13、me,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四:妙用關聯詞，使行文連貫流暢

14、，使文章富有層次感。英語寫作技巧1.表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示遞進: besides, whats more 3.表示轉折: but, however, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果: because, since, for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示條件:if, unless 關聯詞(connection words)6.表示對比: instead, notbut, while, on the one h

15、andon the other hand7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示順序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next, later, since then, from then on9.表示強調: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結論: all in a

16、ll, in a word, generally speaking, 關聯詞(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.( )Its too late to

17、 invite any more people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastASteps of writing4. CheckingSpelling(拼寫)Tense(時態)Grammar (語法)Handwriting(書寫)Punctuation marks(標點符號)Great changes in my hometown For the past several yea

18、rs, my hometownchanges a lot. In the past, the houses old and small, but now the buildings are tall and beautiful. And at that time, farmers work hardly and made little money. But now people are working in the factoryes and they make much more money. Because its relaxing work in the factory, so they

19、 lead a happily life.Inworked hardbutfactorieshas changedhappywereSteps of writing5. Copying out 書寫規范，卷面整潔書寫不規范，卷面不整潔, 0分。第三檔（一般）： （69分）一、評分原則1.本題總分為15分，按五個檔次給分。2.評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔 次，然后以該檔的要求來衡量，結合內容和語言表達 綜合給定分數。3.考生可以根據要點適當發揮，加入自己的觀點。4.詞數少于80的，從總分中減去1分。5.拼寫錯誤多，書寫較差以致影響表達，在所確定檔次的份上范圍內，減去1分。 中考

20、英語書面表達評分原則二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求第一檔（很好）：（1215分） 完全完成了試題規定的任務，涵蓋了基本的內容要點， 或在發揮時內容有新意或亮點；語言基本無誤，行文連貫， 表達清楚。第二檔（好）：（912分） 完成了試題規定的任務，涵蓋了基本的內容要點；語言 有少量錯誤，行文基本連貫，表達基本清楚。第三檔（一般）； （69分） 基本完成了試題規定的任務，寫出了一些內容；語言有 一些錯誤，行文不夠連貫。第四檔（較差）： （35分） 未能完成試題規定的任務，只能寫出與內容有關的一些 單詞；語言錯誤較多，未能清楚傳達信息。第五檔（差）： （03分） 未能完成試題規定的任務，只能寫出與內容有

21、關的一些 單詞；語言錯誤很多，未能清楚傳達信息。范文1： 在日常生活中你主動幫助你的父母做家務活嗎？請你根據提示用英語寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時所作家務以及你對家務的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 掃地 3. 幫助媽媽做飯 4.洗衣服 5. 為花澆水 6. 飯后洗碗要求：語句通暢，語法正確。 不得逐句翻譯。范文1： 在日常生活中你主動幫助你的父母做家務活嗎？請你根據提示用英語寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時所作家務以及你對家務的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾 2. 掃地 3. 幫助媽媽做飯 4.洗衣服 5. 為花澆水 6. 飯后洗碗要求：語句通暢，語法正確。 不得逐句翻譯。_人稱時態事件觀點要

22、點審列如何列提綱：Para1:Para2:Para3:I think its important to help parents do housework during our daily life.In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（綜述）開門見山，表明觀點。根據提示，概述家務。給出評論，發表己見。e.g.I help my mother sweep the floor.擴I help my mother cook the lunch .I always wash clothes for my

23、 family. I always wash dishes.擴就是把提示信息擴寫成句子，使文章內容完整，要點全面，是寫作的關鍵步驟。I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning._做午飯洗衣服洗盤子連合理恰當地運用關聯詞和過渡句是英語寫作的制勝法寶。它們不僅使你的文章結構緊湊，銜接自然，而且可以有效地提升作文檔次。As we all know, its important to help parents do housework during our daily life.For me, I often help my parents do housework. For example, I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morningDoing housework can not only make your parents happ