1、專題10 讀后續(xù)寫之上下文銜接一、關(guān)鍵詞hesitation 猶豫hesitantly猶豫地add補充說道continue繼續(xù)說道retort反駁道explain解釋道state陳述道protest抗議道sob哭訴道agree同意地說comfort安慰道blurt out脫口而出seemingly 似乎surprisingly 令人驚訝的是suddenly 突然eventually 最后completely 完全地fortunately幸運地instead代替，相反namely即，也就是meanwhile期間，同時naturally自然地obviously顯而易見 =apparentlymor

2、e or less 或多或少，差不多，幾乎once in a while 偶爾，時不時地willingly情愿地unexpectedly出乎意料地unwillingly不情愿地unforgettable難忘的dash/rush沖slip 滑到sneak/creep偷偷走crawl 爬wobble/limp/stagger/stumble搖搖晃晃地走to ones + n. 令某人.的是admiration (羨慕), amazement (驚奇), amusement (娛樂), annoyance (煩惱), astonishment (驚奇), delight (欣喜), despair(

3、絕望), disappointment(失望), embarrassment(難堪), happiness(幸福), horror (恐怖), joy (高興), puzzlement (疑惑), regret (遺憾), relief (放心), satisfaction (滿意), shame (羞愧), sorrow (悲傷), surprise (驚訝)二、常用短語（時間/銜接）rise to ones feet站起來struggle to ones feet 吃力地站起來jump to ones feet 跳起來kneel down跪下get down on one knee單膝跪地

4、 Much to his surprise, 令他十分驚訝的是Before they knew it,不知不覺中，After what seemed ages, 在過了似乎幾年的時間后，（夸張）After seemingly a long time, 在過了似乎很長一段時間后，All of a sudden,突然Hearing this,聽到這個Almost without thinking,幾乎想都沒想。Without hesitation, 毫不猶豫地Knowing what had happened, 知道發(fā)生什么事情后，One day,有一天Early in the morning,一

5、大早 One Sunday afternoon 一個星期天的下午the other day = a few days ago 幾天前 The next/following day,第二天（一般過去時）Just then, = Just at that moment 正在那時，After that, =Later on, . Then 然后After a while, 一會兒以后 about half an hour later, .大約半小時以后 In the end/ at last/ finally/ eventually, 最后from then on,從那以后, Surprisingl

6、y, 令人驚訝的是，It was then that I noticed.就在那時我注意到.For one frozen moment，有一瞬間，.After several attempts, 經(jīng)過幾次嘗試，On arriving home, 一回到家三、句子賞析1. He stiffened(僵硬) for seconds and then shuffled (拖曳、慢慢走) his feet forward, eyes red with fury(憤怒) but without any fear or hesitation. 2. George and I stood there dum

7、bfounded(啞然失聲的，發(fā)楞的) watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart（感激和仰慕涌入我心）.3. Hearing the bad news, Mary fainted away on the spot and fell into unconsciousness.(當場暈倒，陷入昏迷)4. His eyes widened further and his mouth opened. He took a huge breath as if winded（喘不過氣）

8、. He looked tortured vulnerable. 他的眼睛瞪大了，嘴巴張開。他深深地吸了一口氣仿佛呼吸困難，他看起來飽受折磨，非常脆弱。5. Approaching me with a great deal of obvious discomfort, Tommy looked up at me with pleading（乞求的）eyes.6. There was a light touch on my hand; looking down, I saw my son looking at me, curious.我感覺到有人輕輕碰觸我的手；低頭一看，是我的兒子好奇地在看我。

9、7. Every knock on the door fills me with expectation(讓我充滿期待). I immediately picture him walking through(想象某人做某事) the door. 8. He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.他一邊看著窗外，一邊咬著嘴唇，仿佛在思考。9. At the sight of the ferocious wolf, Iwas seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms

10、were sweating.(被深深地恐懼感所控制，手心出汗)10. Upon hearing the bad news,her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.(心痛，眼淚直流)11. Upon hearing the bad news, she,numb with grief, had trouble speaking.(悲傷到失去知覺，不能開口說話)12. When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek,his facebeamed and his bright smile lit up

11、the room.(眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間)13. Sheldon felt so angry that hestormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.(沖出房間；狠狠摔門)14. One flight（一段樓梯） up Della ran, and paused for a moment, panting. 氣喘吁吁She was wondering whether she should open the door.15. And suddenly everything went green, like r

12、ight before a tornado.（一切變得昏暗） My ears were ringing（耳鳴）, I felt dizzy（頭暈）, and I threw up（嘔吐）.16. He stiffened（僵住了）. The smile faded from his lips, and his face turned pale. His hands trembled17. As I prepared to confess（坦白）, I took a deep breath and swallowed hard(抑制強烈的感情).18. The fear was like an

13、electric shock, pumping shivering waves tearing through his body（恐懼就像是點擊一樣，電波撕扯著她的身體） and making his hair stand on end.（毛發(fā)直豎）19. All his instincts（本能）screamed yelled at him to slip away before he was stopped. He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched（濕

14、透）in sweat. 20. His eyes lifted slowly, met Mariams, lingered （徘徊）for a moment, then dropped. He opened his mouth, but all that came forth was a single, pained groan. 呻吟。He crossed and uncrossed his arms.(手盤起來又放下) 21. I jumped to my feet, completely thunderstruck 如遭雷擊; I blinked（眨眼）my eyes hard. I l

15、ooked carefully all around me. 22. The girls voice began to crack(變得嘶啞). She shook her head sadly. Suddenly she began to shake, and stopped talking.更多片段：（一）承接1. Everything was back to normal. 一切都回歸正常。2. Had not been for your honesty, I would have lost if forever.要不是你的誠實，我將永遠失去它。3. My mother was more

16、 than delighted to see my change. 我母親看到我的改變非常開心。4. Then there came the sound of turning on the computer.然后傳來了開電腦的聲音。5. He had such a horrible but exciting experience to share! 他有如此可怕卻又激動人心的經(jīng)歷可以分享！6. He was moved beyond words.他感動的難以用語言表達。7. It brought back the great memories of our family eating toge

17、ther. 我們一家人一起吃飯的美好回憶重現(xiàn)腦海。8. Thus, I will insist on chasing my dream and making every effort. 這樣，我就會堅持追逐我的夢想，盡一切的努力。9. She was too heartbroken to do anything. 她太傷心了以至于不想做任何事情。10. Never will I regret what I have done. 我永遠不會后悔我所做的事。11. Following the voice, I saw a young man with gray eyes standing here

18、. 順著聲音的方向，我看到了一個灰色眼睛的年輕人站在這里。12. What touched him most was that I protected his dignity.最讓他感動的是我保護了他的尊嚴。13. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我們再怎么強調(diào)保護眼睛的重要性都不為過。14. By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。15. On no account can we ignore the

19、value of knowledge.我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。16. What an important thing it is to keep our promise!= How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守諾言是多么重要的事!17. All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our aims.這顯示了沒有事情能夠阻擋我們實現(xiàn)目標。18. So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.時間是如此珍

20、貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費它。19. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對令人不滿意。20. It was not until recently that the problem was solved. 直到最近這個問題才被解決。（二）行為動作描寫1. Hearing his words, I couldnt help bursting into tears. 聽到他的話，我忍不住哭起來。2. All of a sudden, a good

21、 idea occurred to 突然，*想到了一個好主意。3. Then her father smiled, comforting her with a warm hug. 然后他的父親笑了，給了她一個溫暖的擁抱來安慰她。4. The more you are willing to love, the more you are likely to receive.你越是愿意去愛，就越可能被愛。5. Shocked, Jason called for help immediately. 杰森感到很震驚，立馬求助。6. Hearing this, my fathers face change

22、d from tense to a smile. 聽到這個，我父親的臉從緊張變成了微笑。7. Under no circumstance can children lead a happy life without love. 孩子們不可能在沒有愛的情況下過著幸福的生活。8. He said firmly, without hesitation. 他說的很堅定，毫不猶豫。9. They moved so slowly that each second was like an hour to the boy. 他們移動的很慢，對小男孩來說，每一秒都像是一個小時。10. The wise man

23、looked into the little boys eyes, placing his hands on the boys shoulders, and replied softly. 智者看著小男孩的眼睛，把手放在男孩的肩膀上，輕輕地回答。11. Upon / On hearing of the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldnt say a word. 一聽到這個出乎意料的消息，他驚訝到說不出話來。（三）動物的外貌和動作：1.Her feathers were so jetty, and her topping so

24、 white and full!它的羽毛烏黑發(fā)亮，頭上的羽毛又白又密。2.He looked with sadness upon the little prisoners flying about the cage, peeping through the wires, beating them with their wings, and trying to get out.他傷心地看著那些囚犯似的小鳥在籠子里飛來飛去，透過絲網(wǎng)向外觀望，它們不停地拍打翅膀，想努力飛出來。3.They were on the watch for him, and would fly down from the

25、green tree tops to greet him with their chirp.小鳥或在枝頭上觀看他，或從枝繁葉茂的樹上飛下來，嘰嘰喳喳地和他打招呼。4.The squirrels peeped out of their holes at Bessie. The birds sang in the branches overhead. Thump, came something all at once into the middle of the road.松鼠們從它們的洞里探出頭來瞧著貝希，鳥兒在頭頂?shù)臉渲ι铣琛Ｅ榈囊宦暎粋€東西一下子蹦到道路中央。5.When the fa

26、ithful dog came and rubbed his head against her hand, Susie put her arms around his neck, and burst into tears.忠心的狗跑回來，頭在蘇茜的手上蹭來蹭去。蘇茜雙臂抱住它的脖子，禁不住大哭起來。6.The Newfoundland is a large, noble fellow. He is black, with a white spot, and with long, shaggy hair. His name is Sport.紐芬蘭犬既高大又名貴，顏色是黑的，綴著白色斑點；毛發(fā)長

27、而蓬松。它的名字叫斯波特。7.Dodger is up on a chair, under the table, behind the door, down cellar, and out in the yard, all in a minute.道吉爾能夠在一分鐘之內(nèi)跳到椅子上，躲在桌子下，藏在門后，鉆進地窖，最后又跑到院子里。8.Dodger has very bright eyes, and he does many funny things. He likes to put his paws up on the crib, and watch the baby.道吉爾雙眼明亮，調(diào)皮可愛

28、。它喜歡將爪子趴在嬰兒床的圍欄上，看著小寶寶。（四）體會（結(jié)尾，文章主題）1. A little bit kindness will be rewarded with a large amount of benefit. 滴水之恩當涌泉相報。2. Love everybody because thats the greatest thing you can give and it is the start of your life trip. 去愛每一個人因為那是你可以給予的最美好的東西，這也是你人生旅程的開始。3. So say goodbye to the past and embrace

29、 the present. 所以告別過去擁抱當前。4. I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous. 我堅定的相信每個人輕微的力量都能是我們的國家更加的繁榮。5. True love is the most invaluable thing in the world. 真愛是世界上最無價的東西。6. My patience and love let him believe that the world was full of kindness.

30、我的耐心和愛心讓他相信這個世界上充滿了善意。7. Beauty is not in the face, beauty is a light in the heart. 美不在表面，美是心靈的光。8. All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect, dignity and warmth. 所有的學(xué)生都意識到，每個人都想要得到尊重、尊嚴和溫暖的對待。9. We will be successful as long as we insist on working

31、 hard.只要我們堅持努力工作，我們會成功的。（五）人的語言和動作1.Fire! fire! The cry crept out on the still night air, and the fire bells began to ring“著火啦！著火啦！”驚呼聲劃破了寂靜的夜空，火災(zāi)報警聲隨后鳴叫起來。2.It is Mr. Bartons house, mother. Do let me go, he said in eager, excited tones.是巴頓先生的房子著火了，媽媽。讓我去幫忙吧！”他用急切而又激動的語氣說道。3.Looking up to the window

32、, he took off his hat and bowed with a bright, pleasant smile.他抬頭看了一眼窗戶，然后摘下帽子，鞠躬打招呼，臉上是明亮、歡快的笑容。4.I should like to go with you very much, replied Susan, with a sigh; but I can not finish the task grandmother set me to do.我很想跟你們一起去，”蘇珊嘆了一口氣，回答道，“可是我還沒完成奶奶交給我的任務(wù)。5.How tiresome it must be to stay at h

33、ome to work on a holiday! said one of the girls, with a toss of her head. Susans grandmother is too strict.“放假還待在家里干活兒多沒勁啊！”其中一個女孩晃著腦袋說，“蘇珊的奶奶太嚴厲了。”6.Susan heard this remark, and, as she bent her head over her task, she wiped away a tear, and thought of the pleasant afternoon the girls would spend g

34、athering wild flowers in the woods.蘇珊聽到了這句評語，當她轉(zhuǎn)身低頭繼續(xù)干活時，拭去了眼中的一滴淚水，想象著那些女孩們將在樹林里采摘野花，度過一個愉快的下午。7.While this was taking place, Ray, who had got tired of standing, was seated in a fence corner, behind a tree.就在人們興致勃勃地探索真相時，一直站在那里的芮感到有些疲憊，便在柵欄旁的一棵大樹后面坐了下來。8.Herberts passion was over quickly, and, sitt

35、ing down upon the floor, he covered his face with his hands, and began to cry.赫伯特頓時怒火中燒，坐在地板上，雙手捂著小臉哭了起來。（六）其它1. I felt so scared/nervous that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 2. Her stomach was gripped with anxiety,因為焦慮胃抽搐了 like a volcano erupting inside her. 3. At the theater, nervousne

36、ss overtookheld me as i realized how much i wanted to make my parents proud.緊張焦慮4. I was too scared to move an inch and my palms were sweating/my palms grew sweaty.5. Time seemed to stop as I held my breath, waiting for the harsh punishments that I deserved. 6. I tensed, waiting for the barrage （連珠炮

37、似的）of verbal punishment.(責(zé)罵)7. Every nerve 神經(jīng)in his body warned him not to go any further. 8. I was so scared that my heart was hammering in my chest. 心砰砰直跳9. Ann looked upon the doll with a sort of terrorfear.10. A burst of horror held me totally in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. 11.

38、She was struck dead with terror. Her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs(肋骨).12. The September 11 terrorist attacks left many of us confusion and fear（讓我們處于困擾和恐懼的狀態(tài)）. 13. I feel like my tummy is churning （攪動）around and around and I am going to be sick. （緊張）14. I stood with

39、my head down, my eyes directed toward the floor in front of me, making no move to look up.The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sickly moon.(環(huán)境描寫)（六）人物動作語言加自然描寫：1.As she looked out, she first saw the western sky and some bright, sunset clouds. O mother!

40、 she exclaimed, what a splendid sunset!向外望去，她先看見西邊的天空，點綴著明亮的落日云。“哦，媽媽！多美麗壯觀的落日啊！”她歡呼起來。2.But Margery sat on the doorstep, and wondered, as the sea sounded louder, and the sunshine grew warmer around her.瑪杰麗坐在臺階上，好奇地思考著。海浪聲越來越大，太陽溫暖地照耀著她3.I can smell the sweet flowers in the garden. The sky is all br

41、ight with sunset; I can see purple, and pink, and golden. I do not believe that anyone on earth has a paint box with such lovely colors in it.我能聞到花園里香甜的花朵。天空因為落日非常明亮，我能看見紫色、粉色和金色。我覺得地球上沒有人有這樣的畫筆，能調(diào)出這么可愛的顏色。4.Poor lame Jennie sat at her window, looking out upon the dismal, narrow street, with a look

42、of pain and weariness on her face. Oh, dear, she said with a sigh, 可憐的跛腿珍妮坐在窗戶旁，看著陰郁、狹窄的街道，臉上寫滿痛苦和倦意。她嘆了口氣：“唉，天哪，”5.How they laugh and sing, and shout to each other as they fill their baskets! The sun looks down through the yellow leaves; the rocks give them mossy seats; the birds and squirrels wond

43、er what these strange people are doing in their woods.他們又笑又唱，一邊互相喊話，一邊把栗子往袋子里裝，多么快樂啊！太陽透過金黃的葉子俯視著他們；巖石為他們準備好了鋪滿青苔的座位；小鳥和松鼠好奇地看著他們，嘀咕著這些奇怪的人到底在它們的樹林里做什么。四、翻譯練習(xí)（一）細節(jié)描述之“思考”1.得知問題所在之后，他的大腦開始急速運轉(zhuǎn)，想要想出一個好的解決方案。_2. 獨自一人時，他總是會想到那可怕的經(jīng)歷。_3.在他洗澡時，突然想到了一個好主意。_（二）關(guān)于說的動作：嘟囔： _結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說： _宣布： _保證： _建議： _喊叫： _補充說道： _

44、繼續(xù)說道： _安慰道： _脫口而出： _（三）關(guān)于eye的動作：閃爍（某種感情色彩）： _各種哭： _睜大眼睛： _（四）關(guān)于face/cheek的動作： 露出笑容： _ 煥發(fā)光彩： _ 臉紅： _各種笑： _（五）關(guān)于hand的動作：各種打： _各種抓： _擁抱： _（六）關(guān)于body的動作：彎腰： _倚靠： _低頭： _（七）關(guān)于heart的動作：各種心跳： _漏跳了一拍： _（八）添加修飾成分，做到生動描寫1. 可以添加介詞短語或者副詞來修飾動詞。 Her eyes _.她的眼睛中閃爍著興奮的光芒。 The ferocious wolf stared at Mac _.(紅著雙眼)She

45、 kissed Oliver _. （嘴唇蒼白） He gazed at me _.（驚訝地） He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.2.She howled long and loud _（像一只兇惡的狼）_ and then jumped at Buck.She went home_.她淚如泉涌地回家去了。參考答案：（一）細節(jié)描述之“思考”1.得知問題所在之后，他的大腦開始急速運轉(zhuǎn)，想要想出一個好的解決方案。2. 獨自一人時，他總是會想到那可怕的經(jīng)歷。3.在他洗澡時，突然想到了一個好主意。1.After he knew what the p

46、roblem was,his mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution. 2.When left alone, he would alwaysbe haunted bythat horrible experience. (不好的回憶縈繞心頭揮之不去)3.When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenlycrossed his mind（二）關(guān)于說的動作：嘟囔： whisper/mumble/grunt/murmur結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地說：stutter/stumble/stamm

47、er宣布：announce/declare保證：promise/assure建議：offer/propose/suggest；喊叫：cry out喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim驚叫（因高興、憤怒、痛苦、驚訝等發(fā)生的喊叫）add補充說道continue繼續(xù)說道comfort安慰道blurt out脫口而出（三）關(guān)于eye的動作：閃爍（某種感情色彩）：shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinkle with+excitement/joy/pride等表示感情色彩的名詞各種哭：cry/sob/weep/wail/burst into tears/burst out crying/fight back tears抑制住淚水睜大眼睛：ones eyes widened/ grew wide （四）關(guān)于face/cheek的動作： 露出笑容：a smile appeared on/ spread across his face 煥發(fā)光彩：ones face lit up/brightened/glowed 臉紅：flush/burn （with embarrassment）各種笑：smi