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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Freshoutofcollege,Ihadajobasareceptionistatanopticalstore(眼鏡店).Wehadbothniceandunpleasantcustomers—peoplewewereafraidofseeingwalkinthedoorandotherswhosavedthedaywiththeircheerorcharm.Onelovelyelderlycouplewouldcomeinoftenforonethingoranother.Thewomanwithhergentlesmileandwarmmanner,wasverysweet.Shehadacuriousmindandoftenengagedmeinconversationsaboutourproductsandservices,butshealsolovedtochatabouteverydaylife.Thereweredayswhenitwassobusythattakingtheextratimewithherwaschallenging,butshewassoverylikeableandundemandingthatIlethergoatherownpace.Intruth,Ireallylikedthewomanandherhusbandandimagineditwouldbelovelytohavethemasneighbors.Oneday,Mr.Petruccicameinandwalkeduptomydeskratherthantakingaseatinthewaitingarea,hiseyeswithbloodshotfullofsadness.Itwasunusualforhimtocomeinwithouthiswife,butthatdidn’tregisterwithmeatfirst.Igreetedhimwarmlyandaskedwhatheneeded.Hehesitatedforamoment,thenquietlytoldmethathedidn’tneedanything;hehadjustcomeintoseeme.Finally,herevealedtheheartbreakingnewsthathiswifehadpassedaway.Thenewshitmelikeatonofbricks.MyheartshatteredintopiecesasIimaginedtheimmensepainhemustbeenduring.IcouldfeelthetearswellingupinmyeyesasIimaginedthepainhemustbegoingthrough,losingawomanheclearlylovedandhadbeenwithformostofhislife.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Then,hehandedmeasmall,beautifullywrappedpackageandsaiditwasagiftfromhiswife.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Italwaysservesasareminderofhowthesmallestofgesturescanbesoimportanttosomeone.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續寫中需要回答的問題?Whatwasinthepackage??Adelicate,hand-madescarfintheauthor'sfavoritecolorwithanote.?Whatdidthenotesay??"Dear,youalwaysbrightenedmydaywithyourkindness.Ihopethisbringsyoujoy."?WhatdidMr.Petruccisayabouthiswifemakingthegift??Hiswifehadbeenworkingonitforweeksandalwaysspokehighlyoftheauthor.?Howdidthegiftchangetheauthor??Theauthordecidedtobemorepatientandkindtoeverycustomer.?Whatdidthescarfsymbolize??Itsymbolizedtheconnectionthatcanbeformedwithothersandthepowerofkindness.?故事主旨?Thestoryemphasizesthesignificanceofkindnessandhowsmallactsofitcanhavealastingandpositiveimpactonpeople'slives.?故事山?Beginning:Theauthor,areceptionistatanopticalstore,describesthevarietyofcustomers.Sheparticularlylikesalovelyelderlycouplewhooftenvisit.?Middle:Mr.Petruccicomesinalone,lookingsad,andrevealsthathiswifehaspassedaway.?End(續寫):Hegivestheauthoragiftfromhiswife,whichdeeplytouchestheauthorandmakesherrealizetheimportanceofkindness.?故事發展線索?Thestorydevelopsfromthenormalroutineoftheopticalstore,withthecouplebeingregularcustomers,tothesuddennewsofthewife'sdeath,andthentotheunexpectedgiftfromthewife,whichleadstotheauthor'schangeinattitude.?情感線索?Atfirst,theauthorhasapositiveandfriendlyfeelingtowardsthecouple.Whenshehearsaboutthewife'sdeath,sheisheart-broken.Afterreceivingthegift,sheisdeeplytouchedandinspired.?續寫布局與框架?Firstparagraph:Focusonopeningthepackage,describingwhat'sinside(thescarfandthenote),andMr.Petrucci'swordsabouthiswifemakingthegift.?Secondparagraph:Explainhowthegiftaffectedtheauthor,herdecisiontobemorekind,andwhatthescarfsymbolizes.?續寫注意事項?承接原文:ThefirstsentenceofthefirstparagraphdirectlycontinuesfromMr.Petruccihandingoverthepackage.Thedescriptionofthecouple'skindnessinthepreviouspartisconnectedtothewife'sgiftinthe續寫.?整體設計:Thetwoparagraphsaredesignedtofirstshowthecontentofthegiftandthenitsimpact,creatingacompleteandmeaningfulending.?巧妙設計:Thenoteonthescarfisacleverwaytoshowthewife'skindnessandherappreciationfortheauthor,whichtiesinwellwiththetheme.?高分語句?呼應原文:"Iwasdeeplytouched,tearsstreamingdownmyface."Thisechoestheauthor'sinitialemotionalreactionwhensheheardaboutthewife'sdeath,showinghercontinuedemotionalconnectiontothecouple.?高級句型:"Thatsimpleactofkindnessfromanelderlywoman,whotookthetimetomakeagiftforayoungreceptionistshebarelyknew,hadaprofoundimpactonme."Thisisacomplexsentencewithanon-restrictiverelativeclause,whichenrichesthedescription.?主題表達&意義延伸?直接引語點明主旨:Thenoteonthescarf,"Dear,youalwaysbrightenedmydaywithyourkindness.Ihopethisbringsyoujoy."directlyshowsthepowerofkindness.?促成轉變,引發感悟:Theauthor'sdecisiontobemorepatientandkindtoeverycustomerafterreceivingthegiftshowshowtheexperiencehaschangedherandmakesthereaderreflectontheimportanceofkindness.?借象征物點明主旨:Thescarfbecomesasymboloftheconnectionandkindness,emphasizingthetheme.?學生寫作示范?Then,hehandedmeasmall,beautifullywrappedpackageandsaiditwasagiftfromhiswife.Surprisedandabithesitant,Icarefullyunwrappedit.Tomyastonishment,therewasacharmingphotoalbumfilledwithpicturesofthecoupleduringtheirtravels.Eachpagewasaccompaniedbyhandwrittennotessharingtheirwonderfulmemories.Mr.Petrucciexplainedthathiswifehadpreparedthis,thinkingitwouldbringmesomejoyasIalwayslistenedtoherstorieswithsuchenthusiasm.?Italwaysservesasareminderofhowthesmallestofgesturescanbesoimportanttosomeone.Thephotoalbumbecameapreciouspossessionforme.ItmademerealizethatthetimeIspentchattingwiththeoldladywasnotjustsmalltalkbutsomethingthattrulymatteredtoher.Fromthatdayon,Istartedtovalueeveryinteractionwithcustomersmore.Ilistenedmoreattentively,sharedmoresincerely,andmadeeveryefforttomaketheirdayalittlemorespecial,justliketheoldladyhaddoneformewiththisunexpectedandheart-warminggift.【答案】
Then,hehandedmeasmall,beautifullywrappedpackageandsaiditwasagiftfromhiswife.Hisvoicebrokeasheexplainedthatshewantedtogivemesomethingtorememberher,becauseIhadalwaysbeensokindandconsideratetoher.Iopenedthebox,anditcontainedawonderful,old-fashionedhandkerchief.Thefabric,adelicateclothofold-fashionedcharm,wasadornedwithapaletteofbluesandgreens,remindingmeofMrs.Petrucci’scalmingpresence.AsIheldthehandkerchiefinmyhands,Icouldalmostsenseherpresence,hergentlespiritwovenintoeverythread.Mr.Petruccistoodbeforeme,hiseyeswellingupwi
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