1、2019年中考真題英語分項(xiàng)匯編專題21書面表達(dá)考點(diǎn)4敘事描寫類(一)【2019 ?天津市】假如你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，平時堅(jiān)持用英語寫日記請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，描述你星期三放學(xué)乘地 鐵回家路上看到的事情，并表達(dá)自己的想法.(I )一個男孩不舒服，開始嘔吐，一位穿著漂亮的女士幫著擦拭地面，男孩表達(dá)感謝.(2) 地鐵到站，有人擠向座位，有人下不去車，有人因此爭吵.(3) 你認(rèn)為參考詞匯： 開始嘔吐 begin to vomit ;擠向座位push towards the seat; 爭吵 have a quarrel要求：(1) 詞數(shù)：80100個；(2) 日記格式和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(3) 要

2、點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Wedn esdayWhen I took the underground back home from school , I noticed【寫作思路】在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題.【參考范文】Wed nesdayWhen I took the un dergr ound back home from school, I no ticed two thi ngs around me .（開篇點(diǎn)明題意）The first th

3、ing I met is about a boy . The boy did n't feel well . He began to vomit . A beautiful girl saw the boy . She helped him clean the floor【高分句型一】. Then the boy thanked her for helping . The second thing is about the underground . When the underground got to the station . a lot of people pushed tow

4、ards the seat . So some people could n't get off the un dergr ound . Some had a quarreel because of this.（介紹碰至 U的兩件事情）In my opinion，The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this society . As for the underground. It shows your quality there . If you wait in a line , others will

5、get off the underground easily . If all of us can do in this way , our world will be more beautiful 【高分句型二】.（表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)結(jié)尾）【名師點(diǎn)評】（1）高分句型一：She helped him clea n the floor.help sb do sth幫助某人做某事。這句話意為：她幫助他打掃干凈地面。（2）高分句型二：If all of us can do in this way , our world will be more beautiful.If引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，遵循"

6、;主將從現(xiàn)"原則，即主句用一般將來時，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。這句話意為：如果我們所有人都這樣做，我們的世界將會變得更加美好。（二）【2019 ?四川省自貢市】初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活讓人難忘，畢業(yè)之際，你校將舉行”感恩"為主題的英文演講比賽，請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英文演講稿.要點(diǎn)提示：1 .感謝父母，教我如何生活， 2 .感謝老師，教我許多知識，3.感謝同學(xué)，給我美好回憶，寫作要求：1. 詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2 .可適當(dāng)增減詞匯，使語句流暢、完整；3.文中不能透露個人真實(shí)信息.Good morning , every one . rm glad to

7、be here to speak in front of you . Here rd like to tha nk every one of you .That' s all. Thank you .【寫作思路】在解答寫作這類試題時，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個承上啟下的 連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題.【參考范文】Good morning , every one. rm glad to be here to speak in front of you . Here rd like to tha nk eve

8、ry one of you . How time flies! We 'll graduate soon . I have so many words from my heart to say . At this moment , I want to say thanks to my parents, my teachers and my classmates.（開篇點(diǎn)題）Dear dad and mom, you've taken good care of me in the past three years . When I was in trouble , you use

9、d to encourage me and cheer me up. You taught me how to get on well with my classmates .（感謝父母親的關(guān) 心，鼓勵）Dear teachers, thank you for teaching me so well . I won't forget how interesting your lessons are and how friendly you are . I still remember when I failed in an exam , you encouraged me to kee

10、p trying . 【高分句型 一 When I had trouble in life , you told me to be brave . Because of your help, I have made much progress （感 謝老師在學(xué)習(xí)上和生活上的幫助）Dear classmates, you've helped me a lot in my studies si nee I came to this school .【高分句型二 When I was in trouble , you used to encourage me and give me some

11、 advice . I never forget the days when we studied together .（感謝同學(xué)的幫助，鼓勵，留下的美好回憶）Words can't show my tha nks to you!I'll remember all of you .That' s all. Thank you .【名師點(diǎn)評（1）高分句型一：I still remember when I failed in an exam , you encouraged me to keep trying .我還記得當(dāng)我考試不及格時，你們鼓勵我繼續(xù)努力.I still

12、remember后跟了賓語從句，賓語從句中包含了 when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，encourage sb to do sth鼓勵某人做某事(2)高分句型二：Dear classmates, you've helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school .親愛的同學(xué)們，自從 我來這里以來，你們在我的學(xué)習(xí)中幫了我很多忙.si nee自從，弓I導(dǎo)時間狀語從句，主句用了現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時，從句用了一般過去時.(三)【2019 ?重慶市B卷】假如你參加了學(xué)校組織的走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會實(shí)踐活動。請根據(jù)要求，向某英語網(wǎng)站投稿，分享活動經(jīng)歷。

13、要求：1.80120詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考信息:Have you ever got close to the coun tryside and had a special experie nee? Let me share mine!【寫作思路】本文屬于一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)表格提供的信息來介紹“走近鄉(xiāng)村”寒假社會實(shí)踐活動的經(jīng)歷。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)主要為一般過去時。動筆前先要注意認(rèn)真閱讀材料確定寫作內(nèi)容；文章必須包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息，既要寫活動的過程，又要總結(jié)活動感受與收獲。并補(bǔ)充兩條個人的觀點(diǎn)。表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、

14、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型：1.We experie need the lifein the countryside, learned something that we couldn ' t get from books before. 我們經(jīng)歷了農(nóng)村的生活，學(xué)至U 了一些我們以前從書中得不到的東西。that we couldn ' t get from books before.是定語從句，修飾不定代詞something。2. We really hope w

15、e ' II have another activity like that this winter vacation!我們真的希望今年寒假還能有這樣的活動！hope后面是省略that的賓語從句。【參考范文】Have you ever got close to the coun tryside and had a special experie nee? Let me share mine.During the winter vacation my classmates and I joined in the s chool activity“ Get close to the cou

16、ntrysideWe live in the famers' homes. Their great livi ng con diti ons surprised us a lot. Do you know where vegetablescome from? We got the an swer whe n worki ng with the farmers. Besides, we lear ned about other pla nts and some farm animals. How interesting!We experieneed the life in the cou

17、ntryside, learned something that we couldn' t get from books b felt the won derful cha nges of the coun tryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and decided to savefood. We were happy to see the farmers' life was gett ing better and better.We really hope we ' ll have another acti

18、vity like that this winter vacation!（四）【2019 ?山東省濰坊市】請根據(jù)上文內(nèi)容和下列問題提示進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。What did Andnea think about lix kntfe whenii?710 u as the "aldhdy '1 rWhat happened it last?J注意：1.續(xù)寫故事的詞數(shù)為 80左右;2. 展開合理想象，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫;3. 可根據(jù)需要自主選用以下參考詞匯：Call the police dangerous escape catch robber （強(qiáng)盜）【寫作思

19、路】這是一篇根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容和圖表提示，要求續(xù)寫一個完整的故事。動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第三人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。【參考范文】A“A knife ! My God ! He was really dangerous .It was wise to drive him off my c ar . ” Andreathought .Then she breathed deeply and

20、called the police to tell them what had happened .A moment later , thepolice came to her .A ndrea poin ted to the directi on the “ old lady ” might be inThe n the police drove along theroad to look for“ her ” . How amazing ! The police were surprised to see that the“ old lady ”the road .The police s

21、topped and said ,“ Hello ,madam .We ' d like to take you to Brockboune ,Get in ,pleaseB"How dangerous! What should I do?" Andrea said to herself "He must be a thief or robber . ” As soon asshe realized this, Andrea drove to the nearest police station and told the police what had h

22、appened ,then she left .When An drea got home, she told her pare nts all about the "old lady". After heari ng the story, her pare ntshugged her tightly and said ,” What a lucky girl ! You are brave and smart enoughyoipHsif cWe areproud of you! ” An hour ,a血 police phoned her that they had

23、caught the man-a real robber.【名師點(diǎn)評】重點(diǎn)短語： as soon a一就, call the police 報(bào)警，be proud of 為感至 U驕傲（五）【2019 ?江蘇省蘇州市】人生中有很多第一次：第一次學(xué)游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家務(wù)；第一次贏得比賽；第一次。請根據(jù)提示，就你的第一次寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1. 第一次的整個過程；2. 你的感受。要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80-100 （開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。As we all know, every one has his un forgettable mem

24、ories. I still remember the first time【寫作思路】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示信息，選擇給你印象深刻的第一次活動進(jìn)行描述并談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋r態(tài)主要為一般過去時，人稱主要為第一、三人稱。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。首先開門見山，介紹自己的第一次活動是什么，接下來詳細(xì)介紹第一次活動的整個過程，最后談一談自己的感受。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。注意：注意緊扣主題，意思連貫，語言通順，書寫規(guī)范，避免出現(xiàn)拼寫錯誤；詞數(shù)在80100。【參考范文】The first time to leann to swim

25、As we all know, every one has his un forgettable memories. I still remember the first time to lear n to swim.Last summer vacation, my father took me to the swimming pool in our neighborhood and taught me toswim. It was the first for me to swim. At first, I could not swim at all. My father was very p

26、atient. Heencouraged me and taught me how to swim. He taught me how to breathe in the water first. Then, He threw meinto the deepest part of the swimming pool. I was so frightened that I couldn' t move. But I never g<safe with my dad around. Three hours later, with the help of my father, I co

27、uld swim by myself. Although Icould n't swim very well, I was very happy.I will n ever forget this experie nee, because I not only lear ned how to swim, but also lear ned to be brave!（六）【2019 ?浙江省寧波市】回顧初中三年。有許多事令人難忘。校英語報(bào)如Have Your Say欄目正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文。假如你是李華，請你選擇其中一個話題，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一封信表達(dá)你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參

28、加此次征文活動。要點(diǎn)如下:say "tha nks" tosay "sorry" to1. be not good at.1. argue with2. en courage me to2. not talk to each other3. make great progress3. regret doing4.4注意：(1)短文必須包括你所選擇話題的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；(3) 詞數(shù)：80-100，書信格式已給出；(4) 首句供參考 Looking back on the past three years, I &

29、#39; like to say.Dear,Yours, Li Huai 【寫作思路】這個作文要求我們從題目中給出的兩個話題中選擇一個，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一封信表達(dá)你 對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加學(xué)校英語報(bào)的一個征文活動。題目中利用表格的形式展示了兩個話題的主 要結(jié)構(gòu)，具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。審題可知，這篇 短文應(yīng)以一般過去時、第一人稱和第二人稱為主來敘述。文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：首先確定一個話題和人物； 然后具體說明你感謝他或者向他道歉的原因，這是文章的主體部分，敘述應(yīng)詳細(xì)，合情合理；最后再次 重申自己的感謝或歉意，并表達(dá)祝愿。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先文章內(nèi)

30、容應(yīng)完整、充實(shí)，注意分清段落和層 次；其次需注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯。句式結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)完整，可以簡單 句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，提升文章檔次。同時語句直接使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接 成分，使文意連貫、自然。【參考范文】范文1Dear Alice,Look ing back on the past three years, I'd like to say tha nks to you for help ing me with my En glish.Whe n I was in Grade 7, I was not good at En glish.

31、I just hid beh ind my text book and n ever said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me anden couraged me to be more active in class.Since the n, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your stude

32、 nt.Tha nk you aga in. Wish you goal luck.Yours, Li Hua 范文2Dear Ala n,Look ing back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped compla ining to you that it was

33、 you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reas on. You walked off an grily. From the n on, we did n't talk to each other.I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends aga in.Yours, L

34、i Hua【名師點(diǎn)評】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向自己的同學(xué)表達(dá)了感謝或歉意。第一篇作文是向Alice表達(dá)了感謝，并詳細(xì)介紹了 Alice幫助自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的過程；第二篇作文向Alan表達(dá)了歉意，介紹了由于足球比賽失利，互相埋怨，產(chǎn)生矛盾的過程，并表達(dá)了自己的悔意。文章內(nèi)容都非常豐富，敘述也 很完整、詳細(xì)。兩篇作文都使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確。注意了謂語動詞過去式形 式的變化，尤其是不規(guī)則動詞過去式的變化，如hid, said, won, lost等等。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言得體、地道，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了較豐富的句型和短語，如第一篇里When I was

35、 in Grade 7, I was notgood at English.、Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart.、Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress.o 再如第二篇中 When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it wa

36、s you who missed the goal. 、Let's forget about the past and become good friends aga in.等等。（七）【2019 ?臨沂市】時光荏苒，初中三年轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比較，你會有很多變化。請以“have changed a lot!”為題，根據(jù)以下要求與提示，用英語寫一篇短文，具體描述你最重要的變化及其如何發(fā)生的。要求:1. 短文不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分;2. 不少于60詞。提示：1. What did you use to be like?2. What is the

37、most importa nt cha nge?3. And how did it happe n? Tell a story about it.I have cha nged a lot!【寫作思路】本文要寫我初中三年的變化，根據(jù)習(xí)作提示，首先要指出我最大的變化是什么，并描述出具體變化 是怎么發(fā)生的，所以要針對自己某一個最大的變化來寫，而不是泛泛地寫很多變化；時態(tài)主要是一般過 去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。【參考范文】I have cha nged a lot!Great cha nges have happe ned to me duri ng the past three years. The mo

38、st importa nt cha nge is my attitude to En glish.I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn' t rememberpronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to le

39、arn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.Now I like En glish so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great cha nge in my En glish study, how happy I am!【名師點(diǎn)評】本篇文章，首先開篇點(diǎn)題，我有很多變化，我最大的變化是我對待英語學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度的變化。第二段是

40、文章的主體，先描述過去學(xué)習(xí)英語的狀況，其中用到表達(dá)過去常用的句型 used to do ;在媽媽及老師的幫助下，我的英語學(xué)習(xí)發(fā)生了很大變化，具體表現(xiàn)為 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, takegrammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后對以上變化進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并指出對于這個變化，我 的心情如何，Seei ng the great cha nge in my En glish study, how hap py I am!整篇文章內(nèi)容符合要求，時態(tài)

41、用云正確，思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，是一篇不錯的文章。（八）【2019 ?湖北省黃岡市】同學(xué)們，在初中三年的英語學(xué)習(xí)中，我們從課本中學(xué)習(xí)了有關(guān)Family ”、 “Be polite to sb.、Protectingthe envinmment”、Volunteering "等話題和功能。假定你是李磊，請參考這些話題和功能，依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇題為m Proud of My Family ”的英語短文，向校報(bào)投稿，講述你的家庭故事。要點(diǎn)提示：1. 家人相親相愛，努力學(xué)習(xí)、工作；2. 鄰里和睦，禮貌待人；3. 愛護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起：寫作要求1. 詞數(shù)90左有（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總

42、詞數(shù)）；2. 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。參考詞匯： Work hard ； be friendly to each other ； get on well with ； protect the environment ； be volunteersI ' m Proud of My FamilyMy name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. _【寫作思路】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相

43、關(guān)信息講述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了題目：I'm Proud of My Family。主要從1、家人相親相愛，努力學(xué)習(xí)、工作； 2、鄰里和睦，禮貌待人；3、愛護(hù)環(huán) 境，從我做起：這三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上 的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要 正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意 上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【參考范文】My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family

44、. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.My families love each other. (My pare nts love us and we love our pare nts.) My pare nts both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.My families are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We

45、 get on well with each other.My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopp ing. My father is used to tak ing the bus to work. I n ever order takeaway food.My families are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often

46、 help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read n ewspapers to the old people.What a happy family! I' m proud of my family!【名師點(diǎn)評】【高分句型一】My families try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.我的家人盡力保護(hù)我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械沫h(huán)境。該句話運(yùn)用了：try one

47、' s best to do sth.盡力做某事。 protect the environment:保護(hù)環(huán)境。【高分句型二】My father is used to tak ing the bus to work. 我父親習(xí)慣乘公共汽車上班。這句話運(yùn)用了：be used todoing sth.習(xí)慣于做某事。總之，本文運(yùn)用了大量的簡單句，雖然沒有復(fù)合句，但是這寫簡單句把作者的一家人的生活描寫的入情入理，就像是發(fā)生在我們的眼前一樣。(九)【2019 ?江蘇省淮安】為迎接祖國母親第 70個生日，學(xué)校開展了豐寓多彩的活動，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等； 請圍繞該話題寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括以

48、下要點(diǎn)：1 .你看到或參加過一次活動(包括時間、地點(diǎn)、經(jīng)過)；2 .你對該活動的感受以及對祖國的熱愛之情；3 .你今后如何為建設(shè)祖國貢獻(xiàn)力量。1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；2. 詞數(shù)在80100,已給出的文字不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland （祖國），【寫作思路】為迎接祖國母親第70個生日，學(xué)校開展了豐寓多彩的活動，如講故事、制作卡片、參觀博物館等； 請圍繞該話題寫一篇短文。考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、 人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具

49、有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考 生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。【參考范文】To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. It's the greatest museumve ever seen. We saw