高考英語讀后續寫之萬能句型+讀后續寫高分萬能主題升華句讀后續寫之萬能句型萬能片段1:復雜心情(震驚/害怕/迷茫)Foramoment,withinmyheart

was

acomplexfeeling,

whichmademe

rootedtothespot.I

shouldnothavebehaved

inthatway.有一瞬間，我心中有一種復雜的感覺，令我釘在原地(全部倒裝+定從)我不應該那樣做(虛擬語氣)(紅字通用，藍字根據題目替換）真題例子[2016浙江卷]:在她內心有一種復雜的感覺，簡維持一動也不動，疲憊和無法動彈。Withinherheartwasacomplexfeeling.Jane

remained

rootedtothespot,

exhaustedandunabletomove.[2021八省聯考續寫:在我內心有巨大的驚訝和感激，我站著一-動也丕動，盯著那個即將從盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。Withinmyheartwere

enormoussurpriseandgratitude.I

stood

rootedtothespot,staringatthegirlwhowasabouttotakeouttheirlunchfromabox.[2021全國1卷]:爸爸難以置信地釘在原地，當他看著可怕的廚房，想象雙胞胎做了啥Withinhisheartwasacomplexfeeling.Dad

remained

rootedtothespot

indisbelief,watching

theterriblekitchenand

imaginingwhattheyhaddone.復雜心情詞匯Complex

complicated

emotion(s)

startled

freeze(froze)adj.復雜的

adj.復雜的

n.情緒

adj.吃驚的

v.凍住，凍結berootedtothespot

abruptly

stand(stood)still

imaginedwhatsbhaddone

thesuddensituation(因為懼怕或吃驚而)釘在原地突然地站住不動那

想象下某人做啥

突如其來的情況萬能片段2:不知所措(茫然/緊張/害怕)基礎版:心在狂跳，她不知道該怎么辦。隨著數秒后，她的腦海里出現了一個想法。Heart

beating

wildly,she

hadnoideawhattodo.As

afewsecondspassed,anideacameintohermind.升級版:(高分替換詞+比喻+名從+時間獨立主格句式)Heart

beating

wildlylikeabeast,she

wasatalosswhattodonext.

Acoupleof

seconds

slippingaway,

anideastruckher

likelightning.（獨立主格句式:獨立主語1+非謂語動詞，句子主語2+謂語動詞。）真題舉例練習1:她的臉頰因尷尬而灼熱，她不知道該怎么辦。(前半句

“五官”用:獨立主格)Cheeksburning

withembarrassment,she

wondered

whattodo.練習2:頓時，她的大腦一片空白，不知道該怎么辦。

(前半句“大腦”用:獨立主格)Allofasudden,her

mindgoingblank,she

hadnoidea

whattodo.練習3:被所發生的一切嚇壞了，他站原地不動，不知道接下來怎么辦(非謂語)。Terrifiedby

whathadhappened,hewas

rootedtothespot,

not

knowing

whattodonext.不知所措詞匯wildly

likeabeast

likelightning

slipaway

(be)atalossadv.狂亂地

像猛獸般地

像閃電般地

(時間)溜走

不知所措的Mindgoingblank,..

Heartbeating(racing)....

Cheeksburning,...

wonderwhattodo

acoupleof大腦一片空白,...

心狂跳...

臉頰在燃燒般...

(不知道)想著怎么辦

一些(人或物)萬能片段3:感激(感激+感悟)①Chokedwithoverwhelming

gratitude,Macbowedlowtothemrepeatedly,

withoutwhosehelphecouldn'thave

gonethroughit.②Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatreminded

Mac

ofthevalueof

strangers'help,

inspiringhimto

spreadthiskindnesstoothers.①Mac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，--再向他們深深鞠躬，沒有他們的幫助，他就無法度過難關。②正是這個獨特的經歷讓Mac想到了陌生人幫助的價值，激勵他將這種善意傳播給他人。(紅字模板通用，藍字根據題目替換)提煉:①Chokedwithoverwhelming

...sb1...sb2,

withoutwhosehelp

sb1

couldn'thave

donesth.②Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethat

reminded

sb1

ofthevalueof

sth,

inspiringhimto

dosth.練習:[2022全國1卷theforestrun]構思結尾:David完成跑步，明白勇氣的重要t(用以上模板)①David因巨大的興奮而哽咽，他緊緊地抱著我和他的教練，沒有(我們的)指導，他就無法完成跑步，他堅持這樣說。②正是這次獨特的經歷讓大衛想到了勇氣和信心的價值，激勵他從此勇敢地應對挑戰。參考范文:(紅字模板通用，黑字根據題目替換)Chokedwithoverwhelming

excitement,Davidhuggedmeandhiscoachtightly,

withoutwhoseguidancehecouldn'thave

finishedtherun,ashe

insisted.

Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethathadreminded

David

ofthevalueof

courageandfaith,

inspiringhimto

addresschallengesbravelyeversince.感激詞匯overwhelming

Gratitude

repeatedl

gothroughsth

valueadj.巨大的

n.感激

adv.一再地

度過(難關)

n.價值，重要性bechockedwith(+情緒n.)

bowed(low)tosb

couldn'thavedonesth

remindsbofsth

inspiresbtodosth因..而哽咽

向某人(深深)鞠躬

本不能做到(但實際做了)

提醒某人做某事(使某人想到某事)

激勵某人做某事.萬能片段4:激動(開心/緊張/害怕)情緒+肢體+語言Overwhelmedbywildjoy,

I

rosetomyfeetandpunchedmyfistintheair,shoutingoutloud,“Imadeit!".被狂野的喜悅所淹沒，我站起來，在空中揮拳，大喊道:“我做到了!”練習1:驚慌失措，我跳了起來，盡可能大聲地尖叫:“救命!”。Overcomeby

asenseofpanic,I

rosetomyfeet,screaming

asloudasIcould,“Help!”.練習2:被一陣緊張所支配，我跳了起來，問自己說:“我該怎么辦?”。Dominated

byaflushofnervousness,I

jumpedtomyfeet,asking

myself,“WhatshouldIdo?”練習:[2021全國1卷Mother'sDaySurprise](紅字通用，黑字根據題目替換)“成功了!我們做到了!Jeff

大喊大叫，她在空中揮舞著拳頭。一種溫暖的感覺充滿了她們的心，因為這對她們來說真的是--

次難忘的經歷。不管怎樣，她們勝利完成了一個愉悅的驚喜“Itwasasuccess!

Wemadeit!”Jeffshouted

as

she

punchedherfistintheair.Asenseofwarmthfilled

theirhearts

inthat

itwastrulyamemorableexperienceforthem.(inthat由于=because)Believeitornot,they

pulledoff

adelightfulsurprise.激動詞匯madeit

inthat

asenseof

Truly

delightful成功了;做到了

由于(=because)

一種..感覺(后加情緒名詞)真正地.

(=really/exactly)

令人快樂/愉悅的punchedsb'sfist

warmthfilledsb'sheart

amemorableexperience

pulledoff(doing)sth

Believeitornot,...揮舞拳頭

溫暖充盈內心

一次難忘的經歷

勝利完成(=succeedindoing)不管怎樣;

不管你信不信萬能片段5:緊張+成功Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistremblinglegs

forward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.I’ll

makeit!"(成功后)

Hearingthe

inspiringnews,

heleapedintotheairwithjoy.[2022深圳二模GoGreen](以上紅字通用，黑字根據題目替換)心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖著顫抖的雙腿向前走。深吸一口氣，他堅定地喃喃自語道，“--切都會很好的。我能做到!”聽到這個鼓舞人心的消息，他高興地跳到了空中。相關詞匯heartracing

palmssweating

handsshaking

throattightening

legstrembling心跳加速著...

手心出汗著...

手抖著...

喉嚨緊繃著..

腿在顫抖著...draggedsb'slegs

/feet

rosetosb'sfeet

leapedintotheair

murmuredtooneself

tookadeepbreath拖曳著步伐

站/跳起來

跳起來/躍入空中

喃喃自語

深吸了一口氣心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖著顫抖的雙腿向前走。深吸一口氣，他堅定地喃喃自語道，“--切都會很好的。我能做到!”聽到這個鼓舞人心的消息，他高興地跳到了空中。Heartracingandpalmssweating,Daviddraggedhistremblinglegs

backtothecourse.Hecouldfeelnothingbut

hishandsshaking,heartpoundingandthroattightning.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.I'llmakeit!"....Havingfinishedtherun,

Davidleapedintotheairwithjoy.緊張+成功詞匯

（左邊動詞為非謂語，右邊動詞為謂語過去式）heartracing(heartpounding)

palmssweating

Hands

shaking

Throat

tightening

legstrembling心跳加速著...

手心出汗著..

手抖著...

喉嚨緊繃著...

腿在顫抖著....draggedsb'slegs/feet

rosetosb'sfeet

leapedintotheair

murmuredtooneself

tookadeepbreath拖曳著步伐

站/跳起來

跳起來/躍入空中

喃喃自語

深吸了一口氣萬能片段6:成功+結尾Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheairashefinallymadeit.Peterwassothrilledinthathesucceededindeliveringthespeechandconvincingthejudges.Hethoughttohimselfthathewoulddowhateverhecouldwheneverneeded.Sheddingtearsofjoy,hewasinhighspiritsthewholeday![2022深圳二模GoGreen]空氣中彌漫著一陣熱烈的興奮，他最終做到了。Peter非常激動，因為他成功地發表了演講并說服了評委們。他內心想到，只要有需要，他會盡其所能。他流下了喜悅的淚水,整天都興高采烈!練習:[2016年浙江高考](紅字通用，黑字根據題目替換)空氣中彌漫著一陣熱烈的興奮，Jane最終獲救了。她非常激動，因為她成功地和丈夫團聚。她內心想到，她再也不會犯同樣的錯誤了。流下了喜悅的淚水，夫婦兩人都興高采烈!(句首非謂語sheddingtears)Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheair

asJanewaseventuallyrescued.Shewassothrilledinthatshesucceededin

reunitingwithherhusband.Shethoughttoherselfthat

neverwouldshemakethesamemistakeSheddingtearsofjoy,thecouple

wereinhighspirits!成功+結尾詞匯Thrilled

convince

judge

shedtears

tearsofjoydj.興奮的，激動的(=delighted)

v.說服，使信服

n.評委/法官v.判斷

流淚

喜悅的眼淚Abuzzofexcitement

succeedin(doing)sth

deliveraspeech

thinktooneself

inhighspirits一陣興奮

成功做某事

發表演講

內心想著

興高采烈;心情歡暢總結萬能片段①:復雜心情(負向)Withinmyheartwasacomplexfeeling,whichmademerootedtothespot.萬能片段②:不知所措(負向)Heartbeatingwildlylikeabeast,shewasatalosswhattodonext.萬能片段③:感激(轉變)Chokedwithoverwhelminggratitude,Macbowedlowtothemrepeatedly,withoutwhosehelphecouldn'thavegonethroughit.萬能片段④:激動(轉變)Overwhelmedbywildjoy,Irosetomyfeetandpunchedmyfistintheair,shoutingoutloud,“Imadeit!".萬能片段⑤:緊張+成功(正向)Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistremblinglegsforward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,...萬能片段⑥:成功+結尾(正向)Hethoughttohimselfthat....Sheddingtearsofjoy,hewasinhighspiritsthewholeday!讀后續寫高分萬能主題升華句（一）永不言棄——希望見于堅持，夢想圓于不懈1.Nevergiveupnomatterwhathappens,nomatterhowhopeless.無論發生什么，無論多么絕望，都不要放棄。2.Everycloudhasasilverlining./Thereisalwayslightattheendofthetunnel./Somebodysometimesomewherewillshinealampofhope.黑暗中總有一線光明。/

隧道盡頭總有光明。/

某時某地某人會點亮一盞希望之燈。3.Therearenoshortcutstoanyplaceworthgoing./Thereisnoelevatortosuccess,onlystairs.任何值得去的地方都沒有捷徑。/沒有直達成功的電梯，只有一步步走樓梯。4.Aslongasyouhaveadream,justgoforit,andnevergiveitupeasily.只要你有夢想，就去追求它，不要輕易放棄。5.Luckiswhathappenswhenpreparationmeetsopportunity.當準備遇到機會時就會有好運。6.Betheflowerthatblooms,andbutterflieswillcome.若盛開，蝴蝶自來。（二）面多挫折——世界以痛吻我，要我報之以歌1.Lifeisfullofsmilesandtears.Onlybyacceptingthembothcanweenjoyourlife.生活充滿了微笑和淚水，只有接受他們兩者，我們才能享受生活的美好。2.Lifeconsistsnotinholdinggoodcards,butinplayingwellthoseyouhold.人生不在于拿到好牌，而在于打好手中的牌。3.Youcannotcontrolthebehaviorofothers,butyoucanalwayschoosehowyourespondtoit.你無法控制他人的行為，但你可以隨時選擇如何回應。4.Themoreyoufeedyourmindwithpositivethoughts,themoreyoucanattractgreatthingsintoyourlife.

你越是用積極的想法來充實你的頭腦，你就越能把美好的事物吸引到你的生活中。5.Embraceeverypossibilityinyourlifeandbelieveinyourself.把握住你生命中的一切可能，相信自己。6.Wherethereisalife,thereisahope.

生命不息，希望不止。讀后續寫升華高級句1.

內心暖意

Ifelta

coursingcurrentofwarmth

deepinsideastheold

memories

ofmail

floodedinto

mymind,arousingendlessripples.

我感到內心深處有一股暖流涌動，郵件的舊記憶涌入我的腦海，激起無盡的漣漪。2.

冰釋前嫌Flakeswerestillswirling

intheskybutthetenderflameinmyhearthad

meltedthesnowsurrounding

us.雪花還在天空中飛舞，但我心中溫柔的火焰已經融化了我們周圍的雪。3.自然邂逅Theencounterwiththelittlecreaturewaslikeaneverlastingflower,blossomingintheriverofmymemory

andremindingmeofthevalueofcaringthose

adorablecreatures

inourlife.與小生物的相遇就像我的記憶之河一朵綻放的永恒之花，提醒著我在生活中關愛這些可愛的生物的價值。4.

追憶青春Bathedinthewarmsunshineandenjoyingthecompanyandtheloveofthefamily,Dadbeamed,hismindtravellingbacktohisyouthtimes,

dynamic.沐浴在溫暖的陽光下，享受著家人的陪伴和愛，爸爸笑了，他的思緒回到了他的青年時代，充滿活力。5.

生命感悟Asthesettingsunpaintedtheskyin

abreathtakingtapestryofhues,aprofoundrealizationwashedoverme,

elevatingmyperspective

andleavingmewithan

indeliblesenseofaweandgratitude

forthebeautyoflife'sjourney.當夕陽將天空點綴成一幅令人驚嘆的色彩織錦時，一種深刻的領悟涌上心頭，升華了我的視野，使我對生命旅程的美麗產生了難以磨滅的敬畏和感激之情。6.師生情深Inthebondbetweenteacherandstudent,knowledgetranscendstheconfines

oftheclassroom,nurturingnotonlyintellectualgrowth

butalso

fosteringalifelongconnectionbuiltontrust,guidance,andmutualrespect.在師生之間紐帶中，知識超越了課堂的限制，不僅培養了智力的成長，還建立了一種基于信任、指導和相互尊重的終身聯系。7.

心懷勇氣Whenweembracethechallengesahead,couragewillbethe

unwaveringflame

that

ignitesourinnerstrength,

propellingustopushbeyondourlimits

and

conquertheunchartedterritoriesofpossibility.當我們迎接前方的挑戰時，勇氣成為點燃我們內心力量的不息火焰，推動我們超越極限，征服未知的可能性領域。8.

擁有智慧Wisdomemergesastheguidingcompass,

illuminatingourpath

and

empoweringusto

navigatecomplexities,and

unravel

theprofoundmysteriesoftheworld.在廣袤的知識領域中，智慧顯現為指引的羅盤，照亮我們的道路，賦予我們應對復雜問題的能力，解開世界的深奧之謎。寫作任務訓練“Haveyoudecidedonyourmajor?”myparentsinquired.“Bioengineering,ofcourse.”Irespondedwithouttheslightesthesitation.IenteredthisworldwithPolandsyndrome,adiseasethatpreventedtheformationofmyrightarmandpectoralmuscles(胸肌).Myparents,believingthatplayingwithLegocouldenhancemydexterity(靈巧),giftedmemyfirstkitwhenIwasfive.Strugglingtopiecethecomponentstogether,IcraftedmyfirstLegowork–acar.AsIgotolder,IgrewobsessedwithLegoTechnic,amoreadvancedrange,andhowtouseittobuildmoredelicatestructures.Bytheageofnine,Ihadfashionedmyfirstprostheticarm(義肢)usingLegoTechnic–asimpleboxthatperfectlyaccommodatedmyrightarm.Thisearlycreationsparkedmydriveforfurtherexploration.Yearslater,IdevelopedanotherprostheticarmthatIcalledtheMK-1,whichhadfingers,amotor,apressuresensor,amovableelbowjoint,andagrabbercapableofpickingthingsup.Beforeconstructingit,Ihadalreadydecidedagainsttraditionalprosthetics.Notbecausetheywereineffective,butbecauseplayingwithLegodidsignificantlyimprovemydexterity,helpingmeadapttomycondition.However,amorefrustratingreasonwasthatprostheticsweretooexpensive.MyparentsandIhadlookedintogettingoneafewyearsearlier,onlytobediscouragedbytheprohibitiveprice.So,IconcludedthatImightnotneedonebecauseIwasmanagingwellwithout.Nevertheless,thejoyofcreatingprostheticswithLegoremained,andIcontinuedmakingthempurelyforthefunofit.Astheyearspassed,mycreationsevolvedfromMK-1tothemoreadvancedandcomfortableMK-V.Itfeaturedacontrolunitthatcouldsendandreceiveordersfromsensorsonthearmtothemotors,withcablesthatcontractlikemuscles.Oneday,acouplewiththeireight-year-oldson,wholostbotharmsinanaccident,reachedouttomeafterlearningabout