大題10讀后續寫

》明考情-笈方向》?

歷年考情

體裁：讀后續寫的語篇均為記敘文，有部分夾敘夾議。故事性強，情節有一定起伏，如2022年全國新高

考I卷，作者在越野賽跑前發現學生David打算放棄比賽，情節由此展開，吸引讀者并為續寫留下空間。

難度：文章詞匯和語法難度適中，高中生通過日常學習積累可理解。但部分文章會出現熟詞生義、地道短

語等增加理解難度，如2024年部分真題中出現的一些特定情境下的詞匯用法。敘事結構上，多遵循時間

或事件發展順序，邏輯清晰，便于學生梳理情節脈絡，但也要求學生能精準把握細節，為續寫做準備。

命題規律

從選材上來看，語篇選材情節曲折，邏輯性強。讀后續寫所提供的語篇材料一般是具有正能量而且故事性

比較強的文章。一般來說，文章內容通俗易懂，故事線素的邏輯性較強，寫作要求續寫的部分多是故事的

高潮或結局。例如2022年全國新高考I卷的讀后續寫，所給文章講述了作者在一次越野賽跑前發現學生David

打算放棄比賽。續寫部分內容大致為了解清楚原因之后，在作者的鼓動下，David勇敢地參加了比賽。

從語言特點上來看，讀后續寫原材料一般是記敘文，或夾敘夾議類體裁，敘述性語言和描寫性語言相結合。

語言生動、細膩、富有感情，簡潔樸素，畫面感強。因此，考生在續寫過程中，應該體會原材料故事中的

語言特點，繼而完成語言風格契合度高的短文。

考向預測

預測2025年高考對于讀后續寫的考查：

1.難度穩中有升：詞匯方面，可能出現更多高級詞匯、學術詞匯或特定領域詞匯；語法結構上，長難句、

復雜句式的比例可能增加，對學生語法理解和運用能力要求更高。如在故事中出現一些涉及專業知識（如

科技、藝術）的詞匯，或者使用較多的非謂語動詞、各類從句嵌套的句子。

2.更注重思維考查：在情節設計上，要求學生的續寫情節更具創新性、合理性和邏輯性，不能過于平淡或

俗套。同時，對學生批判性思維的考查可能加強，如要求學生對故事中的某個觀點、行為進行評價并續寫

相關情節，考查學生獨立思考和分析問題的能力。

◎研大題-梃能力

主題與情節分析（占比約40二）

語言風格與人物情感（占比約30%）

讀后續寫考點

段■句攫示：段苜句常隱含時間、地點或關疑動作，需緊扣提示膜開（如“Ju”??Ihejwereabout?ogiveup.「11示精

r4-折）.

邏輯銜接（占比約20。。）

：伏第呼應：需回應原文伏筆（如2021年全國2卷中提到的Fm）sleriou5leUcr”需在摟號中N9續）.

5合理結局：結局需符合逑《!（如“助人故事-以成功幫助收尾，,倡險故事..以脫院或懣悟結束）.

詞匯豐富性：避免重震用詞（如“hnpp、”—"cklightcd/<?verjoy?r）；

語言能力（占比約10%）：句式多樣性：交替使用簡單句、然合句、非謂語結構（如Heringthtrnoise,hefroze"）；

~r

—銜接手段：使用邏輯連接詞（MeMimhik.Houever/EvenlHdly）.代詞指代（idthe》）和詞匯發現.

典例

【2024新課標I&II卷】ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.Ihadplannedtofly

toViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourand

ahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgot

offtheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithouta

secondthought.

ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoingbuthesaidhehadn*theardofthebusstation.I

thoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenI

wasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlasted

forwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue（隊歹!j）

stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabig

smileonhisface.nWemadeit,"hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmy

Portuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.Afeelingof

helplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacash

machine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthe

message:"Outoforder.Sorry."

注意：

（1）續寫詞數應為150個左右；

（2）請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.

瞎

讀后續寫的滿分公式：

“精準審題抓伏筆+邏輯合理扣段首+描寫細膩升情感+語言豐富顯功底”

1.精準審題，鎖定原文伏筆

Step1速讀原文，抓核心要素：

人物關系（如父女、朋友、人與動物）；

沖突類型（誤解、危險、目標障礙）；

情感線索（焦慮一釋然、孤獨一溫暖）。

Step2分析段首句，明確續寫方向：

1）段首句功能：

第一段首句：推動情節高潮；

第二段首句：引導結局升華。

情節設計：遵循“沖突一解決一升華”模板

模板公式：沖突激化一行動嘗試（失敗）一轉折點-問題解決一情感/哲理升華

2）高分技巧：

a.加入細節動作：

b.呼應原文伏筆：

3.語言升級：情感描寫與句式多樣性

1）情感描寫細膩化：

情感基礎表達升級表達

緊張Shewasnervous.Herpalmssweated,andherbreathquickened.

感動Shewasmoved.Tearsofreliefwelledupinhereyes,blurringhervision.

決心、Hedecidedtotry.Asurgeofdeterminationcoursedthroughhimashegrippedtheropetighter.

2）句式多樣化：

三f謂語作狀語：Hearingthedog'swhimper,sherushedtoitsside.

倒裝句：Notonlydidtheysavethedog,buttheyalsolearnedthevalueofcompassion.

比喻彳修辭：Thestormoutsidemirroredtheturmoilinherheart.

雪式

【福建師范大學附屬中學2024-2025學年高三上學期期末考】Foryears,swimmingwasoneofthose

thingswhereIthought:"I'mnotgoodatit,andIneverwillbe."Thatthoughtlingeredtheremostofmychildhood.

ThisallchangedlastyearwhenthecompanyIworkedforannouncedthattheyweregoingtoarrangea

swimrun,aracewhereyoupartiallyswimandpartiallyruntofinishtherace.Ofcourse,itwasavoluntaryactivity

andIwasnotgoingtoparticipate.

However,astheweeksprogressed,Istartedthinkingtomyself."Whatwoulditfeelliketobreakthroughmy

comfortzoneandfinallyfacemyinsecurity?^^Tohelptheswimrunparticipantspreparefortherace,thecompany

arrangedanopportunitytolearnhowtoswimfreestylewithaswiminstructor.Iultimatelydecidedtoatleast

participateinthefirstswimminglesson.

Iwasmentallypreparedtobetheworststudentduringthelesson.However,asitturnedout,Ihadplentyof

co-workersthatwereequallybadatswimming.Afterafewswimminglessons,Ievengotcomplimentsforhow

quicklyImanagedtoimprove.NotonlyhadIshatteredmyoldbeliefaboutmydisabilityinwater,butsomething

elsehadstartedtostir.Ihadgottenatasteforswimmingandwascurioustoseewhereitcouldleadme."How

woulditfeelliketobecompletelycomfortableinthewater?991wondered.

IstartedgoingtothepublicbathhousetopracticethefewtipsIhadgottenfromtheswimminginstructor.I'd

watchYouTubevideosandtryandmimicthemovementsbymyselfinthewatertothebestofmyabilities.

Withoutadoubt-inthebeginning,Ilookedlikeadrowningmonkey.Iwouldswim;Iwouldsink,coughing

upwater,andrepeatitalloveragain.Fdgetyelledatforswimmingtooslowatthefreestylerange.However,I

focusedontheprocessandthesoon-to-benewskillsetthatIdidnotgetdiscouragedbytheslowprogressnorthe

occasionalscolding.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Thethoughtsofglidingthroughwatereffortlesslywaswhatkeptmegoing.

Paragraph2:

Regardingtheswimrun,Ieventuallydecidedtoparticipate.

、倒大題?拿高分八

Passage(1)

【安徽省合肥市第一中學2024-2025學年高三上學期12月階段性診斷檢測】IfIhadn'tbeenafailed

violinistImightneverhavebecomeawriter.

WhenIwasinfourthgrade,thepublicschoolIattendedhadacovetedorchestraprogram.Isignedupto

learntheviolin,alongwithmyfriendIreneCervantes.Wewerebothobsessedwiththeviolinandtheprospectof

beingintheorchestra.Everyweek,IreneandIwalkedtogetherthroughourworking-classneighborhoodtoour

before-schoolmusiclessons,proudlyholdingourblackviolincases.

Mr.Baumgartner,theorchestrateacher,wasverystrict.Heemphasizedthatifanythinghappenedtothe

instrumentweplayedwe'dbecutfromtheprogrambecausetheschoolcouldnotaffordtoreplaceit.Weall

understood.

Iwasn'tverygoodattheviolin.Nomatter,destinyintervenedandtheterriblethinghappened:Iwas

practicingathomewhenthebridgepoppedoffmyviolinandflewacrosstheroom,thestringscollapsingbefore

myeyes.

TerrifiedofMr.Baumgartner^reaction,andhavingnoideathiswasacommonviolinisfsmishap(because

thebridgeisheldinplacebythetensionofthestrings),Itriedtofixit.Itiptoedintothegarageandsecuredthe

bridgebackinplacewithglobsofanunfamiliarglue,makingsureitwouldnever,ever,popoffagain.Itwasonly

slightlycrooked.IprayedthatMr.Baumgartnerwouldn'tnotice.

Ofcourse,hedid.AndwhenIsawthecolordrainfromhisface,Iknewmyfatewassealed.Sadly,hepatted

meonthebackandtoldmethatmaybeIcouldjointheorchestranextyear.WhenIcried,hesuggestedthatIjoin

singingclub,whichoftensangduringassemblieswiththeorchestra.

Ididswitchtosingingclub,whereIstayed,thinkingI'dfoundmyplace.Asluckwouldhaveit,the

elementaryschoolgleeclubautomaticallyfedintothejuniorhighchorus.Insteadofaviolinist,Iwouldbeasinger

inanorchestraofvoices.Don'tbeconfused.Ididn'thaveagoodvoice,butinthemidstofsomanyothers,Icould

blend.

注意：

⑴續寫詞數應為150個左右；

⑵請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

OneMondayafterabigperformance,myEnglishteacheraskedifanyonewasinterestedinwritinganarticle

abouthis/hersingingexperience.

IsawIreneCervantesyearslateratahighschoolreunion.

Passage(2)

【福建省泉州市四校聯考2024-2025學年高三下學期開學】Mostpeoplethinkthatprocrastination(拖延

癥）isanegativehabit.Butpeoplelikemewhoroutinelyputoffdoingassignments,arelikelytodefendour

“slower“approachtogettingtasksdone.

Pmtheonlyprocrastinationinmyfamily.Myparentsandsisterwereallbomwiththe"doitrightnow^^gift.

Theyarealwaysinarush,asifcloselyrushedbyaninvisibledeadline.Personally,Ipreferamorerelaxedpace.

Whenmyparentsvoicedtheirconcernaboutmytendencies,saying"Don'tputoffuntiltomorrowwhatyoucando

today,9,“Noway!”Iresponded,confidentlypresentingmyresearchasadefense.Itsaidpeopleprocrastinatedwhen

theyneedtosolveaproblemorcommittoatopicorproject.Inthesecases,delayingadecisioncanbebeneficial.

Thiswasbecauseourmindscontinuetoreflectonproblemsevenwhenwewerenotactivelythinkingaboutthem,

whichcouldleadtomorecreativesolutions.Myfindingsfilledmewithsatisfactionandpride.Mymethodof

gettingthingsdonewasjustasgoodasmysister's...orsoIthought.

Atschoolwe'dbeentalkingaboutarchitectureanddesign.AspartofthefinalassessmentmyteacherMr.

Smithannouncedanexcitingprojectthateachstudentwouldhaveamonthtocomplete.Wewereexpectedto

chooseourmaterials,constructasmallbuildingandmakeuseofthingswehadlearnedinclass.Notonlywouldthe

winnersreceiveextracredit,butthewinningconstructionswouldbeproudlydisplayedinthecafeteria.a<Ihaveno

cluehowIcouldgetitdone,^^myfriendNatesighedindespair.Ididn'tsayanything.NotbecauseIsharedhis

anxietybutbecauseIwasnotnervousatall.Ilovedhands-onprojects!Picturingmybrilliantworkexhibitedinthe

cafeteria,IwasfullyconvincedthatIwoulddefinitelyproducesomethingthatcouldimpresseveryone.Sorelaxed

wasIthatIdidn'tgiveitasecondthoughtforweeks.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

BeforeIknewit,Ihadonlyonedayleftfortheproject.

Thattaughtmeagreatlesson.

Passage（3）

【廣東省紅嶺中學2024-2025學年高三下學期第五次統一考試】OnNewYear'sEve,theairwasfilled

withexcitementandexpectation.Everykidwasoverjoyed,andonesuchkidwaslittleJohnny.Johnnywasthrilled

becausehewasgoingtothemarketwithhisfathertobuyvariousitemsthatheliked.Themarketwasbustlingwith

activity,andallthebusinessesweredecoratedwithcolorfullights,creatingafestiveatmosphere.

AsJohnnyandhisfatherwalkedthroughthemarket,theyweresurroundedbythesoundsofvendorscalling

outtheirwares,thelaughterofchildren,andtheclatterofshoppingcarts.Theairwasfilledwiththescentof

freshlycookedfoodandthebrightlightsofthedecorations.Johnny'seyeswidenedinwonderashetookinthe

sightsandsoundsofthebustlingmarket.

Whilewanderingthroughthemarket,Johnny'sattentionwasdrawntoashopwithalargenumberofcaged

birds.Thebirdswereconstantlyslammingtheirbeaksagainstthecageinadesperateattempttoescape.Manyof

themweredrippingwithblood,andtheirfeatherswereruffled（豎起）anddirty.Johnnyfeltapangofsorrowand

wasdeeplymovedbytheplight（困境）ofthebirds.

Unabletocontrolhisemotions,Johnnyapproachedtheshopkeeper."Whyhaveyoucapturedthesehelpless

birds?”heinquired,hisvoicetremblingwithconcern.Johnnythoughttohimselfthatitwasnotrighttolimit

someone'sfreedom,especiallyforinnocentcreatureslikethesebirds.

TheshopkeeperlookedatJohnnywithamixtureoffrustrationandsadness.don'tlikeit,“headmitted,

“butIdon'thaveanyotheroptions.Ineedthejobandalsorequirefundstofeedmyfamily.9,Listeningtothe

shopkeeper'sexplanation,Johnnyunderstoodthecomplexityofthesituation.Heturnedtohisfatherandsaid,“Dad,

canwebuythesebirdsandsetthemfree?^^Meanwhile,hewassearchingformoneyinhispocket.ctWhataboutall

thoseitemsyouwereplanningtobuy,Johnny?Whatifthemanloseshisjob?”Johnny'sfatherinquired.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Forabriefmoment,Johnnywasconfusedandslightlyanxious.

TheshopkeeperwasoveijoyedandhandedthecagetoJohnny.

Passage(4)

【湖北省武漢市第一中學2024-2025學年高三上學期12月聯考】Peoplealwayssaythatwithexercise,

puttingonyourshoesisthehardestpart.ButforEmma,thiswasalie.Therealpainalwaysstartedwhenallthe

studentsweregatheredonthetrack,readytorun.Itwasn'tthefatiguesheminded,itwasthelooksothersgaveher.

Emmawasbiggerthanothersofherage.Backinprimaryschool,sheremembersherclassmatesaskingherwhy

herthighs(大腿)weresobigandherchestsowide.Ontheoutside,shelookedbig,butontheinside,shefeltas

smallasapea.AndPEclasswaswhenshefeltathersmallest.

Notallherclassmatesmadeherfeeluncomfortable,though.Itwasmainlyagroupofgirlsandboys一the

loud,outspoken,popularkids.AlthoughtheycouldrunfasterthanEmma,theypreferredtojogabitbehindher,

burstingoutinlaughtereverynowandthen,commentingonhowEmmajogged.

Justonemoreyear,Emmakepttellingherself.Onemoreyearandrilhavegraduatedandwon'thavetotake

thisstupidPEclassanymore.Shejustwantedtosurviveit.

ButeverythingchangedwhenanewgirlcalledKitjoinedtheclass.Shehadshort,jet-blackhair,brighteyes,

andalongscaracrosstheleftsideofherface.Herentranceintotheclassroomthatdaywasmetbydozensof

curiouseyes.

Althoughtheirteacher,MsHardy,didn'taskKitforapersonalintroduction,uponputtingherbagdownon

herdesk,Kitrose,saying,“Hi,everyone,nicetomeetyou,FmKit.Iloveboxing,animationandfashion.You

mightbewonderingaboutmyscar.IgotitwhenIwasyoungwhenIfelloffmybike.Luckily,Ididn'tgethurt

moreseriously.IfsnowlikeacooltrademarkofalltheadventuresIhadasakid.”

AfterKifsintroduction,Emmasimplysatthere,herheartpoundingandmouthwideopen.Howcould

someonebesoconfident?Eventhepopularkidsweresittingthereinshock.

注意:

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Atlunchtime,EmmawassittingatherusualtablewithafewotherclassmateswhenKitwalkedoverto

them.

OnFriday,itwastimeforthefearfulPEclass,butthistime,Kitwaswithher.

Passage(5)

【華中師范大學第一附屬中學2024-2025學年高三下學期開學】Theboysintheblockweregoingtohave

aroller-skating(滑旱冰)racenextSaturday.Theyweredividedintotwoteams:theSunnysidersandthe

Shadysiders,withfiveboysoneachteam.AndywasontheSunnysiders.Theylostlastyear,sotheyweredesperate

towinthistime.ButAndyknewhisshortlegsmadeithardforhimtoskatefast.

Oneday,Andywasgreetedbyapleasant“Hello“ashewasputtingonhisroller-skates.Helookedupand

sawhisnewneighbor,Francis.46Hello!”herepliedcheerfully,noticinghisneighbor'slonglegs.uWannaskatewith

me?Lookatyourlonglegs!Justtherightkindtomakeyouagoodskater.9,"I'dloveto.Youknow,I'mreallygood

atrollerskatingandIusedtohelpmyteamwin.^^Francissaid,histonenowheavywithsadness.atButIlostmy

rollerskatesandmymomjustcannotaffordtobuymeanotherpair.^^

AndythoughtitwasashameforFrancis.Asanewcomer,therewereundoubtedlymanymomentswhenhe

musthavefeltlonely.Andythoughttohimself,wonderingwhathecoulddoforFrancis.Buthehadtosaygoodbye

inahurrysincetheteamweremeetingintheopenspaceonthecornertotalkoversomeplans.

Whentalkingtotheteamcaptain,Andysuggestedaddinganotherboytotheirteam,Francis.Butthecaptain

said"No"astheteamknewnothingabouthim.Besides,theShadysiderswouldn'tletthemtakeonanextraplayer.

Inthefollowingdays,Andypracticedveryhardwithhisteam.Thencamethedaybeforetheracewhenhe

sawFrancisonthesidewalk,watchingthemskatepast,hiseyesfilledwithasenseofloss.SomehowitupsetAndy,

andhisdesiretohelphisnewneighborresurfaced.Thenhethoughtofawaythatcouldnotonlyhelphisteamwin,

buthelpFrancisfitin.

注意：

(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

HerushedtoFrancis,excitedtotellhimhisplan.

Thenextday,theracebeganasscheduled.

Passage(6)

【廣東省深圳市高級中學2024-2025學年高三上學期第三次診斷考試】AFour-leggedGuardianAngel

SnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjust

cleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjobwiththeprovincial

government,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,anda

realestateagentwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane

(大丹犬)Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.Thethoughtoflosingthedogandour

beautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.

Deepindespair,Isattypingupresumesandcoverletters.OutofthecomerofmyeyeIcouldseemy

thirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.Itseemed

asifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.

BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmas

packageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlooked

down,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasno

waythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppy

somewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcome

anadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.

Thinkingofthese,Icouldn'thelpheavingasighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn'ttyped

morethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingfuriouslyandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdoor

overlookingourpool.

Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,Irealized

Forrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.

注意：

1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.

Passage(7)

【河北省滄衡名校聯盟2024-2025學年高三下學期開學考試】Rushingintothesupermarketthatfall

afternoon,IdidnotknowIwouldgettobeapartofsomethingbeautiful.Inallhonesty,Ican'tevenrememberwhy

Iwasinthisgrocerystore.Inevershoppedhere.ItwasoutofmywayandoutofthecirclethatIlivedmylife

within.Butitwasmeantformetobethereatthisparticulartime.

Afterselectingmyitems,Iproceededtothecheckoutline.Inoticedayoungwomaninthelineinfrontof

me.Herclotheswereworn,andshelookedsotired.Shehadatoddler(學步的兒童)whocouldnothavebeen

morethanthreeandanewbornbabywhowasjustafewweeksold.Thetoddlerwasrunningandjumpingaround

justliketoddlersdo.Thebabywascrying.Myheartwentouttoher.Ihadbeeninhershoeswithmyowntwosons.

Shemanagedtogethergroceriesonthemovingbeltdespiteallthechaosofherkids,andtheclerkstarted

checkingoutheritems.AsIstoodbehindher,Inoticedthatshewaslosingpatiencewithherkidsbutdidn'tknow

whattodo.Shewastryingtobalancebothtaskswithoutcausingahugedisturbance.Ibegantowhisperaprayerof

peaceandstrengthoverthiswoman.Thelinebehindmecontinuedtosnakeitswayintoanotherpassage.The

pressurewasgrowing.

AsIwatchedher,IrememberedthetimewhenIhadbeeninagrocerystorewithatoddlerwhowasrunning

aroundandascreamingbaby.Irememberedthemean,oldmanbehindmeandtheinappropriatecommenthemade

onmeasIcheckedout.Thatmemorytookmeawayfromthecheckoutlineforamoment.WhenIcamebacktothe

present,Irealizedthattheyoungwomanwaslookingatafewitemsandtryingtodecidewhatsheneededtoput

back.

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2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Thepeopleinlinebehindmeweregettingimpatient.

Iwasabouttopayforthewoman,butthemanbehindofferedtosharethecost.

Passage(8)

【湖南師范大學附屬中學2024-2025學年高三下學期2月月考】ThesunwassettingoverSpringdale,

castingshadowsacrossthebusycommunitycenter.Agroupofteenagers,themembersoftheSpringdaleYouth

Committee,gatheredatatable.Theylookeddeterminedandworried.AmongthemwasEmily,asmartbutoften

unnoticedgirlwholoveshelpingothers.

Forweeks,theyhadbeenorganizingafundraisingeventforthelocalhomelessshelter,astheshelter

struggledtoassisttheincreasingnumberofindividualsseekinghelp.Thebigdaywasoneweekaway,and

everythingwasset-untiltheydiscoveredanothergrouphadasimilarcharityeventonthesameday.Thiscould

dividethepeoplewhomightcomeandthedonationstheyhopedtoget.

“Wecan'tchangethedatenow,“saidTom,aseniormember,hisvoicefilledwithfrustration."We'vealready

sentoutinvitations,andtheplaceisbooked.^^Emilylistenedquietlytothediscussion.Sheknewchangingthedate

wasn'tpossible,butshealsorealizedcompetingwithanotherworthycausecouldhurtbothsides.

Afterthemeetingendedwithoutasolution,Emilydecidedtotakeaction.Shespentthenextdaylookinginto

waystoworkwiththeothergroup,hopingtofindawaythatwouldhelpboththehomelessshelterandtheother

cause.

Thenextday,shecametothecommitteewithasuggestion."Whatifwejoinourevents?^^sheasked.ctWe

couldshareresources,worktogetheronpromoting,andmostimportantly,makesurebothcausesaresupportedby

thecommunity.^^

Thememberslookedateachother,somedoubtful,othersinterested."That'sagreatidea,Emily,buthow

willwegetthemtoagree?^^Laura,anothermember,asked.Emilyhadalreadythoughtthisthrough.uriltalkto

theirorganizerandshowthemthebenefitsofajointevent.9,Sheknewthepathaheadwouldbechallenging,butshe

wasdeterminedtomakeithappenforSpringdaleanditspeople.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Para1ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort.

Para2Afterdaysofnegotiation,Emilyfinallygotapositivereply.

Passage(1)

[2024浙江1月卷】Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthe

majorheadachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.Itwasasix-storybuilding.Oneachfloor,

hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers5offices.Somewhereinthe

building,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.

Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.Allthedifferent

hallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecidedthatshewould

memorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn'texist.

InherfirstPEclass,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthe

trackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshefearedmorethan

havingtorunawholemile.ToEva,"amile^^wasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilesfromherhometo

hergrandfather^,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!

WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle(口肖子)，Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofher

classmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.Ifsjustthebeginning,aashethought.^^rilcomeinlastforsure.

SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Evastartedusing

amindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingabouttheword"mile."Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcast

onthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved(拐彎).

Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2,請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:

WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.

Paragraph2:

Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.

Passage(2)

【2023年新高考全國I&II卷】WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoentera

writingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil