1、中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓練【考點掃描】書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有 三種形式：1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；2、看圖作文；3、根據漢語提示作文。無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準 確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的。【名師解難】一.訓練方法1.記。認真系統復習和背誦基礎知識和優美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫岀來的語言根本不符合英語的語

2、言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們若有大量的現成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而岀，或是模仿、套用，甚至 發揮。2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。平時可以采用循 序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到 寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根 據表格或記錄寫短文等。3.寫。要進行實戰寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內寫岀100個詞的短文，并且質量高、內容全、形式正確。這樣形成

3、習慣，考試時就能得心應手。二.應試策略1.審題目：要切中題意。中考考試說明指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內容。在自己的頭腦中構思岀一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據圖畫、圖表、提 綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關系、故事情節、主體時態、活 動時間、地點等。2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學 們要充分發揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給岀的各個要點逐條列岀。3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、

4、關鍵詞語記下，形成 提綱。4.定基調：定岀時態、人稱、順序、開頭、結尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。 多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。可適當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、 祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1)語態、時態要準確無誤。2)主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。4)注意冠詞用法，例如：He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。5)注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫

5、， 例如：receive, believe, fourtee n, forty, nin th, restaura nt等。(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thi n, strong, weak, ord in ary-look ing等。2)服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, gree n, brow n, black等。3therefore ,as a result） 表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that6） 表示列舉的：for exampl

6、e , such as）表示總結性的：in gen eral, i n all, in a word,gen erally speak ing 不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡 單準確越好，造復合句容易岀錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內容多，同學們岀錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環節必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據要點、語言準確性、上下文的連貫性來給

7、分， 根據錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面入手：格式是否有錯。拼寫有無錯誤。語言是否用錯。時態、語態錯誤。標點錯誤。人稱是否用錯。.注意事項書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有 關。【中考范例】VII.書面表達（共1題，計10分）假如你叫張強。請根據下面美國朋友Bob的來信內容，結合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數：80左右。回信的開頭、

8、結尾已給岀，但不計入總詞數。 注意：回信中不得岀現你的真實地址和所在學校的名稱。Dear frie nd.Hello!Im your new friend. My name is Bob. I New York.m good at maths. It isv ery interesting. My favourite sport isbasketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I likepop music. My frie nds and I ofte n sing pop songs toge

9、ther.After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about Chinafrom the In ter net. Now Im lear ning Chin ese. I hope I will visit your cou ntry oneday. Please write to me and tell me something about your life. Imooking forward to heari ng from you.3)4)5)(5)內心境界感情描寫動作描寫glad, ha

10、ppy, sad, excited, an xious, in terestedlove, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shoutcome, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch等。等。等。上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應把寫好的句子，根據故事情節，事情發生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應注意下面過渡的用法：1）表示并列關系的：and, as well as, or）表示轉折關系的：表示時間關系的：whe n, while, after, befo

11、re, the n, after that遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理,but,yet,howeve)so,1)2)3)4)5)6)m fiftee n. Irica n. I live inI am a middle school stude nt. IYours,Zha ng Qiang【解析】根據前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。1、審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內容應是介紹張強自己的情況。2、圈要點：根據來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：1、收到對方的來信；2、愿意和對方交朋友；3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；4、自己

12、的身份、特長和愛好；5、自己的希望。3、 列提纟岡：1. got your letter 2. glad to be your friend 3. name, zhang Qiang, fifteen,live in Shanxi 4. a middle school stude nt, like En glish, like sports, good at draw ing,5. hope well meet in China4、 定基調：1.時態：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結尾題目已經給岀。5、 寫全

13、文：Dear Bob,I got your letter yesterday. Im very glad to be your pen frie nd. My n ame isZhang Qiang. Im fifteen years old, too. I live in Shaanxi.Im a middle school student, too. I like English andphysics very much. I also like sports, but Im gotuawihg.I know a little about America. Could you tell m

14、em sure we ll have a good time together.Yours,Zha ng Qiang6、改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正【滿分演練】(1)華山是中國名山之一。假設外國友人到你校參觀后，準備去旅游。請根據以下要點向外國友人簡單介紹華山(the Hua Mou ntai n)1位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。3.登山便可領略其云海(the sea of clouds)、奇松(wondrous pines)、怪石(unique rocks)等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日岀。1.字數：8

15、0詞左右。Yours,BobDear Bob,someth ing more about your cou ntry in your n ext letter?I hope well meet in China some day. I Pleasewrite (to) me soon.32請不要逐字翻譯。(2)根據提示和要求完成下面短文假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物一一一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝。回信要包括以下內容：1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。2.禮物是

16、你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。注意1.信的格式已經給岀。2.信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。（3）根據中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、 符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫岀的句數不限。今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動 物十分有趣，人見人愛。當你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經歷。（請注意日記格式）1.fine day, sun, bri

17、ght2.visit, Beijing Zoo3.animal, so interesting, people, love4.see, visitor, throwto, stop, say（4）根據中文設置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、 符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字數6080。2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當發揮）3.發言稿的開頭和結尾已給岀。假設你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發言稿。name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, li

18、ve in Xian, favorite subject, biology InterestFree Tims ActivitiesFuture JobHcipdrawinggo camping,draw pictures of plants, enjoythe singing of birds in naturebiologist, grow upgoodHIE昭do one1gbest,the earth.Dear frie ndsIm vey glad to introduce myself to you._Thats all. Thank you for listening.(5 )根

19、據中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。今年暑假，有一批美國中學生要來你們學校訪問。請你寫一篇有關西安的簡介，以便和他們 交流。注意：1.字數100左右；2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaa nxi.Lie in the Northwest,many places of in terest,autum n, best seas on（6）看圖寫話根 據 以 上 四 幅 圖 和 提 示 詞 語 ， 寫 出 一 篇 語 法 正 確 、 意 思 連 貫 、 語 句 通 順 、 符 合 邏 輯 的 短 文 ,開 頭 已 給 出 。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數6080個左右。3.

20、要表達自己的看法或想法。4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rulesLast Mon day, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.(7)請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇6080詞的短文注意：1.語言規范，語意完整，內容豐富。2.表達符合圖意，書寫規范。3.給岀自己的觀點。請根據下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經給岀，不算入總詞匯數內。參考詞匯：on fire著火firefighter n.消防員put out滅火水資From the pictures we know th

21、at_4.文章的開頭已給岀參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap（水龍頭），dry, save（節約vt.）, water resources（(8)Jack was woken up by the shouting“Fire! Help! Fire! Help!.(9)看圖寫話要求：1.根據圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態，70詞以上。不得使用真實姓名、地名、學校名。3.標題和第一句已給岀，但不計入70詞之內。TAKING CARE OF TREESOne day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were p

22、layi ng in the garde n.(10)(11)假如你所在的學校要岀一期英語壁報。你準備就自己經歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。請你就以注意：1.短文內容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內容2.詞數：70903.生詞提示：桶bucket鋤頭hoe根據所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文 I水1f tfl I jFi I KCi札IW I irnii rt-wcihfr -t rHiB-FTIVChan ges in Our Hometow nOver the past ten years, gr

23、eat cha nges have take n place in our hometow n. In the past(12)請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為 “Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文5080，不包括已經給岀的單詞）過去舊房河水污濁步行、騎自行車現在高樓河水清澈乘公交車、小汽車（詞數:內容要點：(11)【練習答案】 參考答案：The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in Chin a. It lies in theeast of Shaa nxi. Every year thousa

24、nds of Chin ese and foreig ners pay a visit there.Its notsfr from here. It takes you about one hour to get there by bus. You can alsogo there by train. When you are at the top of the mountain,youlfind clouds,won drous pines and uni que rocks arou nd you. In the early morning whe n the sun rises, the

25、 sky looks v ery beautiful. Itsreally a nice place to visit.參考答案：36 Zhon ghua streetXi;a n, Chi naJun e21st, 2004Dear Jim:How are you? Many tha nks for the shirt! Im very happy to hear from you aga in.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour! You remembered!Its just my size. E

26、very time I wear it, I will think of you.IMine here in China. Last week I had a birthday party. Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot ofgood food. We really had a won derful time together. How are you doing in En gla nd, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were toget

27、her last summer. I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your frie nd,Li Lei參考答案：Sun day June 23 rdIt was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Xian Zoo withmyclassmate, Zhang Hong. The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them. When I saw a vi

28、sitor throwingfood to the mon keys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said,“Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.(4)參考答案：Dear frie nds,Im very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin. Im fifteenyears old. I live in Beijing. One of my favorite subjects is biology. Idr

29、aw in g. In my free time, I ofte n go camp ing, draw some pictures of pla nts, andenjoy the singing of birds in n ature. I want to be a biologist whe n I grow up.I feel lucky to join you. I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make Thats all. Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：Xiais the capit

30、al of Shaanxi with a long history. There are many places ofinterest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and them in terested inTerra Cotta Warriors. Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes sno ws. Autum n is thebest seas on in Xian,

31、 for its n either too coldnor too hot. One of the most famous traditional foods is“Yangroupao”.參考答案：Last Mon day, Tim got up at 7:40 in the mornin g. It was the rush hour. He rodehis bike to school very fast. He was crossing the street when a car came at thatmoment. Tims bike hit the car and he fell

32、 to the ground heavily. The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Timwas all right. Then a policema n came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous. Tim thanked himand went to school. All of the you ng men should obey the traffic rules.(7)參考答案：From the picture

33、s we know that much water has bee n polluted. Some factories are pouri ng waste water into riversand lakes. The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died. Many people often waste water. For example, they often forgetto turn off the taps. If we don t have enough water, la ne wry and cropswill di

34、e. We can tive without water. So we should try our best and encourage every one to protect water resources. We mustsave water and stop polluti ng it. If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：Jack was woken up by the shouting“Fire! Help! Fire! Help!.”hat hadhappened? He looked out of the win

35、dow. Wow! He found that his neighbours housewas on fire. Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the teleph one. He made a call to the police. Then, he ran out and helped hisneighbour (to) fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out. And the house owner

36、and fire fighters thanked Jack and hisneighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：TAKING CARE OF TREESOne day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden. They found that ayou ng tree there was dying. They thought they must save the you ng tree. Then they put a rope arou nd the tree and wateredit. Some days later t

37、he tree came back to life again. Their mother saw this and praised them,“You aregood children!”(10)參考答案：Yesterday after noon Li Ping and I were going to school. On the way we sawan old woman crossing the street. Suddenly a car passed by very fast. The old woma n was frighte ned and fell dow n to thegrou nd. The apples in her basket were all out on the street. Immediately, we ran to the old woma n