1、精選優質文檔-傾情為你奉上寫作技巧一、了解高分作文的特點要想作文獲得高分，必須了解高分作文具有的特點，才有助于我們朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特點：1、書寫工整，書面整潔，很少有涂改痕跡。2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一個自然段，讓閱卷老師很容易就能找到作文所要求寫的要點和重要句子。3、要點齊全，不缺要點。4、首尾呼應，自然成一體。5、使用了大量的高級詞匯和句型。閱卷老師一看就知道這個同學的功底非不一般，自然就給打高分了。6、開頭言簡意賅，不啰嗦，不偏題，迅速引入主題。7、段與段之間，自然過渡。有合適的連接詞。8、句與句之間，有恰當的連接詞，使之自然成一體。9、全文中同一個意思，基本沒有重

2、復使用某一個詞、短語或者句型等，說明這個同學的詞匯量不同尋常。老師自然就對該作文有好感了。10、能夠恰當使用諺語、格言等給文章添彩。二、勤積累，巧準備要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特點外，還要在平時的學習中注意一下方面：1、牢記課標詞匯是基礎一篇作文多數是由積極詞匯寫出來的，這些詞匯主要來源于課標。因此，牢記課標詞匯是寫好作文的基礎。2、掌握課標詞匯和短語的用法要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有個要求是作文的語病少。怎么能夠減少語病呢？這就要求我們在平時的學習過程中反復通過練習，掌握課標詞匯和短語等的用法。例如，對于as soon as 、stop some body from doing some

3、thing 、other 、another等的用法很多學生就經常出錯。3、高度重視同一個意思的多種表達方式高分作文有個特點是：讓老師發現你擁有豐富的詞匯量，你的水平高人一籌。這由何而來？靠我們在平時學習過程中，逐步積累起來的。比如：今年的中考作文，談的就是幫助他人的問題。同一個意思“幫助”，假如你就用一個動詞“help”，豈不顯得你詞匯貧乏？假如你在作文中不斷地變換方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表達“幫助”同一個意思，豈不更好呢？像這樣的例子很多，比如：大家都覺得很簡單又很基礎的“

4、表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. Im Jim. Im called/named Jim. Im a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。表達年齡的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old) . She is a girl aged 12.等等。很顯然，使用高級一點的更好。4、加強練習，積累經驗學習語言最好的方法是運用，作文也不例外。我們要想作文得高分，必須經常練習，才能提高水平。5、充分利用作文范文很

5、多資料書上都有作文范文。誠然，他們有很多值得借鑒的地方。我們怎么利用它們呢？首先，我們先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你來寫，你會怎么去寫，會用到哪些詞或者句子等。然后去比較，勾出其中的好詞佳句，并且把它摘錄在專門的作文冊子上。供寫作時選用。另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。6、背誦一些諺語和警句作文中如果出現恰當的諺語和警句，會有錦上添花的效果。三、精心審題，沉著寫初稿很多同學看到作文后，下筆就寫。這是不對的。一則很容易寫偏題、寫出病句，涂改后書面又不整潔，影響得分。其實，會寫作文的同學都知道，審題非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我們審題要做些什么呢？審題主要要做一下事情：1、審

6、人稱、時態、體裁等審題時，要求我們要弄清楚這篇文章主要使用的人稱是第幾人稱，什么時態、什么體裁。這些問題解決后至少不會犯很嚴重的錯誤：全文皆錯。例如，如果一篇文章，本來應該一般過去時，你的每句話卻用了一般現在時態。你想想，那還能得高分嗎？2、明確必須表達的要點高分作文有個特點是要點齊全。如果漏掉一個要點，則要扣分。因此我們必須認真細讀其要求，把必須表達的要點勾出來。保證不漏掉任何一個要點。3、羅列出可能會用到的短語、句型，確定好使用哪個？4、確定好如何分段就是要確定好，將哪些要點放在一個自然段里面，首段、尾段打算寫哪些？四、耐心修改，提煉句子很多同學寫完作文后就感覺大事已畢，高興地放下筆就了事

7、了。其實，這時候，不妨從以下方面去修改，相信會讓你受益匪淺的。1、巧妙選擇使用高級詞匯、短語、句型等當我們掌握了一定量的同意表達法之后，在寫作時有時不會讓你都運用到的。這時為了展示你與眾不同的能力，你務必要選擇高級的。例如，就以今年中考的英語作文為例，它就要求寫“幫助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表達法，有old people和the old 。使用后者的同學自然能力比前者強。同樣的道理，作文中的“病人”的表達法有sick people ，patients ，the sick ，你認為使用哪個更能顯示你的高水平呢？當然是the sick了。2、巧妙使用低級表達法代替自己的難點我們寫作時難免會遇到

8、一些難以用英語表達的東西。怎么辦呢？換為最簡單的表達法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文題，就要求學生表達一個意思：幫助同學，可以增進友誼。很多學生翻譯不來“增進”，面對這樣的問題怎么辦呢？怎么不換個說法呢？你看，If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our friendship longer .不就達到目的了嗎？3、大膽改變句型，使之生輝例如，我們將一些句子改為感嘆句，復合句、強調句、反意疑問句、將句子改得更能顯示你的高水平和能力。何樂而不為呢？4高度關注句與句 、段與段之間的銜接問題。務必

9、做到過渡自然，銜接緊湊。5、適當引用個別諺語或警句，來提高作文檔次。五、一絲不茍抄謄作文一篇好的作文，經過審題、修改之后，務必要一絲不茍地抄謄在答題卷上，再認真地仔細檢查一遍，那才是大公告成了。一、Great changes in my hometownMore than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didnt have enough food to eat

10、and wore old clothes. They had a hard life.Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years. The people have found a lot of ways of making money. Now there are many tall buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide and clean. People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.

11、Many people have cell phones and personal computers. Peoples living conditions have improved a lot. Thanks to the governments efforts. My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.一、在我的家鄉發生了很大的變化二十多年來,我的家鄉只是個小,又老又窮鎮。大多數人都是農民。有幾個工廠。人們沒有足夠的食物吃,把舊衣服穿在身上。他們有一個艱苦的生活。發生了巨大的變化,在過去的20年。人們已經發現很多的賺錢途徑。現在有許

12、多高大的建筑物。他們很漂亮。道路寬闊,又干凈。人們可以搭公車或駕駛自己的汽車去上班。許多人有手機和個人電腦。人民的生活條件有了很大的進步。由于政府的努力。我的家鄉正變得越來越美麗了。二、Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.Its our duty to protect our environment. No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our neighborh

13、ood clean and tidy. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldnt leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places. We mustnt pick the flowers or s

14、tep on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better.二、拯救地球如何保護環境已成為世界上最大的問題。這是我們的責任保護我們的環境。不管我們居住的地方,我們應該做些事情來保持我們的鄰居整潔。我們可以收集廢紙或其他廢棄物回收利用。我們應該種更多的樹,我們應該阻止那些工廠從澆注廢水流入河流、湖泊和領域。我們不應該把垃圾隨處可見,

15、在公共場所隨地吐痰。我們不能摘花、踐踏草地在公眾場合。如果每個人都盡自己最大的努力去保護環境,世界將變得更加美麗,我們的生活一定會越來越好。三、Improve our environmentGood environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life. What should we do to improve our environment?We should plant more trees. And we should prevent those facto

16、ries from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin. Dont spit in public places. Dont draw on public walls. Its our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.三、改善我們的環境好的環境能讓人感到快樂。改善環境意味著資格我們的生活。我們應該做什么來改善我們的

17、環境?我們應該種更多的樹。我們應該阻止那些工廠從澆注廢水流入河流、湖泊和領域。當我們看到垃圾在地上,我們應該把它撿起來,扔進一個垃圾箱。不要在公共場所隨地吐痰。別把公共墻壁。這是我們的責任,讓我們的地球整潔。四、Pollution around usIn recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and c

18、ars, they produce (give off) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand). We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. I

19、ts very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful, and our life will be better and better .四、我們周圍的污染近年來我們的生活越來越好。但是我們的環境變得越來越糟糕。它對我們的生活很糟糕。現在許多人有空調、汽車、生產(出)廢氣。越來越多的樹被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在這塊土

20、地上只留下沙礫)。我們經常看到工廠將廢物倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水是很臟。我們沒有足夠的干凈的水喝的城市。現在我們正處于危險中。這是非常必要的和重要的保護好環境。我認為,如果每個人都盡自己最大的努力去保護環境,世界將變得更加美麗,我們的生活會越來越好。五、Make our world more beautiful !Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans. Its our duty to take care of the nature around us. Animals and plant

21、s are our best friends, and we should share the world with them. We shouldnt kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals home. We must plant more trees and grass, they can make the world greener. The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have. Lets do our

22、 best to make the world beautiful.五、使我們的世界更美麗!環境保護是越來越重要的人類。這是我們的責任照顧我們周圍的天性。動物和植物都是我們最好的朋友。,我們應該與他們共同分享這個世界。我們不應該殺野生動物,我們必須保護森林,因為他們是動物的家。我們必須種植更多的樹木和草,他們就可以讓世界環保。更美麗的世界,我們將會有快樂的生活。讓我們盡我們所能使世界美麗。六、Keep our school cleanWe are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is n

23、ot good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldnt leave rubbish here and there. Dont draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school. We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do

24、 something useful for our school, Im sure our school will be more beautiful.六、保持校園清潔我們在這所學校學習。這是我們的責任保持房間整潔。這并不是一個好吐唾沫在公共場所,如在圖書館,在課堂上。我們不應該把垃圾扔在這里和那里。不要在墻上亂畫,他們影響看我們的學校。我們應該保持教室干凈整潔。我們應該經常做些清潔。如果每個人都盡自己最大努力做些有用的事情對我們學校來說,我相信我們的學校也會變得更加美好。七、My country lifeI like to live in the countryside. I live in

25、 a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. Its very quiet

26、. What a nice place I live in!七、我的鄉村生活我喜歡住在鄉下。我住在一個小村莊。附近有一條河。許多樹在房子的周圍。我能看到很多農場和鳥類。有低噪音。這里的空氣清潔和清新。有私家車的減少。我念在清晨。當它變得黑暗,月亮在天空明亮。它很安靜。一個好地方我住在!八、How to learn English wellAs we know, English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China. English is widely s

27、poken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world. But how to learn it well? The best way is to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well. At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully. We should spend enough time

28、 in practicing English. If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.八、如何學好英語正如我們所知,英語已成為一種國際語言。它更受歡迎,比其他任何語言在中國。英語在世界上被廣泛地使用,是全世界最有用的語言。但是如何學好英語呢?最好的方法是使用它。如果我們可以一起說英語、用英語思考我們能把它學好。在學校,我們應該學會聽、說、讀、寫的小心。我們應該花足夠的時間在練習英語。如果我們繼續努力學英語,我們將能夠做得很好一天。九、How I learn EnglishH

29、ello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well. I like English very much. I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class, I listen carefully, speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary. After class, I do my hom

30、ework carefully. I watch English movies and listen to English songs. I have booked an English newspaper. Its Times English Post, I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods. I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day. T

31、hats all.九、我怎樣學習英語嗨,大家好。我很榮幸跟你們講講如何學好英語。我非常喜歡英語。我總是預覽和主人的主要思想課上課前。在課堂上,我仔細聽著,大聲說話、寫,如果有必要認真記筆記。課后,我做我的家庭作業仔細。我看英文電影和聽英文歌曲。我已經預定了一份英文報紙。這是次英文帖子,我可以從中學到很多東西。我不是怕記憶新單詞,因為我掌握許多很好的方法。我希望你努力學習英語,天天向上。這是所有。十、How I improved my EnglishWhen I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at th

32、at time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always

33、read some English and magazines.Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.十、我怎樣提高我的英語當我開始學習英語,我就不會它。我很擔心在那個時間。后來我1 istened老師在課堂上專心,仔細地做著筆記。如果我有任何問題,我問英語老師或同學幫忙。我每天早晨讀英語文章,聽著大聲的英語錄音帶。在晚上,做完作業后,我總是讀一些英語和雜志。現在我是一個最好的學生在英語在我的課。十一、The importance of EnglishEnglish is the most widely spoken

34、in the world. Its spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the information

35、 on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge. English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learni

36、ng English.English is so useful that we must learn it well. Now lets work hard at it and see who learns it faster and better in our class.十一,英語的重要性英語是世界上使用最廣泛的。這是說,對于大多數人來說,在美國、英國、加拿大、澳大利亞、新西蘭等國家。它也是非常廣泛地用作外語在世界上許多其他國家。這是廣泛應用于不同國家之間的貿易。超過四分之三的因特網上的信息是用英文寫的,太。它是真的是通向如此豐富知識的橋梁。使用英語的旅游者和商人環游世界。它是世界上最重要

37、的語言,因為它是如此的廣泛應用。這就是為什么中國有越來越多的人對學英語有興趣。英語真是有用,我們必須把它學好。現在讓我們努力學習,學好它,看看誰更快、更好的在我們班。十二、I want to be an inventorTVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to inv

38、ent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lesso

39、ns to make my dream come true.十二,我想成為一名發明家電視、電話、冰箱、汽車、飛機、計算機和其他許多事情是重要的發明。他們已經大大改變了我們的生活。許多人都有自己的想法和愿望。他們想創造一些新的東西了世界。我就是其中一個。我想成為一名發明家在未來,發明能帶來的樂趣,對我們的生活,使我們的日常生活更方便。我們的生活越來越好。現在我是一個高中學生。我將盡我所能努力學習功課,使我的夢想成真。十三、I want to be a tour guideI want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Ol

40、ympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all over the world. Most of them dont know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on, I must study hard. I am going to learn En

41、glish every day. I will try my best to make it come true.十三、我想成為一名導游我想成為一名導游,因為北京將舉辦2008年奧運會。將有許多人來中國的來自世界各地。他們中大多數人都不懂中文。他們想去參觀中國許多有趣的地方。我可以成為一個導游。我賺的錢,太。我將會多么幸福!所以從現在開始,我必須努力學習。我要每天都要學英語。我會盡我所能讓它成真。十四、I like the InternetThe Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Its very useful.

42、I often search the Internet for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I

43、am able to study all my lessons on the Internet. The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try?十四、我喜歡上網互聯網是扮演著重要的角色在我們的日常生活中。它是非常有用的。我經常因特網上搜索一些信息。我可以讀到最新的消息,買些東西,并獲得各種信

44、息從它。我還可以下載的信息,我需要,我可以發電子郵件,打電話到朋友在網上聊天。最重要的是,我能學習我所有的功課在互聯網上。互聯網使我的生活更有趣和豐富多彩,有一個很寬的影響我的學習和生活。我非常喜歡上網。你怎么樣/你來試試好十五、The InternetThe Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we cant do work better. We can go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or

45、 watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. Its bad for our

46、 eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot. 十五、互聯網互聯網正成為越來越多的了解這一點對我們至關重要。沒有它,我們不能做的更好的工作。我們可以去購物,就不能從我們的房子。我們能聽音樂或看電影在互聯網上。它也能幫助很多學習。我們可以學到很多知識對不同的學科而言,盡快獲取信息。但是現在,我們中的一些人工作、學習或玩在互聯網上很長時間了,尤其是對年輕人玩電腦游戲。這是對我們的眼睛有害健康。如果我們好好利用互聯網,它將是我們最好的朋友,幫助我

47、們很多。十六、ComputerComputer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in

48、faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.十六、電腦計算機是一種奇妙的機器。這是一個偉大的發明在許多年。它非常迅速發展。最小的計算機是那樣大的筆記本。我們叫它口袋里的計算機。電腦已經成為越來越重要的在很多方面。它沒有觸及生命每一個人,即使一個人在遙遠的村莊。它幫助我們與各種各樣的信息,我們從它獲得知識。它能給我們許多樂趣。十七、The importance of waterOf all the t

49、hings we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes. Some factories even pour waste water into the ri

50、ver. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.Lets do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.十七、水的重要性所有的事情我們吃的和喝的,水是最重要的。我們生活中可以沒有食物了很多天,但兩、三天沒有水,通常會使人死。然而,并不是所有的人理解這個。他們繼續投呀投的垃圾倒入河流或湖泊。一些工廠甚至倒廢水入河中。結果,許多河流和湖泊已經變得如此骯臟的水是

51、不再安全了人們喝酒。讓我們盡力保持水的清潔來拯救自己。十八、WaterWater is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People cant live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to all living things. However, ma

52、ny people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.十八、水水是非常重要的我們的生活。每一天我們都使用水喝,太做飯,洗。所有的植物都需要水。他們需要水來成長。人們沒有水是無法生存的。沒有水植物會死。它

53、是很重要的,所有活的東西。然而,許多人的排泄物污染的湖泊和河流的水,所以我們必須阻止某些人或某些工廠浪費水或污染水,同時,有助于保持水的清潔。同時,我們應該節約大量水的情況。十九、I like sportsI feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play bask

54、etball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying. And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible.十九,我喜歡體育我覺得體育鍛煉對我們的健康有好處。我經常感到累了,當我在學習之前。從這個學期我繼續運行時,我早晨起來。課后我常去和我的朋友打籃球。現在我感覺比以前好了許多,我從不感到疲倦當我學習和進步很多功課。所以請盡可能經常鍛煉。二十

55、、Introduce yourselfMy name is Li Lei. I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 2000. Im studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and computer. Im very happy to live

56、 in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much.二十、介紹自己我的名字是李雷。我出生在福州2000年12月15日。我在育才中學學習。我學習語文、數學、英語、物理、化學、政治等。我最喜歡英語。我最喜歡的運動是足球。我的愛好是繪畫和計算機。我很高興能夠生活在一個幸福的家庭。我家有三口人。我的父親是一位醫生。我的媽媽是一位教師。我們彼此非常相愛。二十一、My best friendMy bes

57、t friend is - He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very b

58、usy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets on well with us. Everyone in our class likes him.二十一、我最好的朋友我最好的朋友是- - - - - -他15歲。我們在同一個班。他工作得很努力。他上學從不遲到,他擅長所有的功課。他總是樂于幫助別人。我的數學很差,所以他經常幫助我做數學課后。他的父母都是老師。他們很忙,所以他經常幫助在家做家務。他是一個小短于我,但是他非常強壯。他非常喜歡踢足球學校。我們經常一起踢足球,打它很