Unit

2

Travelling

AroundPeriod

Ⅴ

Writing

—

Writing

to

a

Friend

About

a

Travel

Plan寫作指導【話題技巧總析】

本單元的寫作任務是應用文類別中的“電子郵件”。電子郵件的格式和普通信件一樣，通常包括五部分，即信頭、稱呼、正文、結束語和簽名。高考中郵件的信頭通常不用寫出，只需寫出其他部分即可。其中，郵件的正文是重中之重。

寫作文體：電子郵件屬于應用文，但高考中一般都會給出電子郵件的格式。

主體時態：文章通常以一般現在時和一般將來時為主，也可以根據需要適當使用其他時態。

主體人稱：主要為第一人稱和第二人稱。【基本框架】

第一部分——旅游目的地和出行時間；

第二部分——選擇目的地的原因；

第三部分——旅行中的活動安排（還可以寫旅游費用、同行者等內容）。【關鍵句型舉例】一、常用開頭語1.I’m

writing

to

tell

you

something

about

my

plans

for

the

coming

summer

holidays.我寫信是想告訴你關于我接下來的暑假計劃。2.

I

have

an

exciting

travelling

plan

to

share

with

you.我想和你分享一個令人興奮的旅行計劃。二、正文部分1.

It

is

scheduled

to

take

place

on…計劃在……2.

I

prefer

to

go

to…because…我更想去……因為……3.

First,

I’m

going

to…首先，我打算……4.

I

plan

to

go

to…我計劃去……5.

The

trip

will

last

x

days.旅行將持續x天。6.

The

x-day

trip

costs

about…為期x天的旅行大概花費……7.

I

think

this

trip

sounds

really

exciting.我覺得這次旅行聽起來很讓人興奮。三、結尾部分1.

Looking

forward

to

hearing

from

you.期待收到你的來信。2.

Looking

forward

to

your

early

reply.期待你盡快回復。3.

Do

you

have

any

advice?你有什么建議嗎？4.

Would

you

like

to

join

me?你想和我一起去嗎？5.

We

will

have

a

great

time.我們會玩得很開心。寫作演練

假定你是李華，你打算和媽媽一起去度假。請給你的英國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你們的度假方案并征求意見。內容包括：

1.出行時間；

2.目的地及選擇此處的原因；

3.擬定的活動安排；

4.費用問題。注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Dear

John,

I’ve

looked

at

several

possible

places

where

I

can

go

on

holiday

together

with

my

mom.

We

prefer

to

go

to

the

South

Island

in

New

Zealand

because

both

of

us

have

never

been

there

before.

We

can

explore

the

forests

and

walk

along

the

beach,

enjoying

the

natural

beauty.

We

also

plan

to

taste

the

traditional

food.

We

plan

to

take

the

trip

during

the

first

week

of

October.

The

7-day

trip

costs

about

7,000

yuan

per

person.

But

my

mom

only

wants

to

spend

3,000

yuan

for

each.

Anyhow,

I

think

this

trip

sou