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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。“Oh,no!”JackshoutedwhilelookingatthelikesandmentsonhisrecentTikTokvideo.“Whyaren’tpeoplereactingtomycontentastheyusedto?”Jackwasa19yearoldstrongandmuscularmanaddictedtothegym.HelovedrecordingexercisevideosandpostingthemonhisTikTokaccount.Initially,hisvideologs(vlogs)werepopular,buthisposts’reachsoondecreased.Jackwonderedwhypeoplehadstoppedsharingandlikinghisvideos,“Maybemyaudienceistiredofwatchingmeworkoutinthegym,”hethought,determinedtochangethelocationofhisvideos.Thefollowingday,Jackwenttotheneighborhoodparkandbeganfilmingwhilewalkingonthetrack.“Hi,guys!Howaboutweshakethingsupalittle?I’mtoworkoutintheparktoday!”hesaidexcitedly,lookingintothecameralens(鏡頭).“Let’slookforagoodspottowarmup,”hesaidashewalkedtowardsabench(長椅),onwhichsatanelderlylady.Jackthoughtthebenchwastheperfectplacetofilmhisvideobecauseofthelight.Heputhistripodstand(三腳架)onthebenchandsetthecamera,buthefeltlikeheneededthefullbench.Hewantedtoplacehiscamerawheretheladysat,sohegesturedtohertomove,butthewomandidn’tseemtounderstand.“Getoutofmyway!”heyelled.“Can’tyouseeI’mfilmingavideo?Youoldfool!”Lookinghimupanddowninsurprise,theoldladydidn’targueoverhisdisrespectfulattitudeandquietlywalkedtowardsanotherbench.Jacksethiscameraup,pressedtherecordbuttonandwavedathisfollowers,readytodemonstrateexercises.Suddenly,hetrippedonaloosestone,lostbalanceandfelldown,hisheadstrikingthebenchandbleedingheavily.Cryinginpain,Jacktriedtogetup,buthedidn’thavethestrengthtorise.Hecollapsedontheground,screamingdesperatelyforhelp.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Therewasnobodyaroundbuttheelderlylady._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ToJack’sjoy,anetfriendsentamessagesayingwheretheladylived._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本主旨本文圍繞杰克在拍攝TikTok視頻時的經歷展開,刻畫了他因視頻熱度下降改變拍攝地點,對老人態度惡劣,意外受傷后又得到老人幫助的過程,借此反映尊重他人、友善待人的重要性,同時體現人性的善良與寬容。二、五要素分析時間:從杰克發現視頻熱度下降,第二天前往公園拍攝視頻,到意外受傷這一時間段。地點:先是家中,后轉移到公園。人物:杰克、公園里的老婦人。事件:杰克熱衷拍攝健身視頻,因視頻熱度下降,前往公園拍攝,對坐在長椅上的老人態度惡劣,意外受傷后向人求救。起因:杰克的TikTok健身視頻熱度降低,他決定改變拍攝地點來提升關注度。三、詞匯積累film(拍攝)、post(發布)、record(錄制)、cameralens(鏡頭)、tripodstand(三腳架)addicted(上癮的)、excitedly(興奮地)、disrespectful(無禮的)、desperately(絕望地)gesture(打手勢)、yell(大喊)、trip(絆倒)、collapse(倒下)四、續寫分析銜接句:第一段開頭“Therewasnobodyaroundbuttheelderlylady.”承接上文杰克受傷后求救的情節,引出老婦人成為幫助他的關鍵人物。第二段開頭“ToJack’sjoy,anetfriendsentamessagesayingwheretheladylived.”,承接第一段老婦人離開的情節,為杰克向老婦人道歉創造條件。情節合理性:第一段中老婦人不計前嫌救助杰克,符合人性善良的特點;第二段杰克通過網友得知老婦人住址,前往道歉,體現他對自己錯誤行為的反思,情節發展合情合理。情感鋪墊:前文杰克對老婦人惡劣的態度,與受傷后老婦人不計前嫌提供幫助形成強烈反差,為杰克的反思和轉變做了情感鋪墊。五、情感走向故事開篇杰克因視頻熱度下降而焦慮,在公園拍攝時對老人態度惡劣。受傷后,他陷入絕望。得到老人幫助后,他心懷感激,最后反思自己的過錯,情感從負面逐漸轉向正面。六、主題深化通過講述杰克從對老人無禮到得到老人幫助,進而反思自己行為的故事,深化了尊重他人、學會感恩的主題,警示人們要摒棄傲慢,珍惜他人的善意。七、下水文下水文一Therewasnobodyaroundbuttheelderlylady.Despitethedisrespectshehadjustendured,sherushedtoJack’ssidewithouthesitation.Shequicklytookoutahandkerchiefandpresseditfirmlyagainsthisbleedinghead,attemptingtostoptheflow.Then,shecalledanambulance.AfterJackreceivedtreatmentatthehospital,theladyquietlyleft.
ToJack’sjoy,anetfriendsentamessagesayingwheretheladylived.Heimmediatelyboughtabouquetofflowersandpaidheravisit.Bowingdeeply,heapologizedsincerelyforhisrudeness.Theladysmiledforgivingly,andfromthatdayon,Jacknotonlychangedhisattitudetowardsothersbutalsostartedcreatingvideospromotingrespectandkindness.下水文二Therewasnobodyaroundbuttheelderlylady.Shehurriedover,hereyesfilledwithconcern.ShefortedJackgentlywhilewaitingfortheambulance.Atthehospital,shestayeduntilJack’sparentsarrived.AfterJackrecovered,herealizedhowwronghehadbeen.
ToJack’sjoy,anetfriendsentamessagesayingwheretheladylived.Hewenttothelady’shome,feelingextremelyashamed.Handingherahandwrittenapologyletter,hetearfullyaskedforforgiveness.Theladywastouchedandforgavehim.Inspiredbythis,Jackmadeavideosharinghisexperience,hopingtoremindeveryonetotreatotherswithrespect.下水文三Therewasnobodyaroundbuttheelderlylady.DespitetheharshwordsJackhadhurledather,sherushedtohissideatonce.Herwrinkledhandstrembledslightlyasshetookoffhershawlandpresseditfirmlyagainsthisbleedingwound,tryingtostemtheflowofblood.“Holdon,youngman,”shesaidsoftly,hervoicefilledwithconcern.Then,shefumbledinherpocketforherphoneanddialedemergencyservices.Throughoutthewait,shefortedJack,tellinghimthathelpwasontheway.Whentheambulancearrived,sheacpaniedhimtothehospital,stayingbyhissideuntilhisparentsshowedup.ToJack’sjoy,anetfriendsentamessagesayingwheretheladylived.Assoonasherecoveredenough,Jackboughtalargebouquetofflowersandahandwrittenapologycard.Heknockedonthelady’sdoorwithanervousheart.Whensheopenedthedoor,Jackboweddeeplyandapologizedsincerely.“I’mextremelysorryformydisrespectfulbehavior.Yousavedmylife,andIdon’tdeserveyourkindness,”hesaid,hisvoicefilledwithregret.Theladysmiledwarmly,forgavehim,andinvitedhimin.Fromthatdayon,Jack’sattitudechanged.Hestartedmakingvideospromotingkindnessandrespect,andhisTikTokaccountonceagaingainedpopularity.【答案】OnepossibleversionTherewasnobodyaroundbuttheelderlylady.Shehurriedtohimandbentdowntocheckhisinjury.“God!”shegasped.“Don’tmove.I’llhelpyou,son.”Lookingatherkindface,Jackgraduallylostconsciousness.Havingcalledanambulance,theladytendedtohiswoundscarefully.NotuntilJackcametoandfoundhimselfandhisbelongingsinanemergencyroomdidhelearnthattheladyhadcontactedhisfamilyandquietlyleft.Overwhelmedbyhervirtue,Jackwasdesperatetofindher.Fortunately,
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